2021届通用版高考英语二轮复习之作文提分要诀学案：03句式选择优秀含答案

1、2021届通用版高考英语一轮复习之作文提分要诀学案:03句式选择优秀满分攻略攻略一特殊句式彰显水平1 .强调句突出重点强调句型的灵活运用不仅有助于增强表达效果，突出要强调的重点，更能彰显考生对英 语表达的把握能力。其基本结构为：his/was+被强调部分+that/who+句子其他部分。 （2019,天津高考）It is your detailed explanation on the topic that will appeal to me most.就是你对这个话题详细的解释最吸引我。2 .倒装句平衡句子在写作中，倒装句型应用比较广泛，涉及的句型主要包括部分倒装和全部倒装。 Only th

2、en did I realize that it was by getting involved in the competition that I gained more self-confidence and enjoyed the pleasure of teamwork.只有在那时我才意识到通过参与比赛，我更加自信，享受到了合作的乐趣。（2019全国卷【II满分作文）Following the speech is a one-hour lecture on the history of Chinese music.演讲之后是一小时的中国音乐历史讲座。3 .省略句简约不简单状语从句的省略

3、形式是写作中最为常用的高级句式，结构为when、while、once/if、 unless/though、although 等+doing/done/to do。 （2018浙江高考满分作文）If given the job, I'll be sure to be a qualified volunteer.如果能得到这份工作，我一定会成为一名合格的志愿者。攻略二委婉地道突出风格虚拟语气和被动句式可以使i吾气委婉，表达地道，在写作中要善于利用。 （2019北京高考）The importance of working with our own hands was stressed by

4、our teacher.我们的老师强调了用我们的双手劳动的重要性。 （2019,浙江高考）If it had not been for your assistance, I would not have made such rapid progress.要不是你的帮助，我就不会取得如此快的进步。,（2018,全国卷 U 满分作文）Any suggestions are highly appreciated and we will make proper adjustments accordingly.非常感谢任何建议，我们会据此做出适当的调整。攻略三三大从句丰富句式1 .实用'定

5、9;'语，先声夺人定语从句关系代词who whom、whose、that、which、as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点, 尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。关系副词when、 where, why引导的定语从句和“介词+which/whom”引导的定语从句更能让阅卷老师眼前一 亮。（2018天津高考满分作文）It is known to us that you are an intelligent boy who/that has great fancy for robotics technology.我们知道你是个聪慧的喜爱机器人技术的男孩。（2

6、017天津高考满分作文）As you know, the final exam of this term is around the corner, for which I am buried in preparing.如你所知，期末考试即将来临，为此我一直埋头备考。2 .四大“名”句，内涵丰富名词性从句名词性从句是写作中常用的高级表达，包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从（2018浙江高考满分作文）0n arriving at the London Airport, what made me worried was that I found my wallet lost.一到达伦敦机场

7、，我就发现我的钱包丢了，这使我倍感焦虑。Word came that you are coming to our school as a teacher and we are looking forward to your coming.消息传来说您要来我校当老师，我们都盼望着您的到来。3 .巧用“状”从，文采斐然状语从句状语从句主要包括时间、地点、条件、原因、让步、比较、方式、目的和结果等九类从 句。 （2019北京高考满分作文）It's such a must-see place that you won't get disappointed when you go the

8、re.这个地方最值得一看，你去了绝不会失望。 （2017全国卷 I *茜分作文）Furthermore, whenever you meet with some puzzling questions, don't hesitate to turn to me.此外，每当你遇到一些令人困惑的问题时，请不要犹豫向我寻求帮助。攻略四非谓语整合句子写作时，可以利用非谓语动词对简单句进行整合，使其成为高级表达，其中with结构, 分词或不定式做状语是利用频率较高的高级句式。 （2018全国卷 I ）Enjoying every dish means you really appreciate w

9、hat your friend has done and don't forget to praise your friend for the delicious food offered by him.享用你的朋友做的每一道菜，并不要忘记赞扬你的朋友提供的美味佳肴。 （2018 全国卷HI满分作文）With a large stadium set up in our school, we students can take part in various physical activities.随着我校一个大型体育馆的建成，我们学生们可以参加多种体育活动。攻略五适时感叹增添色彩在文章

10、结尾处恰当利用感叹句，可以起到画龙点睛的作用，韵味无穷。How happy I was to be one of the members in this warm family! This is one of the most treasured moments in my memory.成为这个温暖大家庭的一员，我是多么高兴啊！这是我记忆中最珍贵的时刻之一。 Not only did it get us close to nature and relieve us of the heavy schoolwork, but it also promoted the friendship amo

11、ng us. What a wonderful time!这不仅让我们靠近大自然，使我们从繁重的作业中放松一下，也促进了我们之间的友谊。 多么美好的时光啊！攻略六高级表达提分增效利用高级句式并利用as is known> as the saying puts it/as the saying goes引出名言、谚语, 往往会让阅卷老师拍案叫绝。仅举3例。It goes without saying that.毋庸置疑It goes without saying that time is precious for us.毋庸置疑，时间对我们来说是很宝贵的。As an old saying

12、goes .俗话说 As an old saying goes, “Honesty is the best policy/俗话说：“诚实才是上策工There's no doubt that 亳无疑问There's no doubt that attention should be paid to the problem of overusing the mobile phones.亳无疑问，（我们）应关注过度使用手机的问题。佳句展示按要求升级以下各句1 .His poems not only have a strong influence on the Chinese lite

13、rature, but also they have been translated into many foreign languages.（利用倒装句式升级）一 Not only do his poems have a strong influence on the Chinese literature, but also thcy_have_bcen_tianslated_into】any_foreiRn_lan£ua£es.2 .We spend the time and energy on the present which makes it valuable r

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16、 that alLth£youngefcllows cannakc fun use of time.佳作示例按要求升级下面的考场作文，并背诵成文假定你是李明，了解到你的美国笔友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣，想邀请他一起参 观中国书法展(Chinese Calligraphy Exhibition)o请你写封邮件，内容包括：1 .展览时间、地点：2 .展览内容。注意：1.词数80左右；2,可以适当增加细方，以使行文连贯，考场作文Dear Tom,How is it going? I'd like to invite you to the Chinese Calligraphy

17、Exhibition to be held next Saturday morning in the museum of our city.On the exhibition, there will not only be many excellent works of various styles, but you can communicate with some famous artists. They will give a live performance of their writing skills. Furthermore, there will be a lecture, w

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20、anious atistswhQ wil!givc aiv£pcrfonnancc 9f the iwriting skills.2 ,利用分词做状语升级加斜体句子Knowing.youJiavc a.decpffection-foChinesejraditionaLcultureLbclievit.well worth a visit.真题演练(2020年，全国卷ID上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:1 .农场情况;2 .采摘过程：3 .个人感受注意：1 .词数100左右；2 .题目已为你写好。题目:My Weekend【参考范

21、文】My WeekendOrganized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit tree

22、s as well as a variety of animals.On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color then those that were ripe and soft. I couldn't wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!【写作解析】篇短文，介绍这次活动.内容包括：L农场情况：2.采摘过程：3.个人感受。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组，如：pick peaches, is situated, beautiful scenerj; fruit t