高考英语作文专项训练

1、高考英语作文专项训练2009、2010年高考写作任务的共同特点：关注学生生活、关注情感体验、关注表达的开放性描述所给信息：2009:志愿者去敬老院开展志愿活动（时间、地点、人物、活动）2010:李越的事迹（时间、地点、人物、活动）口分析原因、影响或结果2009:老人们的反应2010:李越的事迹对同学的影响口阐发你的简短评论或看法2009:简短评论2010:你的评论书面表达最忌：要点不全，内容不完整；字（字迹潦草，字迹不清）；一不分段（分段是为了文章更清晰，至少 要分成两段）；低级错误（主谓不一致，时态不一致,词 性变化不正确,单词拼写错误等）；词汇堆砌（整篇几乎无完整句子，一塌 糊涂，某个词汇

2、过频重复使用）。书面表达解题策略一、作文的卷面与书写；整洁、规范的书写是写作得分的亮点规范策略 二、语言表达的层次性与丰富性；A.词汇的选择灵活多样；词汇策略B.句型结构运用灵活多变;句式策略三、行文的逻辑性与流畅性；A.突出文章段落中的主题句；B.归纳各种功能的连词；行文策略四、文章的思想性与开放性；如要表示使"）不要仅依靠make:a) This society still makes women unable to enjoy equal rights.b) Women are still denied equal rights.a) The incident made me

3、recall one of my past experiences.b) The incident reminded me of one of my past experiences.如要表达 越来越" 不要只使用more and more:? a) More and more students find learning English has become more and more difficult.? b) Students in growing numbers find learning English has become increasingly difficult.

4、? a) More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.? b) Teenage smoking is on the rise in recent years.? a) More and more teachers are demanded with the development of economy.? b) There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.如要表达 大多数" 不要一味用most:? a) Mos

5、t students take a part-time job after class.? b) The vast majority of students take a part-time job after class.? a) Most people take part in sports of different kinds.? b) The considerable proportion of people take part in sports of different kinds.? a) Most college students take a negative attitud

6、e towards smoking.? b) The large percentage of college population take a negative attitude towards smoking.如要表达 不仅，而且”不要只用not only. but also:? a) Taking a part-time job can not only earn a little money, but also have an opportunity to contact society.? b) Taking a part-time job means more than a lit

7、tle money you can earn. It also means an opportunity to contact society.词汇策略1、因为生病了他昨天没有参加会议。He didn't come to the meeting yesterday because he was ill.He didn't attend the meeting yesterday on account of his 川ness.He was absent from the meeting yesterday owing to his illness.His illness acc

8、ounted for his absence from the meeting yesterday.His illness prevented him from attending the meeting yesterday.2、当他是孩童时，就喜爱学习。When he was a child, he liked to learn everything.As a child, he was fond of learning .As a child, he took great pleasure in learning.When he was a child, he was crazy abou

9、t learning.When he was a child, he had a strong desire for knowledge.When he was a child, he had a strong appetite for knowledge.词汇策略3.如果能考虑我的申请，我不胜感激。I 'll thank you if you can think about my application.I 'll be grateful to you if you can think about my application.I 'll thank you from

10、 the bottom of my heart if you can take my application into consideration.I 'll appreciate it if you can take my application into consideration4、对于空气污染问题，人们非常担心。People are very worried about the problem of air pollution.People are greatly concerned about the problem of air pollution.People show

11、great concern about the problem of air pollution.The problem of air pollution has caused wide public concern .词汇策略5、我们将尽力按时完成任务。We'll do our best to finish our task in time.We'll do whatever we can to finish the task in time.We'll make great efforts to finish the task in time.We'll d

12、evote our efforts to finishing the task in time.We'll spare no efforts to finish the task in time.6、我突然想到了一个好注意。Suddenly I had a good idea.All of a sudden , I thought of a good idea.All of a sudden , I came up with a good idea.All of a sudden , a good idea occurred to me.All of a sudden , a good

13、 idea flashed across my mind .词的讲究简单词汇建议使用词汇? About - concerning, involving, with regard to? be being discussed/built - be under discussion/ construction/way/threat? Cause - bring about, give rise to, result in, lead to, contribute to? didn't failed to do? do - perform/ undertake/ conduct/ fulfi

14、ll/carry - out/ accomplish? explain - account for? Have possess/be equipped with/be armed with? have no more 一run out of ? it is likely that chances are that? keep, to be remain? make sb. realizeawaken sb to? no matter whatregardless of? the purpose of is tois intended to do ? rapid growth - boom? t

15、ake place - arise/occur句子的丰富性学会用一些常见句型用不同形式表达同一句意学会使用复杂句掌握几种表达技巧学会机智、巧妙地借鉴和运用试卷完形或阅 读中的语言表达与观点熟读好词好句，熟读乃至背诵书面表达题范 文，所谓它山之石，可以攻玉常用句型（原因、影响）? It can be easily proved that ? No one can deny that ? This can be expressed as follows:? To take as an example,? A number of factors could account for the devel

16、opment in? It is chiefly responsible for ? There are several possible reasons for that except that ? I personally think ? When it comes to the increasing use of motor vehicles in Beijing, some people think that use should be limited. Others argue that. There is probably some truth to both arguments

17、, but常用句型（论证、说明）? It has been illustrated that ? We may cite another instance of ? According to a latest study, it can be predicted ? There is no sufficient evidence to show that ? We may face the undeniable fact that ? There is no denying that ? It is widely acknowledged that contributed to .Expert

18、s argue that But I doubt whether will ? Many experts point out that contributes directly to? There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.? She deserves the honor and we should learn from her.学会使用复杂句

19、(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)1) Tom was born in a small village. He received a good education in New York. He became a successful businessman later in New York.Though born in a small village , Tom received a good education in New York, where later he became a successful businessman.2) If you come back before si

20、x o'clock, you can go out.You can go out on condition that /provided that you come back before six o'clock.使用名词性从句他没有由现，使每个人失望。To everyone s disappointment, he didn 't turn up.What disappointed everyone was that he didn't turn up. It disappointed everyone that he didn 't turn up.

21、The fact that he didn't turn up disappointed everyone .他又迟到了，这使老师非常生气。He was late again and it made the teacher very angry. His being late again made the teacher very angry.It made the teacher very angry that he was late again.The fact that he was late again made the teacher very angry.合并句子1）中国面

22、积960万平方公里，是世界上第三大国。China is the third largest country in the world. It has an area of 9,600,000 square kilometres.China is the third largest country with an area of 9,600,000 square kilometres.2）他喜欢踢足球，也喜欢打篮球。He enjoys playing football. He also enjoys playing basketball.Not only does he enjoy playin

23、g football, but also he enjoys playing basketball.不要总是以有生命的名词和人称代词开头? a) People have seen great changes in Shanghai in recent years.? b) Shanghai has witnessed great changes in recent years.改变语态a) Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China.It is widely (commonly) thought /believed /

24、held /(accepted) that birth control is quite necessary in China.b) He has made rapid progress in English.Rapid progress has been made in English.c) We should make great efforts to prevent the environment from being destroyed.Great efforts should be made to prevent the environment from being destroye

25、d.使用非谓语动词a) I would like to be a volunteer for the meeting which will be held next Monday.I have a strong desire to be a volunteer for the meeting to be held next Monday.b) Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten.Once seen, it can never be forgotten.c) When I found that so many people were sittin

26、g in the classroom, I was very nervous.Finding so many people seated in the classroom, I was very nervous.要学会用名词结构来表达意思The style of living has become more and more popular and accepted by more and more young people.The style of living has found its growing popularity and acceptance among young peopl

27、e.If we don't recognize the serious problem of growing population, we will make a big mistake. Failure to recognize the seriousness of growing population will lead to a big mistake.If we are watching too much TV, our reading ability will be seriously affected.Heavy exposure to TV will have a neg

28、ative effect on our reading ability.Star Student of the WeekLi Yue has been awarded the title of Star Student of the Week " for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in

29、 the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting . Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.Li Yue is alway

30、s warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others. She deserves the honor and we should learn from her.It was a hot afternoon （阅读A篇 第二段开头）Years later, when I stood in the kitchen of 一，thinking how I wanted to make（完形第二段首句）Some of the best hou

31、sing is never advertised but it passed from one group of students to another by word of mouth.（ 阅读 B篇）So I went on the net, spent 15 minutes reading product reviews （阅读 E篇 第一famous companies care more about profit than quality（ 阅读 E 60 题 D选项）2011年绍兴一模书面表达：If parents take care of almost everything for their children, it will be very difficult for the children to go through the process of transforming from a little child into a real adult .Parents should encourage their children to give every opportunity a chance and leave no room for regre