写作课件 过去事件

1、Writing of Unit 8话题写作训练话题写作训练话题综述话题综述本单元以学校旅行和假期生活为本单元以学校旅行和假期生活为话题，描述期间所发生事情的经话题，描述期间所发生事情的经过及自己的感受。过及自己的感受。 在你成长的历程中，在你成长的历程中，有些日子会让你开心有些日子会让你开心快乐，经久难忘。请快乐，经久难忘。请以以“My happiest day” 为题写一篇为题写一篇80词左右词左右的短文。记述你那天的短文。记述你那天的感受。的感受。A1.认真阅读所给材料，完成下列信息。认真阅读所给材料，完成下列信息。 The title of the article is _My happ

2、iest day仔细审题，明确要求仔细审题，明确要求 The tense(时态时态) of the article is _The Simple Past tense（一般过去时）（一般过去时）What made you happy? Was it a trip, a birthday , an exciting match , a fantastic movie ?写作课件写作课件 过去事件过去事件Decide What you want to write in your article. Was it a trip, a birthday , an exciting match , a f

3、antastic movie ? It was a birthday.列列紧扣要点，寻求思路紧扣要点，寻求思路A2 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。 On the morning of my birthday,I got up early I invited some friends They sang We ate the birthday cakeWe played games a nice body加加A3. How to begin your article ,write them down . 开门见山，紧扣主题开门见山，紧扣主题I still rem

4、ember my 13th birthday, the happiest day for me. a nice head连连A4 Use the following words to put your articles in the correct order . so,because , though, then, after that,- 恰当运用恰当运用关联关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。各个部分衔接自然。过渡自然过渡自然, , 表达流畅表达流畅 On the morning of my birthday, I got up early becaus

5、e I was very excited. I invited some friends to my house and they brought me many beautiful gifts. They sang “Happy birthday to you !” together . I loved their song . So sweet! Then we ate the delicious birthday cake.My mother made it for me early this morning ! Ater that ,we played games and danced

6、 until ten oclock in the evening.写作课件写作课件 过去事件过去事件美美A5.How to make your article worth reading article ,write something about your opinions about how you feel at the ending of the article. 选好词句，适当评论，选好词句，适当评论，美化美化文章。文章。适当评论适当评论, 发表己见发表己见I still remember my 13th birthday, the happiest day for me. a ni

7、ce heada nice tail 1. Pleasant hours fly fast. The next day we left there. How I miss the happiest day! 2. Looking down the mountains from the Great Wall, I was excited and felt proud of myself . 3. Life is just like a bowl of cherries. If you like , youll be the happiest one every day in your life.

8、 a nice tail My happiest day On the morning of my birthday, I got up early because I was very excited. I invited some friends to my house and they brought me many beautiful gifts. They sang “Happy birthday to you !” together . I loved their song . So sweet! Then we ate the delicious birthday cake. M

9、y mother made it for me early this morning ! Ater that ,we played games and danced until ten oclock in the evening. I still remember my 13th birthday, the happiest day for me.What a great day! I will never forget it.修改点：人称修改点：人称 、时态、句子结构，、时态、句子结构，词序，名词单复数，拼写，标点词序，名词单复数，拼写，标点符号，大小写方面。符号，大小写方面。 查漏补缺，完善文章查漏补缺，完善文章书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧列列加加连连美美Finish your article after class and show it to us in the next lesson.The more you write ,the better your article is . 1.During the summer holiday, I went to a beautiful beach with my parents and had