(浙江专用)2017届高考英语二轮复习第四部分写作训练专题二读后续写

1、专题二读后续写 , 训练Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。At the center of the mall was the perfect Santa with a gentle manner and a real white beard.My six year old granddaughter , Leah, jumped from foot to foot as wewaited in line for her turn to sit on his lap.I don t know what to say, Leah said , raisi

2、ng her neck around the kids in front of her.“Sure you do , “ her mother , Leanne, said. It s Santa.He s already your friend . You ll do just fine. ”He ll ask you what you want for Christmas , I said. And you just tell him.”We d gone over and over the toys she d ask for.Her mother didn t want surpris

3、es! Leah repeated the list . But a minute later , she inserted new toys she d just spotted at the mall.I ve got an idea , said Leanne, digging into her purse as the line inched forward. Let s write down your requests so you won t forget them. I couldn t help but laugh.Going to see Santa was such an

4、important appointment for a six一year old.No child should have any worries bigger than that.But the night before,on the news , I d see n a village in the Middle East that had come under fire.Many of the wounded were children just like our Leah.Looking around the mall full of magical decorations and h

5、appy shoppers I felt safe , as safe as anyone could be.Everyone in the world should have that kind of security , especially at Christmas.“Okay,“ Leanne said. Now you ve got everything you want written down here.If you get nervous you can just give the note to Santa.”Leah nodded and took the list. Sh

6、e read out loud, “A Chia Pet , Moon Sand andAquadoodle .”peace on earth“Why don t you add a fourth request , Leah, I heard myself say. Ask forMy daughter looked a little surprised by my suggestion.What s peace on earth ,Grandma? ” Leah asked.“Peace on earth means all the people in the world would ge

7、talong.That s thetrue meaning of Christmas. Leah nodded seriously.Yes, she agreed.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1Finally we reached the head of the line.Paragraph 2 :The coming days were filled with【写作指导】本篇写作是读后续写，要求考生根据所读短文内

8、容，尤其是带有下划线的词或者短语 的提示完成作文。在写作此类作文时，第一步，考生要认真阅读所给短文，根据短文线索， 找出文章的主人公在接下来所要完成的任务，也就是要做的事情以及做这些事情有哪些条 件，要达到什么样的目标；第二步，考生应该将所有的关键词语列出来，然后用这些关键词语来组织语言。写作时要注意：1.并不是所有的关键词语都需要用上；2.所有的语句都必须围绕中心展开。【参考范文】Finally we reached the head of the line.One of Santa s helpers waved Leah upto Santa and lifted her lightly

9、 onto his knee.Within seconds he had her chattinglike they were old friends . Leah shyly handed him her note . Santa adjusted his glasses and read it over very carefully before placing it on the shelf beside him.Leah jumped off his lap and ran into my arms.The coming days were filled with the last m

10、inute preparations for the holiday.It was all worth it as I watched Leah tear joyfully into her presents onChristmas morning. I got Aquadoodle ! ” she screamed. It s just what I wanted! ” It was the perfect Christmas as far as I could see.And then I noticed Leah, lookingsomewhat unhappy. What s wron

11、g, honey? ” I asked.Le anne came over , Didn t Santa bring you everything you wanted ? ” Leah sighed. Almost, she said , “But where s the peace on earth ?”Writing 2阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I worked from the time I was four and raised seven children , all of them college graduates .It seemed I d

12、 done everything I d ever wanted to do in my life , but I had one regret . I was born in 1898, the oldest of five kids.Papa couldn t spareme to go to school , so I worked in the fields with him till I was 21 years old.Everywhere I went , I learned some hard lessons about what happens to a man who ev

13、en can t read the alphabet . People cheat you out of wages.They sell you a ticket to one city , take your money and hand you a ticket to somewhere else.By 1928, I d been wandering for nine years.I met a womannamed Elzenia.We fell in love , married and moved to Dallas , where I got work fixing roads

14、for the city.When Amelia , the oldest of our seven children, first went to school, I took my wifeaside. Elzenia , I said. I don t want the kids to know I can t read or write.”In 1938, one day myboss called me in. George, he said. No one knows those machines like you do.I d like to promote you. But m

15、y thrill and surprise were cut short when he said , “Fill out this application and we ll get you a raise. ” I couldn t admit the truth . I thanked him and walked out of his office.I did stay right where I was , until I turned 65 and my boss made me retire.But I didn t stopworking.For the next 25 yea

16、rs , I lived a happy life , but it still seemed to melike something was missing.A young fellow handed me a piece of paper. It s information about adult education classes . People can learn to read and write. Now I m 98. I thought ofmy friends and neighbors and what they might think if they found out

17、 I couldn tread.After all these years , my secret would be out.But all my life I ve wanted to read.It was high time for action.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1The young man drove me toParagraph 2 :I m still going to school.【写作

18、指导】本篇写作是读后续写，要求考生根据所读短文内容，尤其是带有下划线的词或者短语 的提示完成作文。文章大部分在叙述作者从小因家庭贫困而没有读书，因此在工作中错失晋升的良机。文章最后一段尤其是最后一句It was high time for action. ”给出了提示， 说明接下来要续写的是作者自己重新走进学校的情况。根据关键词语展开适当的联想即可成文。【参考范文】The young man drove me to an old building.I knew it well it was where all mychildren had gone to school . I looked i

19、nto the classroom to get a look at who I would be going to school with the next day.The students all looked like babies to me.There was a lady in her fifties but most of the rest were in their twenties and thirties.I went back to the school the next day.I d been inside the building so many times bef

20、ore with mychildren.That old building looked the same, and it smelled the same.But this time it was different because this time it was going to be my school.Firstcamelearning the alphabet , then words.In three months , I was reading.It was not very exciting , but I loved it.I m still going to school

21、.I didn t stop there.Afterall , now I know why I mhere.I m here to learn .Im here to tell the students it s never too late.Writing 3阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Whenever Mr.Smith goes to Westgate , he stays at the Grand Hotel . Despite its name, it is really not very“grand” ,but it ischeap,clean ,

22、and comfortable.Sincehe knows the manager well ,he never has to go tothe trouble of reserving a room. Thefact is that he always gets the same room.It is located at the far end of the building .On his last visit , Mr.Smith was told that he could have his usual room, but the manager added apologetical

23、ly that itmight be alittlenoisy.So great was the demandfor rooms, the manager said, that thehotel haddecidedto build a new wing . Mr.Smithsaid he did not mind.It amused him to think that the dear old Grand Hotel was making an effort to live up to its name.During the first day Mr.Smith hardly noticed

24、 the noise at all.The room was alittle dusty , but that was natural.The following afternoon , he borrowed a book from the hotel library and went upstairs to read.No sooner had he sat down than he heard someone hammering loudly at the wall.At first he paid no attention , but after a while he began to

25、 feel very uncomfortable.His clothes were slowly being covered with fine white powder . Soon there was so much dust in the room that he began to cough.The hammering was now louder than ever and bits of plaster were coming away from the walls . It looked as though the whole building was going to fall

26、.Mr.Smith went immediately to complain to the manager.They both returned to the room, but everything was very quiet.As they stood there looking at each other, Mr.Smith felt rather embarrassed for having dragged the manager all the way up the stairs for nothing.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线

27、的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1All of a sudden , the hammering began again and a large brick landed on thefloor.Paragraph 2A year later , when Mr.Smith went to Westgate again【写作指导】本篇读后续写是一篇记叙文，主要叙述了 Mr.Smith入住正在装修的the Grand Hotel 时发生的一些意想不到的事。续写短文时，考生要根据文章信息及所提供的关

28、键词进行合理 想象，使之构成一个完整的故事。内容上，考生可围绕人物心理变化这条线进行写作；形式上，考生可使用倒装手法和非谓语动词来帮助刻画人物心理活动。写作时，考生还要注意长短句相结合，以使行文更具条理性。【参考范文】All of a sudden , the hammering began again and a large brick landed on the floor.Looking up , they saw a sharp metal tool had forced its way through the wall , making a very large hole right

29、 above the bed! So tense was the situation that the manager almost let out a scream.In no time they both felt the whole building was vibrating.Then came more white powder and dust dropping down.Before Mr.Smith could make out what had happened , the manager was nowhere to be found.A year later , when

30、 Mr.Smith went to Westgate again , he was surprised to find a modern building had been set up in what used to be the Grand Hotel . It turned out that after he angrily left the place a year ago, the manager decided to pull thebuilding down to make it live up to its name.To show his sincere apology fo

31、r his sudden disappearance , the manager promised the room at the far end of the building would always be reserved for Mr.Smith.Writing 4阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。My 14 year old son , John , and I spotted the coat at the exactly same time.with a Fifth AvenueIt was hanging on a rack at a second h

32、and clothing store.While the other coats drooped , this one looked as if it were holding itself up.The coat , label , soft and unworn, had a black velvet collar , beautiful tailoring and was popular just then with teenage boys , charging an unbelievable price of $28.John s eyes gleamed.He turned fro

33、m side to side , eyeing himself in the mirror with a serious , studied expression that soon changed into a smile.The fit was perfect .John wore the coat to school the next day and came home wearing a big grin. Did the kids like your coat ? ” I asked.“They loved it , he said , carefully folding it ov

34、er the back of a chair and smoothing it flat.I started calling him“Lord Chesterfield and The GreatGatsby” . Over the next few weeks , a change came over John.Agreement replaced contrariness（ 作对），quiet , reasoned discussion replaced argument.He became more mannerly , more thoughtful , eager to please

35、.“Good dinner , Mom he would say every evening. He would generously loan his younger brother his tapes and lecture him on the nice ties of behavior ； without a word of objection , he would carry in wood for the stove.One day when I mentioned these incidents to one of his teachers and remarkedthat I

36、didn t know what caused the changes . She said laughing , “It must be h is coat ! ” Another teacher told him she was giving him a good mark not only because he had earned it but because she liked his coat.At the library , we ran into a friend who had not seen our children in a long time. Could this

37、be John? ” he asked, looking up t o John s new height , assessing the cut of his coat and extending his hand, one gentleman to another.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1John and I both know we should never mistake a person s clo

38、thes for the real person within them.Paragraph 2 :The whole world , the whole future is stretched out ahead, a vast landscape whereall the doors are open.【写作指导】本文是一篇记叙文。作者的儿子在穿上新外套后，从一个叛逆少年变成了一个在行为上 对自己有约束和要求，事事做到完美的好孩子。这个大的转变让作者本人对以往的不要以貌 取人的观念有了新的认识。续写部分要求考生按照这个思维模式，在理解前文的基础上利用开头语和文中提示词写作，考生不仅要注意词

39、汇和语言结构的准确使用、语言的润色等，还要使后文的升华和前文统一起来，使文章一气呵成。备考时考生要做到多读、多思考、多沉淀、多拓展。【参考范文】John and I both know we should never mistake a person s clothes for the real person within them.But the changes taking place to John put me onto another level of how to judge another person and how to have perfect behavior.Why n

40、ot wear astandard of excellence for the world to see? That way , every dawn we open eyes ,beginning with practicing standards of excellence in thought , speech, and behavior , till the moment the head touches the pillow.Everything we think is how to match what is on the inside to what is on the outs

41、ide to make us a real gentleman . To some extent , the delight of behaving well itself is a reward.The whole world , the whole future is stretched out ahead, a vast landscape where all the doors are open.And if only I could be a teenager again ! It was a time when we could try on different approache

42、s to life as it was to try on a coat.Wearing my wonderful , magical coat , I would picture myself walking through those doors with a light heart as a gentleman to be, heading forward confidently no matter what the future will be like.Writing 5阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A philosophy professor stoo

43、d before his class and had some items in front of him.When class began, wordlessly he picked up a large empty glass jar and proceeded to fill it with rocks right to the top, rocks about two inches in diameter.He then asked the students if the jar was full.They agreed that it was.The professor then p

44、icked up a box of pebbles and poured them into the jar.He shook the jar lightly.The pebbles , of course , rolled into the open spaces between the rocks.The students laughed.He asked his students again if the jar was full.They agreed: yes, it was.The professor then picked up a box of sand and poured

45、it into the jar.Of course , the sand filled up all the remaining spaces.Now said the professor , “I want you to recognize that this is your life.”The rocks are the most important things your family , your partner , your health , your children anything that is so important to you that if it were lost

46、 , you would be nearly destroyed.The pebbles are the other things in life that matter, but ona smaller scale.The pebbles represent things like your job , your house, your car.The sand is everything else the small stuff .If you put the sand or the pebbles into the jar first , there is no room for the

47、 rocks.The same goes for your life.If you spend all your energy and time on the small stuff , or material things , you will never have room for the things that are truly most important.Pay attention to the things that are critical in your life.Play with your children.Take your partner out dancing.Talk with your parents . There will always be time to go to work, clean the house, give a dinner party and fix the disposal.Takecare of the rocks first the things that really matter.Set your priorities . The rest is just pebbles