英语写作文容易出现的问题

1、英语写作文容易出现的问题1、用词不当。学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。2、时态错误。一般作文使用的是现在时态，除了拿过去的事情举例子时，用过去时态。3、句子中出现中国式的英语。4、拼写错误。这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的手误，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。5、例子穹张。切记例证要符合实际，可以有些适当的夸张。6、固定搭配用法错误Tosomeextends,Iagreewiththeauthor'sgeneralassertionthatifparentsalsohaveacomprehensivesenseofprofes

2、sionalknowledge.Tosomeextends应改为Tosomeextent7、成分多余AccordingtoacomprehensiveinvestigationwhichiscarriedoutbyChineseAcademyofSocialSciencesshowsthatthereisanincreaseinthenumberofuniversitystudentswhoaretakingpart-timejobs.该句中的showsthat是多余的成分。8、词性混乱However,thequestionssuchas'Haveyoueverregrettedmar

3、ryingyourhusband"maybeveryprivacyandembarrassingly.句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassingo可以有些适当的夸张。切记例证要符合实际、固定搭配用法错误Tosomeextendso学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。2、时态错误、句子中出现中国式的英语、拼写错误。这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的手误。一般作文使用的是现在时态，除了拿过去的事情举例子时。6。3,用过去时态1、用词不当。4,而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。5、

4、例子夸张，Iagreewiththeauthor*sgeneralassertionthatifparentsalsohaveacomprehensivesenseofprofessionalknowledge.Tosomeextends应改为Tosomeextent7成分多余AccordingtoacomprehensiveinvestigationwhichiscarriedoutbyChineseAcademyofSocialSciencesshowsthatthereisanincreaseinthenumberofuniversitystudentswhoaretakingpart-

5、timejobs.该句中的showsthat是多余的成分。8、词性混乱However,thequestionssuchas&quoto【译文】Dearclassteacher:Yourmorningtoeveningeveryday,duediligencework.Howselflessyouare,howgreat!Youalmosthavecomelatereachday,self-study,inordertobedifficultforusforthesestudentstoanswer.Yourunaroundforourfuture,intakingthetimetoth

6、eInternettocollectinformationtosharewithuselite.Whenstudentsviolateschoolrules,youdonothavetoabandonthem,buttalkwiththemsincerelyandearnestly.Whenevertheweatherchangesunexpectedly,youcanplaytheroleofparents,concernedaboutourfoodandclothing,drawingourattentiontohealth.Butyouknowwhat?Asyourstudents,ho

7、wmuchIcareaboutyourhealth.Teachers,pleasetakecareforus.Youarenotourparentslikeowningparents,yourheartoutthesedutiesforus,guidedusdownabrightroad.Inthejuniorhighschool,Iamhonoredtobecomerepresentativeofthenumberofsubjects.Buteverydayproblemsencountered,andmyheartwillinevitablyfear,overwhelmedbythispr

8、oblem.WheneverIwalkedinfrontofyouholdingoperation,youarerepeatedlytoldIhavetolearnscience,andIsaid：domoreexercises,whatdonotunderstandyouarealwayswelcometoaskme!"I'malwaysleftearrighteartolistentooutthinkyouhadtoomuchnagging.MathematicsachievementthatIonlyhad75pointsthatnightyoucalledmeinto

9、office,thesubjectof11ofmymistaketoexplain."Whythisresultisnotsatisfactory?''Youasked,puzzled.Iamgettingimpatient,said:"Sometopicswillnotdo,eithertheirowncarelessness.Z/YouNaZhaobiandpapertaughtmetoanswerinthenextmethod,referredtoIunderstandsofar.AhaIf-hourlater,youfinallyfinished,a

10、ndIlikethefreedomofsmallbirdsandsailingaway,theywereyoustopped.Youaresayingwithgreatearnestness：,Thesetopicsarementioned,thelasttoaskyou,doyousaythattounderstandah!Everyoneshould'knowthemasknowit,IdonotknowasIdonotknow,thatisknowledge*!”Uponhearingthis,myfacelikeabrightredapple,Ifeelsoashamed.Fr

11、omthatlater,Iappreciateyourgoodintentionscherished.Nowyouhaveremindedmewanttolearnafewphysicsandchemistry,everytimeIwouldlethimforgetit."Carryingaheart,anddoesnotgowithasemi-grassroots.”Thisisnotatruereflectionofyoudo?!Youarethedisseminatorsofknowledge,isthehumansoul.Yournoblecharacterilluminat

12、eourpureheartsandminds.WheneverseeyourCeciTssilver-haired,Ifeelverysad.Idecidedhe：Besuretolearnmathematics.Problemslikestumblingblock,inyourfearbeforethemcheekycolor,theywillappeartriumphant,grimaceinpain.Weshouldwelcomeedgeinthepreviousracetobuilduptheconfidenceofsailing,inthefullstrengthoftheseaof

13、competitionandfirmforward.Summervacation,Iwilldevelopaneffectivewayoflearning.Withscience,morequestionsinbasis,broadentheirhorizons.Inordertoovercomeproblemsasthegoal,wouldprefertohavesleeplessnightstoachievethedesiredobjectives.Morewiththeliberalarts,Iwillread,surflessonsintheancientandmodernlitera

14、turebitbybitofthenutrients,sothattheirownobservationofthingsinamorenuanced,richviewoftheirownpointofviewofthings,standingontheshouldersofgiantsoverlooking,sothattheirownvisionbrighteropen.Iamconfidentthatthroughtheirownefforts,Examinationontheidealhighschool,withresultstorewardyouforyourgracetomyedu

15、cation.Teacher,forgettheknowledgeyougatherasourceofyouthgiventhecarefulcasting;notforgettoteachyourtirelessstretchofthebeautifulface;notforgetyouarediscouragedinthefaceofagirlgiventheencouragementandkindwords.Chu：Goodhealth!Smiling!Flourishing!o在初中阶段学生基本上没有进行正规系统的写作训练。英语语言的基础也比较差，主要表现在以下几个方面：（一）词汇贫乏

16、且运用能力差词汇是英语写作必不可少的基本要素，要写好一篇作文以表达自己的思想，必须以足够的词汇量为基础，但实际上大多数学生掌握的词汇量都达不到规定的要求，因而在写作时也就不能随心所欲地表达自己的思想。出现的问题往往有拼写错误，影响理解，词语误用，表达不准确；某一词语反复使用，语言表达缺乏变式，文章显得单调乏味；文章中出现大量自己的“造词”，让人看了啼笑皆非等。显然词汇量不足己成为制约学生写作的瓶颈。（二）句式单一枯燥文章的内容固然重要，但是形式也不容忽视。然而很多同学作文中的句子都是同一句式，长短相近，所用句型也多是些therebe类的句子，而且全都是主语、谓语、宾语、的单一顺序，缺少变化，读

17、起来乏味、枯燥：平时学到的很多语法、句法，比如从句、强调句型、感叹句、虚拟语气等等在单项选择题中很顺手的东西这时却派不上用场，仿佛它们只是用来对付选择题的。（三）段落、文章的逻辑性差传统的英语教学把语言知识放在首位，忽视了文章的篇章结构和段落，因此学生写出来的东西往往是信息感不强，逻辑性差，很少有主题句，学生们大多想的是：我尽量多写,写够字数就算完成任务了。偶尔有了主题句，下面的支持细节也不能很好地说明主题句。文章整体内容缺乏一致性，连贯性，内容安排上也无主次之分，所以读完之后有时甚至全然不知所云，仅仅是句子的堆砌，意思的重复。（四）中英句式差异分辨不清学生们在完成写作题时，总是按照汉语的习惯

18、来思考这个句子怎么写，写出来的句子大部分都是单词的堆砌，有的句子甚至错的都有点离谱，所以英语语言的特点也是学生们写作需要克服的一个难点。mydearfriends,welcometoourschool,andiamamemberofthestudent*sunion,tomysurprise,youfinallychoseourschool,whichreallymeansabighonortouseveryone.itisyourfirsttimetocometochina,andiamwillingtoofferyousomesuggestions,sothatyoucanhaveaper

19、fecttimeinourschool,firstofall,inmyopinion（iconsider）,itisnecessaryforyoutolearnthelanguagewelltofollowlessons.Despitetheproblemsoflanguage,youmustadjusttothecultureofchina,youcanmakesomeChinesefriendstohelpyouwiththis,atthesametime,whatyoucanalsodoisthatyoushouldreadsomebooks,andunderstandChinesecu

20、lture.ihopemysuggestioncanhelpyoutosomeextent,andwishyouallthebestinthelifeandprocessinourschool.仅是根据我的理解，按照您的意思写的，不过考研的话，分数倒是高不了（有点像高一水平）。多背诵写作常用句型，自己写的时候，即使话题不一样，很多句型都是可以套用上的,换换其中几个单词就是了下面我搜集的资料送给你，希望对你的写作提高有所帮助！高考作文经典句型100句1.ItisimportantforeveryonetolearnEnglishwellinourrapidlydevelopingworld.在这

21、个迅速发展的世界里，对每个人来说，学好英语是非常重要的。额外成就感同样句型包括：Itisimportant/（necessary,difficult,convenient,possible）forsb.todosth伊（Itisnecessarytoshakehandswhenyoufirstmeetsomeone.与第一次见面的人握手是非常必要的。2.Theharderyouworkatit,themoreprogressyouwillmake.你I：作越努力，你取得的进步就越大。额外成就感The+比较级。，the+比较级。比较级+and+比较级(Theworldisgettingsmall

22、erandsmaller.)3.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献，世界会变得更加美好。额外成就感类似的句型还有：Ifnecessary，theycan*,e4.Thebestwaytoremembernewwordsistopracticethemeveryday.记忆新单词最好的方法是每天操练这些单词。5.Theatmosphereinmyfamilyisfantastic我的家庭气氛温馨和睦。6.Thereaso

23、nwhypeoplechoosetoliveinthecityisthatthelifeismoreconvenientandcolorful.人们为什么选择生活在城市的原因是因为城市的生活更方便、更多彩。7.IhadagreatfirstimpressionofAmericanpeople.我对美国人民有了很好的第一象。8.Wehavelotsofconfidenceinourabilitytosolveanyproblem.我们对自己解决问题的能力有足够的信心。9.Withtherapiddevelopmentofmoderntechnology,theInternethasbecomea

24、necessarypartofourdailylifeandwork.随着现代科技的迅速发展,互联网已经成为生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。10.Youshouldreadasmanybooksasyoupossiblycan.大家应该尽可能的多读书。11. Chinaisbecomingmoreandmoreprosperousbecauseofthereformand"openingup”policy.由于实施了改革开放政策,中国变得更加繁荣了。12.Weallneedcleanairtobreathe;weallneedcleanwatertodrink;weallneedgre

25、enplacestoenjoy.我们都需要呼吸清新的空气，我们都需要饮用洁净的水，我们都需要绿地来享受。13. Let'sworktogethertomakeourworldabetterplace.让我们一起努力把世界变得更加美好。14.Weshouldmakefulluseofourtimetodousefulandproductivethings.我们应该充分利用好时间去做有用的、富有成效的事。15. Weshouldgetintothegoodhabitofusingourtimewisely.我应该养成一个好习惯，明智地利用时间。16.WhatIreallywanttokno

26、wiswhetherhewillgoabroadnextmonth?我的确想知道的是，他是否会在下个月出国。17. Televisionisharmfultodevelopingminds.电视不利J,开发心智。18.Childrenusuallyhavefarmorepotentialthantheirparentshadrealized孩子们都有很大的潜能，而父母却没有意识到这一点。19. Inthepast10years,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourschool.(V.过去的10年里，我们学校发生了巨大的变化。20.Peoplewhospendmoret

27、imewiththeirfamiliesareusuallyhealthierandhappier.那些花更多时间和家人在一起的人通常会更健康更幸福。21. Thejobwashard,whichmademesotiredthatIalmostquithalfway.这份工作太辛苦，差点使我半途而废。额外成就感直接使用：sothat例句：Thejobwassotired,boringandseemedendlessthatIalmostquithalfway.这份工作太累、太无聊，而且没完没了，这使我差点半途而废。高级句型挑战：Thejobwashard,boringandseemedendl

28、ess,whichmademesotiredthatIalmostquithalfway.这份工作太辛苦、太无聊，而且没完没了，这使我非常累，差点半途而废。能够增加句子层次的高级连词还有：(Notonly-butalso)、(Because*)、(becauseof)、(Aslongas)、(solongas)22.TheRedStarTelevisionFactory,whichproducesTVsetsofquality,wassetupinthe1980's.生产高品质电视的红星电视机厂，始建于1980年。23. TheE-readingroom,wherewecansende

29、-mailstoallpartsoftheworld,isopentobothteachersandstudents.我们可以向世界每个地方发电子邮件的电子阅览室,对老师和同学都同样开放。24.IfeelIwillbefitforthejobneededinyourcompany.我感觉我会是你们公司所需要的人。25. Thenumberofworkersandengineershasrisen(更高级词汇：increased)toover2000,and80%ofthemarecollegegraduates.工人和工程师的数量己超过了2000人,而且他们有80%都是大学学历。26.Ther

30、eisanincreasingtendencythatstudentsowntheirmobilephonesoncampus.在校园内,学生拥有手机的趋势在不断增长。27. Nowintheruralareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschool.Ithinkoneofreasonsisthattheirfamiliesaretoopoortoaffordtheir0TheProblemsthatIhaveMetinEnglishStudyinglearningEnglishisnotveryeasy.Ihavemanyproblemsinlearningit.F

31、irst,spokenEnglishisthemostdifficultproblemforme.Iwasalsoafraidtospeakinclass,becauseIthoughtmyclassmatesmightlaughatme.Secondly,listeningisanotherproblem.Englishisoursecondlanguage,itwasn*teasyformetounderstandtheteacherwhenshetalkedThirdly,IusuallymakemistakesingrammarLastbutnotleast,Ifindtorememb

32、erthewordsisahardjob.BecauseChineseisdifferentfromEnglish.Rememberringsomanywordsisreallyhardforus.ThoughtherearemanyproblemsinEnglishlearning.ButItrustthatIcandoitwell,ifIpaymuchattentiontoit.AstoexperienceofEnglishlearning,I'mafraidIdon'thavemuchmoretosaythanwhatIhavewritteninthearticleofC

33、hineseversionthatIwrotetheotherday.OnethingthatIoftensaytomyfriendsisabouttimearrangement.Inmyopinion,timeislikewaterinsponge,younevergetanyunlessyousqueezeit.Timeisconsideredthemostvaluablethingbymanywhofinallymakethegradeinlife,andIhopeI'11beabletojointhem.Somepeople,though,arewillingtospendaf

34、ewhourstryingtogetatenormoreyuanoffthelistpriceofacoat;theyarealsoalwaysreadytochitchatwitheachothertilltheendoftime.Communicationdoesplayanimportantpartinourlife,huh.Ittakestime,though.Let*stalkaboutthebalanceamongfouraspectsofEnglishstudythen.It'sactuallysimple.Afteryou'vereadforsometime,y

35、oumightgettiredandfeelbored.It'sthetimeyoustopreadingandgetuptohavesomelisteningcomprehensiontraining.Repeatwhattheysayandhowtheysaywhenlistening.Gosomewherewithnopeoplearoundifyoufinditweirdtodoso.BydoingthisyouarepractisingyourspokenEnglish.Aftersometimeofsuchstudy,you'11beinthemoodtowrite

36、something,usingwhathavelearnedoverthedaysorweeks.Yourwritingskillsimprovecontinuouslyonceyoukeepwritingbecauseothersmayreplytoyouafterreadingyours,andtobearesponsivewriter,you*11justhavetofollowandmakethetopicfurtherdiscussed.WithluckyouaredrawingattentionfromthosewhoseEnglisharebetterthanyoursandby

37、exchangingideaswiththisgroupyouarebeneficiallyinfluenced.Ontheotherhand,though,thechanceisthesamethatyoumightbeadverselyinfluencedbysomelousilywrittenreplieswithchattingstyleEnglishhighandlowinthereply.Justbecarefulthen.YouarenotfarwrongwhenassumingIhavetodomyeverydayerrands;Iwasn*tborntothepurple,a

38、nyway.You'11havetoagreethatwhencleaningyourhouseordoingsomelaundry,it'sagoodtimetoputonyourearphoneofthemp3playerandgetsomelisteningworktodo.It'struethatyoucan'tspinandreelallatthesametime,butintermsofgettingsomelisteningcomprehensionitalldepends.Englishissomethingthatyou'lllosebeforeyouknowifyoudon'tkeepusingit.Itafterallisnotourmothertongue.EnglishforumsonInternetareagoodplacetouseyourEnglishlikenoothers.Younotonlygethelpandencouragementthere,butyoubuildupyourinterestandconfidenceaswell,seeinghowyouareprogressing.Iamnottryingtosugarthepillabitb