英语作文提分技巧（课堂PPT）

1、1范文赏析范文赏析 Today, more and more students go to school with mobile phones. Students attitudes towards this vary from person to person. Those who support this say it helps students to keep in touch with their parents and friends. Moreover, using mobile phones can be fun. However, other students hold th

2、e opposite opinion. They think that using mobile phones can cause problems.Firstly, students with mobile phones at school do not concentrate on studying during class, but play games or send text messages instead. Besides, it costs a lot to use a mobile phone. As for me, there is no denying that usin

3、g mobile phones has its advantages, but Id still prefer students to use them at home because study should come first.2 书面表达系列讲练书面表达系列讲练 之之 赢取高分策略赢取高分策略 31、先根据文章的、先根据文章的内容内容,语言和整语言和整体感体感觉初步觉初步确定档次确定档次。第五档第五档. 2125分分第四档第四档. 1620分分第三档第三档. 1115分分第二档第二档. 610分分 第一档第一档. 15分分 0分分4语言地道，语言地道，规范规范覆盖所有内覆盖所有内容要点

4、容要点2、主要内容：、主要内容： 内容要点；内容要点； 词汇和语法的数量和准确性；词汇和语法的数量和准确性； 上下文的连贯；上下文的连贯； 语言的得体性语言的得体性应用了较多应用了较多的语法结构的语法结构和词汇和词汇有效地使有效地使用了语句用了语句间的连接间的连接成分成分53、拼写和标点拼写和标点是语言是语言准确性的一个方面，准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考际的影响程度予以考虑。虑。64、词数、词数少于少于80和和多于多于120的，从总分中减去的，从总分中减去2分。分。5、如、如书写较差书写较差，以至影，以至影响交际，将分数降低一响交际，将分数降低一个档

5、次。个档次。7 技技 巧巧1. 使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3. 使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有篇有“英语味英语味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。自然、紧凑。2. 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式81. Because the weather was go

6、od, our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇一、怎样使用较

7、高级的词汇We all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.9二二 丰富的句式：丰富的句式：( (常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构） 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思， 能增加文章的文采。1. 感叹句 e.g. How happy I was when I received your letter! What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was

8、!2. 强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.103、 倒装句 e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4、 省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a b

9、us. Come to me if necessary.5、 with短语 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.116、 定语从句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school

10、 library.7、 各种名词性从句 e.g. Thats what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.128、 各种状语从句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later. Do call

11、me before hand so that I can meet you at the airport. They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily. 13三三 高考大纲中常用的高考大纲中常用的连接词连接词1. 表示递进表示递进; 另外，还有：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition2. 表示转折关系表示转折关系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the

12、contrary.143. 表示因果关系表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示条件关系表示条件关系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否则: or else15 5. 表示时间关系表示时间关系 当当 的时候的时候 : when ; while 在在之后之后: after 在在之前之前: before 直到直到: until 一一就就 : as soon as 后来，后来， 然后然后: late

13、r; afterwards 不久不久: soon 近来近来: lately; recently 自从自从 :since 从那时起从那时起: from then on 常见的对称关系的过渡词语常见的对称关系的过渡词语1. For one thing, for another thing, 2. On one hand, on the other hand, 166. 表示特定的顺序关系表示特定的顺序关系 首先， 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end；last but not least7. 换一种方

14、法表述换一种方法表述 换句话说: in other words; that is to say; 178. 进行举例说明进行举例说明 例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as9. 用于陈述事实用于陈述事实 实际上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth1810. 对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word；in

15、conclusion; ;. To sum up ; in brief 其它常用到的表达其它常用到的表达 1.in terms of 就而言2.as far as be concerned 3. in my opinion/ view 4. As far as I know 5. As for sb,19假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Lets Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。 请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括： 1汽车虽然便利但带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题； 2骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、 有利健康等。 参考词汇：低碳生活 lowcarbon life节能 energy s

16、aving 注意： 1. 词数： 120词左右； 2演讲稿开头和结尾已给出， 且该部分不计入总词数。Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles” _ _ _20Dear classmates, Im very glad to have this chance to talk to you. The topic of my speech is Lets ride a bicycle. As is known to all

17、, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve these problems then? As far as Im concerned, riding bicycle

18、s is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas. Whats more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is good for our health. Therefore, lets take the

19、 responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us! Thank you for listening!2120012001年春季高考作文年春季高考作文给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。 I will tell you the changes of my life. Before, we had many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to

20、 bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspapers and watch TV. I go to bed at 10:00 now.1717分分22高考满分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homewor

21、k has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more

22、interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.23书面表达常用语句书面表达常用语句 书信书信 T

23、hanks for your last letter. I am writing just to inform you In reply to your last letter, I am writing to explain the two questions as follows: 开 头 Looking forward to your reply/hearing from you! Thanks for your consideration. Do remember me to your parents! 结 尾242. 2. 叙事叙事 It is quite obvious/clear that ( 很显然) There is no doubt that (毫无