高中英语《Book7Unit4WritingAletterofapology》优质课教案、教学设计

1、规范！规范！规范！向细节要品质!A letter of apology教学设计设计教师： 单位：【训练目标】A letter of Apology产” /【2018年考纲解读】：总体要求：准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇， 清楚、连贯地表达自己的意 思。i 高分特点1.切中主题：认真审题，准确把握写作任务的主旨，确保内容围绕主题展开。i2.内容完整：覆盖所规定的各个内容要点，完整地实现交际目的。:3.表达准确：语言运用要贴切、规范、得体，有能力支撑交际目标顺利达成。14.行文连贯：各要点间关系紧密，脉略清晰，相辅相成。5.亮点若干：扩展的思想性，语言的多样性和灵活性。【真题再现】（20

2、16课标全国III）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1 .表示歉意；2 .说明原因；3 .另约时间。 注息：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【习作修改】How are you going recently, Bob? I am very sorry to say that I couldn' t go to the bookstoreyou on this Saturday. I want to go out with my parents for a picnic, that can relax me a

3、nd broaden my horizons. I hope this sudden change will not cause too much trouble to you.Can we go to the bookstore on Sunday? We will meet at the school gate at 8 a.m. in the morning in order to have more time to choose books. If you don' t like it, please let me suow what timyou. I am looking

4、forward to hear from you.【难点突破】一、写得正确（单句改错）1. I am writing to tell you my apologize2. I feel terribly sorry and I have to take part in an activity.3. The reason is why I will attend an important party.4. If you are convenient, I will wait for you at 8 a.m. at the school gate.5. I am sorry to say tha

5、t I can' t accompany youbtookstoreie6. I hope we can book other time to meet.二、写得地道（感悟改写）1. I am writing to give my apology to you.2. You don ' t bengry. I will go with you on Sunday.3. We can meet at the school gate at 8 a.m. this Sunday.三、写得得当（选材精当）1 Suddenly, I want to read books at home.

6、2 . My mother is ill and I have to take care of her. Your own convincing reason:四、写得连贯（活用过渡语）1. I will take part in a social activity. , I have to say sorry to you.2. We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday., I can ' t do ptlasned., I ' m writing express my heartfelt apology to you.五

7、、写得漂亮（句式升格）1. We can not only have more time to select books but also attend a book signing.2. I have an unexpected party to attend. I can' t accorbpoinytyiosj to the3. We can leave early. We will have more time to read books in the bookstore.4. The activity is very important to me and I donif. t want to miss5. I have just been asked to help my English teacher to prepare for a lecture. It is to be held this Saturday.【当堂达标】【课后扩展】假设你是光明中学的学生Mary，你答应了要去参加你好朋友Helen周末的生日聚会,但你因故不能赴约。请