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1、作文1*阳叩"jf/i I 1jjij /> $ / < 1 #wA" J曲 dduir & HF*Or J orri nr J A<iJ dfj MT/ffc/*卜 ,$2乂2J titJ F J RiiTIir "”買 /Jjrr. * T/£rf "=皿""杆矿尸丿 rrHFFFJ jrrDirecti ons: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. You should start your essay wi

2、th a brief description of the picture and comment on parents ' role in their childrengrowth. You should write at least120 but no more tha n 180 words。命题解析本题要求首先描述图画，然后评论家长 在其孩子成长中的作用。图中显示：一位女 儿兴高采烈地告诉母亲：“妈妈，好消息 ！我被您选择的大学录取了。”显而易见，本 题的主旨是：父母为子女做出了太多的决定, 造成子女缺乏独立。破题思路：第一段：漫画描述，重点是母女之间的 对话内容，从而引出文章

3、的主题是有关孩子 的独立性，家长干涉孩子过多。第二段：可以分析此现象产生的原因。第三段：采取措施解决此现象。例文1How impressive the carto on is in describ ing the most widespread social phe nomenon concerning the in depe ndence of the children. Let ' take a closer look at thedraw in g,（概括描述图画内容） the girl told her mother she was accepted by the uni ve

4、rsity of her mother ' s choice with prTfee author want to convey that parents are inclined to intervene their children ' freedom too much（图画介绍了或传达了什么内涵，想表达什么用意）例文2The draw ing vividly reflects（描述图画内容） a daughter is chatt ing with her mother in their house. The eyes sparkli ng with delight, t

5、he daughter tells her mother,“ Good n ewsmom! I was accepted to the college of your choice. Obviously, the implication of the portrayal is that （图画介绍了或传达了什么内 涵,想表达什么用意） the daughter is lack of independence due to her mother' s doting care.作文3Directi ons: For this part, you are allowed 30 minu te

6、s to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the pictureand the n comme nt on this kind of moder n life . You should write at least 120 words but no more tha n 180 words.命题解析本题要求首先简要描述图画，然后评论 这种现代生活。图画显示：现代人无论工作、 居家、娱乐还是睡眠，都与电脑密不可分。 显而易见，本题主旨

7、为电脑或网络对现代生 活的影响。国内写作考试中已经反复考察电脑或 网络这一热点话题。2002年6月四级写作考 察“大学生使用电脑情况” ，2009年考研写 作考察“网络的近'与远'”，2012年 6月六级写作考察“网络对人际共同的影响” 2013年12月四级写作考察“网络对人们沟 通方式的影响” 。2015年6月，四级写作再 次考察电脑或网络这一话题。如果考生研究 过之前的写作真题，诸多表达均可使用。写作思路:1、本题首段应简要描述图画，指出人 们无论工作、家庭、休闲或休息，都 与电脑关系密切。2、第二段最好进行正反论证，说明电 脑有利有弊：一方面可以满足工作生 活的需要并娱乐

8、自我，另一方面过度 沉迷也会浪费大量的时间和精力。3、第三段最好提出建议措施：我们应 该扬长避短，在合理使用电脑的同时， 避免过度沉迷。范文1：A is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon （描述图画内容）,a person is alwaysstaying in front of a computer no matter whether he or she is working, studying or play ing. Eve n whe n he is sleep ing, the image of surfing online is als

9、o indispensable in his sweet dreams.The metaphorical and impressiveportrayal has subtly revealed （图画介绍了或传达了什么内涵，想表达什么用意）theduality of the relati on ship betwee n man and computer. On the one hand, there is no denying that the computer is currently one of the most efficient tools either to entertain

10、on eself or to meet the work's n eeds. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to computers to maintain face-to-face con tact with their frie nds and colleagues. Once in dulged in the fictitious world, people feel relucta nt to approach others and to conce

11、n trate on real life.Hence, it is necessary for us to use computers in a reas on able way and restrain from overindulgenee. After all, the computer is inven ted to connect you and me, and to bring convenien ces to our life rather tha n set a barrier to keep people bey ond reach.如图所示，一个人无论工作、在家或娱 乐，总

12、是坐在一台电脑前面。甚至当他睡觉 的时候，在他甜美的梦中，网上冲浪的画面 也是必不可少的。这幅比喻并使人印象深刻的图画象征 性揭示了人与电脑之间的双重关系。一方面,不可否认电脑目前是用于娱乐自我和满足 工作需要的最高效媒介之一。但另一方面， 很多人承认他们太沉迷于电脑而不愿与朋 友和同事保持面对面接触。 一旦沉迷于这种 虚幻世界，人们不愿接近他人并关注现实生 活。因此，我们很有必要以一种合理的方式 使用电脑，避免过度沉迷。毕竟，人们发明 电脑是为了连接你和我，为我们的生活带来 方便，而非设置障碍使人彼此疏远。破题思路：第一段：描述漫画内容，引出文章主题： 电脑的使用越来越广泛，使用 的时间也越

13、来越长。第二段：分析该现象的原因。第三段：提出措施解决。或得出自己的结论This picture vividly describes that （描述 图画内容）the pers on uses a computer in thewhole day eve n whe n he falls asleep at ni ght. What the carto on con veys is （图画介绍了或 传达了什么内涵，想表达什么用意）theimpact of computers on people. New products are being inven ted every minute of

14、 every day, all of which will hold sway over（ 支酉己）people in some respectsHowever, in all these tech no logies and products, computers have exerted the most importa nt in flue nee on people. Some people assert that computers have made life more complex and stressful, while some people believe that co

15、mputers have made life easier and more convenient. Now many of my classmates like to surf the Internet in their free time. I think Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages. For example, if I have some trouble studying ， I can surf the internet to find more helpful information. However, Internet