2019年高考英语真题分类汇编：专题21-短文改错(写作)(含答案解析)

1、2专题二十一短文改错1.12015 陕西】短文改错（共 10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请彳修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线（），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anythin

2、g special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the f

3、loor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire ag ain next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter

4、!【答案】76 .去掉in77 .anything 改为 something78 .better 改成 best79 .decide 改成 decided80 .step 改为 steps81 .well 改成 good82 .after 改成 when/while83 .a 改为 the84 .just 后加 to85 .enjoy 改为 enjoying【解析】试题分析：文章介绍作者的教练退休了，在退休聚会上作者送给教练自己亲手烘焙的饼干。教练非常蒿兴。76.句意工我的足球教练上个星期退休了。1对4比k前面不加介词，去掉id3一句意；我想在他退休聚会上为他做些特别的事情。肯定句用wmEth

5、mg。7&句意：我妈妈做的是世界上最好的饼干。用最高级，better改成加£*为句意；所以我决定向她求肋这篇文章使用一般过去时，dm北改成deided，狗句意：妈妈教我一些基本的烘焙的步骤。址P是可数名词,用复数浪P£&L句意：我认为这些饼干很好。做表语用形容词,科加改成gQDd。以句意:我唯一的错误是在我将它们打包的时候将它们掉在地上口出江改成whmtThik底这里是特指第一段提到的退休聚会. a改为Ihd巾句意：我可能明年要再退休一次，只是想得到更多这样的饼干，用不定式做目的状语后加to*85.句意：我最喜欢的照片是我和我的教练在聚会上开心地享受饼干.

6、Qf后面接动名词j my math and me是 逻辑主语，mjcy改为例cyingq【考点定位】考查短文改错【名师点睛】这篇短文改错是记叙文，短文的内容和学生的日常生活有关。错误之处的设置都是平常学生容易错的地方。考查点比较全面，各种词性都考查到了，也涉及到一些语法知识的考查，如：非谓语动词，时态等。2.12015 四川】短文改错（共 10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（？），并在其下面写出该加的词；删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：

7、1 .每句不超过两个错误；2 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；3 . 3.只允许修改10出，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of theproblems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. Wehang out together during lunch and after

8、school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs memany. And I started to see this as a time wasting activity! In fact ,I don ' t like to go anymore, so I ' m afraid I ' ll lose their friendship. How do you think I

9、should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace【答案】61. 加上to62. tell-told63. friend-friends64.sing-singing65. many-much66.so-but67. How-What68. are-were69. him-them70. 去掉 with【解析】试题分析：文章主要通过一封求助信，写出了写信人的困扰。作者交了三个新朋友，经常一 起去卡拉OK唱歌，但其实作者并不喜欢这样，他想知道自己该怎么做

10、才不会失去这段友谊。61 .加上to考查动词want的用法，want用不定式担当状语，故加上 to。句意为：我真地很 想和你分享一下我经历的问题。62 . tell -told 考查时态。根据时间状语last time可知，此句需要用一般过去时，故把tell改成told 。句意为正如我上次告诉你的那样。2263 . friend friends 考查名词的复数。名词 friend 为可数名词，其前有 three修饰，需要 用复数形式，故把friend 改成friends 。句意为：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。64 .sing singing 考查动名词担当宾语。本句考查句型spend（in ） d

11、oing sth 结构，故赳！ sing 改成 singing 。65. many much考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用 much而非many。句意为： 那真的花费很多。66.so-but考查连词。上一分句意为：我不想再去；下一分句意为：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。67. How- What考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，表示事情，故用what而非how。注意首字母要大写。68. are were考查虚拟语气。根据句子可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不相符，故把are改成were。句意为：如果你是我，。69. himthem考查代词。

12、根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用 them而非him。句意为： 你会和他们说吗？70. 去掉with考查动词。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉 with 。 句意为：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。【考点定位】考查短文纠错【名师点睛】本篇文章考查学生的短文纠错能力。短文纠错能力考查的范围较广，如各类词类用法和各种语法知识。本篇文章中既考查了词类用法如：61、63、65、66、69、70题，也考查了学生的语法知识如：62、64、67、68,涉及多种语法知识。要求考生要通读全文，把握大意，还要逐读各句才能找出错误所在。3.12015 浙江】短文改错（共 10小题；每小题1分，满分

13、10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spentA weekend with you. LuckilytheI was completely free then, so I' ll to say "yes" . I ' ll arrive in B

14、ristol at around 8:00 p.m.amin Friday evening.OnMy old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were madefrom glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. Onthe left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full o

15、f students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Fartherin the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right sideof the class was the road. I was always interested to se

16、e the drivers in hurry inthe morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I wasdreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.【答案】side-sidesfrom-tosit-sittingeasy-easily is-was them-it not删除 in hurry- in a hurry felt-feelIf-Although

17、/Though【解析】试题分析：这是一篇介绍教室的文章。side-sides考查名词的单复数。根据前面的three ,此处应该使用复数形式from-to 考查介词搭配 make of 与make from两者都常用在被动语态中,表示“某物由 构成的”.make of的原材料是看的到的 ，即平常我们说的物理现象，比如The chair is made of wood.椅子是有木头彳物式的。而 make from的原材料是看不到的，比如Paper is made from the trees. 纸张是由木材做成的.是一种化学变化，从纸上是看不出一棵树滴.sit-sitting考查动名词动词enjo

18、y后接ing 形式。easy-easily 考查副词 此处的副词彳饰动词 seeis-was考查动词的谓语时态根据前后句的谓语时态都是使用过去的，所以这里面也需要用过去时态。them-it考查代词 此处的it指代的是学校。删除not 考查意思是否表否定该句的意思应该是表达肯定而不是否定所以要删除notin hurry- in a hurry考查冠词in a hurry 意为"立刻”，也是一个固定搭配felt-feel考查使役动词的法。Make sb do sth,是使役动词的用法。If-Although/Though考查连词的用法，根据句意“尽管在我读书的时候我是一个小孩，但我不会忘

19、记它”表达让步，而不是条件。而且翻译为如果意思上也不通。【考点定位】短文改错【名师点睛】这种题目对语法的要求很高，要求注意上下文的，以及单词的用法，以及特殊 用法、固定搭配等。其实这一些错误很有可能是在写作中会出现，所以，加强写作的练习对 于这一种题目，也是有帮助的。另外，这种题目也可以改编一下，成为语法填空的题目。4.12015 新课标全国II 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该

20、加的词。删除：把多余的词作斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked intothe shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around

21、 and found where hisparents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying andtelling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried." Tony promised herthat this would never happen ag

22、ain.【答案】71. parent 改为 parents72. on 改为 in73. very 去掉74. looks 改为 looking75. where改为that 或者去掉where76. begun 改为 began77. telling 改为 told78. a 改为 the79. saw 后加 his80. terrible 改为 terribly22【解析】试题分析：本文讲述了小男孩TQ可和父母上街购物，街上人多J TQ畤没有告诉父母就独自进了一家商店, 结果和父母走散，后来在街上又得以相见的故事。7L paist改为parwntw看下文可知，是父母两个,所以用pa代皿。7

23、2, on改为in Tq可走进商店，说明玩具在橱窗里面j用由。73、y去掉这里是仃如此喜滋以至于”的意思1t应该是：1次somuchthd74 looks改为looking after之后跟从句或v-ing形式，故100ks改为looking 。75. where改为that或者去掉whet foimd后面的宜语从句是陈述句？故v-here改为that或者去掉v.hete*70 begun改为began and前后的谓语动词时态要一致,故begun改为began o77. telling改为told and前后的谓语动词时态要一致，和长口是并列渭语,故telling改为7& 3改为th

24、e由上下文可知，此处shop是第二次出现，应该用定冠词，故a改为th会7女沮叫后加him由上下文可知，他看到的是他的父母事故电火后加hin80, terrible 改为 terribly 修饰形容词 worried 要用副词,故 terrible 改为 terribly*【考点定位】语法填空。【名师点睛】通过短短的 100多个词，使考生能正确运用各类词和固定搭配，如动词、名词、副词、代词和连词，辨别并改正错误。总的说来，本题都是学生平时书面表达中常见的错误。多读多练习就能找出问题所在，也能对写作有帮助。5.12015 新课标全国I】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语

25、课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2 .只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. NowI am living in a city, b

26、ut I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean orthe mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, theenvironment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warminghas already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect yourenvironment. If we fail to do so ,we ' ll live to regret it .【答案】76. think - thought77. countryside 前力口 the78. or a