最新中考英语书面表达专题(含答案)经典1

1、最新中考英语书面表达专题（含答案）经典1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1 .近日，某中学 “iPa进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的 EnglishNewsletter正在以iPads, coming into the classrooms为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提 示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。学生们认为1 .不需要背沉重的书包去上学2 .很新鲜，学习更感兴趣3 .家长们认为1 .影响孩子视力2 .增加家庭负担你的观点1.2.汪思：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，观点可作适当发挥；3）词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不

2、计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。iPads, coming into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.【答案】iPads, coming into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students

3、 and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.The students don ' t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It' s cool to have lessons oveiPads. It very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.However,parents think using ipads for too l

4、ong will influence children' s eyesight. And some pfamilies can ' t afford to buy iPads.I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It ' s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.【解析】根据题目要求，需要书写一篇议论

5、文，探讨iPad进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格 式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处，第三段描述反对人的观点及原因，最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使 文章增色。点睛：对立观点式第一段：提出现象。第二段： Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持 X 的第个原因。 They also argue that 支持 X 的另个原因。第三段： Howeve

6、r, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反X 的第个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。第四段： There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the abovement

7、ioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X的有个坏处。2.世界卫生组织的一项研究报告显示，我国青少年近视率居世界第一。2019年全国两会当中 小眼镜”成关注重点，防控青少年近视迫在眉睫。以下表格是学校针对本校学生近 视问题做的调查表，假如你是校报编辑Jack,请根据所提供的信息，用英语写一篇调查报告，陈述学校调查结果，并表明你自己的观点和理由。我校学生的近视问题调查情况60%的本校学生戴眼镜。原因1 .不良的看书习惯，如在床上或阳光下看书2 .长时间玩手机、看电视、玩电脑3 .学习时间长，作业多建议1 .认真做眼保健操2

8、.多吃胡萝卜等对眼睛有益的食物3 .参考词汇： 近视nearsighted注意：1.内容须包括所提示的信息，可适当发挥；2 .文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；3 .词数：80-100,开头已经给出，不计入总词数。According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest inChina.【答案】 According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nea

9、rsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight ？ First, don't keep your eyes work for a long time. Don't spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and

10、 computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don't read in the sun; don't read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eyefriendly foods

11、. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming nearsighted.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据表格中的相关信息介绍一下如何保护视力。所提供的表格中列举了近视的原因和建议。主要从原因和建议两个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含表格上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文联系紧

12、密，符合逻辑关系，表达具 有条理性。【高分句型一】So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的视力对每个人都很重 要。本题运用句型： It is +形容词+for sb. to so sth.【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 当你读这本 书的时候，你应该把它从你的眼睛里移开一英尺。when you read 是由 when 引导的时间状语从句。3 书面表达Dear Betty

13、 fI like reading a Books very much. Bitt my parents and teachers are against it. They don 7 allow me io read any eBooks. From then on, my 用e is not 加昭r”差r al all What etin / do? Cmild you ive me some advice?I am looking forward to hearing fro rn yo u soon YoursLucy假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers6目的编辑Betty,日前收到了

14、 Lucy的来信。她在信中诉说了她的烦恼，请你根据Lucy的来信，用英语写一封90词左右的回信。要求内容合理，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Lucy,I ' m sorry to know that you aren' t allowed to read eBooks.All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,I ' m sorry to know that you aren' t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product o

15、f information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electr

16、onic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are benef

17、icial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 in recent years, as a product of, live in , more and more , so that, for example , do harm to , be harmful to , in my opinion , take the place of, instead of 等。同时 For one thing, / Fo

18、r another,/ However, 等使短 文的叙述很有条理，而 It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body./ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly in

19、stead of reading over. 等复 杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富 有条理。【点睛】 书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4 书面表达假定你是李华，最近你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你的英国朋友Peppa 向你来信询问讨论情况。请你用英语写封回

20、信，简单介绍以下讨论结果：1 节水节电2垃圾分类3少用纸巾，重拾手帕4步行、骑自行车或公交出行、参考词汇： low carbon 低碳； tissue 纸巾词数： 100 词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter

21、 asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we d bettlights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should so

22、rt out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be ou

23、r first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa 写信，介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行的讨 论情况。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：We can do；we' dbetter,we suggest which contributes to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺

24、序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头我要介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，接下来介绍我们为低碳生活可以做的事。此处ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of,contribute to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。5 书面表达 根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（ lucky money）。随着生活水平的提高， 大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的

25、钱用得更有意义？请结合自己的实际写一篇文章，词数80 词以上，文中不能出现真实校名和人名。内容包括如下：1. 你的压岁钱的来源和用途；2. 对合理使用压岁钱的建议（至少3 点）；3. 呼吁大家节约用钱，把自己的压岁钱用在最需要、最有意义的地方。【答案】 Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, scho

26、ol things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy somethin

27、g useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way. 【解析】【详解】每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压

28、岁钱（luckymoney ）。随着生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？这是一篇给材料作文，本题所给材料比较详细，写作中注意将所给内容表达出来，不能逐字翻译。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，注意谓语动词的变化。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下 文之间可以适当使用连接词。【点睛】文章使用了很好的短语和句子： In order to make good use of the lucky mo

29、ney, I think we cando the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wastingit on video games.这些给文章增色不少。6.书面表达根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文.（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息.开头已给出，不计入总词数.内容要点：过去现在1旧房1高楼2河水肮脏2 河水清澈(clean and clear).3步行、骑自行车上班3乘公交车、小汽车上班4道路狭窄

30、（narrow ）.4街道宽阔（wide）,干净整洁5 居住条件(living conditions )差5生活越来越好，环境（environment ）越来越舒适.6你的感想（写两到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years , great changes have taken place in our hometown .【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past,

31、 there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see

32、fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it' s still important to remembethe past. It t

33、ells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如take place, in our hometown , in the past, used to be , go to do , on foot, by bike, better and better, more and more 等。而 I think it's still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish

34、the present life.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样， 是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。7 环境保护人人有责， 如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好。某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改

35、善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望。提示词语： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示问题： What are the main environmental problems we have? What can we do in our daily life? What s your wish?Now there are many environmentalproblems.【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollu

36、tion and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it i

37、nto different bins.I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【详解】题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用的是一般现在

38、时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。高分亮点：短语：save energy； brush our teeth ； put it into different bins ； take action ； make a bigdifference 。句型： When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins ；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference 。【点睛】

39、首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用至U的表达， 例如save energy； brush our teeth ； put it into different bins ； takeaction; make a big difference o以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程 中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较 等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点 符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词 数是否符合要

40、求等。8 .假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望，希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点，活动安排以及你的建议。提示词语： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示问题： When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held? What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp? What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am ver

41、y glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday .Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10t

42、h to July 30th this summer.The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, whic

43、h will impress you deeply.What' s more, you will have chances to visit some museums andthe Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】1 .题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示

44、，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。2 .例文点评：该题要求写作体裁为书信格式，所以例文用第一人称I 进行写作，在文章结尾也按照标准书信格式进行了收尾。文章时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。文章条理分明，三个要点提示都已表达清楚，并进行了适当拓展，所给单词也都全部用上。3 .高分亮点：短语： as follows ， take part in ， What s more， look forward to 。句型：被动句型，现在分词作状语，主语从句。9 书面表达我校决定让学生轮流打扫厕所，以此作为教育学生的一种方式。 这件事在学生中引 起了强 烈的

45、反响，请你把下列不同意见整理成一篇书面材料，报告给学校。同意 ： 1 多数学生是独生子女，不会做事。2学生应该学会做艰苦的工作。3学会理解和尊重清洁工人的劳动。不同意：1很脏，容易使学生生病。2 不是学生应该做的事情。3打扫教室就足够了。注意： 1短文应包括表中所有内容，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；2不少于80 词。生词提示： respect 尊重【答案】 A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think i

46、t is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them

47、to get sick. They don students jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【详解】阅读题干要求，这是一篇看法类的作文，那么首先得点明讨论的话题，然后分别写出不同人群对此事的看法，时态以一般现在时为主。重点词汇及短语： argument 争论； take place 发生； among （三者或三者以上）之间； a good chance for sb 对某人来说是个好机会； help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事； get sick 生病。亮点句型：（ 1 ） A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自从我们学校让学生做自愿劳动以来，在学生中发生了一场激烈的争论。现在完成时（ have/has+done ）。（ 2 ） To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做义务 劳动是他们学习如何做困难工作的好机会。动词不定式作主语，谓语动词用单数，疑问词+to do 。10.书