书面表达如何写出好句子

1、福清二中福清二中 吴章云吴章云 一一.要适当的多使用些词组，习语来替代一些要适当的多使用些词组，习语来替代一些单词，以增加文采。单词，以增加文采。 如：如： 1. She doesnt like sports. She cares nothing for sports. 2. A new railway is being built in my hometown. A new railway is under construction in my hometown. 二二. 尽量避免过多的重复的使用某一些单词，必要时选用尽量避免过多的重复的使用某一些单词，必要时选用些同义词或词组来代替。些同义

2、词或词组来代替。 1.I like reading while my brother likes watching Tv I like reading while my brother enjoys watching Tv 2.We have built a new classroom building besides the old one and we have also built a library where the old one used to be . We have built a new classroom building besides the old one and

3、we have also set up a library where the old one used to be 三三. 要注意使用长短不同，结构不同的句子，尽量要注意使用长短不同，结构不同的句子，尽量使句型多样化，避免单调。使句型多样化，避免单调。 1.There is a new classroom building on one side of the road. There used to be a playgound on the other side before .But there is a library now. There are all kinds of books

4、, newspapers, and magazines in the library .There is a new playground in front of the school. There are a lot of trees in and around the school. 1. On one side of the road there is a new classroom. On the other side ,where the playground used to be ,now stands another new building- our library,in wh

5、ich you can read all kinds of books,newspapers, and magazines.The playground now is in front of the school. We have also planted trees in and around the school. 四四.多使用一些主从复合句来代替简单句，可使书面多使用一些主从复合句来代替简单句，可使书面表达行文更加丰富多彩表达行文更加丰富多彩 。 1.The meal was very nice.We all enjoyed it very much. The meal was so n

6、ice that we all enjoyed it very much. 2. I studied Chinese,maths,physics , chemistry,English and computer at school. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese,maths,physics , chemistry,English and computer. 五五.改变句子开头方式，不要一味地以主语开头，改变句子开头方式，不要一味地以主语开头，接着是谓语，宾语，最后在句末加个状语，我们接着是谓语，宾语，最后在句末加个

7、状语，我们可以把一些成分如状语提前，使整个句子读起来可以把一些成分如状语提前，使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏。跌宕起伏。 1.The young man pointed to a policeman not far away and said , “He stopped us an hour ago and told us to catch another offender. Pointing to a policeman not far away , the young man explained:“He stopped us an hour ago and told us to catch an

8、other offender. 六六.通过合并句子，将意义相关的几个句子用一定通过合并句子，将意义相关的几个句子用一定的连接方式连接起来，或通过紧缩，去掉一些多的连接方式连接起来，或通过紧缩，去掉一些多余的成分，避免冗长累赘。余的成分，避免冗长累赘。 1.We had a short rest . Then we began to play happily . We danced and sang. Some told stories . Some played chess. After a short rest ,We had great fun dancing and singing,te

9、lling jokes and playing chess . 2.My brother was riding a bike and I sat on the seat behind him. My brother was riding a bike with me sitting on the seat behind him. 七七. 在整篇文章含有众多的主谓宾的句子结构时，可适在整篇文章含有众多的主谓宾的句子结构时，可适当的打破些常规，用一些倒装句，感叹句，或强调句，当的打破些常规，用一些倒装句，感叹句，或强调句，为文章增添一点新意。为文章增添一点新意。 1.My pratents pra

10、ised the dog warmly . It saved my little sister bravely. My pratents praised the dog warmly . It was our brave dog that had saved my little sister. 2.The head of the farm showed us around . We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well. The head of the farm showed us around . How gl

11、ad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing very well! 八八.连接成分起着承上启下的作用，是语意过度的桥梁。有效的使连接成分起着承上启下的作用，是语意过度的桥梁。有效的使用连接词，文章更自然。用连接词，文章更自然。 表示并列whats more , besides, moreover, furthermore 表示转折 on the contrary, in spite of, regardless of, despite, while 表示因果thus, therefore, as a result, consequentl

12、y, so that 表示条件unless. on condition that ,as long as ,if 表示时间all of a sudden, later, eventually, meanwhile, finally 表示换种方式in other words, that is to say, namely 表示举列for instance ,for example, such as ,like 表示事实in fact , as a matter of fact, actually 表示总结in conclusion, in a word, all in all, on the w

13、hole 中央号召创建节约型社会，可是许多校园内部中央号召创建节约型社会，可是许多校园内部浪费现象严重。请你在班会上发表演讲，号召同学浪费现象严重。请你在班会上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。们从我做起，杜绝浪费。 提示：提示：1、浪费现象：水、电、餐厅的食物及其他；、浪费现象：水、电、餐厅的食物及其他； 2、危害、危害:自身性格，父母财政负担，自然资自身性格，父母财政负担，自然资 源；源； 3、制止浪费现象的措施：由自己设想。、制止浪费现象的措施：由自己设想。 要求：要求：1、词数、词数120左右；演讲的开头和结尾左右；演讲的开头和结尾 已写好已写好,不记入总词数。不记入总词数。 2

14、、不要逐字逐条翻译，要组成一篇、不要逐字逐条翻译，要组成一篇 通顺连贯的短文。通顺连贯的短文。 The students leave tap water running after washing and have the lights on in the daytime, which means a huge waste of water and electricity. Some students get into a bad habit of ordering much delicious food in the dining-room but they dont eat all the

15、 food, leaving a lot on the table. Some ask their parents for a large amount of pocket money. So it is high time we had to deal with the problem. The reasons are as follows : First of all Firstly, To begin with, In addition, Besides, Moreover, Whats more In the first place, the bad habit of being wa

16、steful will have a bad effect on their own character. Secondly, it adds financial burden to their parents. Last but not least, the worlds limited natural resources, such as water and electricity , will be used up soon. Finally, Whats worse, As far as I am concerned, I think only when all of us are fully aware of its seriousness can the situation be improved. On the one hand, it is necessary for s