综合改错部分试题集锦

1、六级历年真题综合改错部分试题集锦(附答案)S1.S2.S3.S4.S5.S6.S7.(涛涛提供电子版，为了供大家进行第 2 次有效自测打分估分)做改错题注意事项： 改正 将文中错词用斜线 (/) 划去，在后面横线上填入正确的词， 表示替换该 错词。 (请注意此时，我们文章里面用的是 periods 这种横线，但是考试时要 按要求，一般情况下，是要划斜线的。) 删去 在文中将错词用斜线 (/) 划去，在后面横线上也划一斜线 (/) ，表示该 错词是多余的。 增添 在文中两词间加“”号，表示有遗漏，然后在横线上添入遗漏的词 的正确形式。Error Correction ： ( 15 minutes

2、 )Example 1. (20XX 年 12 月试点新六级短文改错真题， 20XX年 6 月考查了完型填空)The National Endowment for the Arts recently released the the results of its“ Reading at Risk ” survey, which describedmovement of the American public away from books and literature and toward television and electronic media.According to the sur

3、vey.“ reading is on the decline on everyregion, within every ethnic group, and at every educational level. The day the NEA report released, the U.S. House, in a tie vote, upheld the government' s right to obtain bookstore andlibrary records under a provision of the USA Patriot Act. The House pro

4、posal would have barred the federal government from demand library records, reading lists, book customer lists and other material in terrorism and intelligence investigations. These two events are completely unrelated to, yet they echo each other in the message they send about the place of books and

5、 reading in American culture. At the heart of the NEA survey is the belief in our democratic system depends on leaders who can think critically, analyze texts and writing clearly. All of these are skills promoted by reading and discussing books and literature. At the same time, through a provision o

6、f the Patriot Act, the leaders of our country are unconsciously sending the message that reading may be connected to desirable activities that might undermine our system of government rather than helping democracy flourish.Our culture ' s decline in reading begin well before the existence of the

7、 Patriot Act. During the 1980s' culture wars,school systems across the country pulled some books from library shelves because its content was deemed by parents and teachers to be inappropriate. Now what started in schools across the country is playing itself out on a nation stage and is possibly

8、 having an impact on the reading habits of the American public.Example 2. （ 20XX年 12 月旧六级短文改错真题）The most important starting point for improving the understanding of science is undoubtedly an adequate scientific education at school. Public attitudes towards science owe much the way science is taught

9、in these institutions, Today, school is what most people come into contact with a formal instruction and explanation of science for the first time. At least in a systematic way, It is at this Point which the foundations are laid for an interest in science. What is taught （and how） in this first enco

10、unter will largely determinc an individual' s view of the subject in adult lifeUnderstanding the original of the negative attitudes towards science may help us to modify them . Most education system neglect exploration, understanding and reflection, Teachers in schools tend to present science as

11、 a collection of facts, often by more detail than necessary, As a result. children memorize processes such as mathematical formulas or the periodic table, only to forget it shortly afterwards. The task of learning facts and concepts, one at a time, makes learning laborious, boring and efficient, Suc

12、h a purely empirical approach, which consists of observation and description, is also, in a sense, unscientific or incomplete, There is therefore a need for resources and methods of teaching that facilitates a deep understanding of science in an enjoyable way, Science should not only be“ fun ” in th

13、esame way as playing a video game, but“ hard fun ” a deepfeeling of connection made possibly only by imaginative engagement.Example 3 . （ 20XX年 6 月英语六级短文改错真题）Until recently, dyslexia（朗诵困难症） and other reading problems wereS8.S9.S10.S1. S2. S3. S4.S5. S6. S7. S8.S9. S10. S1. a mystery to most teachers

14、 and parents. As a result, too many kids passed through school without master the printed page.Some were treated as mentally deficient; many were left Functionally illiterate （文盲的） , unable to ever meet their potential. But in the last several years, there' s been arevolution in that we ' ve

15、 learned about reading and dyslexia. Scientists are using a variety of new imaging techniques to watch the brain at work. Their experiments have shown that reading disorders are most likely the result of what is, in an effect, faulty wiring in the brain not lazy, stupidity or a poor homeenvironment.

16、 There ' s also convincing evidence which dyslexia is largely inherited. It is now considered a chronic problem for some kids, not just a“ phase ” . Scientists have alsodiscarded another old stereotype that almost all dyslexics are boys. Studies indicate that many girls are affecting as well and

17、 not getting help.At same time, educational researchers have come upwith innovative teaching strategies for kids who are having trouble learning to read. New screening tests are identifying children at risk before they get discouraged by year of frustration and failure. And educators are trying to g

18、et the message to parents that they should be on the alert for the first signs of potential problems It ' s an urgent mission. Mass literacy is a relative new social goal. A hundred years ago people didn' t need to begood readers in order to earn a living. But in the Information Age, no one

19、can get by with knowing how to read well and Understand increasingly complex material.S2. S3. S4. S5. S6. S7.S8. S9. S10. Example 4 . （ 20XX年 12 月英语六级短文改错真题）Every week hundreds of CVs（ 简历 ） land on our desks.We' ve seen it all: CVs printed on pink paper, CVs that are 10pages long and CVs with si

20、lly mistakes in first paragraph. Agood CV is your passport to an interview and ,ultimate , tothe job you want Initial impressions are vital, and a badly presented CV could mean acceptance, regardless of what's in it.S1. S2. S3. S4.Here are a few ways to avoid end up on the reject pile.Print your

21、 CV on good-quality white paper.CVs with flowery backgrounds or pink paper will stand out upon all the wrong reasonsGet someone to check for spelling and grammatical errors, because a spell-checker will pick up everyS5. S6.mistake. CVs with errors will be rejected-it shows that you don ' t pay a

22、ttention to detail.Restrict your self to one or two pages, and listing any publications or referees on a separate sheet.If you are sending your CV electronically, check the formatting by sending it to yourself first. keep upS7. S8 .the format simple.Do not send a photo unless specifically requested.

23、 If you have to send on ,make sure it is one taking in a professional setting, rather than a holiday snap.Getting the presentation right is just the first step. What about the content? The Rule here is to keep it factual and Truthful-exaggerations usually get find out. And remember to tailor your CV

24、 to each different job.Example 5. （20XX年 1 月英语六级短文改错真题）The World Health Organizationsays its ten-yearcampaign to remove leprosy（麻风病 ） as a world healthS9 . S10. S1.S2.S4.S5.problem has been successful. Doctor Brundland, head of the WHO, say a number of leprosy cases around the world has been cut of

25、ninety percent during the past 10 years. She says efforts are continuing to compete end the disease. S3.Leprosy is caused by bacteria spread through liquid from the nose and mouth. The disease mainly effects the skin and nerves. However, if leprosy is not treated it can cause permanent damage for th

26、e skin, nerves, eyes, arms, etc.In 1999, an international campaign began to end leprosy. The WHO, governments of countries of countries most affected by the disease, and several other groups are part of the campaign. This alliance guarantees that all leprosy patients, even they S6.are poor, have a r

27、ight to the most modern treatment.S7.S8.S9.S10.Doctor Brundland says leprosy is no longer a disease that requires life-long treatments by medical experts. Instead, patients can take that is called a multi-drug therapy. This modern treatment will cure leprosy in 6 to 12 months, depend on the form of

28、the disease. The treatment combinesseveral drugs taken daily or once a month.The WHO has given multi-drug therapy to patients freely for the last five years. The members of the alliance against leprosy plan to target the countries which still threatened by leprosy. Among the estimated 700,000 victim

29、s around the world, the WHO believes about 70% are in India. The disease also remains a problem in Africa and South America.S1.S2.S3.S4.S5.S6.S7.S8.Example 6. （20XX 年 6 月英语六级短文改错真题） Culture refers to the social heritage of a people -the learned patterns for thinking, feeling and acting that characte

30、rize a population or society, include the expression of these patterns in material things. Culture is compose of nonmaterial culture abstract creations like values, beliefs, customs and institutional arrangements and material culture physical object likecooking pots, computers and bathtubs. In sum,

31、culture reflects both the ideas we share or everything we make. In ordinary speech, a person of culture is the individual can speak another language the person who is unfamiliar with the arts, music, literature, philosophy, or history. But to sociologists, to be human is to be cultured, because of c

32、ulture is the common world of experience we share with other members of our group. Culture is essentially to our humanness. It provides a kind of map for relating to others. Consider how you feelS1.S2.S3.S4.S5.S6.S7.S8.S9.your way about social life. How do you know how to act in a classroom, or a de

33、partment store, or towards a person who smiles or laugh at you ?Your culture supplies you S9.by broad, standardized, ready-made answers for dealing S10.with each of these situations. Therefore, if we know one' s culture,we may sense or predict a good deal of his behavior.Example 7. （20XX年 6 月英语六

34、级短文改错真题） The Seattle Times Company is one newspaper firm that has recognized the need for change and done something about it. In the newspaper industry, papers must reflect the diversity of the communities to which they provide information. It must reflect that diversity with their news coverage or

35、risk losing their readers interest and their advertisers' support. Operating withinSeattle, which has 20 percents racial minorities, the Paper has put into place policies and procedures for Hiring and maintain a diverse workforce. The underlying reason for the change is that for information to b

36、e fair , appropriate, and subjective, it should be reported by the same kind of population that reads it.A diversity committee composed of reporters, editors, and photographers meets regularly to value the Seattle Times ' content and to educate the rest of the newsroom staff about diversity issu

37、es. In an addition, the paper instituted a content audit（审查 ） that evaluates thefrequency and manner of representation of woman and people of colour in photographs. Early audits showed that minorities were pictured far too infrequently and were pictured with a disproportionate number of negative art

38、icles. The audit results from improvement in the frequency of majority representation and their portrayal in neutral or positive situations. And, with a result, the S10.Seattle Times has improved as a newspaper. The diversity training and content audits helped the Seattle Times Company to win the Pe

39、rsonnel Journal Optimas Award for excellence in managing change.Example 8. （20XX 年 6 月英语六级短文改错真题 ）A great many cities are experiencing difficulties which are nothing new in the history of cities, except in their scale. Some cities have lost their original purpose and have not found new one. And any

40、large or richS1_city is going to attract poor immigrants, who flood in, filling with hopes of prosperity which are then oftenS2_disappointing. There are backward towns on the edge ofBombay or Brasilia, just as though there were on the edge ofS3_seventeenth-century London or early nineteenth-centuryP

41、aris. This is new is the scale.S4_Descriptions written by eighteenth-century travelers of the poorof Mexico City, and the enormous contrasts that was to be foundS5_there, are very dissimilar to descriptions of Mexico City today -S6_the poor can still be numbered in millions.The whole monstrous growt

42、h rests on economic prosperity, but behind it lies two myths: the myth of the city as a promisedS7_land, that attracts immigrants from rural poverty andS8_brings it flooding into city centers, and the mythS9_of the country as a Garden of Eden,which, a few generations late, sends them floodingS10_out

43、 again to the suburbs.Example 9. （ 2000 年 1 月英语六级短文改错真题）Until the very latest moment of his existence, man has been bound to the planet on which he originatedanddeveloped. Now he had the capability to leave that planet S1.and move out into the universe to those worlds which he has known previously o

44、nly directly. Men have explored parts of S2.the moon, put spaceships in orbit around another planet andpossiblywithinthe decade will landinto anotherplanetandS3._exploreit. Canwe be too bold asto suggest thatwemay beS4.able tocolonizeother planet withinthe not -too-distantS5._future? Some have advoc

45、ated such aprocedure asasolutionto thepopulationproblem. ship theexcess peopleoffto themoon. But we must keep in head thebillions ofdollarsweS6.mightspend incarryingout theproject.To maintain theearth'spopulationatits presentlevel.we wouldhave toblastoff intospace7,500 peopleeveryhour ofevery da

46、y of the year.Whyare we spending so littlemoneyon spaceS7aspects of the global environment,oneis surely justified inhisconcern for the moneyand resourcesthat they are pouredS9._intothe space explorationefforts.Butperhaps we shouldlookat both sides of thecoinbeforearriving hastyS10exploration ? Consi

47、der the great need for improving many S8.conclusions.Example 10. （2000 年 6 月英语六级短文改错真题）When you start talking about good and bad manners you immediately start meeting difficulties. Many people just cannot agree what they mean. We asked a lady, who replied that she thought you could tell a well-manne

48、d person on the way they occupied the space around themfor example, when such aperson walks down a street he or she is constantly unaware of others. Such people never bump into other people.However, a second person thought that this was more a question of civilized behavior as good manners. Instead,

49、 this other person told us a story, it he said was quite well known, about an American who had been invited to an Arab meal at one of the countries of the Middle East. The American hasn' tbeen told very much about the kind of food he might expect. If he had known about American food, he might ha

50、ve behaved better.S1. S2. S3. S4. S5. S6. S7. Immediately before him was a very flat piece of bread that looked, to him, very much as a napkin （餐巾） . Picking it up, he put it into his collar, so that it falls across his shirt.His Arab host, who had been watching, said of nothing, but immediately cop

51、ied the action of his guest.And that, said this second person, was a fine example of good manners.S8. S9. S10. 所有短文改错文章 参考答案Example 1. （20XX 年 12 月试点新六级短文改错真题） S1. on inS2. the day 和 the NEA report 之间应该加上 when S3.demand demandingS4.去掉 toS5 in 改为 thatS6.writing writeS7.desirable undesirableS8.begin b

52、eganS9.its theirS10. nation nationalExample 2. （20XX年 12 月旧六级短文改错真题）S1.在 much 和 the way 间插入 toS2.what whereS3.which thatS4.original originS5.system systemsS6.by inS7.it themS8.efficient inefficientS9.facilitates facilitateS10.possibly > possibleExample 3 . （20XX年 6 月英语六级短文改错真题）S1.master mastering

53、S2.that whatS3.an 多余所以要去掉S4.lazy lazinessS5.which thatS6.affecting affectedS7.at 和 same 之间应该 加上 theS8.year yearsS9.relative relativelyS10. with withoutExample 4 . （20XX年 12 月英语六级短文改错真题）S1.in first paragraph in the first paragraphS2. ultimate ultimatelyS3. acceptance unacceptance / rejectionS4. end endingS5.upon forS6.will pick up will not pic