六级作文ppt课件

1、1 1w09年年6月英语六级作文预测及范文月英语六级作文预测及范文1Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)目前大学生面临就业难的问题 2)分析导致该问题的原

2、因 3)大学生应该如何应对该问题 Employment Pressure Facing College Students _ _ 2 2w 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析该问题产生的原因，提纲第3的要求说明应该如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学生就业难的问题;分析导致该问题的原因;从大学生的角度说明应该如何应对该问题。 高分范文 Employment Pressure Facing College Students 1About a decade ago, university stude

3、nts could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation. 1But now, things are different. Todays university students usually experience great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs. They often complain that graduation means joblessness. 2What is the cause of this phenomenon? 3 33Firstly,

4、 with the enrollment extension of universities, 4the supply of university graduates exceeds social demand. This results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job. 3Secondly, university students 5tend to spend most of their time at school in studying academic subjects and lack r

5、elevant job experience. 3Thirdly, some students dont study hard during the college. After four years of university life, they havent gained the knowledge those fairly good jobs or positions require.4 46Facing the increasingly fierce competition, we university students should try our bests to change

6、this situation. 3Above all, when in school, we should make the most of our time and 7put our heart into our studies. 3Whats more, we can take part-time jobs and attend social activities in our spare time to 8accumulate relevant practical experience. 3Besides, when we apply for jobs after graduation,

7、 we should 9attach more importance to accumulating experience than to the starting salary. 5 5【亮点点评亮点点评】 1过去和现在进行对比。过去和现在进行对比。 2设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。 3过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 4“大学生供过于求大学生供过于求”。 5“倾向，趋于倾向，趋于”。 6“面对日趋激烈的竞争面对日趋激烈的竞争”，现在分词作状语。，现在分词作状语。 7“用心学习用心学习”。 8“积累相关的实际经验积

8、累相关的实际经验”。 9“更加关注更加关注”。 佳句临摹佳句临摹 1.佳句：佳句：Facing the increasingly fierce competition, university students should try their best to change this situation. 临摹：经历过艰苦，我们就会更懂得如何应对危机。临摹：经历过艰苦，我们就会更懂得如何应对危机。 _. 2.佳句：佳句：They should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting sala

9、ry 临摹：很显然，我们应该更加关注一个人的能力，而不是他的学历。临摹：很显然，我们应该更加关注一个人的能力，而不是他的学历。 _. 【KEY】 1. Having experienced hardships, we will know better how to survive crisis. 2. Obviously, we should attach more importance to ones abilities than to his degree.6 6()评分标准和作文的重要性。评分标准和作文的重要性。考试大论坛考试大论坛作文在六级考试中居于十分重要的地位。从作文在六级考试中居

10、于十分重要的地位。从1997年年6月起月起，考试委员会在计算成绩时正式实施，考试委员会在计算成绩时正式实施“作文最低分作文最低分”的规定的规定，对写作提出了更高的要求。其计算方法是将作文分的最低，对写作提出了更高的要求。其计算方法是将作文分的最低分定为分定为6分，如果作文分为分，如果作文分为0，即使总分及格了也按，即使总分及格了也按59分处理分处理，作文分在，作文分在06分之间，其最后得分为：原计算总分分之间，其最后得分为：原计算总分-6+实得实得作文分。比如说你的总分原为作文分。比如说你的总分原为63分，实得作文分为分，实得作文分为2，那么最，那么最后得分是后得分是636+2=59分。分。六

11、级考试作文采取总体评分的方法，阅卷老师根据文章六级考试作文采取总体评分的方法，阅卷老师根据文章的总体印象给分及奖励分，从文章的内容和语言两个方面进的总体印象给分及奖励分，从文章的内容和语言两个方面进行综合评判。这些都是我们在考前所要了解的考试要求，以行综合评判。这些都是我们在考前所要了解的考试要求，以便在考试中规范写作。考试大便在考试中规范写作。考试大(wwwE)7 7(三三)“三段式三段式”的写作。的写作。六级作文要求至少120个词一般都是写150180个词，大都是三到四段，因此我将其称做是“三段式”的写作，即不论什么题材都要有开头、展开和结尾三部分。而且每个部分的写法都有

12、一定的套路，掌握了这些套路，就可以使你的文章看起来有条有理。当然能不能拿高分就取决于你的内容和形式是不是结合得很好，你对形式会不会灵活编排以避免呆板，你的内容是不是充实丰富以避免单调。考试作文的套路可以教，内容的填写就要靠同学们自己在基本功训练阶段的努力了。8 8开头开头1)开门见山。这一般都用于谈及对某个观点或现象的看法的文章，在文章的开头就简单的谈出个人看法，然后在下文里展开论述。如：A. The benefits of television: With the improvement of peoples living standard, almost every family can

13、afford to buy a television set. Television is becoming increasingly popular because of its values in entertaining and educating.B. Chinese people in my eye: The Chinese have a 5000 - year history, and modesty, industry, bravery, kindness are the flower of their virtues. In my opinion, they still rem

14、ain true in reality.考试大论坛2)引用名言。用名人名言或谚语开头，往往比直接用个人的话更有说服力，也给文章增添色彩。当然这要以广泛的积累为基础，不然临时可想不出来。在引用古语或名人名言的时候要注意引用的准确性，如果把握不准的话，不如不引用。9 9A. Women are not treated equally with men: “we hold these truths to be self- evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their creator with certa

15、in inalienable right.”, the American Declaration of Independence declares. While in china, everyone is familiar with the saying “women are equal with men” or “women can hold half of the sky”. It seems that men and women are treated equally, at least in law. But the reality is a different story.B. Ca

16、n money buy everything? As the saying goes” Money makes the mare go”, but there is something that can t be bought with money, such as time and true love.1010 3)自问自答。通过提问的方式引起读者对文章的兴趣，你可自问自答。通过提问的方式引起读者对文章的兴趣，你可以在篇首就简单给出答案，也可以将答案放到接下来的段落中以在篇首就简单给出答案，也可以将答案放到接下来的段落中。这一般都是用在作文题本身就是提问式或是。这一般都是用在作文题本身就是提

17、问式或是结论式的文章中。比如说结论式的文章中。比如说Should people be always honest?Dont hesitate to say“NO”!A. What is a good student? Different people may have different answer to this question. Someone thinks that a good student should be good at academic work. Others claim that a good student should be one who is all roun

18、d development of morality, intelligence and physique. But I think, in addition to the above mentioned, a good student, above all, should be capable of doing practical work, and must be competent in the future work这是自问自答式的，在第一段中根据题目所给的这是自问自答式的，在第一段中根据题目所给的问题，先写出提示中的两种观点，然后有连接词问题，先写出提示中的两种观点，然后有连接词but

19、，提出自己，提出自己不同的看法，使人对作者的意图一目了然不同的看法，使人对作者的意图一目了然1111 B. “Reading makes a full man” is a saying of the famous English philosopher Francis Bacon. It means that anyone who wants to be a full man must keep on reading. But books are ot various kinds and different contents, dealing with different things in

20、the world. Then what kind of book should we read? And how to read?这个开头段我认为是写得很精彩的，因为它不是这个开头段我认为是写得很精彩的，因为它不是纯粹的八股式写法。用名言开头，最后用问句点明主纯粹的八股式写法。用名言开头，最后用问句点明主题。没有按常规在开头即交代两种相反的观点，然后题。没有按常规在开头即交代两种相反的观点，然后说说as far as I am concerned而是在认识到读书的重要而是在认识到读书的重要性的前提下提出我们该读什么样的书和怎么读，使文性的前提下提出我们该读什么样的书和怎么读，使文章在认识上有

21、一定的深度。章在认识上有一定的深度。1212 4)对比式。在命题作文中，它往往会给出一些提示，对比式。在命题作文中，它往往会给出一些提示，表明两种不同的态度，再要求你写出自己的看法。用表明两种不同的态度，再要求你写出自己的看法。用这种开头的方法要考虑一下整个文章的布局。如果你这种开头的方法要考虑一下整个文章的布局。如果你的主体是论述个人的看法而非别人的观点，那么在开的主体是论述个人的看法而非别人的观点，那么在开头就有必要交代一下对于这个问题目前存在的一些看头就有必要交代一下对于这个问题目前存在的一些看法。比如以下的例法。比如以下的例A，考题的提示是：有人说成功主要靠运气，有，考题的提示是：有人

22、说成功主要靠运气，有人则认为成功主要靠勤奋，而与运气无关。你的观点人则认为成功主要靠勤奋，而与运气无关。你的观点是什么是什么?说明你的理由。这其实就是要你以你的理由为说明你的理由。这其实就是要你以你的理由为表达主体。如果按照作文提示要求是要把别人的观点表达主体。如果按照作文提示要求是要把别人的观点单独成段的话，则不需要在开头展开对双方看法的论单独成段的话，则不需要在开头展开对双方看法的论述，留到下面再说。如下面的述，留到下面再说。如下面的1313 B，题目要求是：，题目要求是：1、有人认为业余时间应多参加一些体育、有人认为业余时间应多参加一些体育活动。活动。2、有人认为业余时间应多做一些智力活

23、动，如读书、看、有人认为业余时间应多做一些智力活动，如读书、看报、写作等。报、写作等。3、我的看法。这就是要你将题目的要点单独成段、我的看法。这就是要你将题目的要点单独成段，所以在开头就不用交代得太清楚，点到即可。，所以在开头就不用交代得太清楚，点到即可。A. How to achieve success: Some people say that the key to success is the luck, while others claim it is hard work. There is no doubt that successful people take advantage

24、of opportunities. But if he works little and just waits to see opportunities pass by, he still cant succeed. So, in my opinion, diligence, devotion and perseverance are three fundamental factors to success.B. How to spend spare time: Physical activities and intellectual pastimes are two basic ways f

25、or us to spend our spare time. Different people may have different means of spending their leisure time.14145)讲故事。这种方法比较新颖，能使文章活泼有趣，但是要注讲故事。这种方法比较新颖，能使文章活泼有趣，但是要注意故事的长短。如果你整篇文章都要围绕该故事展开，你的开意故事的长短。如果你整篇文章都要围绕该故事展开，你的开头即是故事的开头。如果你仅是用其做个例子，就要写得简单头即是故事的开头。如果你仅是用其做个例子，就要写得简单清楚，往往可以是生活中常遇到的一些情景。清楚，往往可以是生活

26、中常遇到的一些情景。Most of us may have such experience: when you go to some place far away from the city where you live and think you know nobody there, you are surprised to find that you run into one of your old classmates on the street, perhaps both of you would cry out: “what a small world!”6)数字开头。这一般都是用于

27、图表题，将图表显示的数字数字开头。这一般都是用于图表题，将图表显示的数字先概括性的总结出来。然后再提出问题，给与分析和解答。先概括性的总结出来。然后再提出问题，给与分析和解答。A.”Health gains in developing countries: It can be seen from the graph that health gains a lot in developing countries from 1960 to 1990. Their life expectancy increased 20 years, while the mortality decreased 10

28、%. Why are there such big changes during the 30 years?1515B. Changes in peoples daily expenses in the past five years: In the past five years, there have been great changes in peoples daily expenses in XX city. According to the figures given in the table, the amount of money spent on food decreased

29、gradually, accounting for 35 percent in 1998. However, there was a rapid increase in clothing expenses, which made up 17% in 1998. In addition, the table shows an upward tendency in recreation expenses. The same was the case with other expenses.划线部分都是图表题中常要用到的一些词组和语划线部分都是图表题中常要用到的一些词组和语句。句。 1616中间段中

30、间段1)一定要有中心句一定要有中心句 中心句中心句(topic sentence)、拓展句、拓展句(development scntences)和和结论句结论句(concludingntence)组成的组成的 2)注意文章布局的连贯。在写好中心句后，要围绕其做进注意文章布局的连贯。在写好中心句后，要围绕其做进一步的阐述，把文字材料很好地组织起来，一步的阐述，把文字材料很好地组织起来， A. first，second，thirdBTo begin with，moreover，fmallyCfor one thing，more important，last but not leastDmeanwh

31、ileEsince thenFthereforeGin addition17173)常用的展开方法。 对比法：比如说my view on jobhopping，在提示中它就指出有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作，有些人喜欢经常更换工作，要你通过对比不同的想法而得出自己对这个问题的看法， 因果法：The career I pursume，我的提纲会是这样：我理想的职业是做一个广告创意人(这是结论)，其原因有以下几点 列举法：My view on the negative effects of some advertisements 概述法：we need to broaden our knowledge

32、，谈的是拓宽知识面的必要性。通常说明必要性的文章都会用分、总的展开方法。先谈科学技术是社会发展不可缺少的，然后指出社会科学和自然科学互相渗透，之后得出结论现代大学生需要广博的知识 议论法18184)段落写作中常用的套路。在各种类型的写作中总是会有一定规律可循的，那就是句的的使用。记住一些实用的句型，在考试中可以提高行文速度。A说明原因的句型：aThere are sometwomany good reasons forto do somethinge.g：aThere are two good reasons for the changes in the way that people com

33、municate with each otherbThe reason foris thatB表示不同看法的句型：Some believe thatothers argue thatstill others maintain thateg：aSome people hold the opinion that it i8 hood to live with parentsbTheydiffer greatly in their attitude towards pollution problemC辩论中常用的句型：来源:考试大网aThere is no doubt thatbIt is obvi

34、ousclear that cAs is known to alldIt goes without saying thateWhat is more importantfI am convinced that1919D举例表示法：举例表示法：forexample，for instance，lets shave an example，a good case in pointE概述概述(用于图表作文用于图表作文)：aAccording to the figures given in the tablebThis chart shows thatcAs is shown by the graphdI

35、t can be seen from the statistics thateThere is a slightslowrapid riseincrease、decreasefalldrop in incomepopulationpriceproduction3、wonderful ending，happy ending20201)概括总结。这是最一般的写法，也是最保险的。只要概括总结。这是最一般的写法，也是最保险的。只要把你的意思归纳一下即可，不过要注意用与上文中不同把你的意思归纳一下即可，不过要注意用与上文中不同的句子或句型，稍显变化。的句子或句型，稍显变化。 2)以提问的方式结束。这是比

36、较自信的写法，因为以提问的方式结束。这是比较自信的写法，因为你认为你一定能说服对方接受你的观点，因此明知故问你认为你一定能说服对方接受你的观点，因此明知故问，留有回味的感觉。如：，留有回味的感觉。如：As the reason listed above。why dont you choose the public school for your child?3)展望式结语。一般是针对目前需要改进或还没有展望式结语。一般是针对目前需要改进或还没有实现的事情或事物提出一种希望。如：实现的事情或事物提出一种希望。如：In a word，TV advertisement，I think，is a ne

37、wborn thing in the development 0f our economyOf course，there is much room for improvement in TV ads，but I believe the TV ads will benefits both the advertisers and consumers 21214)口号式结语。对问题分析完之后，提出一种解决方法以口号式结语。对问题分析完之后，提出一种解决方法以供读者参考，或是提出一种号召。这种结尾方法比较有供读者参考，或是提出一种号召。这种结尾方法比较有感染力。如：感染力。如：Open your he

38、art to your friends so that whether they are similar to or different from youyou may become the happiest man in the world5)引语式结语。同样是以引语结束，但要注意，如果引语式结语。同样是以引语结束，但要注意，如果开头使用了引语，结论部分最好不要再用。引语会增加开头使用了引语，结论部分最好不要再用。引语会增加结尾的说服力。结尾的说服力。在结尾中常用到的句型有：在结尾中常用到的句型有： as a consequence,www.xamda.CoMin shortI firmly

39、 support the view thatin a word来源来源:考试大网考试大网in generalas far as I am concernedI am sure my opinion is both sound and well grounded 2222Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? 1、随着信息技术的发展、随着信息技术的发展,电子图片越来越多；电子图片越来越多； 2、有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是、有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是. 3、我的看法、我的看法 恩波范文：恩波范文： With the spurt of

40、science and technology, the invention of electronic books seems blessing to our students. Some folks prefer electric ones to textbooks. Such books are obviously handy and convenient; and thanks to their multi-functions. they are conductive to their readers, who can obtain much relatively updated inf

41、ormation, However, every coin has two sides. Nowadays, fewer people has time sitting before computer reading E-books. Even if time is available, those so-called devices named packable readers may also be restricted by virtue of lacking electricity. 2323 When it comes to traditional books, they also

42、have their own superiorities. Many individuals often maintain that they are more convenient than e-books, for people have no restrictions in using them. whenever you are or whenever you are or wherever you go, you can bring some books for reading. On the other hand, traditional books are more availa

43、ble because they are sold in various bookshops. However, although traditional books possess such advantages, they also have some deficiencies. For instance, traditional books are not easily portable so it is inconvenient for people to carry more once they need and they are vulnerable to water and fire. 2424Therefore, my view is that we should utilize the e-books appropriately, as well as the traditional textbooks because of their diverse functions in our practical daily life, and one thing that we