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1、雅思英语雅思英语 写作篇ppt ppt 编写:胡宇斌编写:胡宇斌cma training centrecma training centre 图表题图表题 写作写作wskills riting温故知新温故知新图表图表5种类型种类型表格表格 table线图线图(直线直线/曲线曲线) line graph柱状图柱状图(条形图条形图) bar chart饼图饼图 pie chart流程图流程图 process diagram learn the new while reviewing the old 表格表格 写作写作wskills riting第第 二二 讲讲表格主体段表格主体段写作要点写作要点
2、纵横纵横比较比较, ,分类分类描写描写; ; 抓住抓住特点特点, ,着眼着眼区别区别; ; 量化量化对比对比, ,减除减除运算。运算。 p224 p224 例题例题1111 注意注意: 除法除法数字较大且悬殊,以倍数关系说明差别数字较大且悬殊,以倍数关系说明差别(twice/triple/ three-fold/four times);); 减法减法数字较小且相差不大,以差值说明差别。数字较小且相差不大,以差值说明差别。表格主体段表格主体段 第一句开头第一句开头由此可见由此可见的表达法:的表达法: according to the(according to the(图表名称图表名称) ), ,
3、 as shown in the as shown in the, , as can be seen from the as can be seen from the, (we can see from thewe can see from thethatthat) it can be seen from theit can be seen from thethatthat it is manifest/apparent/clear from it is manifest/apparent/clear from thethethatthat 第二句第二句具体说来具体说来的表达法:的表达法: t
4、o be more exact, = more exactly to be more precise, = more precisely to be more specific, = more specifically 表格主体段表格主体段写作实战写作实战 表格出现时间怎么办?表格出现时间怎么办? 例见例见 p223 p223 例例1010 第一个表格第一个表格 想想怎么写?想想怎么写? how can i write it ?写作解析写作解析注意:注意: 既有既有不同的时间不同的时间(1994-19981994-1998),也有),也有不不同的对象同的对象(四种原因)。(四种原因)。 试写三
5、段。试写三段。 第一段第一段(开头段)改写题目文字说明。(开头段)改写题目文字说明。 第二段第二段(主体段)(主体段)分别描写各个对象在分别描写各个对象在这段时间的变化这段时间的变化。 第三段第三段 (结尾段(结尾段 ) 对各对象进行比较。对各对象进行比较。 表示趋势的短语表示趋势的短语- -动词动词(复习复习):数字趋势动词数字趋势动词1. 1.上升趋势上升趋势: : riserise, go up, , go up, 2. 2.下降趋势下降趋势: : fallfall, sink, drop, , sink, drop, dip, reduce, go downdip, reduce, g
6、o down3. 3.保持不变保持不变: : remain steadyremain steady, , show no/little changeshow no/little change4. 4.波动波动: : fluctuatefluctuate趋势动词替换趋势动词替换1. 1.上升趋势上升趋势: : increase increase, grow, , grow, climb, ascend ( jump, climb, ascend ( jump, surgesurge, , soar, shoot up )soar, shoot up ) 2. 2.下降趋势下降趋势: : decr
7、easedecrease, decline, , decline, descend ( plunge, slump)descend ( plunge, slump)3. 3.保持不变保持不变: : level off/out atlevel off/out at, , hover at, stabilize at, reach a hover at, stabilize at, reach a plateau atplateau at表示趋势的短语表示趋势的短语- -形容词形容词(复习复习):1. 1.速度快速度快: : dramaticdramatic, drastic, rapid, ,
8、drastic, rapid, 2. 2.速度慢速度慢: : gradualgradual, slow, steady, slow, steady3. 3.幅度大幅度大: : significantsignificant, substantial, marked, substantial, marked4. 4.幅度小幅度小: : slightslight, modest, moderate, modest, moderate注意注意: : 以上加以上加 ly ly 均为副词。均为副词。 表示分别的副词是表示分别的副词是 respectivelyrespectively。表示趋势的短语表示趋势
9、的短语- -其它其它(复习复习):1. 1.最高点最高点: : peak atpeak at, reach the highest point at, , reach the highest point at, 2. 2.最低点最低点: : bottom out atbottom out at, reach the bottom at, the lowest , reach the bottom at, the lowest point atpoint at3. 3.达到多少达到多少(量量): : amount to,amount to, reach, hit, stand at reach,
10、 hit, stand at4. 4.占多少占多少(比例比例) : : account foraccount for, make up, occupy, represent, make up, occupy, represent 写作示范写作示范 ( p223 p223 例例10 10 ) 第一段(第一段(开头段开头段)改写题目文字说明。)改写题目文字说明。the (the ( first first ) ) tabletable comparescompares the four reasons the four reasons why 100,000 uk people travel ab
11、road for five why 100,000 uk people travel abroad for five years to 1998 ( years to 1998 ( while the second table outlines while the second table outlines the destination of visits abroad by ukthe destination of visits abroad by ukresidents during this periodresidents during this period.) .)第二段(第二段(
12、主体段主体段)分别描写各个对象在这)分别描写各个对象在这段时间的变化段时间的变化段落结构:段落结构:首句首句it is manifest from the it is manifest from the ( ( firstfirst ) ) table thattable that the the purpose of visits abroad by uk residents purpose of visits abroad by uk residents was was made up ofmade up of holiday, business, visits to friends ho
13、liday, business, visits to friends and relatives, and other reasons. and relatives, and other reasons. specificallyspecifically,具体描写具体描写各对象各对象在这段在这段时间时间的变化的变化 . . specificallyspecifically, , there was a slight decrease there was a slight decrease in in the number of uk travelers the number of uk tra
14、velers for holidayfor holiday from from 1994 to 1995. 1994 to 1995. after that ,after that , the number the number increased sharply increased sharply until 1998, until 1998, peaking atpeaking at 20,700. 20,700. (度假,度假,2 2句句) the 5 years witnessedthe 5 years witnessed a gradual a gradual rise rise i
15、n the number in the number for businessfor business from 3155 to from 3155 to 3957. 3957. (生意,生意,1 1句句)in comparison,in comparison, the the number number for visits to friends and relativesfor visits to friends and relatives remained stableremained stable from 1994 to 1995. from 1994 to 1995. howeve
16、r,however, there was a dramatic growth there was a dramatic growth in the following in the following two years. two years. (访亲,访亲,2 2句句) the periodthe period from from 1994 to 1998 1994 to 1998 experienced a fluctuation experienced a fluctuation in the in the number number for other reasonsfor other
17、 reasons. . (其他,其他,1 1句句) 第三段第三段 (结尾段结尾段 ) 对各对象进行比较。对各对象进行比较。we can clearly see from the table thatwe can clearly see from the table that from from 1994 to 1998, 1994 to 1998, holidayholiday had the had the highest highest number number of uk travelers among the four reasonsof uk travelers among the
18、 four reasons.( .(最大值最大值) the number for the number for businessbusiness was was higher than higher than that that for visits to friends and relatives. for visits to friends and relatives. ( (第二最大值第二最大值) other reasonsother reasons had the had the smallest smallest number in the number in the four re
19、asons. four reasons. ( (最小值最小值) 表格主体段表格主体段写作实战写作实战 表格出现时间怎么办?表格出现时间怎么办? 例见例见 p224 p224 例例1010 第二个表格第二个表格 想想怎么写?想想怎么写? how can i write it ?table table 主体段主体段模版模版 the tables the tables givesgives data about _. data about _. according to the according to the first tablefirst table, . specifically, ., .
20、 specifically, . in figure 2in figure 2, it can be seen that . more precisely ., it can be seen that . more precisely . consequentlyconsequently, it , it can be concludedcan be concluded that there is that there is a a significant trend towardssignificant trend towards_._.表格主体段写作表格主体段写作巩固作业巩固作业 例见例见
21、 p218p218 例题例题5 5 20 20分钟。分钟。 写作解析写作解析分析说明:分析说明: 如果如果没有不同的时间没有不同的时间,只有不同的对象,只有不同的对象,主体段主体段按描述对象分段按描述对象分段,如果描述对象多于,如果描述对象多于三个,三个,把相似的对象合为一段把相似的对象合为一段来写。来写。 通过分析与表发现通过分析与表发现: : 美国一枝独秀,中间美国一枝独秀,中间三个国家相似,第一个国家(孟加拉)最差,三个国家相似,第一个国家(孟加拉)最差,所以写三段。所以写三段。( ( 按教材写成按教材写成5 5段段或或4 4段段也行,也行, 清晰,清晰,但缺少分析与变化。但缺少分析与变
22、化。)参考答案:参考答案:the table the table illustratesillustrates four aspectsfour aspects of quality of of quality of life life in five countriesin five countries in 1982. in 1982.(注意改写手段:注意改写手段:横的四项,竖的五项,加上时间。横的四项,竖的五项,加上时间。)usa usa had the highest qualityhad the highest quality ( ( 最高值最高值 ) ) of life in of
23、 life in the five countries. it had the five countries. it had the highestthe highest gn per gn per head and daily calorie intakehead and daily calorie intake(热量摄取热量摄取 ), , the the longestlongest life expectancy and life expectancy and the lowestthe lowest infant infant mortality rate. mortality rat
24、e. in 1982in 1982, its gn per head was , its gn per head was 13160 us dollars, 13160 us dollars, ( ( 最高值最高值 ) ). . butbut its infant its infant mortality rate was mortality rate was onlyonly 12 per 1000 live births 12 per 1000 live births ( ( 最低值最低值 ) ). .egypt, indonesia and bolivia egypt, indonesi
25、a and bolivia were similarwere similar ( ( 相同相同值值 可以合写,妙招。可以合写,妙招。) ) in the four indicators in the four indicators ( ( 指标指标 ). ). as a wholeas a whole, egypt , egypt had the highesthad the highest ( ( 次分类中的最次分类中的最高值高值 ) ) quality of lifequality of life among the three countries. among the three cou
26、ntries. it had the highest number in it had the highest number in three indicatorsthree indicators: : gn per head, daily calorie supply per head and gn per head, daily calorie supply per head and life expectancy. life expectancy. in 1982in 1982, its gn per head was , its gn per head was 690 us dolla
27、rs, 690 us dollars, whereaswhereas ( ( 时刻记住对比时刻记住对比 ) ) those of those of indonesia and bolivia were 580 and 570 us indonesia and bolivia were 580 and 570 us dollars dollars respectivelyrespectively. . (下面转折写另一个明显特征下面转折写另一个明显特征) howeverhowever, indonesias infant mortality rate , indonesias infant mo
28、rtality rate was 87 per 1000, which was 87 per 1000, which was slightly lower was slightly lower ( ( 较低较低值值 ) ) than that ofthan that of egypt (97) and that of egypt (97) and that of bolivia(124).bolivia(124).bangladesh bangladesh had the lowest qualityhad the lowest quality of life of life in the f
29、ive countries. in the five countries. ( ( 总的趋势:最低值总的趋势:最低值 ) ) its gnp its gnp was 100 times smaller thanwas 100 times smaller than the the usas. usas. ( (最低值和最高值比较:最低值和最高值比较:除法除法- -多少倍多少倍 ) ) thethe figuresfigures in terms ofin terms of the daily calorie the daily calorie supply per head and life e
30、xpectancy at supply per head and life expectancy at birth in bangladesh birth in bangladesh were only the half ofwere only the half of those those ( ( 除法除法) ) in usa. in usa. ( (高低比较:约一半高低比较:约一半 ) ) and its infant mortality rate and its infant mortality rate was 11 times was 11 times greatergreater.
31、 . ( ( 高低比较:高低比较:除法除法- -多少倍多少倍 ) ) 回顾使用过的句型回顾使用过的句型开头段开头段the table the table illustratesillustrates four aspectsfour aspects of quality of life of quality of life in five countriesin five countries in 1982. in 1982.两个对象之间的比较两个对象之间的比较howeverhowever, indonesias infant mortality rate was 87 per , indon
32、esias infant mortality rate was 87 per 1000, which 1000, which was slightly lowerwas slightly lower than than thatthat of of egypt ( 97 ) egypt ( 97 ) and and thatthat o of bolivia( 124 ). ( f bolivia( 124 ). ( 较低值较低值 ) ) 用括号描述具体数据用括号描述具体数据,是加分点。,是加分点。三个以上对象的比较三个以上对象的比较usa usa had the highest qualit
33、yhad the highest quality ( ( 最高值最高值 ) of life) of life in in the five the five countries.countries.it had it had the highestthe highest gn per head and daily calorie intake, gn per head and daily calorie intake, the longestthe longest life expectancy and life expectancy and the lowestthe lowest infa
34、nt mortality infant mortality rate.rate.as a wholeas a whole, egypt , egypt had the highesthad the highest ( ( 次分类中最高值次分类中最高值 ) ) quality of life quality of life among among the three countries.the three countries.it it had the highest numberhad the highest number in in three indicators: gn per thre
35、e indicators: gn per head, daily calorie supply per head and life expectancy .head, daily calorie supply per head and life expectancy .bangladesh bangladesh had the lowest qualityhad the lowest quality of life of life in in the five the five countries.countries.描述倍数描述倍数its gnp its gnp was 100 times
36、smaller thanwas 100 times smaller than the usas. the usas.the figuresthe figures in terms ofin terms of the daily calorie supply per the daily calorie supply per head and life expectancy at birth in bangladesh head and life expectancy at birth in bangladesh were only the half ofwere only the half of
37、 those in usa. those in usa.and its infant mortality rate and its infant mortality rate was 11 times greater.was 11 times greater. ( ( 高低比较:多少倍高低比较:多少倍 ) ) 表格题常要进行表格题常要进行量化对比量化对比, ,减除运算减除运算。 比较时,如数字较大且悬殊,比较时,如数字较大且悬殊,用除法用除法以倍数关以倍数关系说明差别(系说明差别(twice/triple/three-fold/four times) ; 数字较小且相差不大,数字较小且相差不大
38、,用减法用减法以差值说明差别。以差值说明差别。表格主体段表格主体段写作实践写作实践超模板写作超模板写作 例见例见 p222 p222 例题例题9 9 参考答案参考答案-2 -2只供只供nbnb参考。参考。 参考答案参考答案-1 -1:the table the table comparescompares the different agricultural water the different agricultural water consumption in brazil ( consumption in brazil ( 26,500 km26,500 km2 2 数值明了数值明了)
39、) with with thatthat in the d.r.c.( in the d.r.c.( 100 km100 km2 2 ). ). ( (首句概括首句概括) ) more specifically, in 2000, more specifically, in 2000, there wasthere was a huge a huge amount of water use (amount of water use (359 m359 m3 3最大值最大值) in brazil, with ) in brazil, with a population of a populati
40、on of 176 176 million and an irrigated land million and an irrigated land of of 26,50026,500 km km2 2 . unlike brazil, . unlike brazil, the figure for water the figure for water consumption per person in congo was only consumption per person in congo was only 8m8m3 3, , ( (最小值最小值) ) for it had an irrigated land for it had an irrigated land 265 times 265 times smallersmaller(除法)(除法) than that of brazil and a than that of brazil and a population of only population of only 5.2 million5.2 million (抄数字抄数字). . therefore, therefo
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