Howtowriteagoodcomposition课件（共25张PPT）

1、Tips on a good composition1. good and neat handwriting（书写）书写）2. few mistakes, especially in the first and last paragraphs and the first and last sentences in each paragraph3. beautiful sentences4. coherence and natural transition (一致性和自然的过渡一致性和自然的过渡)5. structure 假定你是王强假定你是王强,福清人。有一批英国的交流生要来福清人。有一批英国

2、的交流生要来福清参观学习。现在市政府正在招募与那些交流福清参观学习。现在市政府正在招募与那些交流生年龄相当的高中生志愿者，来给这些交流生当生年龄相当的高中生志愿者，来给这些交流生当导游。你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英语给导游。你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英语给市政府写一封申请信市政府写一封申请信.内容应包括内容应包括: 个人情况个人情况:年龄年龄,性别性别 个人条件个人条件:英语好英语好,爱好科学和文化爱好科学和文化,善于交往善于交往,乐于乐于助人助人,熟悉本地情况熟悉本地情况. 承诺承诺:提供最佳服务提供最佳服务 注意注意:1.词数词数120左右左右. 2.交流生：交流生：exchang

3、e studentsDear Sir / Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Fuqing. Im a student in Fuqing No.1 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, Im good at English. Second, I

4、like science and culture. Third, Im good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, Im familiar to Fuqing. It is important to the work. If you gave me the chance, Ill try my best to provide the best service to them. I wont disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could acce

5、pt my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter. Yours sincerely, Wang Qianga volunteercommunicatinghelpingwithgiveworkingfordisappointhearingfrom you.Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England. Im a boy and I

6、m 19. I was born in Fuqing. Im a student in Fuqing No.1 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, Im good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, Im good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, Im familiar to Fuqing. It is important

7、to the work. If you gave me the chance, Ill try my best to provide the best service to them. I wont disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter. Yours sincerely, Wang QiangDear Sir / Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel l

8、ike to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Fuqing. Im a student in Fuqing No.1 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, Im good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, Im good at communicate wit

9、h others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, Im familiar to Fuqing. It is important to the work. If you gave me the chance, Ill try my best to provide the best service to them. I wont disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your l

10、etter. Yours sincerely, Wang QiangDear Sir / Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Fuqing. Im a student in Fuqing No.1 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, Im goo

11、d at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, Im good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, Im familiar to Fuqing. It is important to the work. If you gave me the chance, Ill try my best to provide the best service to them. I wont disappointing you. I would appreci

12、ate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter. Yours sincerely, Wang QiangDear Sir / Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Fuqing. Im a student in Fuqing

13、No.1 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, Im good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, Im good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, Im familiar to Fuqing. It is important to the work. If you gave me the chance, Ill try my

14、best to provide the best service to them. I wont disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter. Yours sincerely, Wang Qiang the same subject “I” simple words simple transitions（过渡词）（过渡词） simple sentencesfour aspects & ways

15、of improving them: use different sentences (使用多样句型使用多样句型) change the subject (改变主语改变主语)use good transitions (使用好的过渡连接使用好的过渡连接)use advanced phrases (使用高级词汇使用高级词汇). change the subject (改变主语改变主语)：1. Ill provide the best service for them._ is my goal. (-ing形式作主语形式作主语) It is my goal _. ( (用用it形式主语形式主语)2.

16、 I like helping others._. (-ing形式作主语形式作主语)_. (用用it形式主语形式主语)Providing the best service for them to provide the best service for them.Helping others is my favorite/ what I like .It is my favorite to help others.use advanced phrases (选取高级词汇选取高级词汇)of (great) importancebe ready to / be willing to Word Ph

17、rase 1.I like helping others.2. I like science and culture.3. This is important to the work.be fond of/ be interested in / have great interest in.use advanced phrases (选取高级词汇选取高级词汇)Simple phrase Advanced phrase 1.Im good at English.2. Ill try my best to provide the best service.have a good knowledge

18、 of/ have a good command ofspare no effort /make every effort/ make efforts III. use good transitions (使用过渡连接使用过渡连接)1. Phrases: (选取高级连接词选取高级连接词)表层次顺序，罗列增加：表层次顺序，罗列增加： first,second, third,fourth,lastto begin/start with, furthermore, moreover, in addition, last but not leastfirst and foremost, besides

19、, whats more, in addition to that,last but not leastIII. use good transitions (使用过渡连接使用过渡连接)2. Sentences:（加上常见句型开头）（加上常见句型开头）Im familiar with Fuqing. There is no _ that Im familiar with Fuqing. Another reason _ _ the fact that Im familiar with Fuqing. lies indoubt. use different sentences (使用多样句型）使用

20、多样句型）1. Im familiar with Fuqing. Its important to the work. Im familiar with Fuqing,_ _ (定语从句定语从句) 2. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Fuqing. Im a student in Fuqing No.1 Middle School. _.(过去过去分词作状语和分词作状语和定语从句定语从句) which is of great importance to the work.Born in Fuqing,Im a 19-year-old boy,who is

21、studying in Fuqing No.1 Middle School. use different sentences (使用多样句型）使用多样句型）3. I wont disappoint you. （倒装）（倒装）4. If you give me the chance, Ill provide the best service for them. If _ the chance, Ill provide the best service for them. ( 使用省略）使用省略）On no account (决不决不) _.will I disappoint yougiven.

22、Ill provide the best service for them. It is _ that _. (使用强调句）使用强调句）5. I like science and culture very much.I _ like science and culture very much. (强调动词）强调动词） do. Use different sentences (使用多样句型）使用多样句型）the best serviceIll provide for themDear Sir or Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like working

23、 as a volunteer to help the exchange students. Born in Fuqing, Im a 19-year-old boy, who is studying in Fuqing No.1 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. To begin with, I have a good knowledge of English. Besides, science and culture are what I like very much. Furthermore,

24、 Im good at communicating with others. In addition, its my favorite to help others. Last but not least, there is no doubt that Im familiar with Fuqing, which is of great importance to the work. If given the chance, Ill spare no effort to provide the best service for them. On no account will I disapp

25、oint you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Wang QiangDear Sir or Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like working as a volunteer to help the exchange students. Born in Fuqing, Im a 19-year-old boy, who is studying i

26、n Fuqing No.1 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. To begin with, I have a good knowledge of English. Besides, science and culture are what I like very much. Furthermore, Im good at communicating with others. In addition, its my favorite to help others. Last but not least

27、, there is no doubt that Im familiar with Fuqing, which is of great importance to the work. If given the chance, Ill spare no effort to provide the best service for them. On no account will I disappoint you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hearing fr

28、om you. Yours sincerely, Wang Qiangself-introduction (the body)the purpose of the letter (the beginning)hoping to be accepted (the ending)Practice 假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营，欢迎各国）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括：内容主要包括： 1.自我介绍（包括英语能

29、力）自我介绍（包括英语能力） 2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家） 3.希望获准希望获准 注意：注意： 1.词数词数120左右左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 structureParagraph 1: Paragraph 2: Paragraph 3:the purpose of the e-mail (the beginning)self-introduction and the aims of taking part in the summer camp (the body)hoping to be accepted (the ending)Try to use: -ing form 作主语或状语作主语或状语/ attributive clause (定语从句）定语从句）/ emphasis (强调）强调）/