概要写作点拨PPT学习教案

1、会计学1 概要写作点拨概要写作点拨 Whilereading Whilewriting 第1页/共14页 Whilereading 1.Isthepassagea, ora? 2.Isthereanytopicsentenceorkeywords?Ifso, underlinethem. 3.Gothroughthesupportingdetailsorevidenceto checkwhetherthetopicsentenceorkeywordsyoufind is. outline (以议论文为例以议论文为例) topic sentence supporting details (con

2、clusion) 第2页/共14页 Whilewriting 1.Structure 1)Topicsentence* 2)Mainsupportingpoints/evidence 3)About60words 2.Language 1)Touseyourownwords* 2)Tobeconcise(leaveoutthedetails;reducethe examples;simplifythedescriptions;eliminateall repetitions.) 3)Topresenttheinformationfairly,donotgiveyour owncomments

3、4)Tense 第3页/共14页 Child raising Find out topic sentences or words which can best serve the main idea. Child raising is probably one of the most difficult jobs for people to do all over the world. Since babies do not come with child raising manuals(指南), couples, especially future mothers, have to lear

4、n from their mothers, aunts, mothers- in-law, or any other relative who is close to them. difficult Para 1： Topic： Characteristic s： Reasonsu 找对主旨句找对主旨句 Step 1 reading 第4页/共14页 As children grow up, parents have to find reasonable ways in order to help their children, advise them, punish them, lead t

5、hem to achievements, and teach them. Sometimes children under ten may behave inappropriately. For example, they learn to say offensive words and they show no respect for their relatives. I think parents in these cases should punish their children in a reasonable way. Children must know those kinds o

6、f attitudes are not good at all. . A detailed example u 忽略具体事例，或者一笔带过忽略具体事例，或者一笔带过 第5页/共14页 There are many aspects which influence parents in this hard job, for example, the culture in which they live, the economic situation in their society, and the religious environment. Para 4: One group consists

7、 of people who dont have economicalresources or education. Para 5: Other groups of people are hard workers or well- educated. u 例子若篇幅较长，应该简要概括例子若篇幅较长，应该简要概括Evidence 第6页/共14页 Step 2 writing How to express the key points by using your own words properly? Para 1 Childraisingisprobablyoneofthemost diffi

8、cultjobsforpeopletodoallovertheworld. Tip 1：分析句子结构，抓住重点信息：分析句子结构，抓住重点信息 Child raising is a difficult job. 第7页/共14页 Bringing up a child Child raising is a difficult job. Tip 2：转换同义词或者词性：转换同义词或者词性 is hard/tough work. Tip 3：转换句型：转换句型 It is rather tough to raise a child for people. Step 2 writing How to

9、 express the key points by using your own words properly? 第8页/共14页 Para 2 Aschildrengrowup,parentshavetofindreasonable waysinordertohelptheirchildren,advisethem, punishthem,leadthemtoachievements,andteach them. Tip 4 ：用一个可以涵盖的词汇概括几个列举：用一个可以涵盖的词汇概括几个列举 的并列词汇的并列词汇 educate their children Parents should

10、 _ to educate their children. adopt reasonable methods Step 2 writing How to express the key points by using your own words properly? 第9页/共14页 Para 3 Therearemanyaspectswhichinfluenceparentsin thishardjob. Tip 5：代词转换成具体信息：代词转换成具体信息 There are many factors that influence the parents in _. bringing up

11、their children two examples are given in order to make it clear Step 2 writing How to express the key points by using your own words properly? 第10页/共14页 Para 4: Onegroupconsistsofpeoplewhodonthave economicalresourcesoreducation. Para 5: Othergroupsofpeoplearehardworkersor well-educated. Tip 6：具体事例需要

12、概括其特征或代表性：具体事例需要概括其特征或代表性 In order to make it clear, two examples are given, which show that _ _ _ children raised in families with different economical and educational background may have different futures. Step 2 writing How to express the key points by using your own words properly? 第11页/共14页 outline Para.1：1st sentence reason Para.2: 1st sentence an example Para.3: 1st sentence Para.4 Para.5 evidence 第12页/共14页 Itisrathertoughtoraisechildrenfor couples,especiallyfuturemothers.Parents shouldadoptreasonablemethodstoeducate theirchildren.Therearemanyfactorsthat influence the parents in b