2020届高考英语书面表达“读后续写”高三模拟练习(一)写作指导和解读(含范文)

1、2020 届高考英语书面表达“读后续写”高三模拟练习（一）写作指导与解读一、续写原题mike licked the last of the mint chocolate chip ice cream. itwas almost time to leave. he jumped into the car withhis parentsbig swim meet.and headed off to the olympic-sized poolfor thewhen hisracecame up, mike was confident. he was strong andswift. mike cl

2、imbed out the pool, smiling. he had justplace, making him the fastest boy in his age group.wonfirstcongratulations, son, his father said. his mom gave him a hug, even though he was soaking wet.a week later, it was time for another swim meet. like before,mike decided to enjoy his favorite ice cream f

3、lavor. mike rememberedthat the last time he had won a race, he also ate mint chocolate chip ice cream first. maybe hed win again.hes takenfirst placeagain in his race. mike was feelingpretty good. as it turned out, mike decided to have some mintchocolate chip ice cream before every one of the next f

4、ew swim meets.he began to think of it as hislucky charm. after several months ofplacing in the top positions of every race he swam, mike was feelingunbeatable. and he wouldnt admit it, but all that ice cream was adding a few pounds to his athletic swimmers build.it didnt take long after that for mik

5、e to start coming in secondplace - and then third - and then last place in his races. the luckymint chocolate chip ice cream had lost itsmagic .on the day of his next swim meet, his mother sat down at thetable with him. mike, we all love ice cream, but itsnot healthyfor your body to eat so much of i

6、t. maybe its timeto quit the sweet treats for a while, especially before you go swimming.”mike unwillingly agreed. he went to the swim meet, anddidntperformwell. his father offered to go running with him afew days a week to help him feel better and strengthen his muscles.the extra weight soon disapp

7、eared, and mike found himself breathing easier at swim practices.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2. 应使 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。paragraph 1:it was the last meet of the season, and mike wasntsure what to expect.paragraph 2:finally came the end of the race.二、下水续写

8、“7+7”模式paragraph 1: it was the last meet of the season, and mike wasnt sure what to expect.1. he only felt a queer sense of loss that he had never experienced in his life.2. worse still, all the people there seemed to be whispering about him, which made his heart thumping even more wildly.3. at that

9、 moment, his echoed in his ears.parents words of encouragement4. now came the real test, he thought.5. so mike swallowed hard, took a deep breath and then waited calmly for the start signal.6. when thefrom the crowds.racestarted, deafening cheers began to erupt7. like a fish in thepool , mike swam a

10、s quickly as he coulduntil he was far ahead of all the other swimmers.paragraph 2 : finally came the end of the race.1. all the people got up, applauded, and cheered loudly.2. it was plain that mike laughed last-he won placein the last meet.thefirst3. as he climbed out the pool, roars of loud applau

11、se broke out again.4. as usual, his mom gave him a huge hug, even though he was wet through.5. and his father gave him some ice creamas a reward andsaid excitedly, congratulations, son! what a miracle youve performed !6. with lips shaking and tears streaming down his cheeks, he replied, thank you.7.

12、 but in his heart, he knew that it was notluckycharmbuthealthy exercise that mademagichappen.paragraph 1:it was the last meet of the season, and mikewasnt sure what to expect. he only felt a queer sense of lossthat he had never experienced in his life. worse still, all thepeople there seemed to be w

13、hispering about him, which made his heart thumping even more wildly. at that moment, hisparents words of encouragement echoed in his ears. now camethe real test, he thought. so mike swallowed hard, took a deep breath and then waited calmly for the start signal. whenthe race started, deafening cheers

14、 began to erupt from thecrowds. like a fish in the pool, mike swam as quickly as he could until he was far ahead of all the other swimmers.paragraph 2: finally came the end of the race. all thepeople got up, applauded, and cheered loudly. it was plain thatmike laughed lasthe won the first place in the last meet.as he climbed out the pool, roars of loud applause broke out again.as usual, his mom gave him a huge hug, even though he was wet through.and his father gave him some ice cream as a reward and said excitedl