(完整版)2018版浙江高考写作组合练训练4

1、写作组合练训练4(对应学生用书第205页)I 应用文写作(2017浙江杭州教学质检)【导学号：38144080】假定你是李华，作为交换生(an exchange student)正在英国 Windmill College 学习。今天早晨你骑车上学时不小心刮擦到了一辆停在路边的汽车。由于急着上学，你无法在原地等候车主。请留一张便条，内容包括：1 表明身份；2 简述事情经过；3 道歉并表示愿意赔偿；4.联系方式(Tel: 5893671 E-mail: )。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作指导】本文是一篇应用型作文，属于半开

2、放性写作。本文有一定的提纲和文字说明， 学生在下笔之前首先要仔细审题，明确写作要求；其次，要明确文章所要使用的 时态和人称。此外，学生需要谨记：不要机械地逐条逐句翻译，句与句之间以及 段与段之间要注意恰当地衔接和过渡，以使行文流畅、不突兀。当然，复合句的 恰当运用会提升文章的档次。【参考范文】NotesDear Sir/Madam,rm Li Hua , an exchange student from China.studying at Windmill College.lm so sorry that my bike scratched/scrapedyour car when I was

3、 riding to school this morni ng.I un dersta nd it will certa inly put you in a very bad mood .I sin cerely apologize for what I did and promise I will cover all the releva nt costs.As school will start soon , I cant wait on the sce ne for you.Please con tact me at 5893671 or lihuawi ndmillco .org.Ma

4、ny apologies aga in for all the inconvenienceve caused you!Best regards Li Huan .读后续写（2017浙江杭州五校联考）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“ Whats wrong with you，dear?” said Granny Bell to a little boy，who sat n eara wall at the back of the house.He had a book in his haqd and tears were in his eyes.said the b

5、oy, whose name“We have all got a poem callecLittle Jim to learn,”was Tom Blair，“and the one who says the best is to get a prize from the masteBut I dont thi nk I can lear n it.”“Why not ?” said Granny Bell.“The boys say that I cant and that I need not try ” said Tom in a sad tone.“ Dont mind what th

6、e boys say.Let them see that you can learn it，” said his friend.“But I dont think I can，” said Tom, “it is so long, and some of the words are so hard .I know I n eed not try for the prize.But I would like to learn the poem as well as I can； for the boys laugh at me and call me Slow Tom.”“Well，dear，”

7、 said Granny Bell，in a kind voice，“if you are slow，and cant help it，try to be slow and sure，as they say.Look at the snai蜗牛）on the wall ； how slow it is ! And yet，if you watch it，you will see it will get to the top in time.So just try to learn a few lines each day and you may gain the prize in the en

8、d.And when you feel like losing heart，think of the snail on the wall.”After Granny Bell had said this , she went on her way.And Tom thought that, though he could not keep up with the boys, he might run a race with the snail.So he determined to try to learn his task by the time the snail got to the t

9、op of the wall.注意：1 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 :At last, the day cameo n which the master was to give the prize, and after he called upon five or six boysto repeatthe poem, it cameto Toms tur n.Paragraph 2 :“ Welldone! Tom! Welld

10、one! Tell mehow you madeit! ” said the masterwith greatjoy.【写作指导】本篇读后续写主要讲述 Tom突破自我，向墙上的蜗牛学习，最终完美地背 诵诗歌并获奖的故事。学生可根据文本的情节，进行合理的富有逻辑性的续写。 所以学生要仔细阅读文本，理清行文逻辑，同时结合给出的两段的首句和标下划 线的10个关键词，进行自我创作，可围绕“同学反应 一一自我表现一一赢得掌 声一一获得认可一一最终获奖”的思路展开。【参考范文】At last, the day cameo n which the master was to give the prize,

11、and after he called upon five or six boys to repeat the poem, it came to Toms turn .Tom got up slowly but in a con fide nt way.He looked so sile nt and still.However, there was a laugh from the boys in the classroom because most of the boys thought that he would fail in this recitation.But he did no

12、t miss a word.He recited the poem so fluently that all his classmates were ast oni shed at last.A nd his heart was full of joy whe n the teacher also stood up, applauding for his great performanee.“ Well done! Tom! Welldone! Tell mehow you madeit! ” said themasterwith great joy. “ Please sir, it was

13、 the snail on the wall that taught me how to do it ” said Tom, “ I saw it crawl up the wall bit by bit .It did not stop , nor turn back, but went on and on.And I thought I would do the same with my task.So I just learned it bit by bit and did not give up.” “ Now, boys, let us give a good cheer for T

14、om Blair and the snail on the wall, ” said the master.And the classroom rang with a loud long cheer.For all were glad that “ Slow Tom” had got the prize at last.川.概要写作【导学号：38144081】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Sharks are amaz ing fish that have bee n around since long before the dino saurs existed.They

15、 live in waters all over the world, in every ocean, and even in some rivers and lakes.Un like bony fish, sharks have no bon es; their skelet on骨架)is made of cartilage(软骨), which is not n early as hard as bone.There are many different species of sharks that range in size from the size of a persons ha

16、nd to bigger than a bus.Fully- grown sharks range in size from 7 inches(18cm) Iong(the Spined Pygmy shark) , up to 50 feet(15m) Iong(the Whale shark). Most sharks are middle in size and are about the same size as people57 feet(1.5 2.1 m)lon g.Half of the 368 shark species are un der 39 in ches(1 m)

17、long.Sharks have a variety of body shapes.Most sharks have streamli ned, torpedoshaped bodies that fly easily through the water.Some sharks(the an gel sharks) have flat bodies that allow them to hide in the sand of the ocean bed.Some sharks have a long body shape(cookie cutter sharks and wobbego ngs

18、) Sawsharks have long noses and hammerheadshave extraord in arily wide heads.The gobli n shark has a large ,pointed protuberanee凸起)on its head; its purpose is unknown.There are about 368 different species of sharks, which are divided into 30 families.These differe nt families of sharks are very diff

19、ere nt in the way they look , live , and eat.They have different shapes, sizes, colors, fins, teeth, habitats, diets, personalities, methods of reproduction and other characters.Some types of sharks are very rare(like the great white sharks and the megamouth sharks) and some are quite com mon( like the dogfish sharks an