资料雅思小作文流程图讲解满文例文汇编

1、雅思小作文流程图讲解,满文例,文,高分范文及深度点评,The diagram shows the stages in the process,of making chocolate,所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时,流程图必备三个词,process,整个过程,stage,阶段,step,步骤,流程图特点之一,介绍过程要使用一般现在,时,Chocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in,parts of South America, Africa and Indonesia. The tree,produces large red

2、pods which contain white cocoa,beans,开头不能一上来就直接介绍,cacao tree,而是通过主题,词,chocolate,引出，否则显得太唐突,流程图特点之二,大量使用定语从句，将有关联的两句,话连接,流程图特点之三,大量使用被动语态,Firstly,when the pods are ripe, they are,harvested, the beans are removed and,they are fermented for several days in,large wooden boxes. During the,fermenting proc

3、ess, the beans turn,brown,流程图特点之四,使用一些表示顺序,的连接词,三个句子的并列：“句子,A,句子,B and,句子,C,流程图特点之五,要适当地添加个别,图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的,一些内容，否则可能达不到字数要求。但,是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的,主观观点，否则会扣分,Next, the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. They,are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry,After this, the bean

4、s are taken to a chocolate factory where,they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between,250 and 350 degree Celsius,After being roasted, the beans are,crushed and the outer shell is removed,This part is not needed for making,chocolate. Finally, the inner part of the,bean is pressed and liquid

5、 chocolate is,produced,流程图特点之六,一般不需要写总结,句型积累,开始阶段,First of all/ To begin with/ At the first,initial,stage/ During the beginning phase/ +S1,S2,The process starts from +N,N is the first step in,次阶段,before, until, after, once,next, second, following,The next stage is,The next step in the process is,表示一

6、段时间,It takes ten days for each egg to become,This stage lasts for up to six weeks until,After a period of,Writing task 2,You should spend about 20 minutes on this,task,The diagram below shows the process by,which bricks are manufactured for the,building industry,Summarise the information by selectin

7、g,and reporting the main features, and make,comparisons where relevant,Brick manufacturing,Clay: type of sticky earth that is used for making bricks, pots, etc,满分范文,The process by which bricks are manufactured for the,building industry can be outlined in seven consecutive,steps. First the raw materi

8、al, clay, which was just below,the surface of soil in certain clay-rich areas has to be,dug up by a digger,Then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in,order to break up the big chunks of clay into much,smaller areas, which fall through the metal grid onto a,roller, whose motion further segr

9、egates the bits of clay,Sand and water are added to make a homogenous,mixture, which is then either formed in moulds or cut into,brick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter,Those fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at,least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours, several dozens if,not hundreds o

10、f bricks at a time. The dried bricks are,then transferred to a so-called kiln, another type of high,temperature oven. First they are kept at a moderate,temperature of 200,1300,This process is followed,by cooling down the finished bricks for 48 to 72 hours in,a cooling chamber,Once the bricks have co

11、oled down and have become,hard, they get packaged and delivered to their final,destination, be it a building site or storage,215 words,考官评语,Band 9,This response fully satisfies the requirements of the task,All key features of each stage of the process are,appropriately and accurately presented. An e

12、xcellent,overview is given at the beginning of the response and,this skilfully incorporates part of the rubric, changing the,grammatical function, to give a brief summary of the,whole process. The message is very easy to read, with,seamless cohesion that attracts no attention,Paragraphing, linking a

13、nd referencing are all skilfully,managed. The language used is very fluent and,sophisticated. A wide range of vocabulary and structures,are used with full flexibility and accuracy. Only rare minor,slips can be found and these do not detract from the,high rating,雅思流程图的重点词汇解析,表述时间,in 10 days,during th

14、e period of 10 days,The process lasts for up to 10 days,after 10 days,10 days passed until something happened,表示然后,then,next,in the next state,following that,after that,the next step in the stage is,表示过程,process,procedure,formation,Development,表示步骤,step,stage,phase,时间阶段,after a period of months/days/minutes,during,顺序连词,first, first of all, in the first stage, initially, to,begin with,second, then, next, also,after that, at the same time, in the meantime,meanwhil