英语写作特别训练(ppt 37页).ppt

1、英语写作训练作者:青水自流,篇章结构,文章 段落 句子 词组 单词 词素,篇章结构法,语法,构词法,能力,基础,一、先收后放，练习写句子,二、先收后放，练习用篇章过渡词,三、先收后放，练习写情景作文,训练思路与过程,五种基本句型 1. 主语 + 系动词 + 表语 2. 主语 + 不及物动词 （+ 状语） 3. 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 4. 主语 + 及物动词 + 间接宾语 + 直接宾语 5. 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 + 宾语补足语,一、先收后放，练习写句子,例句：He encouraged me to try again,练习： she/advise/him/listening/e

2、very day she/allow/me/use/dictionary he/teach/pupils/speak/English,句型：主语 + 谓语 + 宾语 + 宾语补足语,收,例句：She thinks it right for her to do so,练习： consider/right find/difficult think/a good idea,放,句型：主语 + 谓语 + it + 宾补 + (for sb) to do,Make sentences,see/watch/hear/notice ask/tell/warn/advise/force/ encourage/

3、allow/permit/forbid consider/think/find,再放,Our school is becoming larger and larger,city/become/beautiful weather/get/cold tree/grow/strong,主语 + 系动词 + 表语,seem/appear/look feel/smell/taste/sound,get/become/grow turn/fall/come/go,Make sentences,They accepted my proposal,appreciate/help receive/letter/

4、friend/mine make/friend/British girl,主语 + 及物动词 (vt.) + 宾语,He said that he would help me,think/Beijing/become/modern/ beautiful hope/you/come/visit/Beijing/2008 suggest/we/read/every day,Hard work leads to success,look forward to/hear devote to/teach insist on/help,主语 + 不及物动词（vi.）+ 介词 + 宾语,My friend

5、lent me this book last week,owe/money/last year buy/bicycle/next Christmas tell/news/the day before yesterday,主语 +及物动词 + 间接宾语 + 直接宾语 (sb) (sth,He didnt get up until ten on Saturday morning,she/finish/midnight they/come back/late/afternoon the girl/reply/called/teacher,主语 + 不及物动词 + 状语,He has been liv

6、ing in Beijing since then,he/stay/bed/two weeks/accident great changes/take place/1990 see each other/graduate/college,We came to a large room on the second floor,talk with/old/lady/blue eyes meet/young girl/Beijing University look for/tall man/in uniform,定 语,They accepted the proposal made by the c

7、hairman,agree/holiday plan/suggest/Moon believe in/person/wear/glasses house/built/next month/use as/library,The policeman who arrested the thief is a friend of mine,young man/ride/horse/relative/mine women/cook/dinner/friend/his author/write/book/neighbor/yours,She hasnt anything to do, which makes

8、 her angry,anything/look forward to/sad no one/make friends with/lonely no way/solve/problem/unhappy,He has discovered the ancient city everyone talked about,drop/wireless/transistor/my father/listen to write/clear composition/his teacher/ask for lose/blue box/her father/bought,The manager had alrea

9、dy left when I telephoned,bus/go/arrive accident/occur/appear dance/start/enter,状 语,We must go now because it is quite late,private car/increase/money not like/smoke/bad/health have to/set off/a long way,It wasnt long before it began to rain,he/realize/mistake you/able/speak/English we/get/touch/eac

10、h other,He will visit the place where his mother lives when he returns home,call at/company/friend/work /before/go/abroad visit/house/cousin/live /after/finish/the homework not find/cave/her brother/stay /until/hire/a new guide,This shows that I quite enjoy, but I have beensince I prefer torather th

11、an I will buy you, if you like. I could not understand what The accident causedbefore The assistant told me to when,Make sentences,例句：Thats a good way of giving information, but its not a good way of persuading people. For one thing, its boring, and people arent going to read an ad that looks boring

12、. For another (thing), one computer looks very much like another,二、先收后放，练习用篇章过渡词,过渡词：For one thing, For another(thing),练习：mother/not allow/me/play/computer games /bad for/eyes/spend/little time/study we/invite/Jenny/our party/be fond of /dancing /would like/come/party,收,放,过渡词：For one thing, For anot

13、her(thing),练习: cant go/no time/no money coat/color/price,例句：Thats a good way of giving information, but its not a good way of persuading people. For one thing, its boring, and people arent going to read an ad that looks boring. For another (thing), one computer looks very much like another,再放,过渡词：Fo

14、r one thing, For another(thing),练习：学校里不少学生抽烟，有人说抽烟是件乐事。 请就此写一篇100词的文章，谈谈你的看法,Many middle school students are learning to smoke and its a pleasure to do it. I dont agree with them. For one thing, smoking is harmful and bad for health. In China, millions of smokers die of illnesses caused by smoking e

15、very year. There is a drug called nicotine in tobacco, which can cause lung cancer. For another (thing), smoking is a waste of money. Smokers spend a lot of money on tobacco and even more money is spent on the treatment of illnesses of smokers. Also, smoking is dangerous. It may cause fire. Most of

16、the fires are caused by careless smokers. Therefore, young children mustnt smoke and all the smokers should be encouraged to give up smoking,五个步骤,1、审题,体材、人称、时态、中心话题,2、抓要点：用一两个单词或短语写出每个要点,3、联词成句：将上述要点的词或词语扩展成句,4、联句成文,开头（背景/主题句,中间（篇章过渡词,结尾（回应主题/总结/展望/感想,5、检查修改，规范抄写,三、先收后放，练习写情景作文,根据下列图画中 Tom 骑自行车的经历，用

17、英语写一篇短文。 短文要写得连贯、完整。 字数100左右,收,审 题,1、体裁：记叙文体 （抓住四个要点：时间、 地点、人物、事件的前后经过,2、主体时态：一般过去时,3、人称：第三人称 Tom,4、中心话题： Tom 骑自行车经历的 一起交通事故,词,ride a bike,knockoff hit his back fall off,句,Tom was riding a bike along the street,The car knocked him off his bike. The car hit his bike. He fell off it,文,2) The other day

18、, Tom was riding along the street. Suddenly, a car ran fast to him and hit his bike. Then he fell off it,抓要点,1) The other day, Tom was riding along the street when a car ran fast towards him and knocked him off his bike,参 考 答 案,The other day, Tom was riding along the street. Suddenly, a car was running towards him fast. He was so frightened that he quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit his bike and he fell off it. When the driver realized that he had caused an accident, he got such a fright that he took