公开课如何写建议信课堂

1、writing,Dear Mr. Wang,Knowing that our library is going to,buy books, Id like to give some advice,What we need most are popular,science books. They help us understand,science subjects better and arouse our,curiosity about scientific discoveries,In addition to reading for knowledge,we read for fun an

2、d inspiration. That is,why I recommend another category of,books: literary books. They not only,offer us joy and excitement, but also,encourage us to think critically,Ill be glad if you can consider my,recommendation,Yours sincerely,Li Yue,建议信,Ending,express your hope,Beginning,state your,purpose,Bo

3、dy,give advice, reasons,1. Im glad to receive your letter asking for my,advice on,2. I am writing to express my views concerning,3. Knowing that, Id like to give some suggestions,A. state your,purpose,sentence patterns,B. give your advice,1. Its helpful/ important,to,2. It would be a good,idea to,3.

4、 I would like to suggest,that,C. express your,hope,1. I would appreciate it if,you could take my advice,into consideration,2. I hope you will find these,suggestions helpful,3. Im sure if you take my,advice, you will,表达愿望,5,我相信如果你接受我的建议，你会变,得更加苗条和保持健康,The use of sentence patterns,表明意图,1,你给,Jane,回信就如何

5、减肥提建议,提出建议,2,健康饮食,3,多锻炼,4,喝足够多的水,Knowing that you have trouble in losing,weight, Id like to give some suggestions,It is important to have a healthy diet,It is helpful to do more exercise,It would be a good idea to drink,enough water,I am sure if you take my advice, you,will become slimmer and stay h

6、ealthy,假设你叫李华，你的好朋友,Jane,最近发现自己在,发胖，很苦恼。她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。请,你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数,100,左右,1,健康饮食,2,多锻炼,3,喝足够多的水,It is helpful to do more exercise,It would be a good idea to drink enough water,It is important to have a healthy diet,Dear Jane,Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight,Id like to give som

7、e suggestions,First,it is important to have a healthy diet,In addition,it,would be a good idea to drink,enough water,Besides,it is helpful to do more exercise,I am sure if you take my advice, you will,become slimmer and stay healthy,In order to lose weight, you can eat more,vegetables and fruits,The

8、 more exercise you take, the more fat you,will burn off, and you will be thinner,Because water can support our,body and activities, and help us lose weight,Dear,Jane,Knowing that you have trouble in losing,weight, Id like to give some suggestions,First,it is important to have a healthy diet,In,order

9、 to lose weight, you can eat more,vegetables and fruits,Besides,it also helps if you,take more exercise,The more exercise you take,the more fat you will burn off, and you will be,thinner,In,addition,it should be a good idea to,drink enough water,because water can support,our body and activities, and

10、 help us lose weight,Im sure if you take my advice, you will,become slimmer and stay healthy. Looking,forward to your early reply,Yours,Li Hua,假定你是李华，你的英国朋友,Peter,来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你,根据下列要点写回信,1,参加中文学习班,2,看中文书刊、电视,3,学唱中文歌曲,4,交中国朋友,引出话题，表明写作意图,1,参加中文学习班,2,看中文书刊、电视,3,学唱中文歌曲,4,交中国朋友,提出建议,总结，表达愿望,连,接,词,多个

11、建议,多个理由,9,评分标准,1,是否覆盖所有内容要点,2,是否恰当使用语法结构,3,是否运用多样句式和丰富的词汇,4,是否使用连接词,5,全文结构是否完整合理,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice,on how to learn Chinese well,Here,are,a,few,suggestions,First,it,is,important,to,take,a,Chinese,course,as,youll,be,able,to,learn,from,the,teachers,and,pract

12、ice,with,your,fellow,students,Then,it,also,helps,to,watch,TV,and,read,books,newspapers,and,magazines,in,Chinese,whenever,possible,Besides,it,should,be,a,good,idea,to,learn,and,sing,Chinese,songs,because,by,doing,so,youll,learn,and,remember,Chinese,words,more,easily,In,addition,You,can,also,make,more,Chinese,friends,They,will,tell,you,a,lot,about,China,and,help,you,learn,Chinese,I,hope,you,will,find,these,suggestions,helpful,Try,writing,to,me,in,Chinese,next,time,Best,wishes,11,1. memorize the sentence patterns,2. polish your writing,常见连接词,罗列观点,Firstly,First of all,Above all,T