级作文的注意事项

1、四级作文句型,作文不理想的几个原因,英语底子薄弱 词汇量限制 缺乏思想，深度不够 缺乏应试技巧,作文评分标准,阅卷标准分为五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分，每一等都可上下浮动一分，各等的具体标准如下： 2分-条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重 错误。5分-基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分-基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。11分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误。 除了以上五个主要标准之外，评分时还考虑

2、以下三个因素：l白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给零分。2. 字数不足者酌情扣分(81-89个词扣1分，7l-80个词扣2分，61-70个词扣3分，51一60个词扣4分，不足50个词最多只给5分)。所计字数不包括卷面上已给主题句。3只写一段者0-4分，只写两段者0-9分,句子的写作,词汇问题：尽量规避拿不准拼写容易出错词汇 表达严重汉化 1） Some one consider that fresh water will not touch its end.(96年1月，2分) 2） One mans life lack of money, he will imp

3、ossible to live on. （95年1月，5分） 3） As is know, that there are much fake commodities in todays society.(97年12月，6分) man can live happiness， Man is iron, and food is steel., Women are half side sky,几种常见的句子结构,一、there be 结构 二、比较结构 三、表达原因的结构 四、否定结构 五、含有it 的结构,一、There be结构,考生病句：1. There are many people like

4、 to go to the movies.2. There are different kinds of vegetables can be bought on the market by people. 正确表达：1. There are many people who like to go to the movies.2. There are different kinds of vegetables that people can buy on the market,There be 结构,There is not a moment to be lost.刻不容缓，时不我待 There

5、are many people rushing into the cities every year. There are many things we can do to prevent traffic accidents. There is no use holding back the wheel of history,二、 比较结构,考生病句：1. Comparing with the bike, the car runs much faster.2. The climate in Walton is colder than other cities. 正确表达：1. Compared

6、 with the bike, the car runs much faster.2. The climate in Walton is colder than that of other cities,1 同级比较 1） In 1998 we produced as many cars as we did in the previous five years.2） We have accomplished as much in the past three years as would have taken ten yearsin the past. 2 比较级 1） Children no

7、w enjoy better medical treatment than before.2） We can live longer without food than we can (live ) without water. 3 最高级 1） This is the most interesting book Ive ever read.2） Of all his novels I like this one best,比较结构（1,比较结构（2,4 the morethe more结构1) The harder you work, the greater progress you wil

8、l make.2) The more a man knows, the more he discovers his ignorance. 5 选择比较 1) I prefer staying at home to going out.2) They prefer to work rather than (to) sit idly.3) He prefers to work alone. 6 对比1) Motion is absolute while stagnation is relative.2) He is tired out, whereas she is full of vigour,

9、三、表达原因的结构,考生病句： 1. The real reason to our failure is not far to seek.2. The reason for this is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard. 正确表达：1. The real reason for our failure is not far to seek. 2. The reason for this is that some people want to earn plenty of money wi

10、thout working hard,表达原因的结构（1,1. Now that we have seen these great achievements with our own eyes, we feel moreproud than ever of our country. 2. Professor Liu is strict with us because he wants us to make rapid progress. 3. Since we live near the sea, we enjoy a healthy climate. 4. Pollution is stil

11、l a serious problem, not that we dont have the ability to solve it, but that some people have not realized the consequences of the problem,表达原因的结构（2,1. The reason for this change is quite obvious. 2. Diligence is the key factor of success. 3. Idleness is the root of all evils. 4. He was ashamed to h

12、ave made the mistake.(=He was ashamed that he had made the mistake. =He was ashamed because he had made the mistake.,四、否定结构,考生病句1. Some people think we neednt to worry about fresh water.2. Nowadays many people dont like to go to the movies, too. 正确表达：1. Some people think we neednt worry (或dont need

13、to worry) about fresh water.2. Nowadays many people dont like to go to the movies, either,完全否定结构,否定短语：keep.from, protect.from, prevent.from, let alone+动原，更不用说, at a loss, in vain, instead of, out of the question, rather than, too.to, by no means绝不, anything but,. 1） Women fail to get the equal right

14、s in some countries. 在一些国家里妇女没有得到平等的权利。 2） This is by no means the best way to solve the problem of energy crisis. 这不是解决能源危机的最好的办法。 3） We should protect trees from being destroyed. 我们应保护树木，不让它们受破坏。 4） In old China we could not make a nail, let alone (make) machines. 在旧中国，我们连一个钉子都造不了，更不用说制造机器了,半否定意义表

15、达,barely, hardly, few, little, rarely, scarcely几乎不，简直没有, seldom, not all, not everyone, not everything,.具有半否定的意义。 quite a few / little相当的 例句：1） We could hardly see any fresh vegetables in winter on market several years ago. 几年前在冬天市场上很难见到新鲜蔬菜。2） These young people know little about how to choose good

16、 books to read.这些年轻人几乎不知道如何挑选优秀的书籍来读,不含否定意义的否定结构,有些词和词组形式上是否定结构，但其含义是肯定的，比如：cannot but动原, cant help, no sooner.than一就, not.until, in no time, none other than除以外, nothing but,等等。 例句：1） We cant but face the reality. 我们只有面对现实。 2） These old buildings will be replaced by modern apartment buildings in no

17、time.这些旧建筑将很快为现代化的公寓所代替,否定结构的倒装语序,1） On no account should we follow blindly.我们决不应当盲从。 2） No where has the world ever seen such great enthusiasm for learning as in our country.没有任何其他地方有我国这样高的学习热情,五、含有it的结构,考生病句：1. As is known to all of us that science and technology play an important role in the deve

18、lopment of society.2. It is known to us, practice makes perfect. 正确表达：1. It is known to all of us that science and technology play an important role in the development of society. (或:As is known to all of us, science.)2. It is known to us that practice makes perfect. (或:As is known to us, practice.,it 的基本用法,1作形式主语It is necessary for us to master a foreign language skillfully. It makes difference whether we could purify the air or not. 2.作形式宾语We find