中考英语作文技巧131018

1、中考英语写作技巧,中考作文评分标准,第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表 达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-3分） 只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。,2012年广东省初中毕业生学业考试书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。 假如你是一名叫李明（Li Ming）的中学生，看了上述故

2、事后，你想表达自己的看法。 请你给栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 你对其中的哪个故事感兴趣？原因是什么？ 2. 你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法。 3. 就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议。 作文要求： 1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 Dear Editor, I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today,_ Yours,15,15,写作指导 Lets go for it!,basic struct

3、ure (基本结构的安排),English is so important and useful that most people speak English nowadays. Its popular around the world. If you are good at English, you can understand many new books and movies . So, we should study English hard. However, some students dont like English because they have some problem

4、s learning English. Here are some suggestions for you. First, you should listen to the tape. Second, try to remember two or three words a day. What s more , why dont you join an English club to study English? In short, where there is a will , there is a way .Im sure that you will get an A this term

5、if you study English that way .,Mary,(the beginning),(the ending),the body（正文）,总,分,总,1、Read2、Think 3、Write 4、Check,文体 要点,词汇 时态 人称,句型 过渡语,格式 词数 拼写,basic rules (写作考试规则),search（审） list（列） add(加: 开头和结尾) connect(连),basic steps (基本解题步骤),牛刀小试,认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,审,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们

6、是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,列,写作第二步,如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。,A lot of people travel.,Some people stay at home.,Some

7、 other people visit friends or parents.,A few people work.,Enjoy your vacation.,加,加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第三步：,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf t

8、he internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）,加(add),连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：,1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor; 2.表示选择: or, eitheror; 3.表示转折: but, ho

9、wever, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, notbut, on one handon the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, such as, that is to say, in fact，in other words; 8.表示顺序: first(ly）, second(ly), next, later, whats more，finally, in the end; 9.表示结论: in a word,关联词,L

10、ets try,1._ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. 2.He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. 3.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. 4._, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.,ThoughAlthough,instead,like,First,Later,FinallyAt last,How do

11、people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax

12、 well work well.,连(connect),Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,方法一:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇,Which is better?,他们在海滩上听音乐。,A They listened to the music on the beach. B They enjoyed the music on the beach.,Which is better?,我希望你能帮助我。,A I hope you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help.,Which is better?,最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶

13、。,A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.,我们应该保护环境。,A We should protect the environment. B Its our duty to protect the environment.,Our parents really wish us to work hard. Our parents really wish us to_. The teenagers like the computers. The

14、 teenagers_ the computers. We shouldnt eat junk food. We should _the junk food. We should learn English grammar. Its_ to_.,put our heart into study,are fond of,stay away from,important,learn English grammar,方法二:活用多种句型,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。,A She is very young. She cant carry the heav

15、y box. B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the,方法三:妙用引文和例子（多用于“the body”）,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。,We teenagers should try to protect the environment and save the earth.,For example, we can use recycla

16、ble bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.,加例子,加例子,在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。,I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.,万能语句与结构,陈述事实 发表看法 提建议 呼吁，号召,As we all know / its said that,In my opinion / I think / I dont think,What should we do? First, then, next, finally-,Here are some suggestions. First, then, next, finally-,Come on! Lets -from now on.,Come on! Lets not-any more from now