高中英语作文写作教学公开课(活动安排)

1、.,What makes a good essay?,英语作文写作,.,基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析,话题词汇、短语错误 2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏 3. 句子语法错误 4. 连贯性差,积累少,语法不扎实,篇章意识不足,.,考场作文TIPS,1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写.,2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。,.,写作基本步骤,1.仔细审题，列举大纲。 2围绕要点，写出句子。 3. 添加过度，确保连贯。 4. 先求正确，再求灵活。 5. 认真眷写，卷面整洁。,.,近3年基础写作分

2、析,活动安排 地点介绍,.,基础写作之 活动安排,.,学校学生会准备举行一次以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知, 欢迎大家积极参与。 写作内容,Notice . The students Union,典型例题：,.,Notice . The students Union,认真审题,学校学生会准备举行一次以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知, 欢迎大家积极参与。 写作内容,一般将来时,1. 时态：,2. 信息重组：,.,1.学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的：增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环境,节约能源” 。 2. 比赛时间：6月5日星期

3、五4: 00-5：30。比赛地点：教学楼五楼演讲大厅。 3. 报名时间：5月25日前。报名方式：studentcenter 。 4. 评奖：一等奖3名, 二等奖6名, 三等奖12名。 5. 欢迎大家积极参与。,信息重组,.,本节课的目标,学习与这一话题 相关的词句,.,举办 _ 增加/丰富 _ 知识 _ 提高 _ 学生会 _ 参加 _ 保护 _ 环境 _ 口语 _ 英语演讲比赛_,主题 n _ 节约 vt _ 能源 n _ 报名 _,相关词汇默写,hold/ organize,increase /enrich,knowledge,improve(vt),The Students Union,t

4、ake part in/participate in,protect (vt) protection(n),environment (n) environmental (adj),spoken English/oral English,English-speaking contest,theme,save,energy,sign up,.,(1)增长环保知识： _ _ (2)举办一次比赛：_ (3)保护环境： _ (4)节约能源： _ (5)表示目的的短语： _ _,enrich / increase our knowledge about the environment,hold/ orga

5、nize a contest,protect our environment,save energy,词语翻译,.,(6)在6月5日星期五下午4: 00-5: 30：_ 4: 00 p.m. _5: 30 p.m., _ Friday June 5th (7) 教学楼：_ (8) 在五楼：_ the 5th floor (9) 演讲大厅：_,on,from,teaching/classroom building,to,on,the lecture hall,词语翻译,.,(10) 参加比赛的人：_ _ (11) 在5月25日前：_ May 25th (12) 在上：_ ,before,at,词

6、语翻译,.,(13) 三个一等奖： _ (14) 欢迎参加：_ _,three first prizes,词语翻译,.,句子翻译,1.学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的：增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环境,节约能源” 。 2.比赛时间：6月5日星期五4: 00-5：30。比赛地点：教学楼五楼演讲大厅。 3. 报名时间：5月25日前。报名方式：studentcenter 。 4. 评奖：一等奖3名, 二等奖6名, 三等奖12名。 5. 欢迎大家积极参与。,.,句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的：增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环境, 节约能源”。 The Studen

7、ts Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English. The theme is: “Protect our environment and save our energy”.,适当调整更加顺畅,句子1 翻译,.,合并： In order to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken

8、 English, the Students Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest, the theme of which / whose theme is: “Protect our environment and save our energy”. (定语从句),合并句子,.,句2. 比赛时间：6月5日星期五4: 00-5：30。比赛地点：教学楼五楼演讲大厅。 The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom b

9、uilding from 4:00 p.m. to 5:30 p.m., on Friday June 5th.,先地点，后时间 由小到大,句子2 翻译,.,句3. 报名时间：5月25日前。报名方式：studentcenter 。 If you want to participate in the contest, you should sign up at studentcenter 163. com before May 25th.,中文没有主语时：要补充主语再翻译。,句子3 翻译,.,句4： 奖项：3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。 There are three first pr

10、izes, six second and twelve third ones.,句5. 希望大家积极参与比赛。 Anyone is warmly welcome to be there.,句子4、5 翻译,.,1. To increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English, the Students Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest, the theme of which is: “Protect our environ

11、ment and save our energy”. 2. The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m. to 5:30 p.m., on Friday June 5th. 3. If you want to participate in the contest, you should sign up at at studentcenter 163. com before May 25th. 4. There are three fir

12、st prizes, six second and twelve third ones. 5. Anyone is warmly welcome to take part in it.,连句成篇,Those who,are supposed to,it,Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest, including,.,Notice To increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English，the Students Union is goi

13、ng to organize an English-speaking contest, the theme of which is: “Protect our environment and save our energy ” The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m. to 5:30 p.m., on Friday June 5th. Those who want to participate in the contest are

14、supposed to sign up at studentcenter 163. com before May 25th. Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest, including three first prizes, six second and twelve third ones. Dear fellow schoolmates, you are warmly welcome to be there and thanks for your participation. The Students Union,.,Practic

15、e 怎样使用丰富的句式和高级词汇,1.To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.(使用名词性从句） 2.Though Im weak, Ill make the effort.( 使用倒装句 ),What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,.,3.I wont believe what he says. (no matter what状语从句） 4.They sang and laug