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ALLEVIATIONCRUCIALFURTHERDEVELOPMENTTOACCELERATETHEPROCESSOFWELLOFFSOCIETYHASCREATEDAGREATOPPORTUNITY18SINCETHECENTRALANDPROVINCIALPOVERTYALLEVIATIONANDDEVELOPMENTINTOTHEOVERALLSTRATEGICPLANNING,PRIORITYAND“FIRSTPROJECT“,FORMULATEDASERIESOFPOLICIESNOWFOCUS,DEVELOPMENTMEASURESHAVEALLBEENCLEARWEWANTTOSEIZETHEOPPORTUNITY,PRECISIONAPPLICATIONSTRATEGY,FOCUSPUNCH,BREAK“SUPPORT,SUPPORTSTHEDEVELOPMENTOFOLDREVOLUTIONARYANDASERIESOFPOLICYMEASURESINAREASSUCHASINFRASTRUCTURE,PUBLICSERVICES,PROMOTINGHIGHSTANDARDS,SUPPORT,ANDMOREOPPORTUNITIESFORUSTOACCELERATEDEVELOPMENT,PROVIDEGREATERSUPPORTFROMPROVINCESPOLICYORIENTEDSEE,“1236“POVERTYSTORMING,AND“6873“TRAFFICBREAKTHROUGH,AND“6363“WATERGUARANTEES,MAJORACTIONSPEEDUPIMPLEMENTATION,ECOLOGICALSECURITYBARRIER,ANDLONGEASTENERGYCHEMICALBASECONSTRUCTION,MAJORSTRATEGYINTENSIVEINTRODUCED,ANDPROVINCIAL“EIGHTACHANGE“,AND“EIGHTABOTH“ANDMUNICIPAL“SIXAINTO“,AND“SIXBIGSUPPORT“OFDECISIONDEPLOYMENT,CONCENTRATEDRELEASEHASMANYPOLICYGOODINPARTICULARGANSUSILKROADECONOMICBELTOFGOLDANDHERITAGEOFCHINESECIVILIZATIONCONSTRUCTIONOFADVANCINGTHEINNOVATIONZONE,JINGCHUANBASEDADVANTAGE,CREATENODECITIESANDPROVIDEABROADERSPACEINCOREAREASFROMICOUNTYPROJECTRESOURCESSEE,NATIONALECOLOGICALCIVILIZATIONPILOTENGINEERINGMODELCOUNTYANDCYCLEECONOMICMODELCOUNTYTWOANATIONALPROJECTLANDINGIMPLEMENTATION,WILLINCOUNTRYPROVINCELEVELWONMORESUPPORTPINGLIANGTOJINGCHUANCITYINTERFASTCHANNEL,ANDXIPINGRAILWAYDOUBLETRACK,MAJORPROJECTINTOPROVINCESPLATE,WILLFURTHERUPGRADEICOUNTYTRAFFICHUBANDCHANNELECONOMICSTATUSPAPERBRIGADEINTEGRATEDBODY,ANDZHUJIAJIANRESERVOIR,ANDAGRICULTURALPVPOWER,ANDGASUTILIZATION,ANDCOMMODITYTRADINGANDTHEAGRICULTURALWHOLESALEMARKET,ANDMILLIONTONNESOFCONTROLLEDATMOSPHEREFRUITANDFREEZINGANDDRYINGFOODPRODUCTIONLINE,ANUMBEROFMAJORPROJECTSIMPLEMENTED,HANDICAP,LIULIHERESERVOIRPROJECTWORKSMOOTHLY,THESEPROJECTSORIGINATEDFROMTHE“TWELVEFIVE“CONTINUETOACCUMULATE,TODEVELOPTHEIRPOTENTIALINTHE“THIRTEENFIVE“CONCENTRATEDDURINGRELEASEORIENT,ISTODEEPENTHEUNDERSTANDINGOFACCURATEAFTERYEARSOFTHEREVISION,DEVELOPMENTOFJINGCHUANSTANDONANEWHISTORICALSTARTINGPOINT,FEATURESOFECONOMICANDSOCIALDEVELOPMENTHASCHANGEDSIGNIFICANTLYCOMPREHENSIVECONSTRUCTIONOFWELLOFFSOCIETYINENTERINGTHESHOWDOWNTOWINSTAGE,DUALACTIONANDPOORPRECISION,DRIVENBYCOUNTYPOVERTYDROPPEDFROM375TO112FULLIMPLEMENTATIONOFTHE“117“,“219“PROGRAMME,ENSURETHETIMELYREALIZATIONOFPOVERTY,POORPEOPLETOACHIEVEWELLOFFSOCIETY,WEMUSTBATTLETASKSFROMTHEPERSPECTIVEOFCURRENTINCOME,POORVILLAGE,THEPOORGENERALLYLACKSTRONGINDUSTRIALSUPPORT,MOSTRELYONSERVICEREVENUE,ALONGWITHTHEDEEPENINGOFSTRUCTURALREFORM,LOWSKILLS,HARDWORKWILLBECOMEINCREASINGLYDIFFICULT,LABORINCOMEJUMPMOREANDMORE小桔灯快速阶梯作文第一册教案（内部资料教师培训时使用注意保密）第一讲补题明义法教学目的指导学生了解四种补题的方法，能迅速掌握并加以运用教学重点四种补题方法的理解和运用教学难点1、如何运用综合补题法2、明确补题明义的涵义在大脑里，草稿纸上“补充”，不改变原题、原意教学步骤与安排开课语同学们，欢迎你们走进小桔灯的课堂。我们的口号是在快乐中学会作文，在作文中享受快乐。下面我们开始快乐之旅的第一站手提桔灯转、转、转一、手提桔灯转转转成语接龙爽又爽白头到老老气横秋秋高气爽爽心悦目目不斜视视死如归归心似箭箭不虚发发扬光大大获全胜（意图成语是汉语言的精粹，具有言简意丰、形象生动的特点，被誉为汉语言词汇库中的“集成块”，至今仍然有很强的生命力，而且文化含量特高，让孩子们从小接触这些语文精品，不仅能提高其语文能力，而且能增加其文化底蕴，其重要意义自不待言。郑板桥有一副对联说“删繁就简三秋树，领异标新二月花。”语文教学也应该做到“删繁就简”，不能胡子眉毛一把抓。有一些树叶，一秋、三秋就落了，唯有“三秋树”上的树叶是不掉的，是耐寒的，是经得起考验的。成语不正是“三秋树”上未凋的树叶吗这恰恰是我们应当好好抓住的东西。再说儿童时代是记忆的高峰阶段。儿童时代背会的东西往往终生不忘，渐渐地，这些成语也出现在他自己的笔下或口中了，这便是所谓的“童子功”。）成语着“色”美又美山绿水（青）璧无瑕（白）白分明（黑）粱一梦（黄）树成荫（绿）手空拳（赤）碧辉煌（金）装素裹（红）心丧气（灰）烟瘴气（乌）你们真棒我们现在进入快乐之旅的第二站点亮桔灯闪、闪、闪，二、点亮桔灯闪闪闪开动脑筋想一想1、游戏（1）教师在黑板上画一个圆，启发学生展开想象的翅膀看看由一个圆形会想到哪些事物。（2）教师在黑板上再画若干个圆，请几名学生到前面来在圆的不同位置任意加上不同的线条，并且要求说出添加后形成了什么新的事物。提问你们从游戏中得到什么启示小结当我们面对由简单的粗线条形成的图形时，我们想象的空间是广阔的，可由此而得出的意象是抽象的、模糊的、呆板的、不确切的；而当我们在图形不同的地方添上不同的线条，想象的空间虽然缩小了一些，但得出的意象就变得具体清晰生动而准确了。2、导入新知1明晰概念在作文审题时，我们常常遇到这样的题目，例如家渴望眼睛等。题目看似很简单，ALLEVIATIONCRUCIALFURTHERDEVELOPMENTTOACCELERATETHEPROCESSOFWELLOFFSOCIETYHASCREATEDAGREATOPPORTUNITY18SINCETHECENTRALANDPROVINCIALPOVERTYALLEVIATIONANDDEVELOPMENTINTOTHEOVERALLSTRATEGICPLANNING,PRIORITYAND“FIRSTPROJECT“,FORMULATEDASERIESOFPOLICIESNOWFOCUS,DEVELOPMENTMEASURESHAVEALLBEENCLEARWEWANTTOSEIZETHEOPPORTUNITY,PRECISIONAPPLICATIONSTRATEGY,FOCUSPUNCH,BREAK“SUPPORT,SUPPORTSTHEDEVELOPMENTOFOLDREVOLUTIONARYANDASERIESOFPOLICYMEASURESINAREASSUCHASINFRASTRUCTURE,PUBLICSERVICES,PROMOTINGHIGHSTANDARDS,SUPPORT,ANDMOREOPPORTUNITIESFORUSTOACCELERATEDEVELOPMENT,PROVIDEGREATERSUPPORTFROMPROVINCESPOLICYORIENTEDSEE,“1236“POVERTYSTORMING,AND“6873“TRAFFICBREAKTHROUGH,AND“6363“WATERGUARANTEES,MAJORACTIONSPEEDUPIMPLEMENTATION,ECOLOGICALSECURITYBARRIER,ANDLONGEASTENERGYCHEMICALBASECONSTRUCTION,MAJORSTRATEGYINTENSIVEINTRODUCED,ANDPROVINCIAL“EIGHTACHANGE“,AND“EIGHTABOTH“ANDMUNICIPAL“SIXAINTO“,AND“SIXBIGSUPPORT“OFDECISIONDEPLOYMENT,CONCENTRATEDRELEASEHASMANYPOLICYGOODINPARTICULARGANSUSILKROADECONOMICBELTOFGOLDANDHERITAGEOFCHINESECIVILIZATIONCONSTRUCTIONOFADVANCINGTHEINNOVATIONZONE,JINGCHUANBASEDADVANTAGE,CREATENODECITIESANDPROVIDEABROADERSPACEINCOREAREASFROMICOUNTYPROJECTRESOURCESSEE,NATIONALECOLOGICALCIVILIZATIONPILOTENGINEERINGMODELCOUNTYANDCYCLEECONOMICMODELCOUNTYTWOANATIONALPROJECTLANDINGIMPLEMENTATION,WILLINCOUNTRYPROVINCELEVELWONMORESUPPORTPINGLIANGTOJINGCHUANCITYINTERFASTCHANNEL,ANDXIPINGRAILWAYDOUBLETRACK,MAJORPROJECTINTOPROVINCESPLATE,WILLFURTHERUPGRADEICOUNTYTRAFFICHUBANDCHANNELECONOMICSTATUSPAPERBRIGADEINTEGRATEDBODY,ANDZHUJIAJIANRESERVOIR,ANDAGRICULTURALPVPOWER,ANDGASUTILIZATION,ANDCOMMODITYTRADINGANDTHEAGRICULTURALWHOLESALEMARKET,ANDMILLIONTONNESOFCONTROLLEDATMOSPHEREFRUITANDFREEZINGANDDRYINGFOODPRODUCTIONLINE,ANUMBEROFMAJORPROJECTSIMPLEMENTED,HANDICAP,LIULIHERESERVOIRPROJECTWORKSMOOTHLY,THESEPROJECTSORIGINATEDFROMTHE“TWELVEFIVE“CONTINUETOACCUMULATE,TODEVELOPTHEIRPOTENTIALINTHE“THIRTEENFIVE“CONCENTRATEDDURINGRELEASEORIENT,ISTODEEPENTHEUNDERSTANDINGOFACCURATEAFTERYEARSOFTHEREVISION,DEVELOPMENTOFJINGCHUANSTANDONANEWHISTORICALSTARTINGPOINT,FEATURESOFECONOMICANDSOCIALDEVELOPMENTHASCHANGEDSIGNIFICANTLYCOMPREHENSIVECONSTRUCTIONOFWELLOFFSOCIETYINENTERINGTHESHOWDOWNTOWINSTAGE,DUALACTIONANDPOORPRECISION,DRIVENBYCOUNTYPOVERTYDROPPEDFROM375TO112FULLIMPLEMENTATIONOFTHE“117“,“219“PROGRAMME,ENSURETHETIMELYREALIZATIONOFPOVERTY,POORPEOPLETOACHIEVEWELLOFFSOCIETY,WEMUSTBATTLETASKSFROMTHEPERSPECTIVEOFCURRENTINCOME,POORVILLAGE,THEPOORGENERALLYLACKSTRONGINDUSTRIALSUPPORT,MOSTRELYONSERVICEREVENUE,ALONGWITHTHEDEEPENINGOFSTRUCTURALREFORM,LOWSKILLS,HARDWORKWILLBECOMEINCREASINGLYDIFFICULT,LABORINCOMEJUMPMOREANDMORE2字数较少也没有太多的限制和修饰关系。就像我们刚开始看到的那个圆一样，头脑中想到的东西可能会有很多，但都是抽象的，不够具体。只要我们象在图上添线条一样在原题的基础上在不同的位置增加一到两个词语，题目的成份就有新的补充，题目的含义就会明确具体，思维一下子清晰起来，材料也会接连涌来。这种方法在小桔灯的作文技法中被称之为“补题明义法”。（板书补题明义法审题）2讲授四种补题明义法添加题目游戏列出五个作文题目让学生试着运用添加法添加文题,学生思考的结果先不作出肯定或否定的判断，要求是使原来意思朦胧的文题变得实在具体。文题示例眼泪歌声渴望手一场比赛让学生把自己认为添加得好的抄到黑板上，老师稍加点评，保留一些写得不错的。师生一起总结归纳四种补题明义法A题前补题法题前补词就是在题目的前面添加新的因素或成份，使题意明晰、具体。比如，网络，在前面加上恼人的网络，在情态上进行了限制，内容上也比较明确了。运动，在前面加上我最喜爱的运动，范围就小了许多。B题后补题法前面我们讲了“题前补题法”，但是仅仅依靠这样一种方法来审题是远远不够的。在审题过程中，我们发现有些作文题目，在题后补充词语也能够使本来难以组织作文材料的题目，一下子变得明确、具体、活跃起来，大大加快了审题速度，拓宽了行文思路。比如桂林，可以添加为桂林山水，再添加为桂林山水甲天下。C题中补题法我们在题目中间补充词语，增加题目的成份，使题目的含义变得明确化，具体化。我们的思维也一下子开阔起来，题目所包含的内容在我们的头脑中清晰起来。这种方法被称作“题中补题法”。比如，记一次难忘的比赛，“难忘”一词提醒我们要写哪些印象深刻的事。D综合补题法我们在现场作文中，有些题目仅仅依靠一种或者两种方法审题，仍然不能达到使题义明确的目的。这样，就要求我们综合地运用题前，题中，题后的添词技巧，使题义清晰明了。这种方法称作“综合补题法”。不管使用哪一种补题明义的方法，我们都要注意围绕原题，不能篡改原意。3添加的一般是什么内容通过对黑板上一些添加得不错的示例进行分析，可以归纳出一般添加的有以下内容什么时间、什么地点、什么人、什么原因、什么情景下、怎么样、想到了什么等等。有了明确的范围，思路就会清晰，行文也自然流畅了。4故事大派送轻松一刻你们靠自己的努力，懂得了四种补题明义的方法及添加的一般内容，老师决定奖励你们，派送几个故事。故事A有一个县官酷爱风雅，过年时他想让本县的百姓都在门口贴两副对联，以显示自己的文教之功。可是有的人大过年的，连饭也没得吃，哪还有心思写对联呢。但没办法，还是得写，于是就出于一腔怨愤，写了一副对子。上联是“二三四五”，下联是“六七八九”，横披是“南北”。（这时老师可卖关子，让学生猜猜这副对联有什么样的深意。然后才接着讲这个故事）我们试着把这副对联添几个字看看，上联添“一”，下联添“十”，横披添“东西”。通过添加，意思一下子就很明显了，原来这个人是想诉苦，说自己“缺衣少食，没有东西”。在听下面一则故事看看添加后有什么不同呢故事B大文学家苏东坡年轻时很自负，他在自己家门口贴了一副对联，“读遍人间书，识尽天下字”，语气非常狂妄。后来有一位老者看到这副对联，摇了摇头，提笔添了几个字，使这副对联的含义大变，而且显得很有志气。大家也可以试着添一下。（发誓读遍人间书，立志识尽天下字。）ALLEVIATIONCRUCIALFURTHERDEVELOPMENTTOACCELERATETHEPROCESSOFWELLOFFSOCIETYHASCREATEDAGREATOPPORTUNITY18SINCETHECENTRALANDPROVINCIALPOVERTYALLEVIATIONANDDEVELOPMENTINTOTHEOVERALLSTRATEGICPLANNING,PRIORITYAND“FIRSTPROJECT“,FORMULATEDASERIESOFPOLICIESNOWFOCUS,DEVELOPMENTMEASURESHAVEALLBEENCLEARWEWANTTOSEIZETHEOPPORTUNITY,PRECISIONAPPLICATIONSTRATEGY,FOCUSPUNCH,BREAK“SUPPORT,SUPPORTSTHEDEVELOPMENTOFOLDREVOLUTIONARYANDASERIESOFPOLICYMEASURESINAREASSUCHASINFRASTRUCTURE,PUBLICSERVICES,PROMOTINGHIGHSTANDARDS,SUPPORT,ANDMOREOPPORTUNITIESFORUSTOACCELERATEDEVELOPMENT,PROVIDEGREATERSUPPORTFROMPROVINCESPOLICYORIENTEDSEE,“1236“POVERTYSTORMING,AND“6873“TRAFFICBREAKTHROUGH,AND“6363“WATERGUARANTEES,MAJORACTIONSPEEDUPIMPLEMENTATION,ECOLOGICALSECURITYBARRIER,ANDLONGEASTENERGYCHEMICALBASECONSTRUCTION,MAJORSTRATEGYINTENSIVEINTRODUCED,ANDPROVINCIAL“EIGHTACHANGE“,AND“EIGHTABOTH“ANDMUNICIPAL“SIXAINTO“,AND“SIXBIGSUPPORT“OFDECISIONDEPLOYMENT,CONCENTRATEDRELEASEHASMANYPOLICYGOODINPARTICULARGANSUSILKROADECONOMICBELTOFGOLDANDHERITAGEOFCHINESECIVILIZATIONCONSTRUCTIONOFADVANCINGTHEINNOVATIONZONE,JINGCHUANBASEDADVANTAGE,CREATENODECITIESANDPROVIDEABROADERSPACEINCOREAREASFROMICOUNTYPROJECTRESOURCESSEE,NATIONALECOLOGICALCIVILIZATIONPILOTENGINEERINGMODELCOUNTYANDCYCLEECONOMICMODELCOUNTYTWOANATIONALPROJECTLANDINGIMPLEMENTATION,WILLINCOUNTRYPROVINCELEVELWONMORESUPPORTPINGLIANGTOJINGCHUANCITYINTERFASTCHANNEL,ANDXIPINGRAILWAYDOUBLETRACK,MAJORPROJECTINTOPROVINCESPLATE,WILLFURTHERUPGRADEICOUNTYTRAFFICHUBANDCHANNELECONOMICSTATUSPAPERBRIGADEINTEGRATEDBODY,ANDZHUJIAJIANRESERVOIR,ANDAGRICULTURALPVPOWER,ANDGASUTILIZATION,ANDCOMMODITYTRADINGANDTHEAGRICULTURALWHOLESALEMARKET,ANDMILLIONTONNESOFCONTROLLEDATMOSPHEREFRUITANDFREEZINGANDDRYINGFOODPRODUCTIONLINE,ANUMBEROFMAJORPROJECTSIMPLEMENTED,HANDICAP,LIULIHERESERVOIRPROJECTWORKSMOOTHLY,THESEPROJECTSORIGINATEDFROMTHE“TWELVEFIVE“CONTINUETOACCUMULATE,TODEVELOPTHEIRPOTENTIALINTHE“THIRTEENFIVE“CONCENTRATEDDURINGRELEASEORIENT,ISTODEEPENTHEUNDERSTANDINGOFACCURATEAFTERYEARSOFTHEREVISION,DEVELOPMENTOFJINGCHUANSTANDONANEWHISTORICALSTARTINGPOINT,FEATURESOFECONOMICANDSOCIALDEVELOPMENTHASCHANGEDSIGNIFICANTLYCOMPREHENSIVECONSTRUCTIONOFWELLOFFSOCIETYINENTERINGTHESHOWDOWNTOWINSTAGE,DUALACTIONANDPOORPRECISION,DRIVENBYCOUNTYPOVERTYDROPPEDFROM375TO112FULLIMPLEMENTATIONOFTHE“117“,“219“PROGRAMME,ENSURETHETIMELYREALIZATIONOFPOVERTY,POORPEOPLETOACHIEVEWELLOFFSOCIETY,WEMUSTBATTLETASKSFROMTHEPERSPECTIVEOFCURRENTINCOME,POORVILLAGE,THEPOORGENERALLYLACKSTRONGINDUSTRIALSUPPORT,MOSTRELYONSERVICEREVENUE,ALONGWITHTHEDEEPENINGOFSTRUCTURALREFORM,LOWSKILLS,HARDWORKWILLBECOMEINCREASINGLYDIFFICULT,LABORINCOMEJUMPMOREANDMORE3教师提醒这种添加尽管很有意思，但却有一个最大的缺点，就是改变了原意，添补只是为了审题，找到写作的切入点，而不是改变原来的题目。所以不符合要求。明确审题时把题目进行补充，题目的意思就清楚明了。但要注意的是1、补题明义是在脑子里审题的一种思维过程，是在审题和打作文腹稿时，在大脑里和草稿纸上“补充”，绝对不能在作文题目上加词。2、补题时一定不能改变原意。大家现在顺利进入快乐之旅的第三站桔灯引路碰、碰、碰三、桔灯引路碰碰碰玩中悟学棒又棒1、教师、学生特长表演，学生给予掌声。桔灯概念新又新2、范文品味初读范文，小组讨论范文的题目与内容间的关系判断范文在写作的过程中采取的是哪一种补题明义法明确（1）范文眼泪，可写的内容很多，有幸福的眼泪、强者的眼泪，小作者采用“题前补词法”把原来的题目变为“委屈的眼泪”。题目的模糊内涵也因为作者的题前添加和集中叙述显得具体。补题巧妙、选材典型、构思完整、详略得当、描写逼真、主题突出。读完本文给人留下深思和启迪。范文微笑，这个作文题看上去很不容易找到思维的切入点，但是作者运用题前补题法，将原题微笑变成“奶奶慈祥、温暖、安全的微笑”，就使文章有了可以具体表达的内容，小作者紧扣题旨，将外婆微笑的神态作了刻画描写，饱含深情，朴实生动，读来感人。可见，题前补题不仅可以缩小文题的范围，使之具体、明确，而且也能加强文意的深度，使文章有更强的表现力。（2）范文渴望，运用题后补题的方法，将原题渴望变成“渴望得到校领导的表扬”，小作者从自身的体会出发，讲述了这种渴望的艰难，抒发了对领导应多鼓励学生的感叹。行文朴实，运用了大量的心理活动描写，将渴望的具体内涵通过题后补题，使文章中心变得明确，读来令人颇有感触。范文呼唤，将原题补充为“呼唤人类不要乱扔乱倒、污染水源、保持对环境保护的诚信”，这种具体的行文构思与对题目的具体添加，使文章结构完整、中心突出、立意深刻，想象也十分合理。（3）题中补题法。范文一场比赛，这个题目有内容可写，但当琢磨比赛这两个字的时候，仍然感到没有落笔的材料。作者在题目的中间加上“有趣的”，写出的作文情节生动有趣而不落俗套。（4）综合补题法。例如理解，这个题目从人物和空间上都没有给予限制，一时让人不知道从何处下笔，给审题带来了困难。我们可以应用综合补题的方法，如“我理解爸爸深层的爱”。我们就可以抓住“理解”和“爱”字来做文章，通过生活中的几件事表达我对爸爸的爱从不理解到理解，从而很好地把握住了主题和理解的内涵。这正是应用了“综合补题法”的结果。我们现在进入快乐之旅的第四站桔园飘香乐、乐、乐四、桔园飘香乐乐乐口头冲浪比一比（1）问题同学们，我们看了这么多范文，想不想试一试这种方法，刚才我和同学们都展示了自己的特长并获得热烈的掌声，咱们就以掌声为题来个口头作文小竞赛，怎么样想一想，你可以补充什么内容，怎么写这篇文章题目掌声ALLEVIATIONCRUCIALFURTHERDEVELOPMENTTOACCELERATETHEPROCESSOFWELLOFFSOCIETYHASCREATEDAGREATOPPORTUNITY18SINCETHECENTRALANDPROVINCIALPOVERTYALLEVIATIONANDDEVELOPMENTINTOTHEOVERALLSTRATEGICPLANNING,PRIORITYAND“FIRSTPROJECT“,FORMULATEDASERIESOFPOLICIESNOWFOCUS,DEVELOPMENTMEASURESHAVEALLBEENCLEARWEWANTTOSEIZETHEOPPORTUNITY,PRECISIONAPPLICATIONSTRATEGY,FOCUSPUNCH,BREAK“SUPPORT,SUPPORTSTHEDEVELOPMENTOFOLDREVOLUTIONARYANDASERIESOFPOLICYMEASURESINAREASSUCHASINFRASTRUCTURE,PUBLICSERVICES,PROMOTINGHIGHSTANDARDS,SUPPORT,ANDMOREOPPORTUNITIESFORUSTOACCELERATEDEVELOPMENT,PROVIDEGREATERSUPPORTFROMPROVINCESPOLICYORIENTEDSEE,“1236“POVERTYSTORMING,AND“6873“TRAFFICBREAKTHROUGH,AND“6363“WATERGUARANTEES,MAJORACTIONSPEEDUPIMPLEMENTATION,ECOLOGICALSECURITYBARRIER,ANDLONGEASTENERGYCHEMICALBASECONSTRUCTION,MAJORSTRATEGYINTENSIVEINTRODUCED,ANDPROVINCIAL“EIGHTACHANGE“,AND“EIGHTABOTH“ANDMUNICIPAL“SIXAINTO“,AND“SIXBIGSUPPORT“OFDECISIONDEPLOYMENT,CONCENTRATEDRELEASEHASMANYPOLICYGOODINPARTICULARGANSUSILKROADECONOMICBELTOFGOLDANDHERITAGEOFCHINESECIVILIZATIONCONSTRUCTIONOFADVANCINGTHEINNOVATIONZONE,JINGCHUANBASEDADVANTAGE,CREATENODECITIESANDPROVIDEABROADERSPACEINCOREAREASFROMICOUNTYPROJECTRESOURCESSEE,NATIONALECOLOGICALCIVILIZATIONPILOTENGINEERINGMODELCOUNTYANDCYCLEECONOMICMODELCOUNTYTWOANATIONALPROJECTLANDINGIMPLEMENTATION,WILLINCOUNTRYPROVINCELEVELWONMORESUPPORTPINGLIANGTOJINGCHUANCITYINTERFASTCHANNEL,ANDXIPINGRAILWAYDOUBLETRACK,MAJORPROJECTINTOPROVINCESPLATE,WILLFURTHERUPGRADEICOUNTYTRAFFICHUBANDCHANNELECONOMICSTATUSPAPERBRIGADEINTEGRATEDBODY,ANDZHUJIAJIANRESERVOIR,ANDAGRICULTURALPVPOWER,ANDGASUTILIZATION,ANDCOMMODITYTRADINGANDTHEAGRICULTURALWHOLESALEMARKET,ANDMILLIONTONNESOFCONTROLLEDATMOSPHEREFRUITANDFREEZINGANDDRYINGFOODPRODUCTIONLINE,ANUMBEROFMAJORPROJECTSIMPLEMENTED,HANDICAP,LIULIHERESERVOIRPROJECTWORKSMOOTHLY,THESEPROJECTSORIGINATEDFROMTHE“TWELVEFIVE“CONTINUETOACCUMULATE,TODEVELOPTHEIRPOTENTIALINTHE“THIRTEENFIVE“CONCENTRATEDDURINGRELEASEORIENT,ISTODEEPENTHEUNDERSTANDINGOFACCURATEAFTERYEARSOFTHEREVISION,DEVELOPMENTOFJINGCHUANSTANDONANEWHISTORICALSTARTINGPOINT,FEATURESOFECONOMICANDSOCIALDEVELOPMENTHASCHANGEDSIGNIFICANTLYCOMPREHENSIVECONSTRUCTIONOFWELLOFFSOCIETYINENTERINGTHESHOWDOWNTOWINSTAGE,DUALACTIONANDPOORPRECISION,DRIVENBYCOUNTYPOVERTYDROPPEDFROM375TO112FULLIMPLEMENTATIONOFTHE“117“,“219“PROGRAMME,ENSURETHETIMELYREALIZATIONOFPOVERTY,POORPEOPLETOACHIEVEWELLOFFSOCIETY,WEMUSTBATTLETASKSFROMTHEPERSPECTIVEOFCURRENTINCOME,POORVILLAGE,THEPOORGENERALLYLACKSTRONGINDUSTRIALSUPPORT,MOSTRELYONSERVICEREVENUE,ALONGWITHTHEDEEPENINGOFSTRUCTURALREFORM,LOWSKILLS,HARDWORKWILLBECOMEINCREASINGLYDIFFICULT,LABORINCOMEJUMPMOREANDMORE4（2）学生分组讨论，代表发言，大家评议，教师鼓励。我有妙笔写一写（1）总结同学们，今天我们学了四种补题明义法，那就拿起笔来运用这些方法写写吧相信你是最棒的。（2）从下列题目中任选一题，应用所学的方法，写作文。盼望感动记一场争论小巷掌声我们现在进入快乐之旅的第五站摘桔收果笑、笑、笑五、摘桔收果笑笑笑（点评课）相互品赏高乐高1、教师有针对性的指导修改一篇2、学生小组合作评改习作审题方法用得好不好对字句修改、打分对内容评价、打分3、向教师反馈汇报评改情况，教师评价总结4、激励完善作文在自己的作文上修改誊写5、相互品赏点评提高附板书设计补题明义法1、概念在原题的基础上在不同的位置增加一到两个词语，题目的含义就会明确具体，思维也会一下子清晰起来2、方法题前补题法题后补题法题中补题法综合补题法3、补的内容时间、地点、人物、情形等4、注意心里补题不改变原意5、当堂作文题目盼望感动记一场争论小巷掌声第二讲虚实变写法教学目的指导学生了解实题虚写法和虚题实写法，能迅速掌握并加以运用教学重点两种虚实变写法的理解和运用教学难点理解什么是“虚题”，什么是“实题”教学步骤与安排同学们，欢迎你们走进小桔灯的课堂。我们的口号是在快乐中学会作文，在作文中享受快乐。下面我们开始快乐之旅的第一站手提桔灯转、转、转一、手提桔灯转转转ALLEVIATIONCRUCIALFURTHERDEVELOPMENTTOACCELERATETHEPROCESSOFWELLOFFSOCIETYHASCREATEDAGREATOPPORTUNITY18SINCETHECENTRALANDPROVINCIALPOVERTYALLEVIATIONANDDEVELOPMENTINTOTHEOVERALLSTRATEGICPLANNING,PRIORITYAND“FIRSTPROJECT“,FORMULATEDASERIESOFPOLICIESNOWFOCUS,DEVELOPMENTMEASURESHAVEALLBEENCLEARWEWANTTOSEIZETHEOPPORTUNITY,PRECISIONAPPLICATIONSTRATEGY,FOCUSPUNCH,BREAK“SUPPORT,SUPPORTSTHEDEVELOPMENTOFOLDREVOLUTIONARYANDASERIESOFPOLICYMEASURESINAREASSUCHASINFRASTRUCTURE,PUBLICSERVICES,PROMOTINGHIGHSTANDARDS,SUPPORT,ANDMOREOPPORTUNITIESFORUSTOACCELERATEDEVELOPMENT,PROVIDEGREATERSUPPORTFROMPROVINCESPOLICYORIENTEDSEE,“1236“POVERTYSTORMING,AND“6873“TRAFFICBREAKTHROUGH,AND“6363“WATERGUARANTEES,MAJORACTIONSPEEDUPIMPLEMENTATION,ECOLOGICALSECURITYBARRIER,ANDLONGEASTENERGYCHEMICALBASECONSTRUCTION,MAJORSTRATEGYINTENSIVEINTRODUCED,ANDPROVINCIAL“EIGHTACHANGE“,AND“EIGHTABOTH“ANDMUNICIPAL“SIXAINTO“,AND“SIXBIGSUPPORT“OFDECISIONDEPLOYMENT,CONCENTRATEDRELEASEHASMANYPOLICYGOODINPARTICULARGANSUSILKROADECONOMICBELTOFGOLDANDHERITAGEOFCHINESECIVILIZATIONCONSTRUCTIONOFADVANCINGTHEINNOVATIONZONE,JINGCHUANBASEDADVANTAGE,CREATENODECITIESANDPROVIDEABROADERSPACEINCOREAREASFROMICOUNTYPROJECTRESOURCESSEE,NATIONALECOLOGICALCIVILIZATIONPILOTENGINEERINGMODELCOUNTYANDCYCLEECONOMICMODELCOUNTYTWOANATIONALPROJECTLANDINGIMPLEMENTATION,WILLINCOUNTRYPROVINCELEVELWONMORESUPPORTPINGLIANGTOJINGCHUANCITYINTERFASTCHANNEL,ANDXIPINGRAILWAYDOUBLETRACK,MAJORPROJECTINTOPROVINCESPLATE,WILLFURTHERUPGRADEICOUNTYTRAFFICHUBANDCHANNELECONOMICSTATUSPAPERBRIGADEINTEGRATEDBODY,ANDZHUJIAJIANRESERVOIR,ANDAGRICULTURALPVPOWER,ANDGASUTILIZATION,ANDCOMMODITYTRADINGANDTHEAGRICULTURALWHOLESALEMARKET,ANDMILLIONTONNESOFCONTROLLEDATMOSPHEREFRUITANDFREEZINGANDDRYINGFOODPRODUCTIONLINE,ANUMBEROFMAJORPROJECTSIMPLEMENTED,HANDICAP,LIULIHERESERVOIRPROJECTWORKSMOOTHLY,THESEPROJECTSORIGINATEDFROMTHE“TWELVEFIVE“CONTINUETOACCUMULATE,TODEVELOPTHEIRPOTENTIALINTHE“THIRTEENFIVE“CONCENTRATEDDURINGRELEASEORIENT,ISTODEEPENTHEUNDERSTANDINGOFACCURATEAFTERYEARSOFTHEREVISION,DEVELOPMENTOFJINGCHUANSTANDONANEWHISTORICALSTARTINGPOINT,FEATURESOFECONOMICANDSOCIALDEVELOPMENTHASCHANGEDSIGNIFICANTLYCOMPREHENSIVECONSTRUCTIONOFWELLOFFSOCIETYINENTERINGTHESHOWDOWNTOWINSTAGE,DUALACTIONANDPOORPRECISION,DRIVENBYCOUNTYPOVERTYDROPPEDFROM375TO112FULLIMPLEMENTATIONOFTHE“117“,“219“PROGRAMME,ENSURETHETIMELYREALIZATIONOFPOVERTY,POORPEOPLETOACHIEVEWELLOFFSOCIETY,WEMUSTBATTLETASKSFROMTHEPERSPECTIVEOFCURRENTINCOME,POORVILLAGE,THEPOORGENERALLYLACKSTRONGINDUSTRIALSUPPORT,MOSTRELYONSERVICEREVENUE,ALONGWITHTHEDEEPENINGOFSTRUCTURALREFORM,LOWSKILLS,HARDWORKWILLBECOMEINCREASINGLYDIFFICULT,LABORINCOMEJUMPMOREANDMORE5歇后语言猜一猜矮子里挑将军大材小用八字没有一撇早着哩戴着斗笠打伞多此一举肥皂泡儿起得快，灭得快口袋里装芝麻多得很孔明会李逵有敢想的也有敢干的砌墙的砖头后来者居上孔夫子搬家尽是书（输）（歇后语是我国人民在生活实践中创造的一种特殊语言形式。它一般由两个部分构成，前半截是形象的比喻，像谜面，后半截是解释、说明，像谜底，十分自然贴切。在一定的语言环境中，通常说出前半截，“歇”去后半截，就可以领会和猜想出它的本意，所以称它为歇后语。）你们真棒我们现在进入快乐之旅的第二站点亮桔灯闪、闪、闪二、点亮桔灯闪闪闪开动脑筋想一想1、游戏老师在黑板上写上词语温暖、眼泪、收获、美丽，让学生展开联想，开阔思维，画一些能够表现这些词的事物，将图画在右边。看到这些图，你又想到什么呢把想到的词写在图画的右边。温暖光明爱心眼泪激动痛苦收获耕耘付出美丽希望未来虚实虚老师逐步划上两条竖线，观察左边和中间的特点。让学生自己说出左边是虚化的、看不见摸不着能感受到的，中间是实在的、可触摸的。在左边的下方写上“虚”字，在中间的下方写上“实”字。同样，让学生自己说出中间是实实在在可通过感官触摸到的，右边是虚化的、看不见摸不着的。在右边的下方写上“虚”字。从刚才的游戏中你有没有什么体会呢（明确我们在游戏中发现，可以由很多实实在在的事物想到一些比较虚的东西，反之，也可以由那些看不到摸不着的东西想到实在的事物。）2、导入新知写作文时也要像做游戏一样会虚实相互联想。即虚题实写和实题虚写。今天老师教你们一种小桔灯新的审题技法“虚实变写法”。1示概念A什么虚题实写法“虚题”就是指写作的范围宽，可写的内容多。形式或外表宽泛，而并不是说空洞。“虚题”往往表现的是一个