书面表达专题12.27.ppt

初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导,brainstorm,Teenagerscolorfullife,Westudy.,Welikelisteningtomusic.,Weplaycomputergamesforlong.,Welikereadingbooks.,WeoftenplaySports.,WegotoKFC.,Sometimeswetravel.,Sometimeswestayupstudying.,Teenagershealthylife,Westudyallday.,Welikelisteningtomusic.,Weplaycomputergamesforlong.,Welikereadingbooks.,WeoftenplaySports.,WegotoKFC.,Sometimeswetravel.,Sometimeswestayupstudying.,colorful,healthy,认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,审,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,审,travel,stayathome,visitfriendsorparents,work,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,列,写作第二步,根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点,如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲,stayathome,work,visitfriendsorparents,travel,Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.,列,Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.,Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,anicehead,anicetail,anicebody,加,加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第三步：,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：,1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,bothand,notonlybutalso,neithernor;2.表示选择:or,eitheror;3.表示转折:but,however,although,though,afterall,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,notbut,ontheonehandontheotherhand;7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords;8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend;9.表示强调:also,besides,whatsmore,actually,infact,10.表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,关联词,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,连,Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,美,美,选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：,SkillOneMakeyoursentencescorrect,.Weshoulddosportsaweekonce.Savetheenvironmentisourduty.Thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday.IhopeIcancometruemydream.,onceaweek,Saving,be,achieve,SkillTwoExpressindifferentways,Ourparentsreallywishustoworkhard.Ourparentsreallywishustoputourheartintostudy.Theteenagerslikethecomputers.Theteenagersarefondofthecomputers.Weshouldnteatjunkfood.Weshouldstayawayfromthejunkfood.Whenhespoke,hegotmoreexcited.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhegot.WeshouldlearnEnglishgrammar.ItsimportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.,书面表达写作技巧,审,列,加,连,美,中考作文评分标准,第五档（18-20分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第四档（14-17分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（9-13分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第二档（5-8分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第一档（0-4分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读;,书面表达,以“Ihaveadream”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。Sentencepatternsforreference(以下句型供参考）Mydreamistobe/todo/togoIenjoy/like/preferTomakemydreamcometrue,IIfmydreamcomestrue,IhaveadreamHaveyoueverwatchedabikeracing?Theridersarecool!Yeah,itsmydreamtobeaprofessionalbikerider.IfellinlovewithbikeridingforthefirsttimeIrode.Sincethat,Ivebeenridingfor5years.Somepeoplethinkitsdangerous,Idontthinkso.Duringabikeriding,youwillbeinahighspeedandfeelthewindrushesquickly.Exciting?Thatis!Tomakemydreamcometrue,Illpracticemoreaftermiddleschool.Also,Illwatchmorebikeracingtolearnfromtheriders.Ihopemydreamwillcometrue.Ifso,IcanenjoythelifeIlikebest.,PassageOne,IhaveadreamAnybodyhasadream.Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentdreams.Mostpeoplealwaysdreamtobepopularorrich.Butmydreamisveryspecial,Ijustwanttobeabird.WhyIhavesuchadream?JustbecauseIadmiretheyrefree,theycandoeverythingtheywant.Whentheyreflyinginthesky,theylookbeautiful,eventheyrethemostbeautifulanimals.Ireallywanttoenjoythefeelingofflyinginthesky.However,Iknowitwontbeachievedanymore.Itsjustadream,inmyheart.,PassageTwo,Thankyou!,Allofushaveholidaysinourdailylife,buthowdopeoplespendtheirholiday?Wedidasurveyandherearetheresults.fromCaiPiaoli,Itsnothingbetterthanhavingarestafterworking!Sohowdopeoplerestthemselvesonvacation?Accordingtooursurvey,thereareseveralways.fromZhangSh