精选幻灯片-中考英语作文突破指导—作文模板

中考书面表达突破,1,一、题型特点：书面表达是对学生的语言组织能力、行文表达能力、基础知识、语法、词汇等综合驾驭能力的考查。中考书面表达贴近生活，贴近时代，给同学们一更多的表达空间。作文题目由限制性题目到半开放性题目，提示性词语越来越少，而给同学们的空间越来越大：,2,二、考查形式（体裁）：中考英语考查形式多样：看图（表）写作、书信、通知、日记、记人物等。体裁包括：记叙文、说明文和应用文；,3,三、中考评分标准：作文一律按档给分，与错误个数无直接关系。,影响作文分数的因素：1题目要求、内容要点；2句子准确、通顺；3层次结构清晰；4拼写、语法等错误；5卷面整洁度；,4,中考评分标准,满分档（15分）：文本长度符合要求（70-120字），书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇丰富，没有任何语法错误。第五档（12-14分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，涵盖所有要点，结构规范，条理清楚，逻辑严密，词汇比较丰富有少量语法错误。第四档（9-11分）：文本长度符合要求，书写规范，基本涵盖要点（有2要点得给9-10分），行文比较连贯，词汇不够丰富，有一些语法错误。第三档(6-8分)：文本长度与要求有明显距离，书写不规范，要点不完整（只有1个要点），行文不连贯，词汇量不足，错误较多，勉强能看出作文意图。第二档（3-5分）：能用句子表达，错误百出，只能勉强猜测出作文意图。第一档（0-2分）：有一些英语单词，但与话题毫不相干。（白卷0分）,5,四、做题步骤：1审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节；2列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容；3写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；4复查：2遍1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；5誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。*总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称；三思：词汇短语句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。,6,五、作文一般框架：文章分3段：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。,7,六、如何列提纲：例1：利弊型作文Microblog的利与弊Para1:（综述）withthedevelopmentofinternetmoreandmorepopularPara2:（利）First,convenient,anywhere,anytime;Second,sharewith;Last,expressviewsfree,money-freePara3:（弊）However,onecoinhastwofaces.Ontheonehand,awasteoftimeaffectstudy;Ontheotherhand,notsafestolen,hurtfeelingsPara4:（个人）Asastudent,makegooduseofit.,8,七、如何列提纲：例2：计划安排型作文谈假期安排Para1:（综述）graduatefrom,holidayiscoming,planforthisholidayPara2:（正文）Firstly,studycomesfirst.makepreparationsforthefirstsenioryear;Secondly,visittouristattractions;Lastbutnotleast,dosportstobuildupmybody.Para3:IamsureIllhaveameaningfulholiday.(Imlookingforwardtothecomingholiday.)(Icantwaittoenjoymysummervocation.),9,八、常见的作文类型模板：,1书信,Dear.,Imgladtoreceiveyourletter-Bestwishes!Yours,Lucy,10,a书信开头常用语,Iamverygladtoreceiveyourletter(hearformyou).Hello,Jane.Iseverythinggoing(on)well?/Howiseverythinggoing(on)?ImwritingtoyouforsomeadviceonhowtoImwritingtoaskifyoucan.Howtimeflies!Ithasbeenmonths/yearssincewelastmet.Thankyouforinvitingmeto.,11,b书信结尾常用语,Bestwishes(to/foryou).Wishyougoodluck.(Iam)lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.,12,八、常见的作文类型提纲模板：,2图表、数字比例型,（提出讨论或调查的事实）Lastweek,ourclasshadaclassmeetingon(howto)Herearetheresults.（表达出不同看法或观点）MoststudentsthinkWhile20%ofthemchooseto.Another15believeTherearealsosomesayingthat（表达个人看法）Asastudent,Iagreeto,13,3说明利弊型,Nowadaysisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Ithasmanyadvantages.First,优点1Besides,优点2However,everycoinhastwosides.Italsobringsusbadinfluences.Ontheonehand,缺点1Ontheotherhand,缺点2Inmyopinion,个人观点,14,4不同观点型,Wemadeasurveyaboutwhetherweshould提出矛盾问题.Differentpeopleholddifferentideas.Somebelieve正方观点.First,原因1Besides,原因2Whileothersdontagree.Theythink反方观点.Ontheonehand,原因1Ontheotherhand,原因2Asforme,个人观点,15,5解决问题型,Recently,theproblemhasbeenmoreandmoreserious.shoulddosomethingtosolveit.Firstly,方法1Secondly,方法2Finally,方法3Iamsureifeveryonecanmakeacontributionto,thewillbecomebetterandbetter.,16,九、常用过渡性词语叙事文常用的句子间连接词：Atfirst;atlast;intheendthen/next/afterthatwhen/while/assoonas/notuntilatthesametime;attimes;onceinawhile;sothatToonessurprise/joyLuckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunatelyinaword/inall,17,议论文常用连接词表示并列：eitheror;neithernor;bothand;notonlybutalso;表示递进的：besides;whatsmore;whatsworse;(moreover);表示原因的：because;for;becauseof;thanksto;(forthereasonthat);表示结果的：so;asaresult;sothat;therefore;表示目的的：sothat;inorderthat;(inorder)to;for;表示对比的：while;ontheonehand+ontheotherhand;Eachcoinhastwosides.;preferto;wouldratherdothando;,18,议论文常用连接词表示转折的：however;but;表示举例的：forexample;forinstance;suchas;like;thatistosay表示总结的：inall/short;inaword;inbrief/total;lastbutnotleast;last;表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;sbbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy;befondof;beinterestedin;showgreatinterestin;loseoneselfin;putonesheartinto;begoodat;bepoorat;beweakin;,19,议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeuponesmindtodo;inaway;,20,议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeuponesmindtodo;inaway;,21,十、作文万能句式Iwillworkhardtomakemydreamcometrue.Ihopeyourdreamwillcometrueoneday.Ittakessb.+时间+todoSb.spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+onsth./(in)doingsth.Itsimportant/necessary/useful/useless/common(forsb.)tovItsnice/kindofsb.tov.Itstimeforsb.todosth.ItsawasteoftimetoItsyears/dayssincesb.+vedItsgreatfuntodo=sb.havegreatfundoingItsapitythatItsanhonorto,22,十、作文万能句式Im/WerenotallowedtoImafraidofmakingmistakesTherebedoingGreatchangeshavetakenplaceinsthis/arewellworthv-ing.Itseems/seemedthatItseems(im)possibletovItissaidthatAsthesayinggoes,and.aredifferentinmanyways.too+adj./adv.todoTherearemanydifferencesbetweenand,23,十、作文万能句式IhavemadeupmymindtoIamsurethatIamnotsurewhether/ifIwouldrather.thanItdoesntmatterifThankyouforv-ing.Ifeveryonecanmakeacontributiontotheearth/nature/society,ourlifewillbebetterandbetter.,24,十一、作文万能短语have/lookforachancetododooutdooractivitiesbe/getusedto(doing)sth.learnfrombeproudof/takeprideinplayanimportant/activepart/roleinagreewithsb.todosth.withthehelpofsb.=withoneshelp(反义：withoutoneshelp)be/getreadytodosth.=be/getreadyforsth.payattentiontotakegoodcareofmakefriendswithgeton/alongwellwith,25,十一、作文万能短语wishyousuccessful/successastimegoesbygraduatefromlookingbacktothepastthreeyears,（用现在完成时态）passthe(final)examsticktodoingkeepyoumindonyourgoalsmakeuponesmindtodosth.(onsth.)makeadecisiontodoworkhardatEnglishonceinawhile/attimes/nowandthenfromthenon,26,十一、作文万能短语inthefuture（将来）/infuture（从今以后）increaseourknowledge/enlargeourvocabularyinfact/asamatteroffactinthebeginning/atfirstfeellikegivinguphavetrouble/difficultyin(doing)sth.have(no)timetodohaveexperiencein(doing)sth.followonesadvice/suggestionsmastersomebasicskillsberequiredtodoasksb.forhelpcantwaittodo,27,十一、作文万能短语besupposedtodoencouragesb.to