获奖-高中英语写作公开课PPT课件

.,1,基础写作训练,-学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,.,2,Shooting,originatedasameansofsurvival,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.Thesport,whichfirstappearedin1896,waseversuspendedduringthe1904and1928Games.ItwasonlyfouryearsbeforethesportreturnedtotheOlympic.However,notuntil1968werewomenfirstallowedtocompeteintheOlympicshooting.Withthesportbecomingmoreandmorepopular,ithasgrownsteadilyfromjust3shootingeventsatthe1896OlympicGamesto17today.,句子表达有何亮点？,.,3,写作中复合句常见的错误,1.只有从句，没有主句,Thekeeperwhohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime,sohecouldkeepcalminthestorm.,Thekeeper,whohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime,couldkeepcalminthestorm.,.,4,2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子,Theoldmanthoughtofhisson,tearscamedownfromhisface.,Thehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildings,itismadeofglass.,3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然,ThereareoverfiftystudentsinthisschoolwhoaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday.,OverfiftystudentsinthisschoolaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday.,Thehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildings,whichismadeofglass.,Theoldmanthoughtofhisson,withtearscomingdownfromhisface.,.,5,4.过多地使用并列句组合信息,Weweredrivingoutintothecountry,andwesawourEnglishteacherridinginabus,andthebuswascrowded.,Itisabeautifulday,andthesunisshiningandabreezeisblowing.,Itisabeautifuldaywiththesunshiningandabreezeblowing.,Asweweredrivingoutintothecountry,wesawourEnglishteacherridinginacrowdedbus.,.,6,MyEnglishLearningItissixyearssinceIbegantolearnEnglish.Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,IhavemadeprogressinmyEnglish.NowImdoingwellbothinwritingandreadinginEnglish.ButIstillfindithardtolearnEnglish,suchassomedifficultidioms.Difficultasitis,Ihavemadeupmymindtomasterthisusefullanguagebymyhardwork.,请看范例,从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英语句子”。其实，“规范的英语句子”就是我们经常讲的三种句子：,.,7,A)Simplesentence:Hearingthenews,hewashappy.,B)CompoundsentenceA:HegavemeabookbutIforgottobringitbackhome.,C)CompoundsentenceB:Whatheisdoinghasnothingtodowithme.,=Whenheheardthenews,hewashappy.,.,8,Hereare3waystomakesentences:,I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：,1)借助名词短语做同位语,如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。,LiLi,aboyof19,wasborninGuangdongin1986.,.,9,2)借助介词短语做定语,如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。,LiFeiisaten-year-oldboywithshortbrownhairandawhitejacket.,.,10,如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。,WiththehelpofTom,wesoonfoundtheirvillage.,4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语,如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。,Theyarestandingunderthebigtree,waitingforthepresident.,3)借助介词短语做状语,.,11,II.巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：,如：他给我钱，我不要。,IwasjustwalkingdownthestreetcornerwhenIsawyou.,如：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。,HegavemealotmoneybutIrefused.,.,12,III.用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复合句：,1)名词性从句,如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。,ThatWangLicamelatetoschoolmadetheteacherveryangry.,2)定语从句,.,13,如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。,China,whichliesintheeastofAsia,isagreatcountrywithalargeareaandpopulationaswellasrichnaturalresources.,3)状语从句,如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。,Iwasdeeplymovedbythis,becauseIknowLeiFengisstilllivinginourhearts.,.,14,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,Kateisanewstudent.Shecomesfromanorthernprovince.Shespeaksadialect.Wefindithardtounderstandherdialect.,Kate,anewstudentfromanorthernprovince,speaksadialectwhichwefindhardtounderstand.,用一句话表达,.,15,不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。,学会运用复合句和非谓语动词,第一步：拆分成几个简单句,不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。,第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句,NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,ChildrenfromprimaryschoollearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.,ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.,.,16,NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.,ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.,第三步：合并句子,ThatchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametimewillaffecttheirChinesestudy,becausenoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,.,17,NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime.,ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy.,第三步：合并句子,IfchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime,thiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy,方法2：,becausenoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish.,.,18,情景说明通知：新光中学高三年级学生将于9月9日去体检。体检地点：第一人民医院体检时间：9月9日，星期六注意：1、7:45在医院门口集合，可以骑车或步行前往；2、体检前空腹；3、在医院要保持安静，听从医生和护士的安排。,实战练习,.,19,NoticeThestudentsinSeniorThreeofXinguangMiddleSchoolwillgotohaveaphysicalexaminationintheFirstPeoplesHospitalonSaturday,9thSept.Wellmeetatthehospitalgateat7:45.Youmayeitherwalkthereorgotherebybike.Wearenotallowedtoeatordrinkanythingbeforetheexamination.Pleasekeepquietandlistentothedoctorsandnurseswhenyouarethere.,.,20,学会使用复合句和非谓语动词,你来试试,参考词汇：错别字:wrongly-writtencharacters网络语言：weblanguage,要求：1.用两句话表达表格内容2.两句话要有连贯性,.,21,第一句（两个信息点）：1.学生作文中出现很多错别字2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。,Therearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudentscompositions.,Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudentscompositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.,合并句子：,Theyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.,.,22,1.Theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters,第二句:1.每天有很多作业做2.没有记住生字。,Theyhavemuchhomeworktodoeveryday.,2.Withsomuchhomeworktodo,theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,3.Becausetheyhavesomuchhomeworktodo,theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,合并句子：,Theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,.,23,连接两句话：Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly-writtencharactersinstudentscompositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline.Moreover,theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters.,.,24,Exchangeanddiscussyourpartnerscomposition,thengiveeachotherascoreaccordingtothefollowingcriteria.,Pairwork,.,25,1.一个乞丐在路边讨钱(askformoney)。李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。2.乞丐很生气，伸出(stickout)拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了(tripover)。3.李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱给他。4.李先生拿出了一张百元钞票(a100-yuannote)。突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。5.乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。李先生站在那里，惊得合不拢嘴。,实战演练：以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。,Abeggar,.,26,AbeggarOneday,Mr.Lihurriedonhiswaytowork.Abeggarontheroadsidewasaskingformoney.Mr.Lipaidnoattentiononhim.Thebeggargotangryandstuckouthiswalkingstick.ItalmosttrippedMr.Liover.Whenherealizingthebeggarwasadisabledperson,Mr.Libegantosearchforsomemoneyinhispockettogivehim.Hetookouta100-yuannote,butitwassudd