英文记叙文写作模板

精品文档 1 1欢迎下载 英文记叙文写作模板英文记叙文写作模板 第一部分记叙文题型作文第一部分记叙文题型作文 写作步骤 要求考生写一篇记叙文 描述事件发生的时间 地点 原因 人物及结果 最后对事件进行简单分析 如 2003 年 6 月四级作文 2003 年 9 月四级作文 2004 年 6 月六级作文 对这类题型 通常分为三个步骤来写 第一段 总结描述 交代清楚故事涉及的人物 时间 地点 主题句 第二段 具体描述 具体描述事件发生的原因 经过和结果 起因 经过 结果 第三段 对事件的分析 分析句 1 分析句 2 分析 3 第二部分 记叙文题型写作练习第二部分 记叙文题型写作练习 实战演练 实战演练 directions for this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic the day my classmate fell ill 1 简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况 2 同学 老师和我是如何帮助他的 3 人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是 写作模板 架构阶段 写作模板 架构阶段 第一段 开篇句 about o clock one evening in 扩展句 展开描述一下事件 第二段 主题句 without hesitation it wasn t long before 扩展句 1 one 2 another 精品文档 2 2欢迎下载 3 our teacher 第三段 结尾句 is who can tell but 扩展句 1 when people showed spirit regardless of 2 this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice 3 and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families a happy life and a beautiful world 写作模板 填充阶段 写作模板 填充阶段 第一段 开篇句 about nine o clock one evening in may my roommate li ming was lying in bed trembling with cold and having a cough 扩展句 his head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning his forehead felt very hot we took his temperature it was 38 5 第二段 主题句 without hesitation i dialed 120 it wasn t long before an ambulance arrived 扩展句 1 one roommate brought a blanket for him 2 another supported him in the ambulance 3 our teacher insisted on giving him some money 第三段 结尾句 is he a suspedted sars patient who can tell but we did t retreat 扩展句 1 when the savage sars was spreading people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health 2 this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice 3 and it is just because of this care that we can have 精品文档 3 3欢迎下载 warm families a happy life and a beautiful world 第三部分 范文第三部分 范文 about nine o clock one evening in may my roommate li ming was lying in bed trembling with cold and having a cough his head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning his forehead felt very hot we took his temperature it was 38 5 without hesitation i dialed 120 it wasn t long before an ambulance arrived one roommate brought a blanket for him another supported him in the ambulance our teacher insisted on giving him some money is he a suspedted sars patient who can tell but we did t retreat when the savage sars was spreading people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families a happy life and a beautiful world UnitUnit 1414 写作练习写作练习 习作一 写作任务写作任务 生活中一定有你难以忘记的人 作为初中即将毕业的你 肯定有某个老师在你的心目中记 忆犹新 你将永远不会忘记他 她 请以 The Teacher I Will Never Forget 为题 结合 自身经历 写一篇不少于 90 词的英语短文 写作指导写作指导 1 1 定基调定基调 体裁 体裁 记叙文 时态 时态 以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 人称 人称 第一人称和第三人称 2 2 列提纲 写句子列提纲 写句子 列提纲列提纲写句子写句子 开篇点题 The teacher I will never forget is Ms Qian my junior high school English teacher 年龄 Mr Wang is 38 years old 外貌 1 钱老师中等身材 留着长发 喜好 2 钱老师喜欢运动 and she is good at playing basketball 具 体 阐 述 介 绍 人 物 性格 3 钱老师非常有耐心 从不生我们 精品文档 4 4欢迎下载 的气 典型事例 4 I still remember 一天上午当我 正在抄同桌的数学作业时 Ms Qian came into the classroom I was so afraid that I didn t know what to do at that time To my surprise Ms Wang wasn t angry with me 5 Instead Ms Qian told me copying homework wasn t good for me and then 她说如果我需要帮助的 话 她可以帮助我 6 I was so moved that 我决定再也 不抄他人的作业了 From then on I did my homework by myself 7 并且在钱老师的帮助下 我在英 语上取得了很大的进步 结束语 I will never forget Ms Qian I hope Ms Qian will be happy and healthy in the future 3 3 巧衔接巧衔接 本文中体现了语义搭配这一通过词汇纽带来使上下文紧密连贯的衔接方式 如本文中的 years old of medium build has hair likes is good at patient is never angry with still remember will never forget 这些表达都与描写人物相关联 从而 使文章成为一个有机统一体 4 4 成篇章成篇章 TheThe teacherteacher I I willwill nevernever forgetforget 答案答案 2 2 列提纲 写句子列提纲 写句子 1 Ms Qian is of medium build and has long hair 2 Ms Qian likes loves playing sports 3 Ms Qian is very patient and is never angry with us 4 one morning while I was copying my deskmate s math homework 5 she said she could help me if I needed help 6 I decided not to copy anyone s homework any more 7 And with Ms Qian s help I made great much progress in English 4 4 成篇章成篇章 高分范文高分范文 TheThe teacherteacher I I willwill nevernever forgetforget The teacher I will never forget is Ms Qian my junior high school English teacher Ms Qian is 38 yearsyears oldold She is ofof mediummedium buildbuild and hashas longlong hairhair She likeslikes sports and she isis goodgood atat playing basketball She is very patientpatient and isis nevernever angryangry withwith us I stillstill rememberremember one morning while I was copying my deskmate s English homework Ms Qian came into the classroom I was so afraid that I didn t know what to do at that time To my surprise she wasn t angry with me Instead she told me copying homework wasn t good for me and then she said he could help me if I needed help I was so moved that I decided not to copy anyone s homework 精品文档 5 5欢迎下载 any more From then on I did my homework by myself And with her help I made great progress in English I think Ms Qian is thethe teacherteacher I I willwill nevernever forgetforget I willwill nevernever forgetforget her I hope she will be happy and healthy in the future 写作练习二 假如你是李华 你的初中生活马上就要结束了 三年的初中生活给你留下了很多美好 的回忆 请给你的英国笔友 Susan 写一封电子邮件 给她讲一件发生在你和同学之间的难 忘的事情 要求 要求 词数 100 左右 注意电子邮件的格式 Dear Susan How is it going these days I have so many memories of my three years at junior high school One of them impresses me very much I still remember last year when a new student came to our class His name is Liu Kun He was very weak in English He became less interested in it and almost gave up As soon as I found he had a problem I had a talk with him about how to learn English Since then I ve kept helping him and with my help his English level has been improving little by little He was very happy and thankful to me From this I learned we should try to help others when they are in trouble It s really a good thing to help others Best wishes Yours Li Hua 重点短语 1 连续几次地 in a row 2 弹琴 play the keyboard3 暂停跑步 take a break from running 4 对 有耐心 be patient with5 算出 解决 work out6 无论多难 no matter how difficult 7 投入 花费 put in8 按时 on time9 交一些新朋友 make some new friends 10 为 做准备 prepare for11 弄得一团糟 make a mess12 玩得开心 have fun 13 沉住气 保持冷静 keep one s cool14 高中 senior high school 15 取得很糟糕的成绩 get poor grades16 在某方面有困难 have problems with sth 17 流逝 go by 18 在年底 at the end of the year 19 取得商业学位 get a business degree 20 信任 信赖 相信 believe in21 接受邀请 accept the invitation 22 参加毕业典礼 attend the graduation ceremony23 首先 first of al 24 充满 be full of 25 渴望 渴求 be thirsty for26 处理 对付 deal with 27 长大 grow