高一英语书面表达基础训练.doc

高一书面表达一.体裁：应用文（通知 书信 日记），图表或漫画，提纲式应用文格式要牢记。通知：呼语（Ladies and gentlemen, Boys and girls, Dear friends）,开场白（please be quiet! I have an announcement to make或Attention please! I have something to tell you）,正文，结束语（Thats all . Thank you）图表或漫画（bar chart柱状图、graph曲线图、pie chart饼图、table表）：格局：Para.1:Describe the picturePara.2:Interpret the picturePara.3:Give your opinions about the phenomenon提纲式：注意分段（三段式或四段式。观点表达题通常情况下要分三段来写。第一段介绍总体情况；第二段陈述不同的观点；第三段呈现个人观点。明确的分段让人一目了然。）要求： 仔细审题 理清要点 防止遗漏 连句成文（有效使用连词） 查缺补漏（时态，语态，拼写等错误） 卷面整洁。二常见错误：1.叙述口吻不对 2.时态把握不准3.断句不准，纠缠不清4.不能整体把握句子，瞻前不顾后5.标点符号使用不规范，乱用分号，随便点逗号。6全篇一段 层次不清。 7欠推敲 小错不断.三. “观点对立型”的议论文及图画，图表类作文常备语句及模式开头，过度及结尾常备模式1.常用于开头的短语，句式(1).Recently our class has held a heated discussion about.Opinions are divided on this matter.(2).Different people hold different ideasopinionsSb argues/holds/insists/believes that.图画：Para.1:Describe the picture(1). The picture describe vividly a kind of common phenomenon .(2). As is described / shown in the picture above,.(3) The picture above shows.(4) From the above picture , it can be seen that.2.常用于中间段落的语句1.(1).Some people agree to ., because they usually think that .In the meantime , . In addition.(2).Some people think that A is right because .(3).Some people suggest / say that . At the same time they point out the fact that.Whats more.(4).Some people prefer NO. One. In their opinion A . In addition .(5). 1.On the other hand, some people hold that B is right. They think .2.(1).But many more people dont agree with them. They prefer B. They say that.The reason is that.(2).On the contrary, some people hold that .(3).Some people think that B is better. It is clear that. Whats more, .Also.图画：Para.2:Interpret the picture(1). It seems very ridiculous that. However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.(2). The picture indicates thatNowadays, it is a common phenomenon thatReasons: 1. the reason for the phenomenon is that(1). There are several causes for in the picture. First of all,.secondly. .thirdly.(2). What are the reasons for it ? On one hand, on the other hand. Whats more,(3). There are some main reason for it. For one thing, for another thing, in addition,3.常用于结尾的短语，句式(1) To conclude/ In conclusion /In a word/in short/generally speaking (2).From what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that .(3) In summary, it is important.(4) Obviously, if we want to ., it is necessary.(5) Its clear from the picture that.(6) There is no doubt that attention must be paid.4. 个人观点表达常用句式 (1).In my opinion/Personally /from my point of view/On my part/On a personal note./As far as I am concerned, (2).Judging from what have been argued above, it is , therefore, necessary that some effective steps be taken to(3).Through the above analysis, I believe.(4).From where I stand, it is time that effective measures should be taken to solve the problem.正确使用连词时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually, since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless因果关系: because, since, as, now that, due to, as a result of,让步关系：though, although, even if, even though, in spite of the fact that递进关系：whats more, in addition, furthermore on the one hand on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that 表 列 举: for example / instance, takefor example, thats to say, in other words, as follows表 总 结：in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been stated见解型: in my opinion/view, in the opinion of me, personally, As for me Personally, On my part, On a personal note, As far as Im concernedC.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思, 能增加文章的文采1.强调句：e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.2.倒装句：e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem.3.省略句：e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus.4. V-ing 形式: e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street 5.with的复合结构：with a handbag in her hand6.定语从句：e.g. In my opinion, Internet cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. 7.各种名词性从句：e.g. Thats what I should do.We should do a favor to whoever needs help at present.8.各种状语从句：e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it.The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later.D. 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.2.Both Mary and Lucy can speak Chinese. (使用倒装句)Mary can speak Chinese, and so can Lucy.3. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.4. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)Singing and laughing, they went back to school.5.I wont believe what he says. （no matter what状语从句）No matter what he says, I wont believe. 6.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （祈使句+and）Study hard and youll make rapid progress.7.As a result ,the plan was a failure. (turn out)The plan turned out to be a failure./ It turned out that the plan was a failure.8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the morethe more)The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.E.常用谚语 (在议论文中):1) As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”.2) As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”. On the one hand, physical exercise is good for your health. On the other hand, if you dont deal with it properly, it will do harm to your health. So we should look at the matter from two sides.3) As a proverb says, “Where there is a will there is a way.” (有志者事竟成)4) As a popular saying goes, “A man is known by the company he keeps.”(观其交友,知其为人)示范作文一： 随着经济的发展，环境污染越来越严重，自然灾害接连不断地发生，严重威胁着人们的生活。对此，我们能做些什么以减轻对地球的污染呢？根据下列提示写一篇英语作文。1. 公众应该接受环保教育，节电节水 2. 用环保购物袋取代塑料袋3. 必须通过新的法律，控制工业污染问题 With the development of economy, our environment is being polluted more and more heavily. Natural disasters continuously broke out, threatening human life seriously. To make the earth a better place for us to live on, in my opinion, we should do as follows:First of all, the public must receive the education about protecting environment. They should also save electricity and water in daily life. Besides, we should use environment-friendly shopping bags instead of plastic bags, which will lead to the “white pollution”. More importantly, new laws must be passed to effectively control industrial pollution, which is the main cause of environmental pollution.Only in this way can we have a more beautiful earth.示范作文二 暑假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。参考词汇：眼界horizon（或view）待在家中 优点：花费少，舒适方便 外出旅游 优点：增长见识，开阔眼界 缺点：不能亲身了解外界 缺点：花费多，旅途不便The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think its both convenient and comfortable. Whats more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.示