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英语写作 邹城一中高三李冬各 1 高考考试说明第II卷书面表达部分的解读与例证关于写作 写作 的词数要求提高到120左右词汇 既要求表达事实信息 又要陈述个人观点 相对以往试题而言 思维和表达的空间骤然增大 需要考生花大力气进行有关训练 2 2006年12月19日B2版 例证 当前不少文学作品被改编成电影 有人选择看电影 有人则喜欢读原著 请你以 Filmorbook whichdoyouprefer 为题 按照下列要点写一篇英语短文 3 看电影 省时 有趣 易懂读原著 细节更多 语言优美我的看法及理由注意 1 词数 100 120文章题目和开头已给出 不计入词数 2 参考词汇 originalwork或bookintheoriginal 原著 Filmorbook whichdoyouprefer Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal 4 Filmorbook whichdoyouprefer Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal badbeginnings Idon tthinkseeingafilmisbetterthanreadingabook b Asforme c Othersholdtheviewthat badconclusions Ithinkbothfilmsandbookshavetheiradvantages b Ihavenopreferencebetweenthetwo c Ifirstwatchafilm thenreadthebook 5 GoodConclusions 我的看法及理由 Revisedfilmisjustlikeonetreeintheoriginalwork sforest Iprefertogoacrosstheforestratherthanenjoyonlyonetree Throughreading everyreaderwillhaveadifferentHamletinmind Sodon tgiveupreading Let stastetheoriginalflavorofart Booksintroduceusintothebestsociety Byreadingabook wehearwhattheysaidanddid weseethemasiftheywerereallyalive wesympathizewiththem enjoywiththem 6 给出的参考答案 Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory Besides thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting anditiseasiertofollow Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion Theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginal Meanwhile thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful 7 Personally Iagreewiththesecondview ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit IthinkIcanstayathome readingquietlyinasituationofmyown andwhat smore Iamabletobetterunderstandtheauthor sideas Inaword toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit 8 高考英语作文模版对比观点题型阐述主题题型解决方法题型说明利弊题型 9 对比观点题型 1 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法 1 有一些人认为 2 另一些人认为 3 我的看法 2 给出一个观点 要求考生反对这一观点 10 Thetopicof 主题 isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof 支持A的理由一 Whatismore 理由二 Moreover 理由三 WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons Firstly 支持B的理由一 Secondly besides 理由二 Thirdly finally 理由三 Frommypointofview Ithink 我的观点 Thereasonisthat 原因 Asamatteroffact therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice Forme theformerissurelyawisechoice 11 2 给出一个观点 要求考生反对这一观点Somepeoplebelievethat 观点一 Forexample theythink 举例说明 Anditwillbringthem 为他们带来的好处 Inmyopinion Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint Foronething 我不同意该看法的理由一 Foranotherthing 反对的理由之二 FormallwhatIhavesaid Iagreetothethoughtthat 我对文章所讨论主题的看法 12 阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发 按照提纲的要求进行论述 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义 分析并举例使其更充实 13 Thegoodoldproverb 名言或谚语 remindsusthat 释义 Indeed wecanlearnmanythingsformit Firstofall 理由一 Forexample 举例说明 Secondly 理由二 Anothercaseisthat 举例说明 Furthermore 理由三 Inmyopinion 我的观点 Inshort whateveryoudo pleaserememberthesay A Ifyouunderstanditandapplyittoyourstudyorwork you llnecessarilybenefitalotfromit 14 解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 问题现状 怎样解决 解决方案的优缺点 15 Inrecentdays wehavetofaceaproblem A whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious First 说明 的现状 Second 举例进一步说明现状 ConfrontedwithA weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation Foronething 解决方法一 Foranother 解决方法二 Finally 解决方法三 Personally Ibelievethat 我的解决方法 Consequently I mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause 带来的好处 16 说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状 再对比事物本身的利弊 有时也会单从一个角度 利或弊 出发 最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度 或对事物前景提出预测 说明事物现状 事物本身的优缺点 或一方面 你对现状 或前景 的看法 17 NowadaysmanypeoplepreferAbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife Generally itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows First 的优点之一 Besides 的优点之二 Buteverycoinhastwosides Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat 的第一个缺点 Tomakemattersworse 的第二个点 Throughtheaboveanalysis Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones Therefore Iwouldliketo 我的看法 18 Asisshown indicatedbythefigure percentageinthetable graph picture chart 作文题目的议题 hasbeenonrise decreasesignificantly dramatically steadilyrisingfrom in to in Fromthesharp markeddecline riseinthechart itgoeswithoutsayingthat Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingfor Ontheonehand Ontheotherhand isduetothefactthat Inaddition isresponsiblefor Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow Butitisgenerallybelievedthattheabovementionedreasonsarecommonlyconvincing AsfarasIamconcerned Iholdthepointofviewthat Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell grounded 图表作文的框架 19 StudyingAbroadAttendingschoolsabroadhasmanyadvantages Firstly bylookingatourowncountryformoutside wecanwidenourvisionandbroadenourminds Secondly wecanvisitfamousscenicspotsandmakefriendswiththelocalpeople thirdly wecanusetheforeignlanguage quickly However therearealsosomedisadvantagesinattendingaforeignschool Themostseriousproblemisthelanguagebarrier Moststudentsdonothaveadequateknowledgeoflanguagespokenthere Onarrivingthere theyfinditdifficulttounderstandwhattheteachersaresaying Furthermore thecostoflivingismuchhigherthanthatinourcountry somoststudentshavetofindpart timejobtosupportthemselves Onthewhole itisagoodthingtostudyabroad However onemustnotlosesightofthedisadvantages 说明利弊型 20 OnpunctualityPunctualitymeansobservingregularorappointedtime Thereisnodoubtthatpunctualityisofgreatimportanceinmodernworld andtobepunctualisnotonlyagoodquality butitisalsotoshowrespectforothersandtowintrust AsfarasIamconcerned failuretobepunctualinkeepingone sappointmentisinvitedtoadinnerandarriveslaterthantheappointedtime hekeepsalltheothersguestswaiting Thisisgreatdiscourtesytowardsboththeguestsandthehost Asaproverbsays Timefliesnevertoberecalled thisistrue Ifwelosesomething wemayfinditagain Butlosttimecanneverberegained Infact timeitselfislife Therefore wastingother stimeisthesameastakingawaytimefromothers lives 阐述主题题型 21 IstheonlywayouttogotocollegeWehadadiscussionaboutwhetheritistheonlywayoutforseniorstudentstogotocollege Viewsvaryfrompersontoperson Themajorityofstudentsconsideritnecessarytogotocollege Theythinkitcanwidentheirknowledgeandimprovetheirqualities Onlyinthiswaycantheyfindbetterjobsaftergraduation Veryfewstudentsthinkitunnecessarytogotouniversity becausethetuitionistoohighfortheirfamilytoafford What smore it sratherhardforcollegegraduatestofindsatisfactoryjobs Thirtypercentofthestudents however believe AllroadsleadtoRome Therefore itdoesn tmakeanydifferencewhethertheygotocollegeornot Inmyopinion wecanreceiveabettereducationatcollegesothatwecanseverourmotherland 图表作文 22 怎样写好一篇英语作文 23 写作中需要注意的问题了解短文写作的内容及要求把握好写作步骤写作时要注意 三忌 形式上要一致避免犯小的笔误 语法 拼写 书写规范 工整 24 形式上的一致也是运用英语进行表达时需要十分注意的a 主谓一致Twentypercentofthestudentsinourclassisfromthesuburb b 人称 指代要一致BringyourbooksheretomorrowandIwillreturnittothelibrary c 平行 对称 关系要一致Myteacher MrWang ispatientaswellasimagination d 时态 语态 的起点要一致Marygotupanddressingquickly 25 书面表达注意衔接与连贯表示转折关系的词 but while however yet ratherthan not but whereas 表示选择关系的词 or either or 表示原因 结果关系的词 for thus because since 表示并列关系 notonly butalso and both and aswellas neither nor 表示时间关系的词 when while as before after 表示目的的词 forthispurpose sothat inorderthat 表示让步关系的词 although though eventhough if 表示条件的词 if unless as solongas 26 eg Therefore it sveryimportantforustoformhealthyeatinghabits badeatinghabitsarestillverycommonamongusstudents 2006福建卷 youdidn tspeakclearly Ididn tlistenwell However othersprefertogooutfortraveling itcanincreasetheirknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizons 2006陕西卷 However thischangehasbad goodeffects especiallydependenceontheInternet 2006广东卷 hegothome hesaidtohisgrandpa Birdsalsoneedfriends 2006辽宁卷 However aswellas since Either or When 27 写好主题句 一 主题句在段落中常出现的位置由两种 1 段落开端 后面的句子提供支持信息或论证 Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory Besides thefilmisusuallymoreinterestinganditiseasiertofollow 段落结尾 前面提供细节的支持句 最后用一句总结性的主题句加以概括 I mahighschoolstudentsinBeijing wheretheWinterAsianGameswillstart MyspokenEnglishisgoodandIcancommunicatewithforeignersfluently AndIhaveothervirtues IlikesportsandI mfamiliarwithBeijing SoIthinkI msuitableforservingtheWAG 28 写好段落主题句的三原则概括全段主要内容 既不能以偏概全 也不能随意扩大范围如 在一段介绍 我在英语学习听说读写方面发生的变化 的段落中 主题句应该是 MyspokenEnglishhasimprovedalot GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyEnglishstudy 2 有体现中心思想的关键词或短语 3 以简洁明了的句子为主 避免为追求使用复杂结构而导致理解错误或主题不鲜明的句子 29 请根据下面选篇的结构形式和内容确定一个主题句 Firstly thetuitionisreasonable Secondly theuniversitycanhelpthestudentsgetasumofloanfromthebanks whichreducestheloadofpeasantfamilieslikemine Thirdly itsprogramincomputerisrecognizedastheleaderinthecountry WhydoIchoosetomajorincomputerscienceinthisuniversity B ThereareseveralreasonswhyIhavedecidedtoattendthisuniversity Learningaforeignlanguagehaschanged Notsolongagostudentswouldsitwithpensinhand writingthebasicformsofalanguage andthelearningstructurestheywouldneverbeabletospeak Inthatsameclassroomtoday pensandnotebookshavebeenputaway Thespokensoundsofforeignlanguagefilltheroom 30 写好段落扩展句扩展句是主题句的具体例证或有力支持 写好扩展句要注意以下三点 扩展句要紧扣文章中心和主题句的内容 扩展句是主题句的补充和支持 2 扩展句的层次很重要 一个主题句可以从以下几方面展开 每一个方面就是一个扩展句 这些扩展句只有按照时间 空间 因果等逻辑顺序展开 文章才能层次分明 条理清晰 3 关联词对扩展句来说很重要 汉语注意思想相联 英文强调形式相联 从属于一个主题句的几个扩展句不能简单地堆砌在一起了事 而要用丰富多采的连词连接起来 31 阅读下面的文段 并为所给的扩展句排列顺序 IthinkI mfitforthejob SoI msureIcandothejobwellifIgettheposition I mfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting B Asastudent Ihavereadalotandhavemuchknowledgeinmanyfields C Aboveall Ionceworkedasareporterformyschoolbroadcastingstation D Besides I measytogetalongwithandenjoyworkingtogetherwithothers BAD 32 写好结尾句结尾句要紧扣段落主题 有要有所扩展 结尾句要力求简洁有力 意味隽永 结尾句可以借鉴一下几种方法 总结法如04年湖北试题关于英语学习的讨论 范文用 Inshort thestudentshavenotarrivedanyagreement 结尾 2 引用法引用名人名言是使作文大放异彩的好方法 如05广东 守株待兔 的结尾用 Nopains nogains 显现了作者的良好功底 3 反问法05湖北试题用 whatareyouwaitingfor 的反问为文章做了有力的结尾 33 阅读下