公开课短文改错解题技巧-全国卷.ppt

ProofReading 短文改错 What sthemaintroublewhencorrectingacomposition 1 看不出句子有错 2 看出句子出错的地方 但答案不正确 或无法改正 改错改错 越改越错 因此了解改错的题型特点 并在此基础上加以一定分项训练 掌握一些解题技巧就非常有必要 2 近年新课标I卷改错测试点统计 3 新改错解题策略及答题原则 1 短文改错设错方式及规范 4 解读短文改错口诀 5 练习巩固 Practice RightorWrong 增加 beenIhaveofferedascholarshipatauniversity Ihaveofferedascholarshipatauniversity beenIhaveofferedascholarshipatauniversity been X X X X X Ihavegotagoodnewstotellyou Ihavegotagoodnewstotellyou Ihavegotagoodnewstotellyou RightorWrong 删除 X X RightorWrong 修改 ThreeweeksagoIboughttheelectronicandictionaryatashop ThreeweeksagoIboughttheelectronicandictionaryatashop ThreeweeksagoIboughttheelectronicandictionaryatashop 以上为不规范答题 均不给分 不能手下留情 Icanreturntohomenow the in 一 短文改错设错方式及规范 3 Unnecessaryword Ilikeplayingpiano ImajoratEnglish 2 Missingword 1 Wrongword 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共有10处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改10处 多者 从第11处起 不计分 测试点 二 高考新课标I卷短文改错测试点统计 三 新高考短文改错应试策略及答题原则 1 通读全文 理解文章 2 先易后难 找出明错 3 对照考点 深入审读 1 以改变实词形式为原则 2 以单词形式变化最小为原则 3 以添删或更换虚词为原则 4 以多 改正 少 添删 为原则 5 以保持原意不变为原则 1 标点符号不改 2 大小写不改 3 词序错误不改 4 单词拼写不改 文中出现带汉语注释的词 在句中不可能用错 Next ItwasayearagowhenJoshuagotabikeforChristmas butherodeiteveryday Onemorning hesuddenlyfoundthebikegone Rantohisfrontyard hesawamanloadingitintohiscar Heshouted butthemandriveoff AsadevotedChristian hetoldhisdadherealforgavethethief What smore hewantedthethiefknowhewasforgiven and running drove that really to Sothenextday hepostedthemessageontheposter boardandputitinthebeforeyard Tothepersonwhostolemybike Youhurtmyfeelings ButIamaChristianandIforgivehim Whenheleftforhomethenextmorning attheendofthedriveway thebikewasbackwithnewbrakes front you a Back 如何突破高分瓶颈 得法者 事半功倍 解题方法 动词形 名词数 还要注意形和副 非谓语 细辨别 句子成份多分析 代词格 细领悟 介词短语要牢记 冠词连词常光顾 逻辑错误须关注 四 短文改错口诀 1 动词形 1 Foralltheseyears wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease 2014年新课标I 2 Myfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttime Myunclesallcomealongwithbowsandarrowsforhunting 陕西卷 3 Sharewithothersmakesmefeelhappy have came 1 动词的时态和语态错误 2 主 谓不一致的错误 3 非谓语动词形式的误用 Sharing 4 Oneeveningatsunset wesatbythefire haveourbarbecue 陕西卷 5 Suddenlythearrowswasflyingdownatusfromthesky 陕西卷 6 Amazingathowskillfultheywere Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood 7 Itisdifficulttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe soutside 辽宁卷 were Amazed understand having 8 Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby 9 Notonlyitprovidethestudentswithbasiccourses butalsoitmanagestoencouragethemtoparticipateincolourfulcampusactivitiesandsocialpractice 10 Don tpanicorgetoutofline andtryingtoremainquietandcalm 11 Manyruleshavemadetoreducethetrafficcrashes especiallyfortheonesinvolvedinthepedestrians does try been has 2 名词数 1 LastSaturday asusual hewenttoseveralclass 2 Hehelpedmedevelopmyinterestinallthatwasaliveandsometimesdeatharoundme dead classes 1 可数与不可数名词的混用 2 可数名词的单复数的错用 3 名词的格的误用4 词性的转换 3 Themansaid mytoothareinthepieceofchocolateonthefloor 4 We recalledseveraltimeaboutCleo searlymorningbarking 5 I mdeeplygratefulforyouradvicethatIshouldpaymoreattentionstopractisingmyspokenEnglish 6 Thepolicesoontrackedthecallstoabarbershop attention barber s teeth times 3 还要注意形和副 1 Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost 新课标I 2 Myunclesimmediatejumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird 陕西卷 3 Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople 浙江卷 immdiately noisy wonderful 1 形容词 副词 名词等词性的误用 2 原级 比较级和最高级的误用 4 LiMingenjoyedhimself competingandchattingwithhisfather andfeltrelaxingintheopenair 5 Ireallytakeproudinthisexperience 6 Therearemorethan200excellentteachersand5 000lovelystudentsstudyinghardlyinourschool 7 IhopeIcanpractisemyspokenEnglishthereasmoreaspossible pride hard much relaxed 4 代词格 细领悟 1 Thesurveyalsoshowsthatlibrariesarewherestudentsgetmostofhisbooks 2 Myunclesimmediatelyjumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget none their 1 前后人称不一致 2 人称代词 物主代词 反身代词的误用 3 不定代词的误用及混用 3 Thoughsituationsaretoughtoday alotofwepost 80saremakinggreateffortstoliveagoodlife 4 Ithasbeenrepairedandstrengthenedseveraltimesoverit spastonehundredyears history 5 Ithinkimportanttolearnthecomputerwell 6 ThankyoufortheEnglishdictionarythatyouboughtitforme its it us 5 介词短语要牢记 1 Ifyouhearthealarm standinlineatthedoorandwaityourteachertoleadyououtside 四川卷 2 Thenwemadehimbreatheusingthemouth to mouthway Aftertheboycametohimself wesenthimhospitalatonceandtelephonedhisparents to for 主要考查介词短语和习惯用法的搭配 3 Nearlyfiveyearsago withthehelpbyourfather mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes 圣女果 inourbackgarden 新课标I卷 4 IamgratefulthatIgotthechancetolearnforhim 5 Soontheycameupagoodidea 6 Thewomanwasangryandsaidtheman Whatareyoudoing sir Whatareyoulookingfor from with to of 6 冠词 连词常光顾 1 TodayIcanstillrememberhowIbecamegoodtabletennisplayer 2 Buttherewasamansittingbesideherinanextseat 3 Besides Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsixhoursaday the a an 冠词a an和the的错用或少用 连词but and or so because although therefore however的错用 4 Nowmanygirlsprefertomarryamanwhoownsahouseandacar Therefore Idon tthinklovebuiltonhousesandcarsistruelove andIdoubthowlongitwilllast 5 OnMonday LiMingwasenergeticbutactiveinclass 6 ShouldIchooseagoodmajorandagooduniversity 7 Theyhadexpectedtofindafreeplacetolivein sotheyexperiencedahardwinter and or but However OurEnglishteacherbegintoteachusin2012 ShehadbeenteachingEnglishformorethantwoyear Shelikeswe andsheisverystrictinallofus Althoughsheisabitshortandnotsobeautifully butweconsiderherasourfriend Sheisreallygoodteacher Weareloveherverymuch We resurewe llgetinwellwitheachother began has years us with beautiful a on 动词形 名词数 代词格 细领悟 介词短语要牢记 还要注意形和副 冠词连词常光顾 五 Practice Passage1 Mydreamschoolstartsat8 30a mandendsat3 30p m Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon Wedidn tneedtodosomanyhomework Therefore wehavemoretimewithafter schoolactivities Forexample wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportforonehoureveryday Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings Wecanlieonthegrassforarest satbythelakelisteningmusic Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends Passage2 Mydreamschoolstartsat8 30a mandendsat3 30p m Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon Wedidn tneedtodosomanyhomework Therefore wehavemoretimewithafter schoolactivities Forexample wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportforonehoureveryday don t much for hours there Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings Wecanlieonthegrassforarest orsatbythelakelisteningmusic Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends looks sit helpful to Summary 2 较好拿到分数的有 名词单复数 形容词副词 动词时态 代词 1 做题时应注意 叙事性文章首抓 以免理解有误 论述性文章首抓名词形容词冠词代词错误 全文时态 3 短文改错口诀 代词格 细领悟介词短语要牢记冠词连词常光顾逻辑错误须关注 动词形 名词数 还要注意形和副 非谓语 细辨别 句子成份多分析 2 名词性从句 3 状语从句 1 定语从句 4 句式结构 1 HeputitinasecretplacewhereIcouldn tfind which 2 ThehousewhichLuXunoncelivedisbeingrepairednow where 3 I llneverforgetthedaywhichIfirstwenttoschool when 1 定语从句 关系代词和关系副词的误用 1 Wewouldreturnatnighttohearthathe dpickedupfromtheradiointheday what 2 Butitdidn tmatterthatIwouldwinornot whether 3 Whenpeopleareplayinggames theymovealot Thatishowsportsaregoodactivitiesfortheirhealth why 2 名词性从句 连接代词和连接副词及从属连词的混用 1 Hegotupearlyinordertohecouldcatchthefirst that 2 Makeamarkwhichyouhaveanydoubtsorquestions where 3 状语从句 引导词的误用 Asweclimbedthemountains wefedmonkeys visitingtemplesandtoldstories 2 Iparticularlyenjoyeddrivingthroughthecountrysidewithyouandsawthechangingcolorsoftheleavesonthetrees visited seeing 4 句式结构 考察一个句子是否完整 是否存在否定误用的问题 省略现象是否有误 平行 并列关系是否混乱 强调句结构是否完整等 3 Whyyouthinksomanypeoplestillsufferfrompovertynow 4 Hotwaterisprovidedfor24hours butliftsworkdayandnight 5 Ithoughtitwasdulltowatchagameinwhichplayerskickedaballtoeachother Therefore