unit4-Wildlife_protection_(writing)_写作-保护动物.ppt

Writing WritealettertoWWFbasedonwhatyouhavelearnedabouttheendangeredwildlife askingthemtohelpyousaveyourendangeredanimal Howtoliveinharmonywithanimals DearWWF Asweknow thepandaisoneoftherareanimalsinChina Butthenumberofpandahasincreasedalittleallofthem Ithink ifwedoesn tprotectthePanda theywoulddieoutinseveralyears IfIwereyou Iwouldputupsomepostertotellpeopleneverspoiltheenvironment Notonlypanda butalsomoreanimalsallneedtoliveinpeace AsfarasI mconcerned weshouldprotecttheirhabitatsandtreatthemasourfriend Whynotbuildawildlifeprotectionfortheendangeredanimals It snecessarytopasslawstopreventpeoplefromkillingthem Ibelievethatwithyourhelp pandaswillbemorehappierandgetwellalongwithhumans 类文点津 写一封反映问题或提意见 征求意见的信1 一般书信体的组成 正式信件 多用于外交 商务 社交等场合 开头 start 一般用Dear或Dear 姓 身份 职务等 如Deareditor Dearmayor orDearSmith 正文 body 正式信件讲话要含蓄一点 用词要谨慎一些 结尾 ending Yourssincerely Sincerely Sincerelyyours Yourstruly Yoursfaithfully等较正式用语 非正式信件 多用于亲友 同学 同事之间 开头 Hi Mydear Dearest等 正文 因彼此情谊笃厚 讲话可以直率一点 开门见山 意见要中肯 结束语 Love Cheers Regards Bestwishes Yours等相对随便的词语 2 常用表达 反映现象的常用开头句式 I mwritingtotellyouthat Recentlywehavemadeasurveythat DearWWF Myfriend ChenTing andIhavebeendoingsomeresearchonendangeredanimals WefoundthatthehabitatofpolarbearsisdisappearingbecausetheiceattheNorthPoleisgettingwarmer Iworrythatwhenisdisappearsaltogether therewillbenowhereforthepolarbearstolive Sampleletter Firstly Isuggestweareverycarefulwiththeenergyweuse Globalwarminghappensbecauseweareputtingtoomuchcarbondioxideintotheair Oneofthewayswedothisisbydrivingeverywherebycar SoIsuggestwethinkcarefullybeforeusingourcarsunnecessarily Secondly insteadofusingourcarsweshouldthinkabouttravelingbybusorbytrain Theseformsoftransportaremoreenvironmentallyfriendlyanddonotputsomuchcarbondioxideintotheatmosphere Thirdly wecanjoinWWFwhichisfightingtosavethehabitatofthepolarbear Wecanraisemoneytohelpthembymakingandsellingcakes sellingcraftsorgivingtalentshowsandchargingmoneyforourparentstowatch IhopeyouwillsupportusinourfighttosavethehomeofthePolarBears Yourssincerely WuXiaoxin Manypeopleareworriedabout Itworriesmoreandmorepeoplethat 提出措施的常用句式 Weintendto tohelp save protect Wearereadytocallonpeopleto Wefeellikedoing toteachtheillegalhuntersalesson We drathernot butdo We dliketo topunishthosewhodoharmtowildlife 征求对方支持的常用表达 Weneedyoursupporttomademoreandmorepeople Wouldyoupleasehelpusto by We llappreciateitifyoucan Inorderto weneed sothat IhopethatIcangethelpfrom Iexpectthatyoucan Asweknow thenumberofsome wildplantsandanimalshasalready decreasedandsomeanimalshavealready diedout Soitishightimeforusto paymuch attentiontowildlifeprotection Buthowcanwepreventendangeredanimalsfrombeing indangerofdisappearing Firstly weshould protectthem frombeing hunted It sof importancetoeducatepeopletoregardanimalsasourfriends Thosewho wanttogetlarge incomefromhuntinganimalsfortheir furshouldbepunished Secondly somenature reservesand zonesshouldbeset sothatanimalscanlive inpeace Itisalsonecessaryto employsomepeopletolookafterthem Onlyinthiswaywillanimalsnotbe harmedmoreoften Thirdly thehabitofeatingthemeatofsome endangeredanimalsshouldbegotridof Accordingtosomereports somerestaurantsarestillservingsuchdishesnow Thegovernmentshould 正如我们大家所知 野生动植物的数目已经减少 一些动物也已经灭绝了 所以是时候我们该密切注意保护野生动植物了 但是我们怎样能够阻止濒临灭绝的动物面临消失的危险呢 首先 我们应该保护它们免遭捕杀 教育人们把动物看作是我们的朋友很重要 那些想通过猎杀动物获取它们的毛皮而获得暴利 income收入 的人应该受到惩罚 第二 应该设立一些自然保护区和保护带 为 的是动物能够平静地生活 雇用一些人照看他们也