2017年高考英语短文改错训练.doc

2017高考英语冲刺训练短文改错专练.真题回顾（2014全国卷）Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then-for all these year-we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!（2015全国卷）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the ciyt. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,well live to regret it .模拟训练(2016皖南八校)When Mollys father was about to work, his daughter Molly, aged 8,hand him a bag.The father was in hurry so he didnt know what was inside. While having lunch, he took out the contents: a plastic dinosaur, a tiny sea shell and three small stone. The busy father smiled, finished eating, and sweeping the desk clean into the dustbin include Mollys junk.This evening, Molly wanted her bag back because she had not made a note into it: I love you,Daddy. The father went to his office hurried, carrying the junk home. He asked Molly to tell her about the junk. It was turned out that everything in the bag had a story. To Molly they were not junk and treasures!ALast weekend our school hold a sports meeting. Realizing it wasour last school sports meeting, we decided to make it a unforgettable experience. We first attended the opening ceremony, for whom our class had made a lot of preparations. Much for our excitement, our performance was a success. My classmates took part in various event, such as running, high jump and long jump. Due to the hard training the athletes have done before, their performance was very impressively.My classmates applauded and cheered for the athletes, some raising their cameras to capture the excited moments. The result was announced. Our class won the second place and our efforts were paid off! Cup in hand, we took a picture together proudly. This sports meeting will be a precious memory for all of them as time goes by.BMany of us are familiar to the World Cup, a football competition which is popular among people in almost all nation. Do you know there is another football competition that was well known worldwide? Its calling the Super Bowl and is held every January in the USA. It is very different from the football we know. However, the more you know about them, the well you will like it. Each year the Super Bowl is played in different American city. This is of great important because it helps make sure that the game is fair. Now the Super Bowl is broadcast on TV all over the world. But if you want to see the Super Bowl lively, you had better to have a lot of money, since the ticket for the game is pretty expensive.CYesterday my English teacher asked each student write a composition title “The Greatest Achievement of My Life”. I was not sure how to write about it. Ive thought it over for a long time. I do many things. Coming to America, get a job and meeting new people was my achievements. I think my greatest achievement is learning English. Though sometime I dont understand everything people are saying, but each day I get better and better. I told my teacher this was difficult composition to write. Above all, it is hard to measure everything you have done.DTom is one of my best friends at high school. We spent a lot of time together every day. We share a lot common. For example, we both work hardly and love sports. Although I am not so smart as her, we both do very well at school. Toms favorite subjects is history and Chinese, and he also speaks excellent English. I am used to be bad at English. Thank to his help, I have made a great progress in it. Yesterday, our English teacher said she decided to hold an English speech contest next week. I think a good chance to improve my English. Both Tom and I are looking forward to show our potential in the speech contest!EOne day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.FMy soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!GHi, Janice，Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a timewasting activity! In fact，I dont like to go anymore, so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me，would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.GraceHMy old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the lefthand side of the class，I could easy see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.II ever worked as a tour guide. One day I saw advertisement on the newspaper. I rang up the company, and I was given the job immediate. They asked me to take a tour around the city the next morning. The manager just told me to say anything that I could think about the city. My first tour is terrible. The old bus was not air-conditioned, because it was the middle of summer. It was uncomfortable inside the bus. The tourist soon became very hot and angry. I owned a very hard time. I stayed there for a few weeks,and then left and joined in a better company.JDear sir, I have learned from the newspaper that you are need of a tour guide. I think I am the one who are fit for the job during the weekends. Im Li Hua, a 18-year-old boy, and I will graduate from Guanghua Middle School. My oral English is so excellent that I once won the first prize in an English competition. Beside. I have worked as a tour guide insenior 2 and was high praised for my good service. Young although I am, I am full of energy. Bringing up in this city. Im familiar with many places of interests here. However, Im sure that Im up to the job very well. If I can be hired, I will be very grateful and I will devote all me to the job. Please email me at Lilei 1999 126.com. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely , Li Lei2017高考英语冲刺训练短文改错专练【答案与解析】（2014全国卷）Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry ago oftomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then-for all these year-we had been allowing tomatoes years haveto self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small to everywherein size, but juicy and taste. They are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. tasty many Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had 或yetany disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! wonderful（2015全国卷）1. the a 冠词用法错误。首次出现的名词，用不定冠词a。2. think thought 时态用法错误。这里用一般过去时，表示“过去认为”。3. orand 连词用法错误。前后句为并列关系，故用连词and。4. onwith 短语搭配错误。短语with the development of随着的发展。5. seriously-serious 词性用法错误。修饰名词，前面用形容词修饰6. airs-air 名词用法错误。air为不可数名词7. much-many 名词animal为可数名词，故用many 修饰8. found-find 动词用法错误。情态动词must后接原型9. your-our 代词用法错误。这里应当是保护我们的环境10. it去掉。代词用法错误。我们将生活在遗憾中 (2016皖南八校)A本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者和同学们参加最后一次运动会的情况。全班同学经过努力拼搏，最终取得了好成绩，这给作者留下了深刻的印象。1 .holdheld 【解析】根据Last weekend可知，是发生在过去的事情，故用一般过去时。2. aan 【解析】unforgettable首字母的发音是元音音素，故应用an。3. whomwhich 【解析】这里含有一个非限制性定语从句，先行词是ceremony，关系词应用which。 4. forto 【解析】to ones excitement令人兴奋的是。5. eventevents 【解析】event是可数名词，前面有various修饰，故event应用复数形式。6. havehad 【解析】表示之前做的艰苦的训练，而且句中有before，所以应用过去完成时。故把have改为had。7. impressivelyimpressive 【解析】用形容词作表语。8. excitedexciting 【解析】表示“令人激动的”用exciting，excited表示“感到兴奋的”。9. paid前的was去掉 【解析】主语是our efforts，所以不用被动。句意：我们的努力获得了回报。10. themus 【解析】句意：随着时间的流逝，这场运动会对于所有我们都是一次宝贵的记忆。根据句意，故把them改为us。B本文介绍另一种运动the Super Bowl。1.to-with固定词组：be familiar sth./sb.对-熟悉；be familiar to为-所熟悉。故把to 改为with。2.nation-nations句意：在几乎所有的国家。故把nation 改为nations。3.that was-that is根据句意可知此处讲的是普遍情况，用一般现在时态，故把that was 改为 that is。4.calling-called句意：被称作-。可知用一般过去时态，故把calling改为called。5.them-it此处指代前面的the Super Bowl，故把them改为it。6.well-betterthe+比较级，the+比较级，表示“越-，越-”。故把well改为better。7.在in和different之间加a【解析】考查冠词 句意：在一个不同的美国城市。故在in和different之间加a考查冠词。8.important-importance形容词修饰名词，故把important改为importance。9.lively-live此处指“现场直播”。Live实况转播的，生动的。故把lively改为live。10.去掉had better后面的to【解析】had better do sth.最好做某事，故去掉had better后面的to。C1. student 【解析】后加 to考查介词。此处为固定搭配：ask sb to do sth：要求/请求某人做某事。故加to。2. title titled【解析】考查非谓语动词。此处为非谓语动词，title和逻辑主语composition之间是被动关系，故用过去分词，titled。3. how what【解析】考查连词。句意：我不知道该写什么，故用what。4. do did【解析】考查时态。此文用过去时态描述，故用did。5. get getting【解析】考查动名词。and连接的为并列结构，根据前后用词都是动名词，故改成getting。6. waswere【解析】考查主谓一致。and连接的有三个主语，是复数形式，故用were。7. SometimeSometimes【解析】考查副词。此处表示有时候，用sometimes。8. 去掉but【解析】考查连词。though/although不能和but同时使用，一次只能用一个，故去掉but。9. was【解析】后加a考查冠词。composition是可数名词，此处用单数，故加a。10. AboveAfter【解析】考查固定搭配。above all 是更重要的是的意思，此处为after all，意为毕竟的意思。D本文属于记叙文，讲述了我的好朋友Tom帮助我学习英语的事情。【小题1】spent改为spend 考查时态。本句的时间状语是every day，这是一般现在时的时间状语，谓语动词使用spend.【小题2】lot后加in 考查固定搭配。介词短语in common共同。句意：我们分享了很多共同之处。【小题3】hardly改为hard 考查副词。动词短语work hard努力学习，而hardly几乎不，表示否定含义。【小题4】her改为him 考查代词。Tom是男性，所以使用代词him指代他，而her指代女性。【小题5】is改为are 考查主谓一致。本句主语是Toms favorite subjects，这是复数名词，谓语动词也要使用复数形式are.【小题6】去掉am 考查固定结构。句式used to do sth过去常常做某事；be used to do sth被用来来做某事；句意：我过去不擅长英语。【小题7】Thank改为Thanks 考查固定搭配。短语thanks to多亏.；表示原因。句意：多亏他的帮助，我在英语方面取得了很大进步。【小题8】去掉a 考查名词。本句中名词progress“进步”是不可数名词，不能使用a修饰。【小题9】think后加it 考查句子结构。本句中it是宾语，指代前句中的出现的名词短语an English speech contest。【小题10】show改为showing 考查动名词。动词短语look forward to期待.；其中to是介词，后面要接名词或动名词做宾语。本句使用动名词showing作为to的宾语。E第一处：parentparents由下文的his parents were.以及倒数第二句中的妈妈说的话中可知托尼是和爸爸、妈妈一起去的，所以应该用复数形式parents。第二处：onin表示在商店的橱窗里，用介词in。第三处：去掉very句中使用了so.that.结构，very多余，故将其去掉。第四处：lookslooking该动词位于介词after后，要用动词的ing形式，故把looks改为looking。第五处：wherethat或去掉wherefound后是一个宾语从句，句子意思和成分完整，应该用只起连接作用的that引导，也可以省略。故把where改为that或去掉where。第六处：begunbegan本文描述的是过去的经历，and连接的两个并列成分应当时态一致，故此处用一般过去时，把begun改为began。第七处：tellingtold由and可知，此处和谓语动词saw并列，故用过去式。第八处：athe这里指的是前文提到的shop，所以用定冠词the修饰，表特指。第九处：saw后加his这里特指托尼的父母亲，所以用物主代词his修饰parents。第十处：terribleterribly修饰形容词worried要用副词形式。F第一处：去掉in用last，next等表示的时间状语前不用介词，故去掉in。第二处：anythingsomethinganything用于疑问句和否定句中，something用于肯定句中，故将anything改为something。第三处：betterbest表示比较的范围是in the world，故改为最高级。第四处：decidedecideddecide意为“决定”，此处时态应与全文时态一致，故改为decided。第五处：stepstepsstep是可数名词，前面有some修饰，故用复数形式。第六处：wellgood系动词be后接形容词作表语，副词不能充当表语，故改well为good。第七处：afterwhen/while句意为：我唯一的错误就是当我正在打包的时候掉地上了一些。根据句意可知将after改为when或while。第八处：athe第一段第二句中有提到party，此处为第二次提到，故用the表特指。故将a改为the。第九处：just后加to分析句子结构可知，might have to是谓语部分，从而get不再是谓语动词，故只能是非谓语动词。此处表示目的，故用不定式。第十处：enjoyenjoying此处my coach and me作介词of的宾语，enjoy与my coach and me之间是主动关系，应用现在分词形式。G第一处：want后加towant to do sth.为固定搭配，意为“想要做某事”。第二处：telltold根