北京市高考英语二轮复习专题精讲 第15讲 短文改错（新题）赏析1(1).doc

第15讲 短文改错2012新题赏析新题赏析全国新课标题一：my father and i stayed at the south lake hotel for a week when we visit beijing last month. it is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.we lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. what i liked best were the free high-speed internet connection in the room. i checked my email messages every day. i also shared for my friends many photos taking in beijing. the food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.it is such great hotel that i would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to beijing.题二：dear mom, mothers day was coming. im sorry that i am abroad and cant send your flowers, so im writing to you. mom, i know i have never expressed my thank to you before. but on today, at this special time, i just want to tell you loudly: i love you, mom! thank you so much by not only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good person. thank you for all you had done for me. mom, though i may often say it, i do love you. nobody can take your part in my heart. whenever i am, i will always love you. hope you good health and much happiness every day! your little girl, jennifer全国i卷 题三：dear grandpa,how are you those days? i have been missing you very 76._much after i went to college a year ago. whenever i think of 77._the old days, i feel very happily. i still remember when i 78._was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories 79._till i fall asleep. we often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant 80._view there. you told me the name of different plants and their 81._characteristics. gradually, i became interesting in biology 82._and chose to learn biology when i entered into the college. now 83._my friend ann, together with me, are going to do field study 84._and the findings will be use as materials for our research. since 85._well do the study in our hometown, i hope to see you by then. yours, daisy题四：an english lady was finally decided that she really should 66_learn to drive, and after many attempts, she past her 67_driving test and told her husband that. to release，he 68_was going to drive him over to france for a holiday. but 69_then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that 70_they wouldnt take the holiday. “how did you change your 71_mind?” he asked her by surprise. “well，it is all because 72_ of the business of driving on right.” she said, “i have 73_been practicing for three weeks now, but i still couldnt 74_get used to it-in fact, ive nearly killed three peoples。” 75_全国ii卷题五：it was a chance of a lifetime to win the first 76_ _prize on the story writing show. all i had to do 77_ _was to write a story or present it. my teachers 78_ _have been telling me how great my writing was. 79_ _so if they had said was true, i would have a chance 80_ _of winning the prize . what were better , i had useful 81. help . there was uncle chen , gentleman living 82. near my house , who was a very much famous writer 83 he agreed to reading my story and give me some 84 advices on how to write like a real writer. 85 题六：christie was one of my best friend at high school76. at that time, we often spend time together.77. thank to her help, i made great progress in my78. study. last year, she decided to study abroad. in79. other words, we would be separated for long time.80. before her leaving off, i prepared a gift to show81. my best whishes to him. she said it was the best82. gift she has ever had. from then on, weve83. kept touch with another through e-mails. i84. look forward to see her again in the near future.85. 第15讲 短文改错2012新题赏析主讲教师：林斌 北京八十中学英语高级教师新题赏析全国新课标题一：1. visit-visited 2. but-and/so 3 to 4. comfortably改为comfortable 5. were改为was 6. for改为with 7. taking改为taken 8. dish改为dishes 9. such后加a 10. me改为mine解析：1.根据时间状语last month可知本句时态是一般过去时，故动词用过去式。2. 前后文是顺延或者因果关系，所以连词用so或者and。3. anywhere是指地点的副词，前面不用介词。4. 修饰后面的名词room，要用形容词。5. what引导的主语从句作主语，谓语动词根据后面的表语决定，此处后面是单数，所以用was。6. 动词share常与with构成搭配，意思是：和某人分享。7. 非谓语动词做后置定语，被修饰的词和take之间构成被动关系，所以要用过去分词。8. 由several修饰，后面名词要用复数。9. hotel是可数名词，前面要加a。10. 双重所有格的构成是of+名词性物主代词或者所有格。题二：1. was改为is 2. your改为you 3. thank改为thanks 4. on 5. by改为for 6. teach改为teaching 7. had改为have 8. may后加not 9. whenever改为wherever 10. hope改为wish解析：1. 指的是现在马上就要到母亲节了。2. 此处动词send接双宾语，应使用宾格形式，构成短语send sb. sth.。3.“表达感谢”应为：express ones thanks。4. 在副词today之前不用介词，故去掉。5. thank sb. for为固定短语“因而感谢”。6. 此处是but连接的用于介词之后的并列的动名词形式。7. 全篇文章属于现在的时态，故将过去完成时改为现在完成时。8. 句意为：妈妈，虽然我可能没有经常说，但我确实很爱你。9. 根据句意：无论我在哪里，我总是爱你的。10. 动词hope后不能接双宾语，应用wish符合语境和语法规则。全国i卷 题三：76. those改为these 77. after改为since 78. happily改为happy 79. child前加a 80. fall改为fell 81. name改为names 82. interesting改为interested 83. into 84. are改为is 85. use改为used解析：76. these days意为近来。77. since意为自从以来，主句中用现在完成时。78. feel意为感觉，是系动词，后面要跟形容词做表语。79. child是单数可数名词，前面要加a。80.指的是过去，所以要用过去式fell。81. 后面指的是不同的植物，所以name要用复数形式。82. 主语是人，对感兴趣要用be interested in。83. enter本身就是及物动词，后面不需要加介词。84. together with连接两个主语的时候，后面的谓语动词要和前面的保持一致，此处要和ann保持一致，所以要用单数谓语动词is。85. 此处是被动语态，表示被用来，所以用be used。题四：66.去掉finally 前的was 67. pastpassed 68. heshe 69. 70. afterbefore 71 howwhy 72. byin 73. rightthe right 74. couldntcant 75. peoplespeople解析：66. lady与decide 之间为主动关系。67. 此处意为“通过”，应使用pass的过去式。68. 此处应为妻子要带丈夫去法国，应用女性的人称代词。69. 70. 此处应为在此次旅行之间，妻子就因不适应右侧驾驶改变了主意。71 此处为丈夫对妻子突然改变主意不理解，而询问原因。72. in surprise 为固定搭配，意为“惊奇地，惊讶地”。73. 方位名词前腰加定冠词。74. 此处应为目前还不是要右侧驾驶，应用现在时。75. people本身就是复数名词，不需要在后面加s。全国ii卷题五：76. 77. on改为in 78. or改为and 79. have改为had 80. if后加what 81. were 改为was 82. gentleman前加a 83. much 84. reading改为read 85. advices改为advice解析：76. 77. inshow “在节目里”。78. or表选择，and表顺接和并列。79. 此处应该指的是