反陷阱内部辅导——作文模板.doc

开篇语小作文需要添加3句话,而大作文仅仅需要添加一句话(由此可见辅导班老师的能力,估且不论是否吹牛，但是能说出此话的相信没几个辅导班能这样)首先强调几点：1今年考研128.2万人，里面有三分之二可能要当烈士，还有三分之一的人硕士，所以这是场战争，可不要心软到处传题哦，要知道这样可是很危险的2答题笔用黑，蓝，期考中性笔，考生证号的最后一位区分单双号3翻译要写满，而不要太在乎句子意思是否完全正确，当然对更好了，最后虽忘记句号。4小作文顶多120字，在页面1要写完，而不要拖到页面2（页面2是用来写大作文的，220字左右，相当于B3纸的一半，要认真练习适应）5作文写题目与否均可，但最好不要写，因为一般题目在严格要求大小写什么的，另外写题目还占用了本来有时候就稍显不足的空间，所以不用写大作文单号版：我们先以单张漫画为出题背景展开第一段：What a compelling and thought-provoking drawing it is! As is vividly presented in the interesting and instructive cartoon above,(句1),in contrast,（句2）。What on earth does the drawer really attempt to convey?注释：thought-provoking中间的是连字符，不能去掉，不管它是位于同一行还是两个不同的行。Compelling and thought-provoking两个ing押尾韵，俗称绝句） Interesting and instructive两个押头韵 n contrast路标性词汇，前后形成对比 句1一般用来简单描述漫画内容，句2和句1形成对比例如：06年一个小男孩另一个小男孩（两个矛盾方面描述） 04年起点也是终点穿中国服装的美国女孩，前一句写漂亮，后一句子转折写穿中国服装 00年世界捕鱼（以前怎么样，现在怎么样） 温室花朵（温室里面花朵怎么样，外面花朵怎么样） On earth究竟 加强语气 Drawer作者，不能写author显得俗气 Really可去掉，但不丰满第二段 Simple as the image is the implications(启示) mirrored(反映) are apparently far-reaching(深远的)。Initially, such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture has aroused wide-spread social concern(关注)。Nowhere in the history has the issue of sth(其中of sth也可省略不写)been talked about so much as in our society today(历史上任何时刻都比不上我们的时代这样关注这件事情).In the second place the painting reveals an upsetting story(事情) and similar events happened and happening are heard or reported in nearly all aspects of our life (27字)Additionally, the painter intends to convince us that a package of programs(一揽子项目，计划，方案)should be initiated to reverse the grim situation (此处是存折号)launching(发起发动) a nationwide education campaign, setting up relevant laws and regulations, and the list goes on(36个字)第三段To conclude, it is high time that much importance were attached to such cases. And it is imperative(necessary) actions be taken to curb(扭转不好的趋势) such practices(综上所述，结论如下：早该重视这种现象了).There is reason to believe that as long as all the society authorities and the mass media and every one involved, make concerted effort to strive hard upsetting stories will ultimately be ended or at least reduced. 注释：1，All the society, the authorities and the mass media and every one involved是用来扩充用的，自己觉得空间不够，可以省略1.2个不写2，“There is reason to believe that”可以删除，句子意思不变双号版第一段：How compelling and thought-provoking the above image(漫画)is! Whats apparently betrayed in the cartoon is (that如果后面接的是句子就加上that如果是短语就去掉)，in contrast第二段What on earth can we derive from(从什么中获得) this interesting and instructive drawing? It goes without saying that (=There is no denying the fact that 毋庸置疑) what the painter virtually aims to convey is profound .Primarily, we can learn that such cases are far from being(=not) rare and upsetting (令人心痛的) parallels(类似的事情) can be found anywhere from our neighborhood and around the world. Whats more, there has been a growing(=more and more) concern nowadays over the worsening(每况愈下的) phenomenon. Its hard to image what our society would be like years later if this pervasive trend(肆虐的趋势) goes unchallenged(放任下去). Additionally, to reverse(扭转) the grim situation, effective measures should be entailed(定制) by all parties concerned .Enhancing peoples awareness of such practices(行为) and setting up relevant rules and regulations ought to be top priorities(首要任务) of the agenda.(议事日程)注释：在第二段中几乎没写东西（指考生完全用的板子，没添加任何东西就可以用），希望考生能够自己根据能力修改，删除，增加一些东西。第三段Judging(非谓语动词) from all argument offered above, we may safely arrive at the conclusive that it is high time that such stories were terminated or at least reduced .Im strongly convinced that only when such happenings(事情) come to an end, can we maintain a happy ,healthy and harmonious society(和谐社会)as we all wish.PS:最近十年都基本是社会问题，今年应该还是要考和谐社会。呵呵，好了，我们现在己经有个大致骨架了，剩下的所有的东西我们都是在这个基础上建立起来的。强调两点：首先，部分考生担心什么雷同卷，这个担心是多余的，没必要，因为一般人多多少少都是会修改的。其次，物以稀为贵，东西多了就不值钱了，所以各位高手可以在这个基础上采取各种方法对其进行修改（替换词语，换句型，被动，主动，强调名，定语从句如此种种，一些自己的宝贝），不过放心吧，如果你真的作文按照这种方式写，一般都可以保守估计中上等分数的。要是想更牛点，就看各位同志的本事了。另外还是希望不要资料再传了，本来就不少人上这个班，可能一个考场说不定就有23个上的了，为了自己吧。下面单刀真入，切入正题吧 讲述下可能出现的一些新情况：3个万一：万一大作文漫画是2幅而不是1幅万一作文是非讽刺类的呢万一作文是“图表类”呢下面我们针对单双号分别展开单号：1双漫画所有的单数改复数，当然有一些地方可是不能修改的哦2讽刺“Additionally到末尾”删除，我们将其修改为举例（例下）Lets come to an example concerning, an acquaintance of mine, which serves well as a good example to the point第三段句子中的curb修改为ensure第三段最后一句“such upsetting”全删，修改为We can maintain a happy, a healthy and harmonious society as well as wish.双号：非讽刺修改：1第二段中primarily句中删除upsetting2第二段中whats more 一句删除，“worsening”3 Its hardif we fail to grasp such cases and cant put them into practices.4把Additionally 一段换成“举例” To make the point even clearer, lets come to an example regarding An acquaintance of mine That it is high time all parties concerned took effective and efficient measure to practice The authorities the mass media, as well as each individual are involved. And Im strongly convinced that well properly ensure such practices, thus maintaining a happy society as we all wish.5万一表格，则仅仅修改第一段As is vividly presented in theabove,in contrast, what on earth does theWhats apparently illustrated in theis that in contrast2后面接上一两个描述句子用下2 3段落都不要修改除非要求分析原因等等（重点是漫画，讽刺）一般作文的三个部分是1 describe 2 imply 3 comment suggest小作文Dear sir or madam, Thank you in advance for your attention to this letter and Im writing to present my complaint/inquiry/application/apology/推荐 concerning sth that(引述事实或理由，例concerning computer that Ive bought in your shop last weekend) Therere an array of factors contributing to (同result in同一个意思) this.第一第二第三（同大作文一样）.For one thing,For another.There are a host of aspects Ill offer here Id be most grateful if you can reply me at your earliest convenience and any favorableConsiderations will be greatly appreciated. Yours Sincerely Li Ming小作文的翻译事先谢谢您的对这封信件的写注意和的Im提出我的关于sth that的complaint或询问或者应用或者apology/推荐关于sth that (在您的商店Ive买的引述事实或理由，例concerning计算机最后周末)Therere首先造成(同result in同一个意思) this.第一第二第三（同大作文一样）. 的因素，为了another.There是aspects Ill提议here的主人如果您能回复我在您的earliest便利和任何有利， Id是最感恩的Considerations很大地将被赞赏。注释：1不考辞职信，不需要对道歉之类多做准备的。考研英语小作文重在完成一般交际能力。不能排除申请信，以complaint/inquiry/application/apology要看一些作文范例。小作文一般考不出什么花样，也不能怎么特别发挥。2不写一般信右上角的地址，时间的了3 sir or madam不用Mr4 文章开头可以顶格写，也可以空格写，不扣分，一般按习惯可以空三个字符5 Yours Li Ming一般不这样写，而要加上Sincerely,同时Li Ming两个首字母记得大写。6作文要多练习7下行2：00-5：00做英语（这段时间内可不能总是想着上厕所）切记小作文一般就写到页底就可以了。不要翻页什么的！第一段另一版本What an amusing and interesting painting it is! Its indicative of a common ,.yet serious social phenomenon：（描述+补充描述）。However, ridiculous and farfetched, as the above image looks/seems to be/is ,the drawer obviously intends for deeper meanings.第三版本How interesting and instructive (有教育意义的) the above paint it is!It is so funny that whoever in front of it cannot help laughing:描述+补充描述。Simple as the image seems to be ,the intended meaning goes far deeper. What on earth does implicit the picture really aim to mirror? 第二段开头There is no denying the fact that开头句1，Obviously,we can early define what the drawer intends /aims/attempts to reflect for us, and the strong and attempts dear message, suggested/communicated/presented here is that(主旨)开头句2， It goes without saying that (跟上句)开头句3 ，This drawing goes far more than a simple drawing, indeed跟开头3，It carries a thought-provoking social implication:主旨（现在越来越多人的想法A increasing number of people开头4 ，what the drawing vividly mirrors goes far beyond a simple drawing. Instead, it carries important implications:主旨第二段论据：1 It is alarming that similar events are available in nearly all walks of life, and one of my former colleagues may serve as a good example,举例子.2) Nowhere in history has the issue of(主旨) been concerned so much as in our society.倒装notso much as 大结构史上任何时都比不上今天我们社会这样更加关切这件事情3）It should be observed that upsetting parallels can be are available readily found anywhere in our contemporary communityA case in point is an acquaintance of mine, who举例。According to a survey/conduct by CCTV last OCTOBER,78.6% of the people 主旨“”says Dr Wang万能作文word模板一共三段，每个段都有备选句型句子若干，可选用自己喜欢的自由组合。开头段：（3个句子，任选其一）1.Whoever in front of this image will be very much/highly/greatly amused/interested/shocked/stroked。How interesting and enlightening it is! What is conspicuously/clearly illustrated/presented/portrayed in the drawing above is that_ + 描述图). Odd and funny as it seems/looks to be, such/this happening/ practice/ phenomenon/ story./ case/ event are so pervasive/ widespread that we cant afford to ignore them . 2.what an amusing and interesting painting it is! It is indicative of common, yet serious social phenomenon:描述+补充描述.However ridiculous and farfetched, as the above image looks/seems to be, the drawer obviously intends for deeper meanings than what is shown superficially. 3.How interesting and instructive the above painting it is. It is so funny that whoever in front of it cannot help laughing: 描述+补充描述，simple as the image seems to be, the intended/implied meaning goes far deeper. What on earth does the picture really aim to mirror? 第二段：第一句话：（4个备选句型，任选其一）1.There is no denying the fact that/. Obviously, we can easily define what the drawer intends to reflect to us, and the strong and dear message suggested have is that+主旨：2.It goes without saying that +主旨 不言而喻那3.This drawing goes far more than a simple drawing. Indeed, it carries a thought-provoking social implication:+主旨 （这张图画超出一张简单图画的范围。的确，它运载一种令人深思的社会涵义）4.What the drawing vividly presents goes far beyond a simple drawing. Instead, it carries important implications: 主旨 （这幅图画生动地描绘的远在一张简单的图画之外。 而且，它运载重要涵义）第二句话：结合举例说明，有以下3个句型，任选其一1. It is alarming that similar events are available in nearly all walks of life, and one of my former colleagues may serve as a good example+例子 2. Nowhere in history has the issue(of+主旨) been concerned so much as in our society. 3. It should be observed that upsetting parallels can be readily found anywhere in all walks of life. A case in point is an acquaintance of mine, who +举例,According to a survey(conduct by CCTV/china daily last October, 78.6% of the people (主旨)one following the tide） 第三句话：1/2/3+Failure to realize the severity of this grim situation will inevitably decrease our chances of success. And failure to come up with countermeasures will do more harm to our country. If such stories go unchallenged it is hard imagine what our society will be like years later. Indeed, it is imperative that the whole society be made aware that any prompt action is of great benefit to all. 第三段：(任选一组)1. Much can be done what tops the agenda, I deem, is to help people develo