透视五年上海高考英语作文试题ppt课件.ppt

透视五年上海高考英语作文试题 1 高考作文的评分标准 内容 分 语言 分 组织结构 分 共计 分 内容要求 A档 分重点明确 内容充实B档 分重点明确 内容较充实C档 分重点明确 但内容单薄 D档 分重点不明确 内容松散 E档 分严重离题 2 高考作文的评分标准 语言要求 语言表达正确 文字流畅 分 语法 措词等错误 每处扣 分 同一错误不重复扣分 单词拼写 标点 大小写等错误 每处扣 分 同一错误不重复扣分 每句扣分不超过 分 语言分最多扣 分 3 高考作文的评分标准 组织结构要求 凡内容和语言两部分得分超过 分 词数超过 个 并符合下列条件者可加分 凡全文的措词 句子结构 上下文连贯性等方面比较出色者 可酌情加 分 凡内容充实 语言正确 用词贴切的优秀作文 可加 分 词数要求 不足 个酌情扣分 少于 个 总分得分最多不超过 分 4 记叙文的写作 WriteanEnglishcompositionabout100to120words accordingtothesituationgiveninChinese 我最难忘的一课 具体说明为何难忘 感想 年上海高考题 5 Inmyschoollife Ihaveattendedmanyclasses ButthemostunforgettablelessonIhaveeverhadisanEnglishlessonwhenIwasatGradeTwo Itistheteacher swayofteachingthatIalwaysremember Ontheday wetookoutourEnglishbooksandwaitedforourEnglishasusual Buttooursurprise sheenteredtheclassroomwithouttheEnglishbook butaradioandsomepaperinstead ShegaveoutthepaperandtoldusthatwewouldlearnanEnglishsongandsheaskedusfillintheblanksinthepaperwhilewelistenedtothesong Howwonderful Itwasthefirsttimethatwehadhadsuchatext Wewereveryexcitedandlistenedtothesongverycarefully Whatsurprisedusmostwasthatwecouldmemorizethewordsmorequicklythaneverbefore Ilikethelesson ThisnewmethodofteachingmakesiteasyforustolearnEnglishwords ItcanalsodevelopourinterestinEnglish Iwillneverforgetmylesson 6 SIMILARTOPICS AnunforgettabletestAnunforgettablepersonAhappyjourneyGreatchangesonthecampus inShanghai inmyneighbourhood AclassmeetingbeforegraduationMyfavouriteTVprogramsGrowingpains 7 提示作文的写作 根据提示用英语写出一段 词的短文 一些学生认为学英语很重要 一些学生认为不必学英语 我认为 观点 理由 年上海高考题 8 People sviewsonlearningEnglishvaryfrompersontoperson Somethinkintoday sworldweneedtomakefrequentcontactswithdifferentpeopleindifferentpartsoftheworld soitisabsolutelynecessarytolearnEnglish OthersconsiderEnglishuseless TheyfeellearningEnglishisnothingbutaburden ButIregardEnglishasoneofthemostimportantsubjects OfallthesubjectsIlikeEnglishbest ThereareseveralreasonswhyIlikeEnglishbest 9 Firstly Englishisoneofthemostwidelyusedlanguagesintheworld NearlyallinformationontheInternetandoverhalfoftheworld stechnicalmaterialsareinEnglish Therefore agoodcommandofEnglishwillgreatlybenefitmeinmywork Secondly astheworldbecomesmoreandmoreglobalized weneedtolearnmoderntechnologyinordertocatchupwithdevelopedcountries AsolidfoundationofEnglishmeanschancesandopportunities Inthecompetitionforawell paidjob theonewhocanspeakfluentEnglishhasanadvantageoverthosewhocannot ForallthesereasonsweshouldnotonlylearnEnglishbutmasteritintheshortesttimepossible 10 SIMILARTOPICS StudyingabroadNecessityforexaminationsMyviewonmixed abilityteachingShouldastudentownamobilephone Studentsdoingpart timejobs TheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofprivatetutoringMyviewonschooluniformsStudentsdoingcosmeticsurgery MyviewonraisingpetsHowtospendaweekend TheTeacher studentrelationshipShouldprivatecarsbeencouragedinChina 11 看图作文的写作 WriteanEnglishcompositioninover120wordsonthepictureandinstructionsgiven 2002上海高考题 12 Duetotheone childpolicyinChina mostfamilieshaveonlyonechildandthereforethischildisregardedasthetreasureofthewholefamily Boththeparentsandgrandparentsusuallyover indulgethechild Wecanseeinthepicture whenachildislearningtoridebicycle theparentsandgrandparentsaresweatingfromrunningalongsidethebikeandaretryingtheirbesttoprotestthechild forfearthatsheshouldfallandhurtherself Weallknowthegreatestgloryconsistsnotinneverfalling butinrisingeverytimewefall SoIthink fortheparents theyshouldbeawareofthenegativeeffecttoomuchpamperinghasontheirchild Undertheparents protection thechildrenknowonlycomfortandease Iftheydon tlearnhowtoliveindependently howcantheycopewiththeadversitieswhichtheywillmeetwithinthefuture 13 Forthechildren theyshouldlettheirparentsknowthattheyhaveconfidenceinthemselvesandareabletoexistinthecompetitivecommunitywithouttheconstantwatchfuleyeofaneagerparent Thepathtosuccessisfilledwithvariouskindsofdifficultiesandobstacles Onlywhenwehavelearnedtostandonourowntwofeet canwesurviveinthe21stcentury 14 SIMILARTOPICS AvideogametrapHowtospendholidaysTrafficrulesarethefriendsofourlives材料的来源 报纸 杂志 漫画书上的comics 15 图表作文的写作 根据所给图表 简要描述某城市试题近年每百人受机用户的增长情况 并试分析其增长的原因 年上海春考 16 Thechartaboveindicatesthatthenumberofmobilephoneshasincreasedinthecityinrecentyears Between1995and1999thenumberofmobilephoneusersincreasedby10percenteachyear In2001 thenumberalmostdoubled Itispredicatedthatthenumberwillskyrocketintheyearstocome Thereasonfortheincreasecanbevarious Firstamobilephoneisconvenientforpeopleespeciallybusinesspeople Becauseofitssmallsize lightweightandportability youneedn tgotoaphoneboothtomakeatelephonecall Oneusersays Withamobilephone Icanmakeaphonecalltodobusinesswithoutworryingabouttimeandspace Thissavesmetimeandtrouble 17 Besides mobilephonesarefindingtheirwayintoordinaryfamilies Mobilephoneloverstalkwiththeirfriends familymemberswhenevertheylike Ofcourse therearesomeotherpeoplebuyingmobilephonesmerelytofollowthefashionorshowtheirpositioninsociety Whateverreasonitmaybe Ithinktheincreasewillcontinueintothefuturebecausetheycanmakeourlifeconvenientandtheworldsmaller 18 SIMILARTOPICS 1 请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后 对家庭 环境 经济可能产生的影响 年高考试题 大学入学人数三年递增说明的问题及你的感想 长假期间人们不同的休闲方式及你的分析或建议 19 书信类作文的写作 你的好友因为家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐 给他写份信 谈谈你的看法和建议 收信人 徐海青寄信人 黄平写信日期 2003年6月8日 年高考试题 20 June8 2003DearXuHaiqing Yousaidinyourletterthatmanyofyourclassmateswerewearingfashionableclothes butyoucouldn taffordtobuythebestbrands Soyoufeltverydepressed Therearedifferentviewsonpeople swear Thefollowingaremyideasaboutit firstly youshouldn tputtoomuchemphasisonphysicalappearance Youmustalwaysrememberthemostimportanttaskforyoutodayistoconcentrateyourattentiononyourstudies Nomatterwhatyouwear youwillreallylookyourbestwhenyoucomeoutfirstinyourexaminations 21 Afamoussayinggoes Frugalityisthemothero