高考英语二轮复习 23 书面表达考点模拟训练考点模拟训练.doc

专题三书面表达最后一道关卡校园生活高考真题：(湖南卷)假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为期两个月的活动。现在，你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请写一篇英语发言稿，主要内容如下：1简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动；2谈谈你们开展该活动的收获。注意：1.词数不少于120个；2不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【满分佳作】 boys and girls，today ill_talkabout our english club.our english club was_set_uptwo months ago.now we have members of 25.we meet once a week on saturday afternoon.so far we_haveconducted_a_variety_of_activities_on_english_learning，such_as_watching_english_films，including_a_christmas_party_and_getting_together_with_foreign_students.last week we held an english storytelling competition.we required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in english within five minutes.every member took an active part in the activity.two foreign english teachers were invited to act as judges.at last li bing won the first place.many members said the activity benefited them in many ways.not_only_did_it_improve_their_spoken_english，but_also_it_brought_them_much_fun.they hope many such activities can be held.thats all.thank you.【亮点展示】 1时态的灵活运用是本文的一大特点。2此句的出现为文章增色不少，展示了作者扎实的语法功底。3not only.but also使用准确恰当，属高级句型，提升了文章的语言档次。【话题必背】 1必背词汇crazy着迷的，疯狂的masses of大量的a variety of各种各样的various各种各样的outofclass课外的afterclass课后的activity活动participate(in.)参加take part injoin in参加(某活动)midterm exam期中考试endofterm examfinal exam期末考试extra额外的hesitate犹豫，迟疑opportunity机遇a knowledge of.方面的知识broaden ones horizons拓宽视野major in主修weekly meeting每周例会spirit精神in high/low spirits情绪高昂/低落gain获得acquire获取employ利用，雇佣determined有决心的determination决心persevere坚持；不屈不挠perseverance坚韧不拔colorful多姿多彩的entertainment娱乐(活动)recreation娱乐活动amusement消遣(活动)picnic野餐camp野营campsite野营地accompany陪伴entrance examination入学考试a piece of cake很容易的事，小菜一碟school clinic学校诊所get fully developed得到全面发展make use of利用make the best/most of善用/充分利用get in touch with与(某人)取得联系keep in touch with与(某人)保持联系say goodbye to sb向某人道别wave goodbye to sb向某人挥手道别2必背语句(1)he is crazy about english.nothing delights him so much as reading english stories.他对英语很着迷。没有什么能比读英语故事更让他高兴的了。(2)we have masses of homework to do every day.每天我们都有大量的作业要做。(3)there are varieties of outofclass activities in our school，which we can take part in after class.在我们学校有各种各样的课外活动，我们课后可以参加。(4)we have got to have extra lessons during the holiday.我们在这些假日里也要补课。(5)recently we have had a heated discussion as to whether we should have term exams.最近我们就是否应该进行学期考试进行了激烈的讨论。(6)we learned to use knowledge gained in the classroom，solving problems by ourselves.我们学会了使用我们在课堂上学到的知识，自己解决问题。(7)we must keep up our spirits in class.我们课堂上要振作精神。(8)only by reading widely can we gain more knowledge and broaden our horizons.只有博览群书我们才能增长知识开拓视野。(9)we should employ every possible opportunity to acquire more useful knowledge and get fully developed.我们应利用一切可以利用的机遇获取更多的知识并得到全面的发展。(10)we gathered at the school gate and started out at seven oclock.we got a warm welcome upon our arrival.我们在校门口集合，7点出发。一到那儿就受到了热烈的欢迎。(11)it takes years of hard work to speak good english.讲一口流利的英语需要多年的努力。(12)im determined to do well in my lessons so as not to let my parents down.为了不让我的父母失望，我决心把功课学好。(13)i accompanied him to the school clinic.我陪他去了校医务室。【模拟练习】 最近，李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹(在上周六下午，不顾天气炎热，为班级选购歌咏比赛服装)，用英语为班级板报写一篇120左右个词的短文。你的文章应包括下列要点：1李越的事迹及其对同学的影响；2你的评论。注意：1.文章的标题和开头已给出(不计入总词数)。2参考词汇：singing contest歌咏比赛costume服装star student of the weekli yue has been awarded the title of “star student of the week”for what she did for our class._【参考范文】star student of the weekli_yue_has_been_awarded_the_title_of_“star_student_of_the_week”_for_what_she_did_for_our_class.last saturday afternoon，li yue，in spite of hot weather，went downtown to buy the costumes that we would need for the singing contest.she looked for them from one shop to another.she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting，and finally she found the right ones for us.when she came back with the costumes，she was already exhausted.deeply moved by her great deed，we all did our best and finally won the first place in the contest.not only does li yue do well in her studies，but she also is always concerned about the class.she is so warmhearted that she often devotes her spare time to helping others.we all think that she deserves the title for “star student of the week”and she has set a good example to us and we should learn from him.书信交流高考真题：(新课标)假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest)。希望附近某大学的外籍教师smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间：6月15日下午2：005：00地点：501教室参赛选手：10名学生联系人：李华(电话44876655) 欢迎大家光临注意：词数100左右。dear mrs.smith，_with best wishes.li hua【满分佳作】 dear_mrs_smith，im honored to write to invite you to our english contest.im li hua，chairman of the students union of yucai high school.as is known to us all，nowadays pollution causes a lot of problems.so we will hold this contest，of which the topic is human and nature to appeal to students to protectour environment.consideringyou are an expert in english，we would like you to be our judge and make some commentsand give some valuable advice.i would appreciate it if you accept our invitation.the contest will be on from 2：00 to 5：00 on june 15th in room 501.there are ten competitors in all.if you want further information，please call me at 44876655.thank you for reading my letter.im looking forward to your reply soon. with_best_wishes.li_hua【亮点展示】 1be/feel honored(to do sth)“(做某事)感到荣幸”，用这一结构形式来邀请外籍老师非常得体。如果写成ill invite you to.则显得比较随意。2appeal to sb to do sth“呼吁某人做某事”，这一高级词汇使语言表达更加到位，且更有文采。3considering可以用作连词，意思是“考虑到，就而言，鉴于”。4这一短语的意思是“对进行评论”。5此句话的意思“如果你能接受我的邀请，我将不胜感激”。“it”在句子里做形式宾语，此类动词还有love，hate等。【满分理由】 文章以清新自然的格调，真诚礼貌地邀请smith女士做演讲比赛的评委。文章如行云流水，自然流畅。be honored to do sth，i would appreciate it if.，im looking forward to your reply soon.较纯正地道的表达使语言更加得体。一些较高级的语法结构，如as引导的定语从句放句首，介词后接which引导定语从句，considering用作连词等，提升了语言的档次。【话题必背】 1必背词汇concerning/as to/regarding/involving关于appreciate感激look forward to盼望apply申请recommand推荐candidate候选人generous慷慨的relief安慰；considerate体谅的；encouragement鼓励flooded area洪泛区，quakestricken areas地震灾区beyond description难以描述的apology道歉misunderstanding误解inconvenience不便do sb wrong冤枉某人put sb too much trouble给某人添了很多麻烦feel sympathy for同情congratulate祝贺remarkable出色的achievement成就come true实现unbelievable令人难以置信的talented有才能的impressive给人印象深刻的accomplish完成make an effort to do sth努力做某事；take.for granted认为理所当然think highly of对评价很高promising有前途的determined坚决的perseverance坚韧不拔put ones heart into/set ones mind on全身心投入到2必背语句(1)keep on trying，and youll make it.继续努力，你会成功的。(2)youve got a great personality and have a good sense of humour.你个性很好，又有幽默感。(3)ill back you up no matter what is happening.无论发生什么事情，我都会支持你。(4)i am so pleased and happy to hear that you did very well in the national entrance examination.听说你高考考得很好，我非常高兴。(5)i write to congratulate you upon getting a first in the oral english contest.我写信来祝贺你在口语比赛中得第一名。(6)i apologize most sincerely for what i said that day.i didnt mean to hurt you.我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。(7)i regret to say that i am unable to attend your birthday party because my father is ill.很遗憾，我无法去参加你的生日聚会，因为我的父亲病了。(8)please dont hesitate to turn to me if theres something i can do for you.如果我能为你做点什么，请尽管跟我说。(9)we expressed our deep regret over the misunderstanding between each other.我们为互相之间的误会表示遗憾。(10)on behalf of my whole family，i would like to extend my sincere gratitude for your help.我代表我全家对你们的帮助表示真诚的感谢。(11)i am writing to express my thanks for you help while i was in england.我写这封信是为了表达我对你的感谢，谢谢你在我在英国期间对我的帮助。(12)not only does he do well in science，but he is also good at arts.他理科学得很好，文科也很擅长。(13)i think i am the right person for the job you advertised.我认为我是你们招聘职位的最佳人选。(14)if you need to know any more about me，please contact me at 9234488.如果您想了解我的更多信息，请拨打9234488联系我。(15)i would be forever grateful if you could send me information concerning the activity.如果你能将关于该项活动的有关信息发给我，我将不胜感激。(16)in my personal opinion，it would be wise of you to take the following action.在下认为，如果你能采取下列措施，将是一种明智的选择。【必背模板】 1建议信模板建议信一般分为三个部分：说明建议的内容；提出建议的原因；指出采纳建议的好处。dear bob，im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to(引出对方需要建议的主题)。here are a few suggestions(引出作者建议)：first，it is important to. then，it also helps to. besides，it should be a good idea to. you can also.(根据要求用不同的句式提出建议)as to.，i suggest(需要具体到某一方面)。in addition(其他的建议)。im sure(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心)。im looking forward to(表达愿望)。yours sincerely，li hua2邀请信模板dear mr.white，(开门见山地提出活动的地点和时间)it would be pleasant to have you here(表达邀请愿望)will you give me the pleasure of your company(正式发出邀请)?during the party time/conference，we will have lots of activities/points you will be interested in(开始介绍活动的内容)first(介绍要举行的活动一)second，(介绍要举行的活动二)i know/believe you will be very interested.(引出受邀请人参加的理由)first/for one thing.(希望受邀请人参加的理由一)second/for another.(希望受邀请人参加的理由二)the party/conference would not be completed without you(总结受邀请人参加的必要性)!the party time/conference will begin at.(提出活动的地点)is it possible for us to meet at the.(提出具体约定时间)？we do hope you can come.(再一次发出邀请)yours sincerely，li hua3感谢信模板dear bob，im now writing to express my sincere thanks for.(直接表达谢意)id like you to know how much your.(表达自己非常珍惜对方的付出或礼物)meant to me.you have a positive genius for.(对对方的赞美)i not only enjoyed.，but also.(表述对方的恩惠对自己的影响)。i.(介绍自己的近况)i hope to have the opportunity of.(表达出自己希望有回报的机会)would you kindly let me know.(询问对方是否有时间)？i will feel very honored and pleased if you have time to.(表达自己回报的心情)how nice it would be to see you again.(提出希望下次见面的愿望)!i repeat my thanks again for.(再次表示感谢)please give my kind regards to your.(最后表达真挚的祝福)yours sincerely，li hua4道歉信模板dear bob，i am excessively sorry to say/tell you that.(直接说出道歉事由)now i am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret.please accept my sincere apology.i hope you will understand me and excuse me for.(请求对方原谅的事由)the reason for my delay/absence was that.(过失的原因)。i had no way out because(自己当时的处境和情况)therefore its not in my power to.(过失导致的结果)naturally，i want to suggest.(建议下次再实现愿望)yours sincerely，li hua【模拟练习】 假如你是李华，你的好友tom不善于交际，来信总是向你诉说他在交往方面的烦恼，请你就此向你的朋友提出一些建议。建议内容包括以下几点：1宽容2多微笑3和别人在一起时，不要保持沉默注意：1.词数120左右；2可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。dear tom，_yours，li hua【参考范文】 dear_tom，you often tell me about your difficulty in making friends and communicating with others.here are my suggestions and i hope they can help.be tolerant.everyone has his or her own personalities，some of which may annoy you，but you should realize everyone is different and that your personality may also annoy others.if you think a person is so difficult to get along with，it may be just because he deals with something in a way different from yours.smile as much as possible.smiling is a friendly language.smiles can fill the gaps between people.if you smile a lot，you are sure to make a lot of friends.dont keep silent when you are with someone.if others dont talk，you may start a relaxing conversation with a topic that everybody has something to talk about，such as food and sports.dont ask others about any private problem，for it is impolite in every country.above is all i have in mind.remember being active and outgoing can help you to do better in communication.best wishes.yours，li_hua社会实战高考真题：(2013安徽)假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“on the way to school”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：1遵守交通法规；2注意举止文明。注意：1.词数120左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数。【满分佳作】on the way to schoolthese days，breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon，causing serious harm to life and the environment.changing this situation requries considerable effort on the part of everyone.as for me，it should start on my way to school.i will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.if i ride a bike, ill always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green.if i walk，ill never forget to use the pedestrian crossing.meanwhile，i will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy.not only will i keep from littering and spitting anywhere, i will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible.i hope my behavior will make a difference.【亮点展示】 1首段连续运用了动词的ing形式，做主语及状语，语言连贯，表述准确。2第二段连用了两个if引导的条件状语从句，衍接词meanwhile，倒装句，省略结构whenever possible，使文章增色不少。3该文条理清晰、表达连贯、形式多变、词汇高级。【话题必背】 1必背词汇club 俱乐部competition竞赛rewards奖励social practice社会实践parttime jobs业余工作vacation jobs假期工作prepare lessons备课have lessons上课miss a lesson误一节课afterschool/extracurricular activities课外活动social investigation社会调查voluntary labor义务劳动have a picnic/barbecue去野餐/烧烤make progress in.在方面取得进步lay a good foundation in在方面打下良好的基础be prepared to do准备做decide/be determined to决定phenomenon现象，conscience良知，be keeon喜爱beneficial有益的，make sense行得通，make a difference重要，lay/place emphasis on强调，teamspirit团队，精神；social practice社会实践；voluntary志愿的；to ones surprise/joy/excitement使某人感到惊讶/快乐/激动的是；get fully developed得到全面发展2必背语句(1)the results seem to suggest that teenagers are more easily addicted to computer games.结果似乎表明，十几岁的青少年更容易沉溺于电脑游戏。(2)with the aim of helping create a harmonious class，our monitor carried out a series of measures.为了创建一个和谐班级，我们的班长采取了一系列的措施。(3)as an old saying goes，nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind on it.俗话说得好，世上无难事，只怕有心人。(4)her diligence has set an example to others.她的勤奋为他人树立了榜样。 (5)wonderful as it is，it also has its own disadvantages.然而，尽管很好，它也有不足。(6)on the one hand，they encourage us to get fully developed，but on the other hand，they wish us to devote all our time to studying our lessons.他们一方面鼓励我们全面发展，可另一方面他们又希望我们将时间全部用在学习功课上。(7)the number of the students in this school who have been admitted to university has increased by 10%，to more than 900，compared with last year.与去年相比，今年该校被大学录取的学生的数量增加了10%，达到了900多人。(8)we set off early in the morning and it took us more than two hours to get there.我们一大早就出发了，花了两个多小时才到达那儿。(9)on our arrival，we were warmly welcomed by the local people.我们一到达，就受到了当地人的热烈欢迎。(10)my teacher encourage us to take part in some social practice in our summer holidays，which they think can help get ourselves fully developed.我的老师鼓励我们暑假期间参加一些社会实践活动，他们认为这有助于我们得到全面发展。(11)to our surprise，they seemed to show no interest in trying kicking the harmful habit.使我们感到惊讶的是，对于尝试改掉那种有害的习惯他们似乎不感兴趣。【模拟练习】 你是21世纪英文报(21st century)的读者，也经常向该报投稿。她的这就是生活栏目(thats life)的下期话题是：failure happens when you quit.to go on till you succeed is what life is all about.该栏目编辑向你约稿，请你发表你的观点并陈述理由，词数120左右。_【参考范文】 my understanding of life is to achieve goals，big or small，through efforts.to succeed doesnt necessarily mean having much money or power；it means we try hard to live a meaningful life rather than give up easily.life is sweet and full of challenges.if we give up too soon，we may miss good opportunities to arrive at our destination in time or even worse，we may drive ourselves into difficult situations.take robinson crusoe for example.if he had been the kind of person to give up without trying，he would have no chance of survival on the deserted island for 27 years.it was hope and perseverance that made his survival possible.so bear this in mind：failure happens when we quit and to go on till you succeed is what life is all about.情感道德高考真题：(2011江苏)右面这幅照片展现了女儿为妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：1描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等。2结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；3举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。注意：1.可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。2词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。the burden of students has been a hot topic for years，but the load of parents has received little attention，especially from their own children._【满分佳作】 the_burden_of_students_has_been_a_hot_topic_for_years，but_the_load_of_parents_has_received_little_attention，especially_from_their_own_children.the picture is very vivid and moving.the little girl comes to greet her mother who gets off work.the girl thinks that her mother must be very tired and need to relax，so she helps her mother remove the heavy bag from her shoulders.the mother kneels down to show how happy and gateful she feels.this touching moment reminds me of my mother who is always doing whatever she can to let me live a happy life without asking for any rewards.the mother would help me and give me the selfless love.but before this i seldom pay any attention to this，even sometimes quarrels with her.now i come to realize the old saving：repay as much as you can for even a little bit of favor you have received.“from now on，i will do my best to help my parents do some household chores to reduce the daily burden of them.the picture has made me realize that love is the warmest emotion in the world.”【亮点展示】 1教育孩子“学会感恩”是一件十分重要的事情。作者用vivid and moving几个形容词来描述这幅令人既温馨又感动的图片，起到吸引读者眼球的功效。vivid and moving的并列使用，表达生动、准确，体现了作者用词的考究。2宾语从句her mother must be very tired and need to relax使用准确恰当，点出了小女孩为什么要为妈妈拿包的原因。3asking for any rewards现在分词作without的宾语，简化了句子结构，提升了句子的文采，为文章锦上添花。4名言“repay as much as you can for even a little