高考英语二轮限时高效训练 短文改错21.doc

2014高考英语二轮限时高效训练：短文改错211.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。recently, as the development of the internet, there is a kind of language calling web language. some people even speak chinese mixed with english letters. the other day our class had a discussion about if we should welcome the web language.forty percent of the students think it ridiculous. they argue that it does no good to help people communicate, nor is it useful for learning english. besides, itll make chinese more standard and pure, finally ruining our mother tongue. however, 69% of our class is fond of it. they think it is simple, convenience and helpful in expressing them. whats more, it may make the language more interesting.personally, its not good habit to use the web language. it may be popular, but you may also make yourself be misunderstood.2.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。sports and games are very useful for character training. in their lessons at the school, boys and girls may learn about such virtues like unselfishness, courage, discipline and love of ones country. so what is learned in books cannot have the same deep effect on childs character as what is learned by experience. as most of the pupils time is spent in classes study lessons, the ordinary day school cant give many practical training for their lives in the future. so it is how the pupils do in the spare time that really prepare them to take their places in society as citizens when they grow up. unless each of them learns to work for his team, and not for himself on the football field, he will later find it naturally to work for the good of his country instead only for his own benefit.3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。when l was in high school, i had an awful experienceat that time l was so brave and outgoing as the othersbecause of that, a boy name big tom would do all kinds of bad things to mei was scaring to see himso yesterday, a friend told me that big tom wanted to see me and invited me to dine outi agreedwe met in a bar and i was so happy that nothing went wellby the end of that night, big tom apologized for what he has done to menow we have become close friendsin our life, everyone may make mistakeswhat counts most are that we have the courage to correct them4. 假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 the other day i happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. i found it prettily good. one who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. sometimes it is the details in that determine our success, for it has a great impact on what were doing. we should form the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. whats more, we should learn to keep balance of quantity and quality. when facing with lots of work, the faster we do them, the more mistakes we usually make. in that case we are possible to neglect the details. so we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of no importance.5.短文改错this morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. at the noon we had a picnic on the grass. i eat too much, so i couldnt finish my sandwich. as i didnt know what to do with it, i asked my sister for advices. she pointed at the notice, that said, “ no litter.” and she asked me throw the sandwich into the litter-basket. just then i saw an elephant coming slow towards us. suddenly an idea came into her mind. i could feed the elephant by my sandwich and i did so in the end. seen this, my sister smiled and said, “what clever you are!”6.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。once, when i was a teenager, my father and i were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter.this family made deep impression on me. there were eight children, both probably under the age of twelve. you could tell they didnt have a lot of money. their clothes was not expensive, and they were clean. the children were well-behaved, all of us standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, held hands. they were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants and another performances where that they would see that night. everyone could sense they have never been to the circus before.试卷答案1.recently, as （改为with）the development of the internet, there is a kind of language calling （改为called）web language. some people even speak chinese mixed with english letters. the other day our class had a discussion about if （改为whether）we should welcome the web language.forty percent of the students think it ridiculous. they argue that it does no good to help （改为helping）people communicate, nor is it useful for learning english. besides, itll make chinese more （改为less） standard and pure, finally ruining our mother tongue. however, 69% of our class is （改为are）fond of it. they think it is simple, (convenience)convenient and helpful in expressing them（改为themselves）. whats more, it may make the language more interesting.personally, its not（加a）good habit to use the web language. it may be popular, but you may also make yourself be （去be）misunderstood.2.1. at 后删the，在学校用at school 2. like 改为 as, such 和as 连用 3. so 改为but，前后句是转折关系 4. study改为 studying，spend some time doing sth. 5. many 改为 much, training 不可数用much 修饰 6. how改为what，do 后需要宾语用what 7. prepare改为 prepares，prepare的主语是一件事情用单数 8. unless改为 if，句子意思应该是“如果每个人学会为团队工作。” 9. naturally 改为 natural, find+it+形容词 10. instead 后加of， instead是副词，不能直接接宾语3.when i was in high school, i had an awful experience. at that time i was notso brave and outgoing as the others. because of that, a boy name big tom namedwould do all kinds of bad things to me. i was scaring to see him. scaredso yesterday, a friend told me that big tom wanted to see me and invited but inviteme to dine out. i agreed. we met in a bar and i was so happy that nothing went everythingwell. by the end of that night, big tom apologized for what he has done to me. at hadnow we have become close friends.in our life, everyone may make mistakes. what counts most are that we ishave the courage to correct them.4.the other day i happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. i found it prettily good. happened prettyone who wants to achieve great success 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