【红对勾 讲与练】（新课标）高三英语二轮专题复习 专题十九 短文改错（含解析）.DOC

专题十九短文改错高考精萃(一)(2014辽宁卷)dear jeremy and alice，although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors, were hoping to settle something that bothers to us. in a word, your dogcleo.weve called several time about cleos early morning barking. it is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute shes outside. the early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. beside, cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. this morning she starts barking even before 5 oclock. that is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.we appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.sincerely，jack and rose答案 (二)(2014陕西卷)my father took me out camping for the first time when i was seven. he wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. my uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.one evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. just then a bird was flying over us. my uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. neither of the arrows hit the target. suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the skythey were looked like rain! we ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.that day i didnt learn much about animals, insects or trees, but i learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!答案 (三)(2014四川卷)hello, boys and girls! today, i am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. if you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. stay close to your teacher and classmate. dont panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. if its a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. if you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.答案(四)(2014课标全国卷)nearly five years before，and with the help by our father, my sister and i planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果) in our back garden. since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to selfseed where they please. as result, the plants are growing somewhere. the fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. there are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. we are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!答案 (五)(2014课标全国卷)my dream school starts at 8：30 am. and ends at 3：30 pm. they are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. we didnt need to do so many homework. therefore, we have more time with afterschool activities. for example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.my dream school look like a big garden. there are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. we can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. the teachers here are kind and helpfully. they are not only our teachers but also our friends.答案 (六)(2014浙江卷)i was taking a train to londons victoria station. i had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. a passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset. then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. the person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.no one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticketowner before. yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. if we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.答案 (七)(2013新课标全国卷)i hardly remember my grandmother. she used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. i was only four when she passes away. she is just a distant memory for me now.i remember my grandfather very much. he was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. he had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. in a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. however, he was the gentlest man i have never known.答案 (八)(2013课标全国卷)the book im reading of talks about afternoon tea in britain. it is said to have started in the early 1800s. have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at night. this custom soon becomes another meal of day. interesting, it had a connection by the british porcelain(瓷器) industry. tea in china was traditionally drank from cups without handles. when tea got popular in britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit british habits. this made for the grow in the porcelain industry.答案 (九)(2013辽宁卷)mr. johnson is a hardworking teacher. every day, he spends too much time with his work. with little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. hard work have made him very ill. “he has ruined his healthy. we are worried about him.” that is which other teachers say. yesterday afternoon, i paid visit to mr. johnson. i was eager to see him, but outside her room i stopped. i had to calm myself down. quietly i step into the room. i saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. i understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.答案 (十)(2013陕西卷)my grandfather and i enjoy fishing.one sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. we took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. as soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. before waiting for about half an hour, i was beginning to get impatiently. i wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. it was delicious.答案 (十一)(2013浙江卷)dear diary，here i am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. do you want to know why we move last week? dad lost his job, and as mom explained, “he was lucky to find other one.” his new job meant i had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else i love in the world. to make matters bad, now i have to share a room with my younger sister, maggie. tomorrow is first day of school. i am awfully tiring, but i know ill never fall sleep.good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.yours，rosemary答案 (十二)(2013四川卷)today we had a chemistry test. i found the test difficulty, but i tried hardly to do it. suddenly mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. after think for some time, i let her copy my answers. but after the test, all of us were called to the teachers office. the teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. we were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. i was very upset. i didnt cheat. i was just helping a friend. why does she punish me?答案模拟精选(一)(2014太原一模)more and more foreigners like to come to china. last friday our school was invited a foreign teacher in our city give a class to the students of senior grade two. we found his class interested. i learned a lot from him. the teacher had a free talk to us with easy english. he spoke slow so that we could understand him well. sometimes he repeated what we dont understand. my classmates were all active in the class. to his joy, i understood everything the teacher said. and i was able to ask question in english. this class encouraged me very much. im sure that until we keep on practicing, it will be easy for us to learn speaking english well.答案 (二)(2014陕西宝鸡质检二)mr. wilson likes fresh air more than anybody elses. he likes nearly all the other games in the fresh air. he always sleeps with his windows fully open. he has an open car with no roof, but he drives it madly through the fresh air. whenever he enters a room where the windows were shut, he will immediately open it. he does this even when snow is fallen outside. if someone shut the windows again, he will walk out the room angrily at once. once on the freezing night, after he failed to open the windows at a hotel, he became so angry that he broke the glasses with his shoe.答案 (三)(2014成都二诊)we are what we eat. so it is less important to form good eating habits. however, bad eating habits existed among students. some of us often go to school without breakfast, and some are particularly about food, for example. to keep healthy, we sbould have healthy diet, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, fruit as well as the main food. besides, wed better have meal regularly. we should try develop good eating habits to build ourselves, preparing ourselves for which our future may require. only in this way can we have enough of energy to study or live better.答案 (四)(2014河南洛阳统考)im very grateful to my parents. they not only gave me life, but also brought me up with endless love and support, feel so proud of my every improvements. i still remembered once i was seriously ill, they were so worrying and almost kept me company the whole night. now im grade 3. lucky for me，my parents can understand my stressful condition but often communicate with me with encouraging words. furthermore, they give me enough personal space，which i appreciate it so much.what i should do now are study hard. when i grow up, i will become an useful person and make my parents live a happy life.答案 (五)(2014长春第一次调研)my uncle was the biology professor. when i was young he was used to take me to the biology lab, when i saw pigs, cats and other animals. my uncle also influenced me through nature walks. he often takes me for a walk in the backyard. we would catch frogs and snake, and find fireflies in the sky. he seemed know everything about wildlife. eighteen years later, think about my uncle and her influence on my life，i feel very lucky. i am grateful that i got the chance to learn for him. he helped me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes death around me.答案(六)(2014石家庄质检二)ive learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for receptionist. im very interesting in the job and id like to apply to the position.first of all，allow me to introduce myself. i had just graduated from senior high school and taken the college entrance examination. i want to find out a parttime job in the summer. im 18 year old and have a good command of english，especial in terms of speaking and listening. in fact，i once won first prize in the english speech competition hold in our school. besides, im quite easygoing but therefore very popular among my classmates.i sincerely hope you can give us a chance. im looking forward to your early reply.答案 (七)(2014河北保定一模)last summer，i was going to visit a friend in hangzhou. i went to the station to buy ticket. after get it，i turned back pick up my bag from the floor. to my shock, i found it had gone. luckily i had all my money in my pocket，but the only clothes i had was those i was wearing on. i felt quite uneasy. when i finally arrived at my friend home，she lent me several change of clothes. i was very happy that i can wear clean but beautiful clothes at last.答案 (八)(2014四川卷)recently i have been quarrelling about my mother over whether i can watch tv after the school. she holds the view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lesson. it seems to her that i am allowed to watch tv, i wont be able to control me and ill forget all about my studies. she also thinks that it is bad to my eyes. but i really cant accept her ideas. in my opinion, watch tv can set my mind at rest after a days hard work. besides，it is important for me to know what had happened both at home and abroad. however，i shouldnt be forbidden to watch tv.答案 (九)(2014浙江名校联盟第一次联考)on my way to work i would see this old man sitting beside the road and waved at everyone which passed by. i noticed that he sat there every day even if it was raining or very hot outside.one day while going to work i remembered that i had a umbrella at my house, but i turned around, got the umbrella, and took it him. he was so happy and for about another six month i saw him sitting beside the road waving at people from under the umbrella.i late found out that the man had died but i hope that the umbrella brings him more happiness while she was making everyone elses days were more pleasant.答案 (十)(2014贵州遵义省级示范高中第二次联考)in recent years scientists have become very concerning about the greenhouse effect. there are gases in the earths atmosphere what act like the glass in a greenhouse. they let the sunlight in, or they dont let the suns heat out. greenhouse gases came from burning coals and oil using by industries，cars, and trucks. these gases are increasing. most scientists are worried about that as these gases increase, the earth will get too warmly. this condition called global warming. if the earth does grow warmer，the ice from the north and south pole will begin to melt. then our oceans will spill over lowlying coastal areas. world leaders is trying to find ways to reduce greenhouse gases.答案 (十一)(2014东北三校第二次联考)time flies! this is a third year that i have been in this school. in the past two and a half years，our school had organized many activities. what impressed me best was an activity called “learning to farm”. in an autumn afternoon, we were sent to a farm which we learned to plant potatoes. having been in the city for so a long time, we were so happy to go to the countryside. after divided into three groups, we started to work. some students cut potatoes into pieces, some dug holes, and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the hole, put the earth back and pushed them down hard. we continued doing that until all the work was done. although we were exhausted，but we felt fulfilled on our way back home.答案time flies! this is third year that i have been in this school. in the past two and a half years，our school organized many activities. what impressed me was an activity called “learning to farm”. an autumn afternoon, we were sent to a farm/ we learned to plant potatoes. having been in the city for a long time, we were so happy to go to the countryside. after divided into three groups, we started to work. some students cut potatoes into pieces, some dug holes, and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the ， put the earth back and pushed the down hard. we continued doing that until all the work was done. although we were exhausted， we felt fulfilled on our way back home.(十二)(2014沈阳质监二)on my way to the bookstore, i noticed a group of people surrounded two anxious foreigners. i stopped and found that they were tourist from canada who careless left a very important wallet in a taxi. i accompanied them to the nearest police station and without their help, we got in touch with the taxi company. we told a moment ago a driver had just turned in a wallet and then a policeman drive us to the company without delay. the two canadians happily claimed their wallet, that contained their passports, flight tickets, some cash or credit cards. they expressed our thanks to me. i feel it is really a great pleasure to help the others.答案on my way to the bookstore, i noticed a group of people two anxious foreigners. i stopped and found that they were from canada who left a very important wallet in a taxi. i accompanied them to the nearest police station and their help, we got in touch with the taxi company. we told a moment ago a driver had just turned in a wallet and then a policeman us to the company without delay. the two canadians happily claimed their wallet, contained their passports, flight tickets, some cash credit cards. they expressed thanks to me. i feel it is really a great pleasure to help others.(十三)(2014甘肃兰州、张掖联合诊断)patience is of great important in our daily life. once i waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. both upset and annoyed，i decided to walk on feet. but no sooner had i left than the bus had arrived. i thought if i had waited for one more minute，i would have caught it. if i chose to take a next bus，i would have to wait for other 30 minutes. only then did i realize my problem. be impatient will probably waste all the effort what we have put in. now whenever i am about to losing my patience, ill think of this experience.答案patience is of great in our daily life. once i waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes ， but no bus came. both upset and annoyed，i decided to walk on . but no sooner had i left than the bus arrived. i thought if i had waited for one more minute，i would have caught it. if i chose to take next bus，i would have to wait for 30 minutes. only then did i realize my problem. impatient will probably waste all the effort we have put in. now whenever i am about to my patience, ill think of this experience.(十四)(2014太原五中第一学期测试)my school has taken on a new look since it moved to a new place. it is quite different of the old one. there used to be only one classroom building and the playground is not large enough for all the student to have sports. sometimes we had to practise run along the streets outside. the teaching conditions were even worst. our teachers were used to teach with only a blackboard, and the experiments could only be done in the classroom. but now besid