广东省花县高考英语二轮复习 书面表达（点睛）浏览（2）.doc

2016（广东）花县高考英语（二轮）书面表达（点睛）浏览（2）【广东省茂名市2014模拟】基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分)最近你听了一场健康讲座，请用英语写一篇短文介绍讲座情况。内容如下：写作内容时间：上月演讲者：健康专家张教授主题：久坐伤身现状：随着电视电脑的发展，人们坐着的时间超过历史上任何时期久坐的危害：颈痛，背痛，肥胖，心脏病，死亡久坐人群：学生，办公室工作者专家建议：（1）养成好习惯：步行或骑自行车上学上班，不乘车开车；走楼梯，不坐电梯；打电话时站立。 （2）特别提示：学生下课期间要起身活动 写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【参考范文】基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分)last month i attended a lecture delivered by professor zhang, a health expert, with the theme of “sitting for too long is bad for peoples health”. from the lecture i learned that with the development of tv and computer, people today sit down more than ever before in history, which has a bad effect on their health. not only can this habit make your neck or back ache, but it may also make your fat, increase the risk of heart disease and even death. to prevent these problems from happening, professor zhang pointed out that those who sit too much, such as students and office workers, should form some good habits in life, such as going to school or work on foot or by bike rather than by car, taking the stairs instead of the elevator and standing while talking on the phone. he particularly reminded us that we students should stand up to do some activities during break time at school.【广东省茂名市2014模拟】读写任务 （共1小题，满分25分） 阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 it was a sunny spring day, but that was lost on me. in my mind a thousand concerns and worries were racing around and around. it seemed as if they were going to ruin my life. i had even foolishly taken the day off work so i could spend more time on my worrying. i couldnt think. i couldnt relax. i couldnt even sit still.hoping to clear my head, i drove to a local lake that had a quiet patharound it. as i walked along my brain continued to race. halfway around i stopped at a small bench and sat down. my legs werent tired, but my brain was exhausted. after sitting a few minutes i just let go and stopped thinking. i listened to the gentle music of the birds singing their love songs in the trees. i watched as the sun shone and danced off the clear waves of the lake. i noticed the first wild flowers of spring growing towards thelight. i breathed in the fresh, clean air. i felt at peace for the firsttime all day. i stayed happily there on that bench for a longtime. and when i finally left i took the peace with me. 写作内容1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120个词就“何以解忧”的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：（1）作为中学生，你产生忧虑的原因及其影响；（2）你是如何调整情绪，摆脱忧虑的；（3）保持好心情的重要性。写作要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】读写任务 （共1小题，满分25分）so worried was the author that he found it difficult to rid himself of concerns and worries. however, while sitting by a lake and enjoying the peace of nature, he felt at peace with himself. (with the mind full of concerns and worries, the author drove to a lake. sitting on a bench and enjoying the peace of nature, he/she rid all the worries of himself/herself and felt at peace.)the experience of the author reminds me of my years in high school, which is a very worrying time for us students. crammed schedules, endless examinations and expectation from parents and teachers are the main causes of my concerns and worries. sometimes, i am too worried to focus on my studies. worse still, my health also suffers a great deal.since too much worry has a bad effect on our studies and lives, effective means should be taken to deal with it. as for me, i usually share my feelings with people around me, like my parents, teachers or friends. besides, i often free myself from worries by listening to music or doing physical activities. if i still cannot rid myself of worries, ill have a good cry and then try to concentrate on my studies.when we are free of worries, we can become healthier, study more efficiently and get along better with other people. in a word, only when we have a good mood can we grow up happily and healthily.【附】说明文型基础写作 专题导读说明文是用简洁的文字介绍事物的特性、构造、变化或结果的文章。高考中，说明文常见的话题有：产品介绍、地点描述、方位描写、变化分析、购物指南和操作说明等。近几年的说明文主要是及时性的说明文。写作这类文章需注意以下几点：1首先要读题审题，弄清需要介绍的内容，把握信息要点，不可遗漏也不能添加。2写作内容要条理清楚，层次分明。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分类法和因果法等；说明自然环境方面的内容常用时空次序法与分类法等。3时态常用一般现在时，当然若是介绍其历史时，要用一般过去时；语态可能用到被动语态；若是介绍地点环境等，要善于运用there be结构。真题典例【2011广东卷】以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道。基本信息：(1)书名：battle hymn of the tiger mother(2)作者：amy chua，美籍华人，耶鲁*大学教授(3)出版时间：2010年(4)内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事(5)效应：引发了中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道：(1)中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售(2)意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法(3)最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛*和耶鲁录取*耶鲁：yale；*哈佛：harvard真题典例【写作内容】根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：1图书的基本信息；2图书的相关报道。【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。version 1：a book entitled battle hymn of the tiger mother by amy chua was published in 2010.it tells how the author，a chinese american and professor at yale university，educated her two daughters in the traditional chinese way.its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior，the traditional chinese way or the american way.it is reported that the chinese version of the book began to sell in china early 2011.unexpectedly，the majority of mothers in china disagree with the author though her 17yearold elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both harvard and yale.version 2：a book entitled battle hymn of the tiger mother was published in 2010.its author is amy chua，a chinese american and professor at yale，who tells stories in her book about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional chinese way.ever since its publication，a heated discussion has been around about whether the chinese way of educating is better than the american way.the chinese version of the book began to sell in china early 2011，but surprisingly most chinese mothers do not agree to amy chuas way of parenting.a recent report says that amys elder daughter,17，has been accepted by both harvard and yale.新题预测【写作内容】请根据以下内容提示写一篇欢迎辞。假定英国客人琼斯(jones)夫妇将到你校参观访问，他们将把一批图书和电脑作为礼物送给你们。你们将送一幅中国画给他们。现在要你准备一篇欢迎辞(speech)，内容包括以下几点：(1)欢迎英国客人来参观我校；(2)感谢他们送的礼物；(3)简单介绍你们学校的情况：学校有90年的历史，现在有两座教学楼、一座实验楼、一个图书馆和一个大运动场；(4)教师工作认真，学生学习努力；(5)欢迎客人在参观后提出建议，以改进学校工作。【写作要求】1只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2开头和结尾已写好，不计入总句数。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】one possible version：ladies and gentl