高考英语一轮写作综合训练18.doc

2014届高考英语一轮写作综合训练18第一节：完成句子阅读下列各小题，根据括号内的汉语提示，用句末括号内的英语单词完成句子。1. dont bother to look for my old dictionary, jason - it _ (出现) some day. (turn)2. i cant tell where mary is, but she _ (可能去了) to meet her classmates, for they want to go to yunnan to work as volunteers. (go)3. it was on the shelf _ (我放鞋子的地方) that i found my car keys. how careless i was! (put)4. hardly _ (我们宣布仪式) open when the rain began to pour down. (declare)5. in the big fire the woman saved a little boy but lost her son. when asked if she regretted _ (没有救) her son, she said she made the right choice. (save)6. hello! is that abc company? could i speak to _ (负责的人) the international sales，please? (whoever)7. he was absent again, which _ (使得我们困难) to carry on with the work. (make)8. as is reported, chen guangbiao, known as chief charitarian in china (“中国首善”)，_(捐献了) billions to helping people in disaster-stricken areas these years. (contribute)9. _ (在水少的地方), it is hard or even impossible to develop good farming. (where)10. when xu benyu graduated from college in 2003, he chose to teach in a mountainous area of gui zhou province when he _ (本可以享受) an easy city life. (enjoy) 2013高考英语（书面表达）怎样写好单位介绍式书面表达单位介绍式书面表达是指介绍学校、工厂、城市、国家等单位的基本情况，它可以以新闻报道、参观欢迎辞、调查报告等体裁出现，叙述风格接近于说明文。高考多次考查单位介绍式书面表达，可见掌握其写作方法和写作技巧有着极其重要的现实意义。写好单位介绍式书面表达应注意下列几点： 请先看下列一则书面表达实例： 假如你是某英语报记者，为了向世界各国报道我国西部开发的有关情况，近日赴西部进行采访。现在，请你将采访到的情况写一篇报道。报道要点如下： 主要概况范围主要有9个省、自治区(autonomous regions),1个直辖市(municipality)面积540万平方公里人口2.85亿实施要点交通建设修建多条公路、铁路资源利用开发利用其丰富的自然资源(resource)人才引进广纳各类专家、技术人员注意：1. 报道必须包括所有要点，但可适当增减细节，使内容连贯。 2. 报道的标题已写好，只需接着写。3. 词数：100左右。 参考例文： new development for central and western china the chinese government has recently decided to develop central and western china. this part of china is mainly made up of nine provinces or autonomous regions and one municipality, covering an area of 5.4 million square kilometers. it has a population of 285 million. our government will pay special attention to its transportation. some highways and railways will be built. to protect nature, farmers will return farmland to forests. as we all know, western china is rich in natural resources, which can be exploited and made full use of. to meet the needs of the development, all kinds of experts and skilled workers are to be brought in. im sure central and western china will take on a new look and have a bright future. 一、回避简单的语法错误，提高语言的准确性 单位介绍式书面表达中具有自我特色的语法错误主要有时态错误和主谓不一致错误。 1. 时态错误 单位介绍式书面表达在时态上呈现出明显的规律性：介绍单位现状应用一般现在时，介绍单位过去情况常用一般过去时，憧憬单位未来应用一般将来时，但相当一部分同学或因时态概念不强、时态意识淡薄，或因不会分析动作发生的时间特点及相应的时态规律，随心所欲地使用时态，造成了很多时态错误，影响了语言表达的准确性。不难想象写上述书面表达习作时如果将介绍单位现状和未来情况的各个要点用同一种时态或随意变换的时态来表达，一定会大幅度降低语言的准确性，影响文章应有得分。所以，同学们应养成时态分析习惯，培养自己分析动作时间背景,巧妙运用时态的能力。 2. 主谓不一致错误 在介绍单位现状的书面表达中使用一般现在时时，不少同学因主谓一致意识不强，出现了主谓不一致错误，尤其当主语为第三人称单数时。一些同学在写文章时眉毛胡子一把抓，不问缘由一律用动词复数形式，而有时主语为复数或 i 时却使用单数动词形式，造成不少主谓不一致的错误。写本篇书面表达习作时有些同学出现了这样的错误：western china include nine provinces or autonomous regions and one municipality. it lie in the west of china. 上述表达出现了两处主谓不一致错误，其原因不是因为小作者没有能力掌握主谓一致的用法，而是因为其没有强烈的主谓一致表达意识和分析习惯，当主语为第三人称单数用于一般现在时时记不得将动词表达为第三人称单数形式，造成多处表达错误，影响了文意的准确传递和文章的得分。*结束 第二节：写作 you are supposed to write a composition on the topic making friends selectively or extensively? you should write about 120 words and base your writing on the outline given below:1. 有些人认为应该有选择地交朋友2. 另一些人认为应该广泛地交朋友3. 你的看法making friends selectively or extensively?_*参考答案1. will turn up 2. may / might have gone 3. where i put my shoes4. had we declared the ceremony 5. not saving / not having saved6. whoever is in charge of8. has contributed9. where there is little water7. made it difficult for us10. could have enjoyedmaking friends selectively or extensively? when it comes to whether we should make friends selectively or extensively, there is no complete agreement among people. some people take it for granted that we should make friends selectively and carefully. however, others maintain that making friends extensively should be regarded as the better choice. those people who hold the first opinion believe that its sensible to look for friends who have similar ideal and outlook on life as well as temperament. in addition, they neednt waste time dealing with the people they dont like and prevent themselves from being affected by those people. however, still others think differently. in their opinions, the more friends we make, the easier our life will be. besides, they argue that we can absorb and learn from the advantages of different people.weighing up these two arguments, i prefer the former one. for one thing, not all friends a