2017_2018学年高中英语Unit3ComputersSectionⅤWriting_想象类作文教学案新人教版.docx

Unit 3 Computers Section Writing-想象类作文想象类作文是作者根据已有的生活经验和知识，超越现实生活来勾画出从未见过或者不曾出现过的生活图景的文章。一、基本结构想象类作文可分为三段：首段，进行概述；中间部分，具体描述；结尾，对文章进行总结。二、增分佳句1My ideal robot in the future will be like .and .or perhaps it will help me .2My ideal robot in the future is called .3He/She does all the work around the house.4He/She is very patient and never complains .5He/She can be with me whenever I feel lonely.6My ideal robot in the future can work as/serve as/be used as .7Great changes will take place in the future.8I believe our dream will come true some day.9Have you ever thought about . in the next 30 or 50 years?10In addition, there will be super computers or robots which can help us do . 题目要求你们班进行了一次关于未来机器人的讨论。作为你们小组的代表，请你以“My ideal robot in the future”为题写一篇英语短文，向同学们介绍你心目中的理想机器人。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为说明文；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3确定时态：本文的主要时态应用一般现在时态。二、构思开头：对我理想的机器人进行总体说明。主体：对我理想的机器人的形态、功能作细致描述。结尾：再次概括评价。第二步：核心词汇想周全1look_like看上去像2remind_sb._of_sth.提醒某人某事3feel_lonely感到孤独4emotion情绪5share_the_joys_and_sorrows分享快乐和痛苦第三步：由词扩句雏形现开头：总体说明1我未来理想的机器人是个漂亮的小女孩，她是蓝色的，身高一米六。My ideal robot in the future is a beautiful little girl, and she_is_blue_and_ about_1.6_metres_tall.主体：描述形态、功能用途2她是世界上最新的，并且看上去像一个真正的女孩。She is the newest in the world, and she looks_like_a_real_girl.3她很聪明，并且能懂我所说的全部，能做我让她做的事。She is very clever, and can understand all I say and do what_I_ask_her_to_do.4不管我什么时候遇到困难，她都可以帮助我写作业并给我一些建议。She can help_me_with_my_homework and give me some_advice_whenever_I_meet_with_difficulties.5她能提醒我任何重要的事，比如：考试，甚至是我的生日。She can remind_me_of_anything_important,_such as exams and even my birthday.6她干的家务最多且不用休息。She does the most of the housework without_having_a_rest.7有了这样的机器人，我就不会再感到孤独，因为不管我什么时候需要，她都能给我唱歌，还会和我一起跳舞。With such a robot, I wont_feel_lonely_any_longer because she can sing and dance to me whenever_I_need.8她会和我一起打网球，并能用话语和手势表达她的感情。她也会分享我的快乐与痛苦。She can play_tennis_with_me and can express her emotions with words and gestures. She shares my joys and sorrows as_well.结尾：再次概括评价9在将来拥有这样一个机器人一定会很有趣。It will be very interesting to_own_such_a_robot in the future.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用非限制性定语从句改写句1My_ideal_robot_in_the_future_is_a_beautiful_little_girl,_who_is_blue_and_about_1.6_metres_tall.2用反问句改写句9Wouldnt_it_be_very_interesting_to_own_such_a_robot_in_the_future?第五步：过渡衔接联成篇My ideal robot in the futureMy_ideal_robot_in_the_future_is_a_beautiful_little_girl,_who_is_blue_and_about_1.6_metres_tall.She_is_the_newest_in_the_world,_and_it_looks_like_a_real_girl._She_is_very_clever,_and_can_understand_all_I_say_and_do_what_I_ask_her_to_do._She_can_help_me_with_my_homework_and_give_me_some_advice_whenever_I_meet_with_difficulties._She_can_remind_me_of_anything_important,_such_as_exams_and_even_my_birthday._She_does_the_most_of_the_housework_without_having_a_rest._With_such_a_robot,_I_wont_feel_lonely_any_longer_because_she_can_sing_and_dance_to_me_whenever_I_need._She_can_play_tennis_with_me_and_ca