高三英语课件：高三英语基础写作五个句子写法.ppt

基础写作 基础写作的命题特点： 考生按所给的内容及要求，用5个规范的英语句子描述所 给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。 简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。 题题型题题量赋赋分时间时间 （分钟钟 ） 基础础写作11510 基础写作的评分标准？ 1 2 3 4 句子内容的完整性(Completeness) 句子结构的正确性(correctness) 句子结构的复杂性(Variety) 句子内容的连贯性(Coherence) 1 Read the topic, then organize the messages in 5 sentences 2 Think of the words, phrases, sentence structures you may use in writing. 3 Change the sentence structure where necessary; 4 Add some conjunctions if needed. Short essay writing is, in fact, to test a students four abilities,as shown in the following diagram. Ability to take in the information given 摄取信息的能力 Ability to analyze what is involved in the topic 分析信息的能力 Ability to build up the frame of the composition 构筑信息的能力 Ability to express yourself 表达信息的能力 一、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个 句子描述全部所给的信息内容。 要求：1. 标题: Something about Lihua 2. 必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给内容. 3. 将五个句子组织成连贯的短文. 姓名: 李华 学校: 育才中学 地址: 中国广州育才路138号 身高: 180cm 头发颜色: 黑色 全家人口: 3人 父母职业: 教师 爱好: 集邮和硬币 掌握外语情况: 英语 写作指导：先写成简单句子，然后 再做组合，连成通顺的5句短文: 1.Lihua is a student from Yucai Middle School. 2. He is 180cm tall. His fair is black. His family is at 138, Yucai Road, Guangzhou, China. His family has three people. Both his parents are teachers. Lihua has two hobbies: collecting stamps and coins. He knows English well and can speak perfect English. 一、Something about Lihua Lihua, who is 180cm tall with black hair, is a student from Yucai Middle School. His family, which is at 138, Yucai Road, Guangzhou, China, has got three people. Both his parents are teachers. Lihua has two hobbies, which are collecting stamps and coins. He knows English well and can speak perfect English. 二、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个 句子描述全部所给的信息内容。 1、标题：Top Meal of the Day 2、必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容 。 3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。 原因：晚上学习太晚，不吃早餐可以多睡一会 。 结果：上课总想睡觉。注意力下降。考试成绩 不理想。 建议：早餐不可少，它提供全天所需的能量的 30%， 青少年健康应从早餐抓起。 Some students study late into the night. They choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed. As a result, they tend to be sleepy all day. They have bad memories. It is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of exams. As a matter of fact/In fact, morning meal plays an important part in our daily life. It can provide 30% of the whole days energy. We students should start with a regular breakfast. 二、Top Meal of the Day Some students, who study late into the night, choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed. As a result, they tend to feel sleepy all day and have bad memories, so its hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of tests. In fact, the morning meal plays an important part in our daily life. It can provide 30% of the whole days energy. For a creative mind and better judgment school students should start their day with a regular breakfast. 三、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个 句子描述全部所给的信息内容。 1、标题: What Can We Do for the Olympics of 2008? 2、必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容 。 3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。 (1)2008年奥运会是21世纪重大体育比赛之 一，包括中国在内的每个国家都在为此做准备 。 (2)奥运会的作用。 (3)中国为举办奥运会，将要做些什么？ (4)你个人该做些什么？ 1.The Olympic Games of 2008 will be held in Beijing. 2.It is one of the most important events in the history of sports. 3.Every country in the world, including China, is preparing for it. 4. It will do good to the friendship between China and any other country in the world. 5. We should try to improve our environment and build enough stadiums as well as widening the roads in Beijing. 6.As a student, I must try to learn English well and try to do something for the Olympic Games. 三、The Olympic Games of 2008 The Olympic Games of 2008, which is one of the most important events in the history of sports, will be held in Beijing. Every country in the world, including China, is preparing for it. It will do good to the friendship between China and any other country in the world. We should try to improve our environment and build enough stadiums as well as widening the roads in Beijing. As a student, I must try to learn English well and try to do something for the Olympic Games. 四、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个 句子描述全部所给的信息内容。 1、标题: Its No Good using Mobile for Students 2、必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。 3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。 学生不宜使用手机的理由： 手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且加重经济负担。 若课堂接听手机会影响听课， 也会影响老师和其他同学 。 学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。 手机会引起学生之间的相互攀比，带来不好的影响。 1.It cannot bring convenience but adds to the students burden in finance. 2. Some students make a call with their mobile phones in the classroom. 3.It stops the other classmates from fixing on their study. 4.They cant pay attention to their teachers teaching in class by sending messages to others or playing the mobile phone games. 5.It may lead to students showing off themselves by owning nice and expensive mobile phones. 四、Its No Good using Mobile for Students The answer to “Is it good using mobile phone for students?” is “No” for the following reasons: Firstly, it adds to the students burden in finance together with its side effects, such as their not paying attention to their teachers teaching in class by sending messages to others. It may lead to students showing off themselves by owning nice and expensive mobile phones. Some students make a call with their mobile phones in the classroom, which stops the other classmates from fixing on their study. So I dont think it good for students to use mobile phone at school. I think its not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is to use the mobile phone in a right way. Practice 5： 暑假打工 文体：记叙文【题目要 求】 1.暑假过后，你的外籍教师要同学们汇报自己假期 所从事的社会活动和自己的感想。请写一书面材 料交给外教： 2.你在2005年暑假到一家肯德基（KFC）快餐店做 保洁员（cleaner）工作，你每天工作7个小时， 为期3周，这项工作辛苦且枯燥，并使你感到非常 的疲惫，这几乎使你半途放弃。 3.在新学期开始之前，你终于坚持完成了这项工作 ，并且认识到了劳动（labor）的意义，你认为这 是一次成功的体验。 4.注意：必须用第一人称 字数120个左右 1.During the summer holiday of 2005. 2.I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant working as a cleaner. 3.I worked seven hours a day for three weeks. 4.The work was hard and boring and I was so tired with it that I almost gave up half way. 5. Finally, I finished the job before the new school term began. 6. Now, I understand what labor means. I think it was really a successful experience. Summer Holiday Part-time Job During the summer holiday of 2005, I thought I should do something meaningful in so long a time instead of staying at home and watching TV. So I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. Every day I went to work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. I worked 7 hours a day for three weeks. The job was hard, boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way. However, I stuck to it with my determination. Finally, I finished the job before the new school term began. Now, I understand what labor means. In fact, labor makes me know I must value what I have at present and I think it was really a successful experience. 你想在2010年暑假期间去看上海世博会 (World EXPO)。你父母不会给你钱，除 非你自己去打工(part-time job)赚钱。在 2009年寒假期间，你在一家小餐馆当了一 个月的服务员，你每天工作八小时，工作 辛苦且枯燥，你的一个好朋友甚至劝你放 弃。但你还是坚持做完了一个月，拿到了 800元工资。你非常高兴，觉得这样的经 历很有意义。 Shanghai Expo invites the world to China The Shanghai Expo is about inviting the world to China to communicate and share, the opening ceremonys artistic director, Ignatius Jones, believes. China a beacon of hope for the world, says jazz giant Herbie American jazz legend Herbie Hancock took tips from his Chinese “soul brother“ Lang Lang when they toured Europe. Now, he is excited to see what the rest of China can teach the world at the Expo and beyond. GE CEO: China coming out of Expo a very positive image The ongoing World Expo in Shanghai is going to help China build a very positive image in the world, just like the Beijing Olympics, Ferdinando Beccalli-Falco, CEO of GE International, a global infrastructure, finance and media company, said Monday. Chance to showcase achievements The 2010 World Expo is a great opportunity to showcase a countrys achievements. The 1851 London Expo demonstrated the might of the Industrial Revolution in Britain. The 1876 Philadelphia Expo was the coming out party of the then fast-rising new power - the US. The 1970 Osaka Expo marked the revival of Japan from the rubble of World War II. UK aims to inspire with different pavilion To present visitors a modern and dynamic Britain instead of an old-fashioned one, the designers came up with a striking, futuristic design which they hoped would challenge stereotypes about Britain. Expo examines waters significance to cities “What is the significance of water to a city?“ The Shanghai World Expo is trying to answer the question. Expo site to transform city skyline for the better Shanghais hosting of the World Expo marks a momentous occasion in the citys history and one that will ultimately improve the lives of local residents in the long-term. Shanghai a world-class city? Please. With the grandiose World Expo newly unveiled, Shanghai seems to be telling the world that it has everything every major international city has. Supachai Panitchpakdi: New visions for mega-cities Supachai