中考英语专题复习 专项突破篇 第三部分 书面表达（含三年命题规律总结精炼）

在学生就要走出校门的时候，班级工作仍要坚持德育先行，继续重视对学生进行爱国主义教育、集体主义教育、行为规范等的教育，认真落实学校、学工处的各项工作要求书面表达书面表达旨在测试考生的英语书面表达能力，考查学生是否能够运用所学过的语言知识和语言技能进行思想表达和交流。试题对写作的目的、对象、题材、体裁及词数都有明确的要求，提供给学生的提示性材料包含文字、图画或者图表等。北京市中考说明对于学生“写”的能力做了如下要求：1. 能正确使用大小写字母和标点符号。2. 能够运用所学词汇、语法和所学句型，按照题目要求写出一篇不少于50词的文章。能够简单描述人物、场所、活动或事件。3. 能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。4. 能就常见话题陈述事实，表达观点、情感和态度等。5. 能正确使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。写作前1. 认真读题，正确选题；自2016年，北京市中考英语作文出现了比较大的变化：学生可以从命题者所出的两道题目中任选一个来写作。两道题目出题形式基本上与往年一样，要求考生根据题目所提供的信息、提示语和三个问题来完成写作任务。那么，考生应该怎样来选题，以促使测试成绩达到最优化呢？一般来讲，做好书面表达需要两个条件：考生对该话题内容的熟悉程度（背景知识）和相对应的英语知识和技能（语言支持）。鉴于此，考生应根据自身对相关话题的熟悉程度（比如以前是否写过类似作文）、对与该话题有关的英语知识的积累的多少（对于该话题能够拟出多少个重要句型、短语和谚语）以及能够利用本题目提供的语言支持的程度（在多大程度上能够利用题目所给的英语提示语）来选择。2. 认真审题，审体裁 （ 记叙文?说明文?应用文?议论文?） 、审主题 （抓住要点，切忌跑题）、审题型;3. 审时态和人称;4. 根据中文提示，找出要点，判断功能，确定该功能所对应的时态、重要句型、短语或者谚语、格言等。写作中1. 充分利用拟好的提纲，开始写作；2. 每个要点最好分解成两个分要点，以免太单薄；3. 尽量使用比较复杂的句子结构，比如并列句和复合句等；4. 尽量使用比较丰富的词汇和表达方式；5. 使用自己最有把握、最熟悉的词句；6. 充分利用提示语和自己拟出的句型、短语、谚语等来完整地回答三个问题，避免跑题。写作后1. 通读全文，从句子的结构、时态的使用、句中两个或多个动词关系的处理来检查有无错误；2. 从上下文逻辑关系、通顺与否等来检查文章；3. 检查冠词、代词等的使用和单词大小写等有无错误。附：文段表达评分标准第一档（15-13分） 完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。 第二档（12-9分） 基本符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 第三档（8-5分） 部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。 第四档（4-0分） 与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。Writing 1（2016北京）从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。题目假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办长跑接力赛，你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他比赛的时间和地点，报名方式，以及需要做什么准备。提示词语：sign up（报名）, on the school website, sports shoes提示问题：When and where will you have the race?How can Peter sign up for the race?What do you advise Peter to prepare for the race?Dear Peter， How is it going? Im writing to invite you to take part in the long-distance relay race. The race will be held on the playground of our school next Monday afternoon. If you want to join us, you have to sign up. You can sign up the form on our school website before this Friday. Perhaps you need to wear a pair of sports shoes and bring some drinking water with you. Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua题目假如你是李华，为了帮助洪灾地区的小朋友渡过难关，你们学校上周组织了以“友爱、互助”为主题的献爱心捐赠活动。请你用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿，谈谈你在这次活动中捐赠了什么，为什么捐赠这些物品，以及你的感受。提示词语：donate（捐赠）, book, schoolbag, clothes, toy, help, proud提示问题：What did you donate?Why did you donate the things?How do you feel?At my school, we made donations to children in the flooded areas last week. Almost all my classmates and teachers took part in the donation. I donated some used textbooks, a schoolbag, some clothes and many toys. I did this because I wanted to help the children out of their difficulties, and show my love to them. Im very proud of what I have done. Writing 2（2015北京）假如你叫李华，你们学校为配合北京申办冬奥会，倡导人人都做文明中学生。请你根据以下提示，给你的英国笔友Peter写一封邮件，告诉他你认为做个文明中学生什么是重要的，你通常是怎么做的，以及你的感受。提示词语：think, smile, respect, say hello to, wait in line, on time, happy Dear Peter，How is it going? At my school were talking about what we should do to be a good student. I think it is important to be polite to others. I say hello to my teachers and classmates. I smile to everyone I talk to. Following rules is also very important. I wait in line at the bus stop and go to school on time. I feel happy for doing all this because it is right for a student to do so. Anything new at your school?Yours，Li HuaWriting 3（2014北京）假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom 上周刚过完生日。他想知道你经常和谁一起过生日，怎么过的，你收到的最喜欢的礼物是什么，以及你喜欢它的原因。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。提示词语：cake, noodles, sing songs, make a wish, get presentsToTomFromLi Hua SubjectBirthday Hi!Tom， Im glad that you had a nice birthday party last week. I often celebrate my birthday with my parents, but sometimes with my friends. I usually have a big meal at home. And my mum always cooks noodles for me. You know it is common to have noodles on birthdays in China.My favorite present is a pair of sports shoes. I like them because they are cool and comfortable. Whats your favorite present? Yours,Li HuaA组Writing 1（2016石景山一模）假如你是李华，暑假快到了，你打算邀请你的美国笔友Peter来北京游玩。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他你们准备去哪里玩，都会做些什么，以及需要Peter准备什么。提示词语：the Great Wall, Birds Nest, Beijing Opera, Beijing duck, delicious, traditional, camera提示问题：Where are you going?What are you going to do?What do you advise Peter to prepare for thevisit?Dear Peter，How is it going?Im writing to invite you to come to visit Beijing this summer. I have made a plan for us. First, we can visit some places of interest, like the Great Wall. You will get some feelings about Chinese history there. And I will also take you to watch Beijing Opera because its a traditional Chinese art. Of course, we are going to Quanjude, a famous Chinese restaurant, to enjoy Beijing duck. Its delicious!As for the weather, its hot in Beijing in summer, so please bring some light clothes. And dont forget to take your camera. We are sure to take a lot of photos!Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours，Li HuaWriting 2（2016石景山二模）端午节快到了，假如你是李华，打算邀请你校的美国交换生Peter来家里过端午节。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他过节的时间和地点，庆祝端午节的意义，以及你们准备怎么庆祝。提示词语：May 5th, traditional, remember/honour, ancient poet, Qu Yuan, Dragon Boat Race提示问题：When and where are you going to celebrate Dragon Boat Festival?Why do you celebrate it?What are you going to do on the festival?Dear Peter，How is it going?Dragon Boat Festival is coming. I am writing to invite you to celebrate it with my family. Would you please come at 10 am on May 5th?We are going to celebrate it at home. Dragon Boat Festival is an important traditional Chinese festival. It is celebrated to remember/honour a famous ancient poet, Qu Yuan. In many places, there will be Dragon Boat Race. Its so exciting!We can watch the race on TV together!Of course, we are going to eat zongzi, which is a special food for that day. My mum will cook lots of delicious food as well!I cant wait to celebrate it with you!Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours，Li HuaWriting 3（2015石景山一模）假如你叫李平，最近和美国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论有关阅读的话题，他想了解你读书的情况，请根据他的问题回复邮件（书名可用拼音）。提示词语：called, at first, finally, brave, difficulty, share提示问题：Whats your favorite book?Which person do you like best in the book?What can you learn from him/her?ToJim FromLi Ping SubjectAbout reading Hi!Jim， Im glad to hear from you. I like reading very much and Ive read many books. My favorite book is The Secret Garden. I like the girl called Mary best. She is an unlucky and lonely girl at first, but she finds enjoyments in the secret garden finally. And she even helps her cousin get happiness in the garden. From Mary, I know that we should be brave enough to face the difficulties we meet and try to overcome them. Besides, we should be kind to others and share happiness together. What about your favorite book?Would you like to share something with me? Yours， Li PingWriting 4（2015东城一模）假如你叫Lily，你的一位美国网友Helen在她的博客里提到了最近她和她的好朋友之间产生了矛盾。她不知道自己是否做错了什么。她该怎么做才能与这位朋友重归于好？请你给她一些建议，并谈谈你对于“好朋友”的理解。Last Monday my best friend Judy got a high score in the math test. She was very happy and wanted me to see a movie with her to celebrate. I told her that I wasnt interested in the movie and refused her. Actually, I wanted to prepare for a speech competition. As a result, she was angry with me and didnt talk to me any more. Did I do anything wrong? What should I do to repair our friendship?What do you think a true friend should be like?提示词语：make a mistake, honest, explain, say sorry toHi!Helen， Im sorry to hear about your trouble. Dont worry. Its quite common of friends to misunderstand each other. I think there is nothing wrong for you to prepare for the competition, but you made a mistake when you lied to Judy. So you should tell her the truth first. Explain to her how important the speech competition was to you. Of course, you must say sorry to her for your dishonesty. In my opinion, true friends should be honest and understanding to each other. I hope you can be good friendsagain. Yours， LilyWriting 5（2015朝阳一模）假设你叫李华，最近和英国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论各自的梦想，他想了解你的职业梦想。请根据他的问题回复邮件。提示词语:want to be, reason, think, work hard, practise提示问题：Whats your dream?Why do you have that dream?What will you do to realize your dream?ToJim FromLi Hua SubjectMy dream Hi!Jim， Im glad to hear from you. Everyone has his own dream. I want to be a good doctor. The reason is that some doctors saved my life after I was badly hurt in a traffic accident. I was deeply moved by their medical skills. From then on, to be a doctor in the future has always been my dream. Everyone can realize his dream. I think the first thing I will do is to remember what my dream is. I wont let it leave my mind. I will also keep telling myself what I want every day. Whats more, I will never give up. Though there may be difficulties on the road to my dream, I will always feel confident and work hard. Yours， Li HuaB组（文段写作）Writing 1（2016石景山一模）某英文报社正就“社会大课堂（field learning）”这一话题展开讨论。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿，谈谈你想去什么地方参观，希望在那里做些什么，以及你对“社会大课堂”的看法。提示词语：do some field learning, take part in, science, knowledge, try, interesting, chance, useful提示问题：Where would you like to visit?Museum?Park?. What do you want to do there?What do you think of field learning?At my school, we are also talking about field learning. We have many chances to do some field learning and there are lots of places waiting for us to explore. But I prefer museums to others, especially science museums. I want to learn more science knowledge there and get to know more about some famous scientists. Whats more, I really want to try some scientific experiments there. It must be very interesting. In my opinion, field learning gives us great chances to learn and try some useful things which we cannot do at school. It can help us learn to think and work with others. I love it!Writing 2（2016石景山二模）某英文报社正就“我和父母”这一话题展开讨论。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿，简单介绍一下你的父母，谈谈你和父母之间发生的最难忘的一件事，以及你对这件事的感受。提示词语：nice, responsible, kind, prepare for, encourage, confident, proud, love提示问题：What are your parents like?What was the most unforgettable thing between you and your parents?How did you feel?At my school, we are also talking about the relationship between parents and us. I have a happy family. My parents, in my heart, are the most responsible and kindest persons in the world. Last year, I was chosen to take part in a speech competition. I felt very nervous. My parents tried hard to help me prepare for it. They encouraged me to be confident and told me not to care much about the result. They said the process of learning was more meaningful. With their help, I did very well that time. And Ive learned that confidence is the mother of success. I love my parents!Writing 3（2015朝阳二模改编）校园安全一直是很重要的话题。假如你叫李华，请以 “School Safety”为题，向一家英语报纸投稿，谈谈校园安全是否重要，你为什么这样看，我们应该怎样做。提示词语:study, help, sports, make sure提示问题：Is it important to keep safe at school?Why do you think so?What should we do to keep safe?School SafetyIn my opinion, its important for us to keep safe at school. There are two main reasons for it. School safety helps us not only study well but also live happily. In order to keep safe at school, we should do like these. First, be in order when we are going upstairs or downstairs. Second, make sure to be safe when we are doing sports. Try not to get hurt. Third, learn about some knowledge of safety. Its helpful to us. In short, as teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind and try our best to be safe. Writing 4（2015石景山二模改编）人人都有梦想。假如你叫李平，请以“My Dream”为题，向一家英语报纸投稿，谈谈你的梦想是什么，为什么你有这样的梦想，以及你打算怎样实现你的梦想。提示词语： visit, know, understand, different, freely, culture 提示问题：Whats your dream in your life?Why do you have such a dream?What are you going to do to realize your dream?My DreamMy dream is to travel all over the world because I love traveling. I think traveling is really a good way to know about different people and different cultures from different countries. It can not only help me get more information and widen my eyes, but also let me feel relaxed. To realize my dream, I think its important to work hard with all my subjects, such as history, English and geography. Thus when I visit other countries, I can understand their cultures better, and talk with the local people more freely. Writing 5（2015丰台二模改编）爱好可以让人放松、可以陶冶情操。假如你叫王红，请以“My Hobby”为题，向一家英语报纸投稿，谈谈你的爱好是什么，你是怎样坚持它的，它给你带来什么好处。提示词语：interesting, buy, borrow, learn, improve提示问题：What is your hobby?Reading?Playing sports?Listening to music?Or. ?How do you keep doing it?What benefits does it bring you?My HobbyI have a lot of hobbies, such as playing sports, listening to music, surfing the Internet and so on, but I like reading best. I have kept reading in my spare time since I was a little girl. I go to the school library to borrow books once a week and sometimes I buy some books from the bookstore. It takes me about an hour to read books every day and I think reading has been a part of my life. Reading is very interesting and important because it not only brings me a lot of knowledge but also keeps me relaxed. A组（邮件回复）Writing 1假如你叫李平，最近和英国朋友John通过邮件谈论有关零花钱的话题，他想了解你花费零花钱的一些具体情况，请根据他的问题回复邮件。提示词语：parents, housework, restaurant, books, traveling, knowledge, relaxed提示问题：How do you get your pocket money?How do you usually spend your pocket money?Why do you spend it in this way?ToJohn FromLi Ping SubjectPocket money Hi!John， Im glad to hear from you. I usually get some pocket money from my parents by helping them with some housework such as washing dishes, sweeping the floor and so on. I also work in a small restaurant for 3 hours at the weekend to make some money. I usually spend my pocket money buying books and traveling because knowledge is power and traveling can make me relaxed after working for a long time. How about your pocket money? Yours， Li PingWriting 2假如你叫李平，最近和英国朋友John通过邮件谈论兴趣小组的话题，他想了解你参加兴趣小组的一些具体情况，请根据他的问题回复邮件。提示词语：interest groups, model, movies, open, improve提示问题：What interest groups do you join?What do you usually do in it?Why do you join the groups?ToJohn From Li Ping SubjectInterest groups Hi!John， Im glad to hear from you. At our school, we also join a lot of interest groups as well as taking some subjects such as Chinese, English and math. I join the model plane group and the English movie group. I go to the model plane group on Monday afternoon and we learn to make a model plane with used pots and pans. On Friday afternoon I watch a lot of funny English movies in the language lab with my classmates. I really love the movies. I join the model plane group because I want to learn the skills of making a machine with my hands and working together with others. I go to the English movie group not only to have fun and open my mind, but also to improve my English. I really love the interest groups. How about you?Have you got any interest groups? Yours， Li PingWriting 3假如你叫李平，最近和英国朋友Mike通过邮件谈论成长过程中对自己产生过重要影响的老师，他想了解你生命中最重要的老师，请你根据他的问题回复邮件。提示词语：caring, helpful, patient, brave, love提示问题：Who is the most important teacher in your school life?Why is he/she so important?Give an example. What can you learn from him/her?ToMike From Li Ping Subject The most important teacher in my life Hi! Mike， Im glad to hear from you. As for me, the most important teacher in my school life is my English teacher Mr Wang. He is caring and helpful. Once I hurt my leg badly and had to stay in bed for three weeks. Mr Wang not only came to see me now and then but also helped me with my English lessons. With his help, I recovered very soon and my English study did not fall behind. I have learned a lot from Mr Wang. I decide to be a teacher like him, who is patient and helpful to others. Ive also learned to be brave to face any difficulties. I love my English teacher Mr Wang. Yours， Li PingWriting 4假如你叫李平，最近和英国朋友John通过邮件谈论有关友谊的话题，请根据他的问题回复邮件。提示词语：important, life, sun, help, encourage, caring, listen, study,fun提示问题：Why is friendship important?What is your best friend like?What do you usually do together?ToJohn From Li Ping SubjectFriendship Hi!John， Im glad to hear from you. In my opinion, it is very important to have friends, just like the old saying goes，“A life without a friend is like a life without a sun”. Friends can help us out when we are in trouble and they can also encourage us to face difficulties together with themselves in daily life. My best friend is Tom. He is very caring and understanding. When I have troubles and want someone to talk to, he is always there, listening and caring. As close friends, we not only study together, but also have fun together. We share the same hobbies and many opinions on many things.What about your opinions on friendship and your friends? Yours， Li PingWriting 5假如你是李华，你校的美国笔友Peter发来邮件和你讨论你最喜欢的学科。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，回答他的问题。提示词语：English, spend, knowledge, widen, tool, movie, radio提示问题：What is your favorite subject?Why do you like it?How do you learn it so well?Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to you to talk about my favorite subject. My favorite subject is English and I am really good at it. I spend most of my free time reading English books and magazines. I like English because it can widen my eyes and provide me a lot of knowledge. It is also a tool that can help me communicate with foreigners.As well a