大学英语六级写作经典范文及点评

1、精选文档螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇

2、蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁

3、羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈

4、螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂

5、蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆

6、袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁

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9、螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆

10、蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀

11、袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅

12、蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿

13、羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃

14、蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈

15、薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂

16、袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿

17、蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃

18、羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇

19、螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂

20、薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆

21、袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀

22、蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇

23、衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁

24、螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆

25、薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀

26、袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄

27、蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈

28、袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅

29、螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀

30、薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅蒃蝿膆膅虿蚅袂芇蒂薁袁莀蚇衿袀聿蒀袅袀节螅螁衿莄薈蚇袈蒆莁羆袇膆薆袂袆芈荿螈羅莁薅蚄羅肀莈薀羄膃薃羈羃莅莆袄羂蒇蚁螀羁膇蒄蚆羀艿蚀薂罿莁蒂袁聿肁蚈螇肈膃蒁蚃肇芆蚆蕿肆蒈葿羈肅膈莂袄肄芀薇螀肃莂莀蚆肃肂薆薂膂膄莈袀膁芇薄螆膀荿莇蚂腿腿薂蚈膈芁蒅羇膇莃蚀袃膇蒅 大学英语六级写作经典范文及点评大学生自我创业已经不是一个新鲜的话题了。那么自我创业有何利，又有何弊呢？看过本文之后你就知道了。或许这对面临毕业的你还是个不小的帮助呢！Self employmentSelf emplo

31、yment could bring many advantages. One of the advantages of being self-employed is that the profit the business makes belongs to the owner. If the self-employed person succeeds in business, he has the chance to earn a great deal of money. The profit earned is the reward for the owners effort, abilit

32、y and creativity. Thus, a second advantage is that a persons intelligence and abilities have a direct effect on the earnings. A third advantage of being self-employed is that a person can control his working hours. While not all self-employed people are completely free, most of them have more contro

33、l over this area than the salaried people.However, being self-employed is not without problems. First, being ones own boss places the responsibility directly on that individual shoulders. Everyone has some weaknesses in a certain aspects. These weaknesses will affect how successful a self-employed p

34、erson is. Second, though the self-employed can earn considerable profits with a successful business, losses can force them out of business and sometimes, place them in debt. A third disadvantage concerns income security. Self-employed people have no guaranteed wage. Their earnings can vary greatly,

35、depending on business conditions. Salaried people, however, can generally count on continued earnings. In addition, salaried people often enjoy fringe benefits that mean greater peace of mind. One of these benefits may be insurance paid for by the employer that continues the employees salary in the

36、event of sickness or accident while many self-employed people do not have such protection.253 words行文点评 文章结构简单明了。第一段阐述了自我创业的3个好处。第二段分析了自我创业所存在的问题。两段中“first, second, third”的使用，不仅使文章在句式上显得条理分明，更在内容上体现了连贯性。好文妙译自我创业自我创业的好处之一是商业利润归创业者所有。如果创业者生意成功，他有可能挣很多钱。这些利润是对创业者努力、能力和创造力的回报。因此，自我创业的第二个好处是一个人的才智和能力直接反映

37、在收入上。自我创业的第三个优势是自己做老板能够支配自己的工作时间。虽然不是所有的创业者都有完全的自由，但是相对于工薪族来说，他们大多数人在这方面拥有更多的自主权。但是，自我创业并不是一帆风顺的事。首先，做自己的老板把责任直接放到了个人的肩上。每个人在某些方面都会有一些弱点，而这些弱点会对创业者的成功产生影响。其次，自己做老板时，虽然生意成功会带来很大的盈利，但是一旦失败就可能造成破产，有时甚至会负债累累。第三个弊端涉及收入的稳定性。创业者没有稳定的工资。依据生意的状况，他们的收入浮动很大。而工薪族通常可以依靠持续稳定的工资。此外，他们通常可以享受着额外福利，这意味着他们的心态可以更加的平和。其

38、中一项福利就是由雇主为雇员支付保险，以保障他们在生病或遇到意外的情况下还能继续领到工资。相比之下，很多创业者就没有这种保障了。词汇斟酌 in debt 负债count on 指望，依靠fringe a.附加的，额外的；边缘的佳句临摹 【注释】in the event of sth万一；倘若【临摹】In the event of his death Shelia will inherit the money.一旦他故去，希拉就会继承这笔钱。思如泉涌Something attempted, something done. 有尝试就会有收获。Actions speak louder than wor

39、ds. 行动胜于语言。 有些人并非特别聪明，却能得到大家的认可和支持。我们说这些人有个人魅力。个人魅力不仅源于聪明、诚实等优秀品质，还源于与他人交往时的态度和技巧。Communicating a Sense of Personal PowerCommunicating a sense of personal power comes from a belief that you can reach your goals in your own way. Powerful people give others power and encourage others to express themse

40、lves openly. You communicate a sense of personal power by developing these traits:AuthorityAuthority is inner confidence a trust in your skills and abilities. It comes from the inside, from an attitude of “I can do that”. “I deserve success”.This attitude radiates outward as you assert your right, h

41、onestly ask for what you want and need, and develop a willingness to give to others and yourself. Being self-assuredSelf-assured behavior is active, direct, and honest. It communicates an impression of self-respect and respect for others.By being self-assured, we view our wants, needs, and rights as

42、 equal with those of others. A self-assured person wins by influencing, listening, and negotiating so that other people choose to cooperate willingly. Accessibility The powerful person is a master net worker. Good networking increases your visibility and gives you a valuable circle of people from wh

43、om you can give and receive support and information. Imagine yourself as the center of a wheel surrounded by spokes of contacts. Image You communicate power through your image. Do you project an image consistent with strong leadership? Stand tall and walk proudly, remembering that you have value as

44、a person. When you meet others, make direct contact and keep your handshake firm and friendly. Clearly state who you are and what you do.Communication habitsTake a deep breath to project a firm voice. Avoid slang, and jargon, and vocal hesitations that can hinder effective communication. Use only th

45、e body movements and gestures necessary to make your point, no more. Learn how to write clearly and concisely.312 words行文点评 文章是总分结构。第一段先说明发挥你的个人魅力的信念来源：你可以用自己的方式实现自己的目标。接着作者从五个方面介绍个人魅力的通常表现，每个方面作者都指明了它对发挥个人魅力的重要性，以及如何做到这一点。好文妙译以个人魅力交流发挥你的个人魅力来源于这样一个信念：即你可以用自己的方式实现自己的目标。有影响力的人赋予他人力量并鼓励他人公开表述自己的意见。发挥个

46、人魅力通常体现在以下几个方面：威信威信是内在的信心，即坚信自己的技能和能力。它来自于内心，来自于“我能做好那件事”、“我会成功”的态度。当你维护你的权利，真诚地去寻求你的所需所想，并愿意为他人和自己做出奉献的时候，这种态度就会外露出来。自信自信表现为积极、直率和诚实。它表达了一种自尊和尊重他人的意愿。通过自信，我们视自己的需求和权利与他人的需要和权利是平等的。一个自信的人通过影响、倾听与讨论来赢取他人自愿的合作。亲和力一个有影响力的人是人际交往的大师。良好的人际交往会使你为人所知，使你周围有一个高层次的人际关系网，从他们那里你可以给予或获得支持与信息。把你自己想象成轮轴，周围由关系的辐条环绕。

47、形象你可以通过你的形象来施加影响力。你想象过自己具有极强的领导能力的形象吗?站直，昂首挺胸地前进，记住，作为一个人你自身具有价值。当你与他人会面时，要直接接触，友好而有力地握手。清楚地表达你是谁，是做什么的。交流习惯深吸一口气，说出坚定的话语，避免使用俚语、行话，说话不要吞吞吐吐，否则会影响有效的交流。在必要时使用身体语言和手势，多则无益。要学会如何用笔头清晰而简洁地表达自己的思想感情。词汇斟酌trait n. 显著的特点, 特性authority n. 权威, 威信, 权威人士radiate vt. 放射, 辐射, 传播assert v. 断言, 声称negotiate v. (与某人)商议

48、, 谈判, 磋商,accessibility n. 易接近, 可到达spoke n. 辐条 slang n. 俚语 jargon n. 行话佳句临摹 【注释】be consistent with一致，相符【临摹】What you said now is not consistent with what you said last week. 你现在说的话与你上星期说的话不相符。思如泉涌As a mans heart is, so does he speak. 言为心声。A great talker is a great liar. 最会饶舌的人也是最会说谎的人。很多人都认为那些身处象牙塔的大学

49、生们过得很安逸，其实不然。他们每天也要面临着很多压力：高额学费带来的经济压力，父母要求过高所带来的精神压力 College PressureI see two kinds of pressure working on college students today: economic pressure, parental pressure. It is easy to look around for rebels to blame the colleges for charging too much money, the parents for pushing them too far. But

50、 there are no rebels, only victims.The pressure is heavy on students who just want to graduate and get a job. If I were an employer I would rather employ graduates who have this range and curiosity than those who narrowly pursued safe subjects and high grades. I know incalculable students whose inqu

51、iring minds cheer me. I like to hear the play of their ideas. I dont know if they are getting A or C, and I dont care. I also like them as people. The country needs them, and they will find satisfying jobs. I tell them to relax, but they cant.Nor can I blame them. They live in a brutal economy. Toda

52、y it is not unusual for a student, even if he works part time at college and full time during the summer, to increase to 5, 000 in loans after graduation.Encouraged at commencement to go forth into the world, he is already behind as he goes forth. How could he not feel under pressure throughout coll

53、ege to prepare for this day of reckoning?Along with economic pressure goes parental pressure. Inevitably, the two are deeply integrated.Poor students! They are caught in one of the oldest webs of love and duty and guilt. The parents mean well: they are trying to steer their sons and daughters toward

54、 a secure future. But the sons and daughters want to major in history or classics or philosophysubjects with no “practical” value. Wheres the payoff on the humanities? Its not easy to persuade such loving parents that the humanities do indeed pay off. The intellectual faculties developed by studying

55、 subjects like history and classics are just the faculties that make creative leaders in business or almost any general field. Luckily for me, most of them got into their field by an indirect route, to their surprise, after many roundabout ways. They can hardly conceive of a career that was not prep

56、lanned. They can hardly imagine allowing the hand of God or chance to nudge them down some unforeseen trail.391 words行文点评本文脉络清晰。第一段第一句直接点题，提出大学生面临的两种压力：economic pressure和 parental pressure。段末“victims”一词的运用，奠定了本文的感情基调：作者对大学生担负的压力感到同情。第二段和第三段中分析了大学生在经济上面临压力的原因。第四段是过渡段。第五段阐述了父母的压力对大学生的影响，用一个感叹句开头，具有烘托感

57、情的效果,充分表达了作者对大学生的同情。最后一段排比句的应用从相反的方面描述，更把大学生所遭受的压力凸显出来。好文妙译 大学生的压力我发觉今天的大学生有两种压力：经济压力和来自父母的压力。环顾四周，你很容易发现一些叛逆者，他们指责学校收费太高，报怨父母对他们的要求过高。但他们不是叛逆者，而是受害者。对于那些只想从大学毕业并且找到一个工作的人来说，压力是很大的。如果我是雇主，我宁愿雇佣那些有好奇心的博学之才而不是那些只选一些容易过的且能达高分的课程的学生。我认识无数学生，他们的好奇之心使我兴奋不已。我喜欢听他们阐述自己的观点。我不知道他们得的是A还是C，我不在乎这些。我也同样喜欢他们所散发出来的

58、人性魅力。国家需要他们，他们也会找到自己满意的工作。我告诉他们要放松，但他们做不到。但我也不能责怪他们，因为他们生活在残酷的经济时代。今天对一个学生来说，即使他在念书时兼职打工，在暑假全职工作，在毕业后欠下5000美元的债务也是很平常的。在毕业典礼上他们被告知即将踏入社会，而事实上，在踏入社会之际他已落后于他人了。为了面对这个清算日，他们在大学生活中怎会感受不到压力呢?与经济压力同时存在的还有来自父母的压力，这两者不可避免地融合在一起。可怜的学生们!他们被古老的爱、责任、负疚感所包围。父母们本意是好的,他们正把自己的儿女引向一个安全的未来。但这些孩子却想主修历史、古典文学、哲学这些没有“现实”价值的专业。学人文科学的报偿在何处呢?要说服父母相信人文科学有所报偿并不容易。由学习历史和古典文学所培养出来的能力正是商业及其他一般领域有创造力的领导人所必备的能力。幸运的是，许多学生几经曲折终于到达他们自己的领域，对此他们感到吃惊。因为他们很难