Howtobetterourwriting.ppt

1、南师大第二附属初级中学 周雪峰,How to better our writing,2015年扬州市中考英语复习研讨会,中考写作评分标准,Level 3,Level 4,Level 5,Level 1,Level 2,Discussion How to get higher marks in writing 1.To cover all the_. 2.To _ sentences well. 3.To combine(结合) _ well. 4.To _ the composition(作文) carefully. 5.To _ neatly(整洁地).,main points and de

2、tails,write,sentences,check,write,一、审题,体裁 人称 时态 要点,Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 ,上周你班就青少年是否应该听从父母的建议这一话题展开了讨论，不同的学生有不同观点。请根据图表，以Should teenagers take their parents advice?为题写一篇英语短文，介绍同学们的观点，并发表自己的看法。,Better our paragraphs,Main points,Agreements,Disagreements,My opinions,Para 1,Para 2,Para 3,Level 3,，,自拟,自拟,

3、自拟,二、抓细节,Details,Agreements,Disagreements,_ parents _ parents ,Parents _ ideas _ ourselves ,My opinions, ,Use details to support main points:,Better our details,Para 3,Para 2,Para 1,Respect,Experienced,out-of-date,Improve,三、扩展成句,How to write sentences well,1.Think of correct words phrases. 2.Think o

4、f correct tenses. 3.Think of correct orders.,3. Lucy every morning at 7:00 has breakfast.,1. The baby wants to eat water.,2. I have a big dinner last night.,drink,had,3. Lucy has breakfast at 7:00 every morning.,Our parents are experienced and they can help us. Our parents can help us because they a

5、re experienced. Our parents are experienced enough to help us. Our parents are so experienced that they can help us. The older, the wiser. Our parents are experienced and they can help us. As an old saying goes, “Old birds are not caught with new nests”. (新巢捉不到老鸟/姜是老的辣。) Our parents are experienced

6、and they can help us.,Better our sentences,四、连句成文,Level 1,First, second, third 表文章结构顺序 and, also 表并列补充(递进)关系 because, so 表示原因和结果 I think 表达自己观点,Useful expressions (transitions过渡 between ideas):,First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, next , and then, finally/in the end/ at last,Whats more, esp

7、ecially, not only but also at the same time, and, also, too, again, and then, Either,moreover,On one hand On the other hand,Some, while others,however, but, though /although,because; since; as; so; as a result,As far as I know , In my opinion, to tell the truth, I suggest/think that,1.表文章结构顺序： 4.陈述正

8、反方的观点： 2.表示补充、增加信息的： 5.表示原因和结果的： 3.表转折对比关系的： 6.表达自己观点：,A,B,C,D,F,B,E,F,D,C,E,A,Better our coherence(连贯性),Level 2,五、查错改错,Spelling mistakes Word usage mistakes Grammatical mistakes (语法错误) Punctuative mistakes (标点符号错误) Missing words,taking,can be taken,，,experience,parents,decisions,Level 2,opinions,Le

9、vel 4,Poor handwriting!,Better our handwriting,书面表达六步法,审,抓,扩,连,改,誊,Better our writing,上周 你班 就青少年是否应该听从父母的建议这一话题展开了讨论，不同的学生有不同观点。请根据图表，以Should teenagers take their parents advice?为题写一篇英语短文，介绍同学们的观点，并发表自己的看法。,注意：1.词数100左右，文章开头已给，不计入总词数。 2.短文需包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥。 3.字迹工整，条理清楚，行文连贯。 4.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。,Try to

10、 better the passage!,Useful expressions:, First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, next and then, Finally/In the end/ At last Whats more, especially, not only but also, at the same time, and, also, too, and then, moreover However, but, although/though On one hand On the other hand； Some, while

11、others because; since; as; so; as a result As far as I know , In my opinion, to tell the truth, I suggest/think that The older, the wiser. Old birds are not caught with new nests.,Try to better the passage(Part 4)!,Its our show time!,our paragrphs(段落) our details our sentences our coherence (连贯性) our handwriting,Conclusion: How to better our writing,Better,Level 3 Simple,Level 2 Correct,Level 1 Fluent,L