王老师英语说明文与议论文

1、说明文与议论文写作指导项 目说 明 文议 论 文 素 材.请你围绕“如何帮助学习有困难的同学”这一话题展开思路谈谈你的感想。 .请你围绕“中学生该不该帮助学习有困难的同学”这一话题展开思路谈谈你的感想。 信息点如何，帮助，学习有困难的同学（中学生），该（不该）帮助，学习有困难的同学题 目how to help the students who have trouble in studying we should help the studentswho have trouble in studying人称、时态第一人称we；一般现在时或一般将来时首 段引出话题+说明文体句+过渡下文引出话题+提

2、出观点（+过渡下文） help is the sunlight lightening the unknown world in front of us. help is the step stones leading us to the goals we have already set up. no matter who will have difficulties at any time, help is so necessary for everyone. how can we do as much as we can to help the students who have trou

3、ble in studying.(文体句). here are my suggestions.(启下句) help is the sunlight lightening the unknown world in front of us. help is the step stones leading us to the goals we have already set up. no matter who will have difficulties at any time, help is so necessary for everyone. in my opinion, we should

4、 do as much as we can to help the students who have trouble in studying as a student in middle school.(文体句). here are my reasons.(启下句) 中 段主题句句式统一，提出方法（避免用should，多用祈使句等）；拓展句着重解释how，并体现益处（拓展句数量不少于两句,句式多样，说明方法多样）主题句句式统一，体现观点；拓展句着重解释why，并体现意义（拓展句数量不少于两句，句式多样,论证方法多样） first, help them set up the easier go

5、al that they can achieve. the goal too high and the progress in a hurry only come to the result of having trouble in studying.so in the daily lives and studying they should achieve the learning goal step by step. after they make a little progress, they will go nearer to their last goal.second, help

6、them develop a good habit that is useful for their learning. good habits can improve grades. pre-class, they should prepare relevant learning tools，such as: markers, notebook, ruler, books etc. for the lesson. in the class, they should listen to the teacher carefully and write down the note when the

7、y cant understand the knowledge then ask the teacher or classmates immediately out of the class. as the saying goes, “excellence isnt an action, but a habit.” good habits are the first step to success for the students who have trouble in studying. third ,help them overcome the inferiority (自卑)that i

8、s in their hearts .the students who have trouble in studying have strong inferiority more or less.so let them increase confidence and believe their abilities. let them believe their own strength and function. they need to tell themselves: “i can, i can study well, as long as i work hard every class,

9、 every day, every week and every term, the success will belong to me!” the person with enough confidence will be the strongest one on the earth. first, helping them means helping them save their time. as the saying goes,time and tide wait for no man. we are already the students in grade nine. time i

10、s so important for us now. but for the ones who are short of ability of studying, they dont always use the limited time well to complete work left by teachers. its a pity that time isnt always enough for them. so saving their time is helping them to get closer to their dreams. second, helping them m

11、eans making our friendship deeper. friendship is like flowers needed watering. as students in grade nine, we dont have enough time to communicate with each other.during the period of communication, something that doesnt need expressing will be understood by us and our friendship must get much deeper

12、 and deeper. i believe we cant forget such a beautiful memory even if we graduate from our school. third, helping them means helping ourselves. because we will be faced with the entrance exam to a senior high school, we have to go on studying all the time. but at this time, we find its terrible for

13、us to remember less and less.teaching others teaches ourselves. actually, we consolidate the knowledge and check ourselves by helping the students who meet problems. its a good way to review for the students in grade nine. 尾 段 总结全文+深化主题+提出号召重申论点+升华主题+提出号召 these are my suggestions about how to help t

14、he students who have trouble in studying. without the beach, we dont enjoy the sea. without the sun, the moon isnt beautiful, either. without the help from each other , we also lose warmth. helping others is the virtue of the chinese nation. especially for the ones who meet difficulties in studying

15、, help is far more important. lets give others help who need help! in a word, helping the students who have difficulty in studying can bring us a lot of benefits. without the beach, we dont enjoy the sea. without the sun, the moon isnt beautiful, either. without the help from each other , we also lo

16、se warmth. helping others is the virtue of the chinese nation. especially for the ones who meet difficulties in studying , help is far more important. lets give others help who need help!说明文与议论文评分标准项 目说 明 文议 论 文原题再现 请你围绕中学生如何阅读英语文章(article)这一话题展开思路谈谈你的感想。 请你围绕中学生该不该写作业时听音乐这一话题展开思路谈谈你的感想。评分标准一等文：(12-

17、 15分)文章结构合理，说明/论证条理清晰。语言丰富优美、语法准确、信息完整、可读性强。 二等文：(911分)注意文章结构，但说明/论证条理不够清晰。语言较流畅、能用完整的句式，有些语法错误，但不影响意思表达，可读性较好。三等文：(68分)文章结构不合理，语言表达不够清楚。能用一些词勉强表达情感，语法、句式达不到准确完整。四等文：(05分)基本不成文。评分细则标题 how to read english articleswe shouldnt listen to music when doing our homework题目中出现任何错误（如：大小写、拼错单词、漏掉信息、与主题无关、写错文体等

18、），均扣1分首段1. 语言精彩，有修辞手法（排比，设问，引用等）， 导入主题自然恰当。2. 如果缺少“作为中学生”扣一分，写“作为九 年级学生”和“九年级中学生”不给分。3.最后一句必须有体现文体的句子，没有降等。1. 语言精彩，有修辞手法（排比，设问，引用等）， 导入主题自然恰当。2. 是否写“作为中学生”均可，不扣分，不降等。3. 必须有体现观点的句子，即文体句，如果没有 降等；有无过渡句，均可。中段1.至少三种方法/观点，每种方法至少要有两句扩展句。2.并且三种方法/观点的第一句结构相同的句式，整齐对仗，上下呼应（一等文高分）。3. 扩展句可以用不同句式,且使用不同的说明/论证方法。尾段1. 首尾呼应，即承上句。2. 有精美语句，深华主题。3.提出号召。1.重申论点，即题目。2.用精美语句，升化主题。3.提出号召。扣分情况1.书写