《英语CET写作模版》PPT课件.ppt

1、Writing,（分析建议类）,（划线部分可替换）,写作模式（分析建议类）,1) As is known to all, sth. does bring a lot of benefits to sb. / sth. else. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen , thereby changing for the better.(正面分析I) 3) Besides, it can make /render sb. / sth. else better able to (正面分析II) 4) And best of all, it can help sb.

2、(正面分析III) 5）But all the above does not mean / follow that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects sth. brings about. 6） If, as a succession,（划线部分可替换）,of scientific studies reveals / implies / suggests, there are more chances that (负面分析I) 7) In addition, the more ., the worse. (负面分析II) 8) And

3、 worst of all, (负面分析III) 9) Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of sth. 10) On the one hand, (建议I) 11) On the other, . (建议II) 12) In sum, sth. can do sb. / sth. else good or harm, all depending on (结论句),1. 分析体育锻炼给我们带来的益处。 2. 分析体育锻炼给我们带来的坏处。 3. 给出如何参加体育锻炼的建议。,The Effects o

4、f Exercise on Our Health,1) As is known to all, exercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen our hearts, lungs, bones and muscles, thereby changing our whole health for the better. 3) Besides, it can make our brains better able to react to what is going on

5、 around us. 4) And best of all, it can help us breed optimism about our tough life.,Reference model: The Effects of Exercise on Our Health,5) But all the above does not mean that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects exercise brings about. 6) If you are normally inactive and then, contrary

6、 to your usual habit, start a program of undue exercise, as a succession of scientific studies reveals, there are more chances that you have yourself injured. 7) In addition, the more exercise those on a fat-reducing diet take, the more loss of iron they will suffer and the worse their health will g

7、et. 8) And,worst of all, continual as well as excessive exercise can result in sudden death. 9) Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of exercise. 10) On the one hand, our physical exercise must be based on both progressiveness and regularity. 11) On the other, we must go i

8、n for physical exercise according to local as well as health conditions of our own. 12) In sum, exercise can do us good or harm, all depending on how we make use of it.,A Letter to the College President,（分析建议类）,（划线部分可替换）,写作模式（分析建议）,1) I am delighted (distressed) to find there have been favorable(unf

9、avorable) changes in (议论的主题) since I came here. 2) From my angle of view, these changes indicate that what you have done is in (out of) line with .(作者的态度) 3) In the long run, they will produce more positive (negative) effect on . 4) Such desirable (undesirable) changes can be found in the aspects as

10、 follows. 5) First, ,（划线部分可替换）,(分析I)6）Second, . (分析II) 7） And best(worst) of all, (分析III) 8) . (进一步阐述) 9) But all the foregoing does not mean that there is little room for further improvement in (that there is little you can do about )10) Instead, to enrich (reverse), a richer variety (a better heal

11、th) can be added to (建议I) 11) And meanwhile, . (建议II) 12) It should be born in mind that (结论句),就校园生活的可喜变化给校长写封信。 分析该变化表现在哪些方面。 提出进一步改进的建议。,A Letter to the College President,1) I am delighted to find there have been favorable changes in our campus life since I came here. 2) From my angle of view, the

12、se changes indicate what you have done is in line with the interests of undergraduates. 3) In the long run, they will produce more positive effect on our growth. 4) Such desirable changes can be found in the aspects as follows. 5) First, our dining,Reference model: A Letter to the College President,

13、conditions have turned for the better, thus ending our everyday worry about where to satisfy our hunger. 6) Second, your faculties have paid as much attention to our emotional world as to our intellectual growth, which in turn lends much warmth of family to our life. 7) And best of all, we find the

14、campus a more pleasant place to live on. 8) As a result of your efforts, we now have more places to go to for recreation, such as cafes, net bars, fitness centers and reading rooms.,9) But all the foregoing does not mean that there is little room for further improvement in our college life. 10) Inst

15、ead, to enrich our life here to the fullest, a richer variety should be added to our spare time as well as our curriculums. 11) And meanwhile, we should be allowed more access to scientific research, social practice and the frontier of our own fields. 12) It should be born in mind that the purpose o

16、f our college life is to prepare us for the different needs of tomorrows society.,My Way of Seeing Something,1. 人们从不同的角度看待某一事物 2. 我的看法是(说明理由),(理由陈述类),Writing,（划线部分可替换）,写作模式（理由陈述类）,1) Something may be many things to many people. 2) Some may see it as while others may view it as (人们的看法举例) 3) As far as

17、 I am concerned, however, I would prefer to value it as (我的看法) (Para. I),（划线部分可替换）,4) My insight into sth.(My outlook on sth. / My understanding of sth.) is bound up with three major factors. 5) Primarily, sth. is so that (理由I) 6) (进一步阐述) 7) Secondly, sth. is also (理由II) 8) . (进一步阐述) 9) And most of

18、all, (理由III) 10) (进一步阐述) (Para. II),（划线部分可替换）,11) I have (not) much freedom / option in this matter, but I have never found any other way of seeing sth. more reasonable and acceptable than mine. 12) Thus, I will leave no stone unturned during the course of in order to pave the way for . (Para. III),

19、My Way of Seeing Life 1. 人们从不同的角度看待人生 2. 我所推崇的看法是(说明理由),My Way of Seeing Life,1) Life may be many things to many people. 2) Some may see it as building up as much material wealth as possible while others may view it as enjoying to the fullest the pleasures each day offers. 3) As far as I am concerne

20、d, however, I would prefer to value it as my sole chance to enrich myself with knowledge first, then to serve the society with all my heart, and finally to leave the world without any regrets.,4) My outlook on life is bound up with three major factors. 5) Primarily, life is so wondrous that I am eag

21、er to explore it. 6) Set your heart on a mystery and you can find something new; attach more of your mind to a challenge and you can get a sense of success, all of which, however, depends on how much knowledge you have equipped yourself with first. 7) Secondly, life is also short to any,individual l

22、ike me. 8) The flower you have just kissed for the first time is now fading away while the love from others you have come to cherish more is already on the wane. 9) And most of all, both wondrousness and shortness of life push me to seize every golden minute and every golden chance. 10) Once I idle

23、away the time I am supposed to grasp to study or work for the people, there will be no more hope of making up for it.,11) I have much option in this matter, but I have never found any other way of seeing life more reasonable and acceptable than mine. 12) Thus, I will leave no stone unturned during t

24、he course of my college studies in order to pave the way for my meaningful and colorful life.,Writing,（原因分析类）,The Changes in Something,1. 简述某一事物的变化情况,2. 说明引起变化的原因,3. 分析其影响或走向,Changes in Great Natural Disasters Worldwide,（划线部分可替换）,写作模式（原因分析类）,1) As can be seen from the graph / table / diagram, there

25、have been drastic / considerable / unfavorable changes in (议论的主题)over the past period from _ to _. 2) To be concrete, only in _(year) while / whereas the ratio(s) went up toin _ (year).(变化概述) 3) These changes are most disturbing, so it is necessary for us to go into the whys and wherefores of them f

26、irst. (Para. 1),（划线部分可替换）,4) Some changes, such as , result from , but many others have much to do with 5) In the first place, mans excessive exploitation of has done a lasting damage to , only to (原因分析I)6) (进一步说明) 7) In the second, in order to , man has had to overwork , which in turn has accelerat

27、ed (原因分析II) 8) In the third, mans blind application of has caused permanent changes in (原因分析III) 9) Among these changes are . (进一步说明)(Para. 2),（划线部分可替换）,10) The list of causes could go on, but they are already enough to indicate that these changes are producing more and more negative effects on the

28、world. 11) These changes not only , but also(分析) 12) If allowed to run its course, I firmly believe / I am afraid, this trend will certainly bring more harm / threats to our society / life.(结论句) (Para. 3),The Changes in Great Natural Disasters Worldwide 1. 简述所给图表中的变化。 2. 说明引起变化的主要原因。 3. 分析这些变化对全球的影响

29、。,1) As can be seen from the graph, there have been rapid changes in the great natural disasters worldwide over the past period from 1960s to 1990s. 2) To be concrete, there were only 16 terrible natural disasters, causing 300,000 deaths in 1960s while the ratios went up respectively to 131 and 1,10

30、0,000 in 1990s. 3) The changes are disturbing, so it is necessary for us to go into the whys and wherefores of them first.,4) Some changes, such as those in earthquakes and volcanic eruptions, result from the movement of plates along the weaknesses in the earths crust, but many others have much to d

31、o with mans activities. 5) In the first place, mans mindless and excessive exploitation of natural resources has done a lasting damage to the ecosystem, only to invite more floods, landslides and mud-rock flows. 6) The rare flood to which China was subjected in 1998 is typical of the evil seeds man

32、had sowed for himself. 7) In the second, in order to feed their more and larger,families, people from all over the world have had to overwork their farming land as well as their grassland, which in turn has accelerated the desertification of the land on which they have been relying for existence. 8)

33、 In the third, mans blind application of scientific findings has caused unfavorable and permanent changes in the global living environment. 9) Among these changes are the depletion of ozone layer, the worsening of greenhouse effect, the recurrence of hurricanes and the extinction of more species.,10

34、) The list of causes could go on, but they are already enough to indicate that these changes are producing more and more negative effects on the world. 11) They have not only made it impossible for the natural systems to recover their balance but also made it harder for man to ensure his better surv

35、ival. 12) If allowed to run its course, I am afraid, this trend will certainly bring more serious threats to all the living things on the Earth, mankind included.,Writing,（各抒己见类）,Views on Something,有人认为该事物 理由是,2. 也有人认为该事物,3. 我的看法,（划线部分可替换）,写作模式（各抒己见类）,1) Almost everyone would agree that the birth /

36、appearance / arrival / development of sth. 2) But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to(议论的主题) (Para. I),（划线部分可替换）,3) Many / Some people contend / believe / argue that (一方观点) 4) They base their contention / belief / argument on the grounds that (理由I) 5）Besides, as they often point out

37、, . (理由II) 6）Yet others react to the issue / matter the other way around and hold / assert that the opposite is just reasonable / more acceptable. (另一方观点) 7) From their angle of view, (理由I) 8) And even worse, as they claim, (理由II) (Para. II),（划线部分可替换）,9) I am of / adhere to / stick to the opinion /

38、view / truth that anything new, including, can bring human society fortunes / merits / advantages or misfortunes / demerits / disadvantages, all depending on . (我的看法) 10) On the one hand, (理由I) 11) But on the other, . (理由II) 12) In short, the key / solution to the problem is always controlled in (结论

39、句),Views on Cloning 1. 有人认为克隆技术的应用利大于弊， 理由是 2. 也有人认为弊大于利， 3. 我的看法。,1) Almost everyone would agree that the birth of Dolly, as the first clone of an adult animal, has opened a new way of seeing the creation of life for the world. 2) But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to whether clo

40、ning will bring fortunes or misfortunes to human society.,Reference model: Views on Cloning,3) Many contend that the merits of cloning will outrun its demerits. 4) They base their contention on the grounds that cloning is the most effective method of saving the rare wild lives from dying out. 5) Bes

41、ides, as they also point out, cloning can help provide better ways to treat some serious or deadly sicknesses, such as diabetes, and Parkinsons disease. 6) Yet others react to the issue the other way around and hold that the opposite,is just reasonable. 7) From their angle of view, cloning will thre

42、aten the ecological balance by destroying the natural reproduction through the enjoyment of sexual love between the male and the female. 8) And even worse, as they reveal, cloning will bring greater disasters to human society if it is used in creation of individuals with extreme genetic qualities, l

43、ike terrorists, desperate scoundrels, and war manias.,9) I stick to the opinion that anything new, including cloning, can bring human society fortunes or misfortunes, all depending on how it is exploited. 10) On the one hand, it will be an inestimable blessing to the human world if it is applied to

44、reproduction of best dairy cows or other choice domestic poultries. 11) But on the other hand, it will form a big threat to human society once it is abused in copying those hostile toward humanity. 12) In short, the solution to the problem is always within mans reach.,Writing,（对比分析类）,My Choice Betwe

45、en Sth. and Sth. Else,1. 在两个事物之间作出你的选择,2. 对比说明你的选择理由,写作模式（对比分析类）,Para.1: 1) With a gradual/sharp growth (decline/worsening/progress/arrival) of/in sth., people become more and more concerned about how to 2) To make it, some prefer towhile others choose to 3) If I were asked to make a choice between

46、the two, however, I would like to attach more weight to the latter/former than to the former/latter.,(划线部分可以被替换),Para. 2: 4) It is true that _ does ensure/ bring a lot of for one, such as, but, compared with _, it seems less attractive to me. 5) To begin with, , thereby (理由I) 6) By contrast, , thus

47、7) Besides, , in which context (理由II) 8) In contrast to that, , in which case 9) And the most striking difference between both lies in (理由III) 10) while/whereas (对比说明),(划线部分可以被替换),Para. 3: 11) From the comparisons and contrasts above, anyone can conclude that my insight into / my way of is more reas

48、onable and acceptable. 12) Therefore, I will from today on so as to ,(划线部分可以被替换),How to Prevent a Terrible Marriage,1. 为了避免婚姻的潜在危机，一些人选择婚前协议的方式而另一些人仍通过相互信任的传统方式。 2. 就这两种方式，你的选择倾向是 (通过对比说明你的选择理由),How to Prevent a Terrible Marriage,1) With a sharp growth in the divorce rate, people become more and mor

49、e concerned about how to avoid the potential risks of their marriages. 2) To make it, some prefer to make premarital agreements before their wedding ceremonies while others still choose to maintain their marriages through their mutual trust. 3) If I were asked to make a choice between the two, howev

50、er, I would like to attach more weight to the latter than to the former.,4) It is true that the marriage with a prenup (premarital agreement) does ensure a lot of benefits for the family, such as the protection of children from going hungry or the reasonable distribution of financial assets, once di

51、vorce is inevitable, but, compared with the marriage based on the mutual trust, it seems less attractive to me. 5) To begin with, the marriage bound up with a prenup throws itself, from the very outset, into an ocean of family worries, thereby leaving little room for the spouses,enjoyment of happine

52、ss their unity brings about. 6) By contrast, the marriage built on the mutual trust always nurtures itself in truth, romance and harmony, thus placing no limit on the spouses enjoyment of happiness derived from their intimate exchanges. 7) Besides, the prenup-based marriage lays bare, in writing or

53、in cold fact, the spouses desire or even greed for money, in which context there is no soil in their marriage for warmth to grow on. 8) In contrast to that, the trust-based marriage always,reminds the spouses of the truth that there is something more valuable than money in their marriage, in which c

54、ase both the husband and the wife would tend to bring forth more love and attraction for each other. 9) And the most striking difference between both lies in their emphases on the post-marriage life. 10) The former couple will focus their life on the material or physical interests whereas the latter

55、 couple will center their life around the spiritual or ethical refinements.,11) From the comparisons and contrasts above, anyone can conclude that my way of coping with the prospective problems of a marriage is more reasonable and acceptable. 12) Therefore, I will refine my taste for marriage from t

56、oday on so as to search the seas of people for the one who is resolved to share with me the affection and thought, comfort and hardship, joy and grief for life.,Writing,（分析建议类）,How to Do Something,（划线部分可替换）,写作模式（分析建议类）,1) Much to our distress / delight / surprise, these years have seen the popularit

57、y / worsening / much improvement / a widespread neglect of sth. (议论的主题) in society. 2) According to a recent / official report / survey / opinion poll, .(佐证陈述) 3) If this current is allowed to run its course, things are bound to turn for the better / worse. (Para. 1),（划线部分可替换）,4) The importance / ha

58、rmfulness / significance of sth. to sb. / sth. else, (however), can be seen from the perspectives as follows. 5) In the first place, (分析I)6) In the second, . (分析II) 7) And above all, (分析III) 8) To sum up, . (归纳总结) (Para. 2),（划线部分可替换）,9) So the most pressing for us / basic problem now is how to 10) In my opinion, the first step should be focused upon (建议I) 11) Then, greater efforts must be made to . (建议II) 12) In one word, where there is , there is (结论