英语书面表达之建议信.ppt

1、书面表达 -A letter of giving advice,写作要点： 1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。 2. 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点； 2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。,3. 基本框架： 开头（beginning）- 开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(state your idea) 主体(body)- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence) 结尾(ending)- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.),4.

2、 注意事项： 1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。 2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。 3）符合英文信件的基本格式,常用套语,A建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图) 1I am very glad to hear that you want to 2I know you have trouble in after reading your letter. 3.I am writing to you for the

3、 purpose of 4. I am writing to share some advice with you. 5. You have asked me for my advice about English learning.,B. 表达建议（body） 1. firstly secondly, then，after that，in the end, finally, meanwhile, whats more. 2 .I think it would be more helpful if you could 3. If I were you, I would 4. In my opi

4、nion, it would be wise to take the following action.,C.建议信结尾常用句式,1. I believe you will take my advice into consideration. 2. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful. 3. I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions. 4. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions

5、useful.,书面表达如何写？,三个步骤,Step1. List the key points,Step2. Make sentences,Step3. Form a passage and polish,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性 2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明 3. Ending 小结；呼应主题,注意衔接词使用: 表先后次序： first, second, third.finally firstly, secondly，finally to begin with/ to start with, at last 递进

6、关系： furthermore, moreover； not only.but also.； besides； in other words；on the one hand.，on the other hand.； meanwhile； at the same time；,模板： Dear _(对象)， I am writing to express my views concerning _(问题). First， _(建议一); in addition, _(建议二); whats more， _(建议三). I hope youll find these proposals useful

7、. Yours sincerely, Li Ming,假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信.要点: 1. 参加中文学习班;2. 看中文书刊、电视；3. 学唱中文歌曲；4. 交中国朋友。注意：1.词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter

8、 asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher,and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so,youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can al